'Mitra' ~MG SS~ Thread 1 - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

709

Views

75.4k

Users

157

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

Niharika.Nair thumbnail
IPL 2024 Participants Thumbnail IPL 2023 Participants Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Thanks for the new story dear...
cute-aly thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#82

























cute-aly thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#83






aakritisri1111 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Hey gals! Gud news i had typed d 80% of d nxt part yesterday nd will type d remaining one today after cuming back 4m office so hopefully u'll get d update of dis today only along wid a surprise... Till den complete d remaining 2 pages of d quota... Wen i cum to update i want to see my 20 pages cumplete... So u do ur wrk nd i'll do mine... Bye luv u see u all in d evening... Tc
maansee thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey gals! Gud news i had typed d 80% of d nxt part yesterday nd will type d remaining one today after cuming back 4m office so hopefully u'll get d update of dis today only along wid a surprise... Till den complete d remaining 2 pages of d quota... Wen i cum to update i want to see my 20 pages cumplete... So u do ur wrk nd i'll do mine... Bye luv u see u all in d evening... Tc


finally she decided to give us the update... good job dear...
































remember we r waiting
aakritisri1111 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Hey Gals! going to update the next part within few mins... Get ready wid ur comments... nd ya a surprise awaits for you all too... so get ready
Tishuu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Waiting waiting waiting
Ooo i love surprises
aakritisri1111 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
#88

(Siggie: Thanks to ALiena (Cute-Aly) Luv you Sweety🤗)
Part 2:

He opened the drawer nd look at the friendship band that she had given him on their first friendship day. It was a delicate silver chain with hearts hanging on it nd on each heart each letter of "F-R-I-E-N-D" has been written. His eyes welled up as he looked at it nd the photograph kept near it where they both were holding a trophy. It was a trophy that they won together at the inter-collegiate competition.

"Happy Friendship Day Laddoo. I really miss you a lot. y you had gone like dis? u know na that i am nothing without you then y did u left me like this. y did u broke your Promise Laddoo? Y? Please come back" he said as he looked at their photograph.

His thoughts have been distracted wen he heard his phone ringing. It was a reminder call from his secretary to remind him about the conference he had to attend at Mumbai. He simply asked her to arrange everything nd cuts the call. He was really not in mood to go anywhere today as this day was just dedicated to their friendship but knowing that it's important he can't ignore it too.

He sighed at his fate nd kept the photograph nd Band back in the drawer nd made his way outside the office nd headed towards airport to leave for Mumbai unknown of the surprise this day had stored for him.

***************************************************************

Somewhere at another corner of the country she was getting ready for the all India Businessman conference tonight. Though usually this day she celebrates wid herself only from past 6 years but today she had to attend this meet as her fianc wants her to. Like Maan this day hold importance in her lyf too nd she can never forget the promise that she had made to her best friend that she'll always be wid him on this day no matter wat. But today she had broken her promise nd she was not there wid him from past 6 years especially on this day. She's GEET HANDA, Maan's best friend, his Laddoo, his Mitra who is not dere wid him from past 6 years which was not less den like a punishment for her too but she's happy wid it as she knows this is the best she can do for him.

"Geet" she heard some beckoning her nd turned to look at the source of the voice only to find her friend Meera behind her.

"Meera! Hi! u can never change your habbit of using the duplicate key of my flat" Geet said as she hugged her friend

"Hey Geet! Happy Friendship Day" Meera said while hugging her back.

"Same to you Meera." Geet said while pulling out from hug.

"Wat is this Geet? U never wish me friendship day." Meera said while pouting making Geet confused

"But Meera I just wished you friendship day" Geet said not understanding wat Meera was trying to say

"No u said same to you to me u haven't said "Happy-Friendship-Day" in whole" Meera said nd Geet slapped her forehead in disbelief.

"Meera, you are impossible. Kuch bhi bolti ho" Geet said as she wears her ear ring.

"Whatever I am like this only but seriously Geet I know you from past 6 years we both had done our MBA together nd nw we both are at same city too but I haven't heard u wishing anyone friendship day nd if by chance someone wishes you also then u just say "Same to You". U didn't even accept any friendship bands also from anyone not even from me." Meera said nd Geet halted in her actions listening to her.

