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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

yup give me sumtym il update it..😊

Sure...we are waiting...

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey guyz here i m wid chapter 3.. Hope u people vl like it..!!!! do comment n like...

CHAPTER 3

SHARON( wid irritated expressions):- NEALLL!!!!! arghh!!!!😡 Il kill u nxt tym if u do dis again... I hav told u hw much i hate sum1 pulling ma cheeks huh!!!😡 Go i wont talk 2 u nw!!!😡

NEAL(laughing):- "U luk sooo beautiful wen ur angry!!!!! So dats y i love making u angry!!!! 😃
SHARON(like a small baby):- "tumse to koi dhang se gussa bhi nahi ho sakta!!! 😳
N dey both strt laughing...
NEAL:- "bt tumne bataya nahi hw do u cum 2 knw dat i hav arrived.."
SHARON:- "itz nt dat difficult...I hav known u al dis years n so knw u vry btr...u hav bcum ma best buddy n vry close 2 ma heart...so itz simple i knw k hw dumbo u r..agar 30 mins bataya to tera khudka aane ka tym vl b 40 mins or 50 mins bt dats fr oder girls...wen it cums 2 me u vl pakka arrive 1 min early as u do alwayz usase pehele tera aan impossible he and as u knw i dnt like 2 w8... In short jo ladka baki ladkiyo k samne sher bana fhirta he SHARON k samne aate hi billi ban jaata he..."
N she strts laughin...
He runs behind her 2 hit her n dey both collapse n d sofa laughin...
NEAL:- "tum to mere liye princess ho aur baki sab mere liye daasiya (princess ki maids) he..."
SHARON:- "aur mujhe ye bhi pata he k tumhare life mein me sirf princess tabtak hu jabtak tumhe tumhari "Miss PERFECT" nahi mil jaati... ...Hey usase yaad aaya kal party me i saw u chipking wid a girl... So did u found ur "Miss PERFECT" vale qualities in her cz i found u vry much intrested in her..."
NEAL(teasingly):- "bahot notice karti ho mujhe...!!!!!! Ahem ahem!!... Kya baat he aajkal SHARON d diva mujhe notice kar rahi he...!!!!"😛
SHARON(irritated):- 😡"Arghh!!! NEALLL!!!! 😡Ur impossible really... Kitni baar kaha he k atleast merese to flirt mat kiya kar coz me ghass nahi dalne vali tujhe.. Aur rahi baat notice karne ki to kal party me tu harkatehi aise kar raha tha i thot u hav found d love of ur life ur Miss PERFECT..."
NEAL:- "U knw na SHARON agar mere bas me hota to har ladki would hav been d love of ma life... Bt unfortunately dat cant happen n me sticking to 1 girl is impossible... Ye pyaar vyar mere liye nahi bana.. Aur agar bana bhi ho to abhi tak shayad upar valene use bheja nahi he niche cz vo mujhe abhi tak mili hi nahi he..."
SHARON(checking his body temp by placing her hand on his forhead..):-"tu thik to hena aaj achanak philosophical baate.."😆
NEAL:- "kabhi kabhi galti se nikal jaati he.."
N both laugh...
SHARON:- "hmm iska matlab kal vaali bhi cancel... He bhagwan kya karu me is ladke ka????.."😈
NEAL(flirtingly):- "aree swthrt bhagwan tujhe ishara kar rahe he dekh k shayad mereliye tuhi bani he.." 😆
SHARON(as if she's angry):- "NEALLL..!!!... Fhirse..." 🥱
NEAL:- "ok..ok..chry baby... Ab vo chod jaldi se brkfast kar hame jana he nahi to vo bechara client dono ki rah dekh dekh k chala jayega..."
SHARON:- "are ha dekh me tere vajese bhul gayi... Lekin ye client he kon n tune inke bareme koi details di nahi he mujhe abtak..."
NEAL:- "Raste me batata hu meri MAA ab brkfast karee... Mujhe bhi bahot bhuk lagi he.."
SHARON:- "Hmmm bhukkad...!!!!!... Chal..."
They hav deir brkfast... N r leaving...
NEAL:- "Swthrt... Mere car se chalte he aaj.. Raste me details batata hu tujhe n vl discus abt it den.."
SHARON:- "OK... f9...vaise bhi tu mujhe pik karne hi aya he me meri car nahi lene vali thi idiot...chaloo..."
Ok nw abt NEAL:-
He is SHARON's dad's frnd's son..yaane dad k dosta ka beta he... He has been staying in NEW YORK frm childhood... He's smart..handsome... A young girls desire..super hot n sexy... Same like our REY...girls juzz die 2 b wid him...He owns d famous pub in NEWYORK named " SiZzLeRs"
(dis is juz a fiction name i dnt knw ny pub der) ...
As SHARON arrived in NEW YORK her dad introduced his frnd n his son 2 her so dat she'l feel comfortable here n weneva she'l need nythn dey'l b der..
As SHARON was here 2 study DJ ying NEAL helpd her a lot n dey soon bcame vry gud buddies...
NEAL on bcuming gud frnds wid her strtd noticing dat she had sum pain in her eyes... On asking SHARON she nvr used 2 tell him..
One day SHARON was crying in her room n NEAL entered in her room widout knocking 2 frighten her.. On seeing SHARON he got worried.. N Sharon on seeing him thot ders no point in hiding frm him as sumday she has to tell sum1 to atleast reduce little bit pain of hers...
She told him d entire stry frm her childhood 2 d last day dats graduation day..
N thereafter dey bcame best n close buddies... He nvr made her sad... He alwayz saw 2 it dat he kept her happy... He often suggested her 2 go bak 2 INDIA n tell n make realise evry1 d truth bt she nvr acceptd dis suggestion...
So nw he avoided removing dat topic coz her face would drop on hearing 1 name... She still was in touch wid evry1 especially wid REY n KRIYA except SWAYAM...
So nw SHARON is a DJ at NEAL's pub n dey manage many events 2gedr...
2day dey hav a meeting fr another such event...

