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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 39:


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2 days after its vijaya-anand wedding anniversary, so geet is planning a surprise for them in KM. even karthik, Vicky n shanty too helped her in arrangements. Finally the D-DAY has arrived, geet is very happy wishing her parents n all. But it became a worst day in her life.

Geet invited all her friends. Deepthi, pinky, swetha, Vicky. Its surprise for geet's parents, so khurana's invited all their business associates including sid's dad as they are one of the member of BOD.

Geet is in KM cross checking all the arrangements one last time. Just then Vicky entered KM.

Hii di wished Vicky.

Hey Vicky, u came good, once see sab kuch thik tho hain na?

Ha di u don't worry, everything is fine told Vicky.

Geet (st): if maan is here today na, then I would enjoy more. I miss u maan. Come soon maan.

Vicky saw geet is lost in her world. He called her

Geet di'

No response.

Vicky shook her n called loudly this time geet di.

Geet came out of her thoughts.

Huh!! Kya hain Vicky.

Di u should get ready now. Only one hour left for the party.

Ya ok just wait I will get ready now. Where is karthik asked geet.

Geet I am here told karthik coming downstairs.

Ok tumne caterers se baat kin a asked geet.

Ha geet, u don't worry sab kuch thik hain u go now told karthik.

Ok I will go n get ready told geet n went to KM outhouse to get ready.

But they all don't know that a person is watching them. Geet is walking towards outside n that person is following her. Geet sensed that someone behind her n she turned back but at the same time that person hid behind the pillar. When geet saw no one is there she shrugged her shoulders n started walking. Once she is at a safe distance he too started walking behind her. After 10 min walk geet reached outhouse. She rested on the couch n she took her mobile n kissed maan's pic.

Missing u maan told geet n made a sad face.

Maan sensed that she is missing him so he dialed her number. Geet picked the call in one ring.

Hello maan told geet excitedly.

Mishty, how r u??

I am fine maan, tum thik tho ho na. r u taking ur food on time? Waise mama told me that tumko fever hain. Ab thik hua na, aur tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi asked geet non stop questions.

Geet geet thoda aaram se, let me talk dear told maan n chuckled.

Geet made a baby face n told ok..

Hmm ok answers for your questions, well I am fine now fever kam hua. I am taking my food on time warna meri mishty mujhse nazaaz ho jayegi.

Geet smiled n told that's like my maan.

Maan smiled n told I am always yours.

Geet blushed but immediately she came to her normal self n told maan pata hain, aaj ghar mein party hain. Main, karthik, mama, papa n Vicky ne milkar mom n dad ke liye surprise arrange kiye the. I am very excited u know.

Maan smiled n told ha I know mishty, I can imagine ur excitement in ur voice. R u ready for the party.

No maan not yet, abhi outhouse ayi hu ready hone ke liye told geet.

Tum outhouse mein ho kya?

Ha' kyun??

Kuch nahi told maan. Here maan is sensing something wrong. His mishty is in danger.

Maan' called geet.

Hmmm' replied maan.

I am missing u told geet. Her voice chocked.

Geet, mishty don't be sad main jaldi wapas aaonga. Don't worry. Agar tum sad ho tho main kaise reh sakta hu yaha bolo.

Geet immediately wiped her tears n told aisa nahi hain, main thik hu. Tum chinta mat karo.

Maan know that she is still sad but he is a bit worried about his mishty.

Geet get ready I will talk to u at night ok??

Ok maan, bye..

Arey mujhe ek smile tho do told maan.

Geet smiled n told ab khush.

Bohot. Ok bye mishty, take care ok?

Ok maan bye told geet n cut the call.

Geet went to washroom n took fast shower. Here that person is burning with jealousy n anger listening to maneet talk.

Person (st): maan, geet will be mine. I love her from the day I saw her but u always come in between n I never got a chance to talk her. But not now u r not there in india n I will use this opportunity to come close to geet. Geet u will be mine today. U will be in my arms today, yeh SID ka promise hain.

Sid smirked n settled in the couch.

Meanwhile geet's parents came to KM with rishab n pooja. They both r surprised n shocked to see the arrangements.

Kaisa hain bhai n bhabhi arrangements asked pooja.

Bohot sundar hain told vijaya n hugged her.

Yeh sab bachon ne arrange kiya told rishab.

Wo.. log kaha hain? Asked anand.

Papa, mama called karthik.

They both turned back n smiled at him. Karthik took blessings from them n wished happy annieversary papa, mama.

Thanku beta told duo.

Geet kaha hain karthik asked vijaya.

She is in outhouse mama, getting ready told karthik.

Hii uncle, aunty wished Vicky.

Vicky beta when u came asked anand.

Just now uncle. Happy annieversary uncle, aunty wished Vicky.

Thanku beta told duo.

They all settled on the couch n talking with each other. Still 1 hour is there for the guests to come.

Here geet came out of shower n took her dress. It's a while anarkali dress with matching jewellary. Ofcourse its maan's fav color, she got ready n wore the jewellary n minimum make up. She was herself in the mirror, she is looking like an angel n a blush on her cheeks thinking about maan.

She opened the door n stepped out of her room.

Here manwhile maan is trying to call karthik but he is not picking the phone. Maan got frustrated n don't know what to do.

Yeh karthik ko kya hua, why he is not picking the call thought maan.

Pata nahi mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hain, hope geet is fine. Ha geet told that Vicky is also in KM. let me call him.

Maan dialed vicky's number. Here all of them are talking in the hall just then vicky's mobile rang. He saw the caller ID n was confused that why maan jiju is calling him. Vicky came out n picked the call.

Hello jiju..

Vicky, geet abi bhi out house main hain kya?

Ha jiju.

Ok ek kaam karo u go to out house immediately.

Why jiju?

Pata nahi, I think geet is in some trouble. Mujhe aisa lag raha hain told maan worriedly.

Ok jiju don't worry I will go to out house now told viky n cut the call.

Here anand observed some tension in vicky's face n saw that he is going towards outhouse. He got confused but thought that he is going for geet.


continued after mayapari's post..




Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippeee meee first...
party toh banta hain🥳🥳
nice...
ohho so teaser was from past...
i sooo muccchhh hate tat idiot stupid gadha SID
are wah nice arrangements...
loved the phone convo...
maans sense s always rite bout his mishty...
luv yu maan...
waah white anarkali...
hamari geet toh pari lagrahi hogi na...
stupid karthik...
phone uttah na...
ohho vicky to the rescue...
di another cliff hanger!!!!!!
waise inn dona ka shadi n ahem ahem kab hua???????????????
next post ke liye baad mein comment karoongi😃
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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continued...


In the outhouse geet came downstairs n was shocked to see sid here. When sid saw geet coming he was mesmerized by her beauty n was just staring at her. Geet got scared seeing him here.

Geet (st): babaji, yeh yaha kya kar raha hain. Ab main kya karu. Main karthik ko phone karti hu. Oh no mera phone tho couch par hain.

Geet went down n was about to take her mobile but sid caught her hand immediately.

Hey babes'

Geet looked at him scaringly n smiled nervously.

Wh.. what are u doing here? Asked geet.

Ofcourse I am waititng for u sweet heart told sid.

Geet made a disgusting face seeing him flirting.

Leave me I have to go told geet n tried to get out of his hold.

Not so soon sweet heart told sid n inched closer to her. Geet moved back. Tears formed in her eyes seeing him.

Chodo mujhe shouted geet.

Ahh babes why u r scared, come dear lets enjoy told sid moving closer to her.

This angered geet to the core n she freed herself n slapped him tight on his cheek. Sid is shocked with her sudden action. Anger is visible in his eyes n his lust for her is increasing day by day. He pinned geet to the near by wall n told today u will be mine. No one is there between us not even your maan.

Agar maan ko pata chal gaya tho tumare bare main then he wont leave u. he will kill u for sure.

Acha' how he will know. By the time he knows u will be mine.

Geet made a disgusting face n told I am ready to die but I wont allow any one to touch me.

Sid smirked n told ohh I wont let u die, n I hate that maan he was always there with u n didn't allow me to come near u. now he cant do anything.

Geet is now crying bitterly n she don't know what to do. She is struggling to get out of his grip but he is too strong for her.

Geet (st): babaji, iss sid ne mujhe kuch karne se pehle I wanna die. Maan I love u.plz save me maan.

What are u thinking geet asked sid.

Geet didn't reply anything.

Why u r crying geet, u should be lucky that I love u. I cant live without u geet. Try to understand.

Love?? Do u know the meaning of love. Mera aur maan ka sacha pyaar hain. Main srf aur sirf maan ka hu.

This angered sid n he moved closer to her. Geet closed her eyes n praying for her babaji. When sid was about to kiss her some one dragged him out.

Geet opened her eyes n was relieved to see Vicky there. Sid fell on the ground. Geet hugged Vicky n crying bitterly.

Vicky.. Vicky wo.. wo.. tried geet to speak something.

Sid got up angrily n was about to punch Vicky. But Vicky is too fast he broke the hug n punched sid hard on his stomach. Blood came out of his mouch. Vicky held his collar n shouted how dare u touch my di. I wont leave u b*****. U have to pay for this.

Vicky started kicking n punching him on his face n stomach. Geet is horrified n she stood there numb.

Just then anand entered outhouse, he too sensed something is wrong. He was shocked to see Vicky beating someone. Here sid is not even able to stand, he is bleeding heavily. Anand ran to him n stopped him.

Vicky beta stop it shouted anand.

Nahi uncle let me kill him today. How dare he touch my di told Vicky angrily.

Anand saw geet n was shocked to see her crying bitterly. Somehow anand stopped Vicky n ordered the servant's to take him to hospital. Vicky rushed to geet n asked her.

Di r u alright ??

Geet hugged Vicky n was crying bitterly.

Di calm down kuch nahi hua, dekho anand uncle is here na, see told Vicky.

Geet broke the hug n went to her dad.

Dad'

Shhh princess nothing happened. See we r there for u. ok? Don't cry dear, dekho mom n others will be waiting for u. come on we will go there told anand.

But inside he is breaking down seeing his daughter in that state even though he will be tensed for small things. But now he has to be strong for his daughter.

Mujhe darr lag raha hain dad told geet.

Geet beta darne ki koi baat nahi, we r there for u n that sid never come here. Uska halat dekha na tumne, hm? Don't worry princess consoled anand.

Geet is some what relieved seeing her dad n Vicky.

Geet(st): kaash maan yaha hota.

Dad I will come just now told geet n went to wash room.

Just then maan called to Vicky.

Uncle maan ka phone told Vicky.

Vicky beta don't tell to maan about this he will be very tensed told anand.

Hello..

Hello Vicky, geet thik hain na. kuch problem nahi hain na? asked maan worriedly.

Nothing happened jiju, di is fine she is with uncle told Vicky.

Maan sighed in relief n told ok thanku Vicky. Enjoy the party.

Ok jiju bye.. told Vicky n cut the call.

Thanku beta for'. Tried anand to tell something. But he was cut by Vicky.

Uncle, geet is my sister n its my responsibility to save her. No need to thanku me uncle.

Anand is overwhelmed with his love n care. He hugged him.

After some time geet came down but her face is pale n sad. But she smiled when she her dad. She tried to be happy in front of them.

Finally they 3 went to KM n the party started. But this whole scene didn't miss by one person. Who is that??

Precap: some happy moments n some sad moments'

Who is that person ??


Hii friends.. here is part 39. This is the longest update I have ever written. Plz plz give me long comments. All of u I request u to comment. They mean a lot to me.

yippeee i am very happy today... GHSP 2nd anniversary n this is 3rd thread of DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER n i became a IF-DAZZLER.. hurrayyy... its a party time... 🥳

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Waiting for ur response..

Love

-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear posted half update in the above post...
rest i will update in an hour... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it di...
wow vicky the saviour...
poor geet...
uff maan ko apni misti ka kitna khayal hai...
hmmm awesome di...
sorry for late reply

Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the 3RD THREAD DEAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one


want past to over jaldi



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

yippeee meee first...

party toh banta hain🥳🥳
nice...
ohho so teaser was from past...
i sooo muccchhh hate tat idiot stupid gadha SID
are wah nice arrangements...
loved the phone convo...
maans sense s always rite bout his mishty...
luv yu maan...
waah white anarkali...
hamari geet toh pari lagrahi hogi na...
stupid karthik...
phone uttah na...
ohho vicky to the rescue...
di another cliff hanger!!!!!!
waise inn dona ka shadi n ahem ahem kab hua???????????????
next post ke liye baad mein comment karoongi😃


aww thanku so much reshu... 😊
hate this sid... but dont kow what will happen now... 😭😭
u know me became IF-DAZZLER with the update of part 39... me very very happy... 🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread dear...
when u'll update it?

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