"It's nothing like that Meera. You are just thinking too much. Nd ya saying "Same to you" is a kind of wishing only nd as far as the case of friendship Band is concerned then I just believe in all that nd you know it." Geet said as she resumed her process of getting ready.

"You don't believe on it or you don't want to accept it from anyone because u had given this right to 'him' only" Meera said in a serious tone nd Geet closed her eyes to compose herself.

"Meera lets not talk about it please" Geet said pleadingly nd Meera sighed knowing she always avoided to talk on this topic. Though she knows everything about her past lyf yet whenever she tries to talk anything about it Geet always drops the conversation like this only.

"O God! Where had I kept it?" Geet's voice filled wid Panic draws Meera attention back towards her

"Wat happen Geet wat are you searching for?" Meera asked as she saw Geet searching something at her dresser.

"Meera I am not able to find my ring. I had kept it over here only wen I had gone to take shower nd now its not here. I don't know where it has gone" Geet said while continuously searching for it.

"C'mon Geet don't panic dis much. It must be somewhere here only u can search it later for it Big Deal" Meera said coolly only to get a glare from Geet.

"It is a Big Deal for me Meera. I can't afford to lose that ring" Geet said angrily nd resumed searching for it.

"Y? Was it your Engagement ring that you are panicking this much?" Meera asked sarcastically while crossing her arms across her chest making Geet to look at her

"No it's not my engagement Ring yet it is important for me." Geet said painfully nd Meera groaned in Anger.

"Ya ofcourse y not because this ring was gifted by 'him' to you. The same person who didn't care whether you are alive or dead from past 6 years." Meera burst out angrily not able to bear the pain her friend is suffering from past 6 years.

"MEERA!!!!!!! Dare you say a word about Maan" Geet roared in anger seeing someone insulting Maan.

"Y did I said anything wrong? Tell me Geet did he even care where you are from past 6 years? Did he even try to search for you? Did he even bother to know y u left from there all of a sudden? No he didn't care neither that tym nor now. He's happy in his lyf nd here you are still stuck up in his memories." Meera said while throwing her hands in air unbelievingly.

"Meera I said it to you before also that he don't know where I am nd y did I left all of a sudden so stop blaming him" Geet said as tears made her way down from her eyes

"C'mon Geet we are not living in 18th century that it would be difficult for him to know about your whereabouts especially den wen he's such a powerful person that he can easilt search for you yet he don't care to search for you. You both were "Best Friends" right den tell me who leaves their Best friend like that." Meera said in order to give her friend some piece of Mind.

"Please Meera I don't want to talk about it. I am happy to know that he's happy in his lyf nd I don't want anything else" Geet said in order to drop the topic den nd dere but it seems that Meera was not in mood to let go.

"Y Geet? U can't run away from this Everytym. Geet for god sake u Loved him but he didn't infact he didn't even care for you as a friend because if he would have cared den he would have never asked you to go away from his lyf like this nd here you still cares for him that you cant even afford to lose the ring that he had given you on both of yours first friendship day. You didn't even wore your Engagement Ring on that finger in which you were supposed to wear because that place you had given to Maan's ring. nd i bet that u'll never panic this much if ur Engagement ring gets lost somewhere like you u are panicking for that ring"

"He was right to ask me to go away from his lyf. It was because of me only he had lost the love of his lyf. I don't hold any grudges against him. He was not wrong, he can never be wrong" Geet said painfully as she sits on the couch

"For god sake Geet this is umpteenth tym I am telling you that it was not your mistake that he had suffered the break up. Stop blaming yourself for the crime that you haven't committed." Meera said frustratingly listening to the same thing that she's listening from past 6 years.

"Please Meera I don't want to discuss about it anymore. He's happy in his lyf nd I am also happy in mine wid Dev." Geet said in order to cut-short the discussion.

"Really? You think that u'll be happy wid Dev. Can u tell me how wen u had never loved him? U had always Loved Maan only yet u are saying that u'll be happy. Nd for once I would agree to it also but knowing Dev's nature I doubt on it Geet" Meera said nd Geet whipped her head to look at her.

"Dev is not as bad as you are thinking of him Meera. He's just little possessive for me that's it." Geet said while looking other way but Meera could see through her lie

"C'mon Geet whom you are fooling? We both know what's the reality is? He's not little possessive for you he's extremely possessive for you nd in that extreme possessiveness he always ends up hurting you nd never regret for that. Geet he's not possessive for you, he's obsessed wid you" Meera said nd Geet looked other way not wanting any discussion.

"Geet what are you doing with your lyf? Pls stop playing from it for god sake." Meera said nd before Geet could say anything Meera's cell phone started ringing giving enough tym to Geet to absorb everything

"Geet, I have to go now. Yash has called me to say that i have to reach his office nd we both will come to meet directly from there only. So I'll see you at conference ok." Meera said while Geet just nodded. Meera hugged her before leaving nd den left from there.

After Meera left Geet closed her eyes nd took a deep breath to calm herself down. Her heart was too heavy from pain nd tears were just threatening to fall down yet she was controlling everything like she was doing from past 6 years. She goes to Washroom nd washes her face to look better as she don't want Dev to suspect anything otherwise she herself don't know wat he'll do. Thinking Dis she went to her dresser for touch up so don't Dev wont notice her pale face nd that's wen her gaze falls on her ring which was lyieng at the corner near the dresser. Her eyes twinkled as she found her priceless possession. She instantly picked it up nd smiled widely as if she got everything of this world in that simple ring. It was the very first gift from Maan that he had gifted her on their first friendship day nd since that day Geet had kept it safe with her. No matter wat comes he had never separated this ring from her. This is the only that had linked her wid Maan till now

"Please don't feel bad for whatever Meera had said. She haven't seen you Na thatsy she had made this assumption of hers towards you. She really cares for me a lot just like you use to do though a bit less den from you thatsy she had said all this. But I know that you are not at all bad nd trust me I hold no grudges against you. Happy Friendship Day my Devil. I really miss you a lot" Geet said as she looked at the photograph of her nd Maan together wen they had won the trophy in the inter collegiate competition.

Her thoughts have been broken wen she heard the door bell indicating that Dev is her. She immediately put the photograph back in the drawer of the dresser nd wears her ring back before opening the door for Dev.

"Hey Sweetheart all ready to leave" Dev said as he flashed his famous charming smile to which Geet just smiled back faintly while nodding.

"So let's leave den. Ah! BTW Geet I need to tell you something. Since dis is All India Businessmen meet dere's chance of 'him' to be there too I hope I don't have to remind you that you don't have to mix up wid him much if by any chance u both come face to face." Dev said dangerously nd Geet knows wat he means.

"You don't have to worry much. I'll try my best to avoid any confrontation wid him." Geet said coldly wid no emotions in her eyes nd voice

"Hey Jaan! I know you must be thinking that I interfere too much in your lyf nd very much possessive for you but you know that I really Love you a lot nd don't want to lose you thatsy I do all dis." Dev said as he came near Geet to hug her but Geet instantly took a step back which annoyed Dev but he kept quiet

"I know nd I understand. I think we are getting late now so let's leave." Geet said coldly nd Dev nodded his head nd dey both left for the conference.

***********************************************************

The meet was in full swing. Many top businessmen of India were dere. It was great opportunity for everyone to create new contacts for the growth of their Business especially for the one who had just stepped into the business world. Dev was busy in meeting another business associates for the benefit of his business while Geet was just standing at a corner lost. She knows that its all India Businessmen meet nd dere's highly chance of Maan to be there yet she had came over here.

Though she had came because Dev had asked her to come wid him but that was just another reason the primary reason is that she herself wanted to come as somewhere in her heart she has a feeling that she can catch the glimpse of him after so many years in this party. She'll make sure of this that she wont come in front of him but atleast she can see him from far. Till now she had seen his interviews on TV, his pictures in Newspapers nd internet yet to see him in front of her eyes that too as a person had filled her heart wid excitement.