PRESENT

They sit in d car n NEAL's driving...
SHARON:- "so NK temme wats d meeting abt.."
She calls NEAL NK..
NK:- "ok our client is d famous bussinessman of INDIA... Mr. KAPOOR.. dnt wry mere relatives nahi he...
His son's getting married 2 sum actress.. N he wants a vry lavish wedding n wants us 2 arrange it... He wants DJ... Dance... All types of food frm all ovr d world... N many more stuff.. N he wants perfect performers in evrythng.. His ready 2 giv ny amount of money v ask bt in return he juzz wans a wonderful wedding wich people of INDIA wont forget fr ages...
N u knw wat m really vry excited coz if dis deal is final il get 2 visit INDIA finally..."
...On hearing INDIA her face drops...
SHARON:- "I dnt think il b able 2 help u in dis event... Hav got a lot of work here..."
NEAL:- "No SHARON dis tym m nt gono listen nythn frm u.. If v do dis.. Vl b famous al around d world fr our work so v cnt miss dis opportunity...plzz mereliye u hav 2"
SHARON:- "bt... U knw i cnt juzz go der..."
NEAL:- "Come on SHARON.. kitne din bhagogi aur.. Face d challenge dnt run away.Evrythn vl b f9 n ul hav ur frnds bak....wat do u think i havent noticed ha.. i hav alwayz noticed ur pain in ur eyes.. hw much u miss dem n especially dat idiot.."
SHARON(angrily):- "Dnt call him an idiot got it.."😡
NEAL:- "Ooo gussa hmm!!!...Hey idiot se yaad aya kal uski nayi movie release ho rahi he...n latest news ye thi k he's goin out wid sum girl... Dnt remember hr name..."
SHARON:- "He n wid a girl !!...itz nxt 2 impossible..I knw him vry well it'l b juzz a publicity stunt.. if he woul dhav loved dat girl he wouldnt hav told it publically coz he would hav tried 2 hide her frm d eyes of d world... he's really too much possesive abt his things may it b any thing or relations.. fr d world he might b a casinova bt fr me he is truely a amzing personality.."
NEAL:- "U still knw him soo btr n d way u talking abt him n cnt challenge it.. u myt b true.."
SHARON:- "I hav known him frm d tym he dint knw himself.. our relation was unbreakable.. bt shit happens... n realtionships's change...people change..."😭
...Her eyes are filled wid tears nw...😭

So guyzz here's d nxt chapter hope u guyzz like it..thak gayi ab type karte karte... il update nxt after 20 likes n page 17 only...
till den njoy n tc... do like n comment n those who wan pm's do send me buddy request plz..

so guyzz dis tym mene lamba vala part update kiya he... do lyk n comment plz.. if u hav ny suggestions dey r welcum... do tell me wedr u people r liking it n wan ny additions kya??😊

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago

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718075

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

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Wow..amazing..i thought you might make me hate this Neal...but ya he's awesome..at least till now...i really loved your update...Sharon knows him so well...was sad in the end...but its ok... but you left it mid way...i'm not happy with that...so update soon...thanks for the PM...continue soon...i can't wait for the next part...

P.S. i am the 1st to comment...

Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago

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shaani2209

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

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nice update...hope sharon comes to India...hehe...and nice to know neal...thanks for the pm...update soon...

Edited by shaani2209 - 13 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: shaani2209
edited my comment on page 7 do check...and sorry for the tym taken...

thnkz a lot dear.. chk out d updated part..😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Im waiting too..😃😃

updated.. 😊 😊

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

so guyzz dis tym mene lamba vala part update kiya he... do lyk n comment plz.. if u hav ny suggestions dey r welcum... do tell me wedr u people r liking it n wan ny additions kya??😊

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago