Arshi FF: My Life With(out) You KKGSR part24 pg150 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is now sure that Muskaan is indeed khushi and he thinks that she is here for Jiya. He is very angry and wants to teach her a lesson. When will this guy learn to first get all his facts straight
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww u r so sweet ... i know iam repeating these words but once again thanx 4 adding my name in ur thanking list ๐Ÿ˜Š.
 
and no need of sorry plz we were in same condition as in  were after watching that epi so i
 
can totally understand  what were u going through .
 
starting was amazing and over all i loved it  ๐Ÿ‘
 
and iam really curious to know is muskaan khushi or related to her some how ?
 
thanx 4 the pm ,update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part ... totally worth reading ... update soon , i really wanted to know who is muskaan's friend and what is she hiding ? and why can't she talk in RM with her freind ... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part yaar.. Specially the way your merging both the stories..!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
Awww thanks for mentioning me๐Ÿ˜ณ I feel so special๐Ÿ˜‰ just keep continuing dear...cant wait to read more!!
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Great update!! <33

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Firstly thx for d pm and secondly it was mindblowing...it was hilarious when arnav said 'over' I couldn't stop laughing :D. Overall superb :) just waiting for more interesting stuff to happen so update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey.. its amazing..
story  line is quite good..๐Ÿ‘
plz pm me whenever u update..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Previous Part: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55441116

Thank you so much for your lovely comments...i am over whelmed...Here you go with the next part.

Muskaan: Its ok anjali di, I think Mr raizada is right...even i think so.

Arnav: Nobody has asked your opinion and your opinion doesnot matter to me...do as you are told.

He leave banging the plate and leaves to his room.

Anjali chotey i promise i will not say anything and do accordingly please coma back and have your food...please...you cant be empty stomach...chotey chotey...

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Knock Knock

Can I come in.

Arnav: Please leave me alone

Muskaan: Mr Raizada

Arnav: How dare you Muskaan? Just get the hell out of here

Muskaan: No, first you have to listen to me...

Arnav: I can believe it...GET OUT KHUSHI

Muskaan: Glances it arnav...MUSKAAN...its Muskaan.

Arnav: Grabs her on her shoulder...bangs the door with his hand and throw her out of the room. Shuts the door on her face.

Muskaan: All teary...you will never change Arnav ji...still so much anger...so impulsive...and she couldnot hold her tears she runs down to the living area where she bumps into jiya...

Jiya: What happened M.A

Muskaan: Muskaan Aunty...Call me Muskaan Aunty...a weeping.

Jiya: Pa ne danta? (did pa scold you)

Muskaan: Looking at her innocent face no baby he didnot say anything to me.

Jiya: Then why are you crying? Are you missing your mom dad?

Muskaan hugs jiya tightly and cries like a mad person. Oh baby...

Jiya wipes of her tears...wait i will go and talk to you...why will he not let you eat with me? he have to.

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Jiya: Pa this is not right...frowing her eyebrows...

Arnav: Jiya please baby leave your pa alone for sometime...

Jiya: No no no...(like khushi told arnav during holi when he refused to drink bhang)

Arnav: Jiya stop behaving like khushi. I dont tell you anything that doensot mean you can behave the way you want to...

Jiya: Starts pouting her lips...

Arnav: Quickly changes his anger...ok what do you want to tell me...say

Jiya: Why cant M.A eat with us?

Arnav: Jiya thats your Pa's decision

Jiya: But why pa? she is so nice. Why are you so rude to her.

Arnav: Jiya..jiya..jiya we will not talk about this...ok

Jiya: No pa you have to tell me...

Arnav: STOP IT, how can you talk to you pa like this? Oh now i get it this is what you are learing from you Governess?

Jiya: Muskaan Aunty. and i am not learning it from her...i have quite offen saw you talking to bari nani like this...

Arnav: ENOUGH...He shouted at jiya...just go and have your dinner...

Tears roll down...arnav was unable to handle her for the first time...she runs...

Arnav: Jiya Jiya...Jiya runs after her

Jiya goes down and hugs muskaan who was standing...

Jiya: Pa has scolded me...i am not going to go to him...he scolded me...I dont like him when he is grumpy...

Muskaan hugs her back...

Arnav: Jiya come her

Anjali: Leave it chotey...how could you behave like that with such a soul?

Arnav: Di...

Anjali: Please chotey leave her here...she will be fine...

Arnav felt bad...very bad...this is the first time he behaved in such a manner with jiya. he looked at muskaan (its all because of you)

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After few minutes jiya enters the room.

Arnav: Come here baby

Jiya giving him a silent treatment. Arnav new it very well that she is not in a mood to talk to him. He is in a fowl mood and whenever he is in a fowl mood she goes and sits near the pool side (just like her mom) and looks at the water splashing it with her legs.

after few minutes muskaan enters...where is jiya? she didnot have her lunch.

Arnav: Call Di she will feed her...she doesnot eat from anyone when she is grumpy.

Muskaan goes to the poolside. and sits beside jiya just like how she sat...

Muskaan: hmm, so daddy's baby (arnav looks at muskaan) still grumpy?