She was fidgeting with the edge of her Saree pallu eagerly waiting for Maan to come to the party. Though there were many peoples in the party who were waiting for the great Business Tycoon Maan Singh Khurana to come but their wait was no where compare to the wait of Geet as she was not waiting for the great Business Tycoon Maan Singh Khurana; she was waiting for Maan, her Mitra, her Devil. Nd finally the wait was over as the person for whom everyone has been waiting from so long has finally made his great entry in the hall nd by hearing the gasps of the ladies Geet knows that he's here. Afterall it's all not new to her. She very well knows the effect of Maan on the girls.

Dev gave a warning look to Geet as Maan made his way inside the hall nd Geet instantly hid herself behind one of the pillar so that Maan couldn't see her. Tears welled up in her eyes as she saw Maan standing just a few steps away from her talking to one of Business associates yet she can't reach him instead of just looking at him from far. He had really changed so much in dese 6 years. There was no more boyish look in him instead his stubble had given him a macho look. No wonder all ladies are ga ga over him. The person who always wears cool shirts nd Jeans was now in formals yet he managed to take everyone's breath away. Geet smiled at herself as she realizes that she was drooling over him from so long. She instantly came out from behind the pillar nd goes towards the Direction where Meera nd Yash were waiting for her.

*****************************************************

Here since the tym Maan had entered in the meet he felt an unknown sensation within him. He feels lyf today he's going to get a very big happiness of his lyf as if today all his wait is going to be over. He was feeling a sense of completeness in him today nd all this happen then only wen his Laddoo was to be wid him. He looked around himself to check whether she's actually dere or not but frowned wen he didn't found her anywhere near him.

It was strange but his heart was continuously saying that Geet was somewhere near only. Though he was present over dere but physically, mentally he was only thinking about his Laddoo nd since the tym he had came inside the hall he was feeling an unknown restlessness in him but yet he couldn't find the actual reason of this restlessness. He was still looking around himself to check that whether his heart was saying true or not wen someone beckoned him from behind drawing his attention towards that person nd soon her gets engrossed in the business talks with that person yet deep in his heart he was restless.

*********************************************************

It's been an hour since the meet was going on nd till now Geet had successfully able to dodge Maan. Though she was continuously stealing glances of him as he talked to the people around him, sipping drink, smiling to someone, telling media about his future plans of business but she had made sure that Maan didn't notice her but least she knows that Maan had felt her presence long back into the party but just couldn't able to spot her. Meera just anted to strangle Maan then nd dere but it was Geet who had controlled her till now. She chuckled seeing the amount of hatred Meera is having towards Maan wen she haven't met him till now.

She was going towards Dev to ask him whether they can go back to home or not as she was not sure how long will she be able to escape from Maan wen she bumped into a waiter due to which small amount of soft drink has been spilled on her Saree.

"I am really Sorry Ma'am" Waiter apologize as he waited for her wrath but he was surprise to see her calm.

"It's ok. It happens sometimes. Can u please tell me the way towards Washroom?"

"It's towards the right side from the corridor over dere" Waiter pointed towards a direction still surprised her seeing so calm nd smiling

"Thank you so much." Geet said smiling nd left towards the direction where Waiter had pointed

At the same tym Maan who was standing with his back towards her heard her voice behind her. He could never fail to recognize whose voice it is. He himself had complimented her so many tymes for her musical voice then how can he fail to recognize it now. nd more den her voice it was her Aroma that was making him believe again nd again that she's here only.

"Laddoo" he muttered as he turned around to look at the direction of the voice but was disappointed to see no one over dere. He felt it as a part of his imagination yet his heart was not ready to believe that it was his imagination. But before he could think more on it he got an important call from his client. Though he was not in mood to attend the call but thinking it as important he made his way towards the corridor to take the call unknown of the surprise waiting for him over dere.

**********************************************************

Geet washed the stain of the drink from her Saree nd remained in the washroom only for sometym to calm her raising heartbeats. It's been 6 years she had seen him yet her heart beats in the same way it did for the first tym. Only she knows how she has controlled herself till now from not running away in his arms, from not going near him nd talk to him endlessly like she use to do earlier. But she did all this because she knows that it was good for him. she wiped away the tears that fell from her eyes due to her helplessness but the determination in her heart to not to go back in his lyf again was much more stronger then her desire to be wid him.