Jiya: Go away M.A i dont want to talk to anybody.

Muskaan: hmm...Hi jiya...its me...your Twinkle right from the sky came to visit you...

Jiya's expression changed...TWINKLE...

Muskaan: Yes and picks up jiya on her lap...long time since we have spoken...

Jiya: How do you know? Even i forgot...it has been longing...

Muskaan: Hmm. you spoke to me whenever you wanted to...today seeing you upset i came to meet you as you have stopped talking to me.

Jiya hugs muskaan oh twinkle i needed you badly...

Arnav stays calm watching them listening to each and every word...

Jiya smiles...wait...she runs to the room and gets a star and places it on muskaan's forehead exactly where a mangtika is placed.

Jiya: Wow M.A you look beautiful...and smiles

Arnav's heart melted, a sigh of relief that jiya has come out of that mood which he hated himself. he knew it very well that habit she is got from him.

Muskaan: So Princess, i have heard from muskaan that both of you made ice cream today but you didnt have your dinner...did you?

Jiya: No twinkle...jiya ia sad...pa was rude to her...

Muskaan: hmm you should never take out your anger on food she shouted so that arnav could here that too...this way you hurt DM who has given you the luxury of food to eat...there are people who cant eat because they dont have money...

Jiya: Sorry DM for hurting you...

Muskaan: When you were not in the room pa came to me (Arnav frowned his eye brows) and said twinkle my jiya didnot have her food today please make her eat (she meant the stars)

Jiya: Pa went to the stars? But he never liked thoses...he feels those will make the room clumsy...

Muskaan: No jiya how can you pa dont like your best friends?

Jiya: Even you are my best friend, why pa doesnot like you?

Muskaan: He doesnot hate me too...does he and looks at arnav. here you go with you ice cream.

Jiya: M.A. i dont feel like having it...

Muskaan: Ok done...jiya will not have it...but she can have one spoon for pa...right? even he didnot have his food and he must be hungry...if jiya doesnot eat how will her pa's hunger subdude.

Jita looks at arnav...ok only one spoon.

Muskaan feeds her.

Muskaan: Waise ek baat batao you pa is always like this grumpy?

Jiya: Not always but when he is it is difficult to calm him dowm...muskaan moves her nose...ya just like you...a tiny miny smile came on arnav's face to that...

Muskaan: Lets try jiya will you help your M.A to change your pa's grumpy mood? M.A has an idea...

Jiya: Oh really? she was delighted...how tell me...

Muskaan: You have to eat one spoon of ice cream and we will see your pa's face.

JiyA: Frown her eye brows...not a good idea...i will eat ice cream and his anger will go away?

Muskaan: Yes i promise you...i will work...the ice cream will melt his anger.

Jiya: aaa she opens her mouth wide...

Muskaan feeds her: This is for you pa's anger which is always on his nose...(arnav's smile widened)
This one for his frowned eye brows...this one for the redness of the face...this one for his brains...

Jiya looks at arnav whose anger was gone and he was smiling looking at them...

Jiya was delighted to see this...oh M.A it worked...

Muskaan: Go and feed him some...

Arnav: Come her jiya (muskaan's eyes filled with tears) arnav didnt fail to notice that.

Jiya goes and hugs arnav...

Arnav: I am sorry baby...i have hurt you looking at muskaan...

Jiya: M.A come here...

Muskaan went near them...

Jiya: Open your mouth pa

Arnav: Why?

Jiya: Just open pa.

Arnav: Ok aaa

Jiya: M.A feed him the ice cream

Muskaan: Jiya why dont you?

Jiya: No your one is more effective...

Arnav: Not like this...just like you fed jiya...

Muskaan's mouth dropped...she scoped out one spoon

Arnav: Yeh meri naak ke liye? right?

Muskaan was all blushing...arnav grab her hand with the spoon and ate. He scoped out another portion holding her hand and this is for my frown eye brows...this one for the redness of my face...and this one for my brain? muskaan was going totally red now...

Muskaan: Woh Mr. Raizada...

Arnav: Jiya can you get pa a glass of water? Arnav still holdng muskaan's wrist

Jiya: Sure pa

Arnav: looking in her eyes...so you have noticed so much about me Muskaan...

The spoon fell...

Muskaan: Stammered...woh..meye...

Jiya: Pa here you go she got her water bottle. Still you are holding M.A's hand?

Arnav: Its time for bed jiya go and change quickly and releases muskaan's hand.

Muskaan: I think i should leave now.

Arnav: Thanks Muskaan

Muskaan: For what...its my duty...

Arnav: Smiled (no doubt...how can you see your baby starving whole night? as well as me)

Muskaan: Good night

Arnav: Muskaan...she turned...gave the ice cream container...have it...you must be hungry...

Muskaan looked at arnav with loving eyes...she knew that the knows that she didnt have her dinner...she smiled...

Arnav: Good night.


Thats it guys for today...hope you enjoyed it...do leave your comments...and also iwould request for from now onwards to rate my updates out of 5. Please do that. Thank you.




Edited by Appy_Indy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first yehh
aww it was soo cute
i really loved it
Edited by srahs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great was wicked
I give it 5 out of 5