Thinking dis she wiped away her tears nd fixed her face nd hairs before going outside as she knows that Dev must be waiting for her nd will definitely come in search of her wen he'll not find her in the party moreover Meera must be waiting for her too. After spending few more mins in the washroom she finally made her way outside the washroom unknown of the game destiny had planned for her.

********************************************************

"Maan wat is dis? u had gone to Mumbai straightaway from the office without even informing us?" Maan heard her Dadimaa shouting on the other side of the call nd smiles imagining how angry she must be right now

"Sorry Dadimaa but if I had informed u nd NT den u both never let me come to Mumbai nd dis conference was necessary" Maan reasoned himself nd Dadimaa rolled over her eyes.

"Maan beta wen was the last tym wen u had said that any conference is not important. Anyways just tell me wen you are returning back."

"I'll return in 2-3 days Dadimaa. Had to see some work at the Mumbai branch of KC. Till den u take gud care of urself nd ya no carelessness in taking Ur medicines. Bye TC Luv u." Maan said as he cuts the call before he could get another round of lecture from his Dadimaa.

He was returning towards the hall while texting someone from his cell wen he bumped into something or rather someone causing the person to fall. But before she can touch the ground he had hold her from her waist preventing her from falling. Her face was covered wid the hairs due to sudden fall nd only her eyes were visible. Nd as Maan looked into her eyes he instantly felt some connection wid dem nd it didn't took him long to realize who's the owner of these beautiful pairs of eyes. He can never forget these eyes as these hazels belong to the most important person of his lyf nd that was his Laddoo, his Geet.

Geet was coming from the washroom lost in her thoughts to go inside the hall wen she bumped into someone. She closed her eyes to expect the sudden fall which never came as she felt a pair of strong arms holding her by waist protectively. She instantly realizes the touch. She can never forget this touch because only one person can hold her this protectively. Yet she opened her eyes to look at him to confirm that whatever she was thinking is right nd not an imagination. Nd as she opened her eyes all her doubts are confirmed that the person who had saved her is none other then her Maan, her Devil. Tears welled up in her eyes as she saw the sense of recognition in his eyes nd she realizes that he had recognized her though her face was covered with hairs.

Soon she felt his fingers removing her hairs from her face nd it confirms all the doubts of Maan that it was none other then Geet, his Laddoo. He made her stand on her feet still holding her by her waist. He couldn't fathom whether it was reality or his mind was again playing tricks wid him. His Laddoo was finally in front of his eyes after whole 6 years nd that too on Friendship Day. Can any reality be more beautiful then this.

"Laddoo" Maan muttered as a smile teased on his face nd Geet could see the twinkle in his eyes as if he had found his priceless possession.

"Maan" she whispered ever so softly as finally she was able to come face to face with him after whole 6 years.

And den without any prior notice Maan crushed her in his embrace like she'll vanish in thin air if he'll leave her. A layer of tear formed in his eyes as he finally had his Laddoo back in his lyf. This was the best day of his lyf where he got his best friend back, he thought as he hugged her more tight to himself making sure that she's in real nd not one of his fantasies. Geet didn't protest neither tried to pull out from hug as she herself was craving for the warmth of his embrace. This was the one of those blissful moments which she had dreamt of from last 6 years yet it seems to be impossible to turn into reality. but it did turned into reality that too on the day which is special to both of them where she had finally found her solace in the arms of the person whom she had is nd will always loved the most.

ok so dis was it guys! hope you all are gonna like it... i stopped it over here as i want their meeting to be more special dont kill me for stopping over here... hit the like button of you all like it as i really had no idea how did it came out... nd Do leave ur cumment/criticism its necessary

nd ya i think i dont have to say that next update will be after 20 pages of comments😉

nd for surprise well dont kill me for that as i am starting another SS on Maaneet named "Life starts where it ends" posting it simultaneously wid it only nd den PM u all do tell me how did u find it

Luv Aakriti😊

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
meettu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Loved it



i hate dev



obessezzd wid geet tooo much


want to lnow y geet left him


waiting fpr some romantic moments
nehakapoor7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome.. too good.. finally two friends meet.. no they r not friends ...dey don't know how they love each other.. Ooh hope Maneet will realize this soon... plz update .. egarly waiting for next

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 120-27 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".