Mayur FF ~Love was bound to happen~PART-25-Pg86 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the update Ayshu... especially her holding his hand and he saying sorry for that and then wishing her luck... You are getting better day by day... [:)[ 😊 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy Holi Ayesha

Beautiful update

Nupur started to like maynk or i can say she has already fallen love with him...:D

im eagerly waiting for their romantic confession
plz jaldi confession kara do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i had lost track of the story...so had to re-start from part 6

the story's been building up so well...i m loving nupur's new found slow realization of love for mayank

girl i dunno why but i feel like repeating u have seriously improved tons!

i loved chap 14...the flow was so smooth...the transition btw the dialogues & emotions portrayed were beautiful...loving these simple sweet moments btw mayur now

wow beach date nextšŸ˜‰

update soonšŸ¤—

ps: update ur index too😳...i thought only 13 parts were there
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part
loved it..😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
comment updated on page 45 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry guys will update in a day or two...M busy with collg and all

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Posted: 13 years ago

I m really sorry guys for updating soo late...My studies kept me busy...Heres the next aprt Hope you ppl like it.. 😊😊

Part-16

Dressed in a light blue colour churidaar salwar and kurta with a silver bindi shining on her forehead and hair left open she looked extremely beautiful. From the moment when mayank asked her to go out with him on beach, she couldn't control her excitement. She waited for him downstairs while he was freshening up himself in his room. He retuned back with a black shirt..sleeves folded upto the elbow, and jeans and his hair jelled up with his gorgeous smile adorning his face. Nupur was left dumstruck for the moment she saw him. Her beauty was soo well complimenting his handsome features. She nevr failed to notice how her heart always skipped a beat whenever she saw that smile on his face. and when he looked so hot with those spiked hair. Black was soo his colour and shamelessly she was staring at him..at her husband

He came close to her and snapped his fingers in front of her

"Kya hua?,,,,aise kya dekh rahi ho??..chalna nahi hai kya?"

She fumbled as she just came back from her trance..."Um haan chalo na..main toh kabse ready hun...waise mujhe nahi pata tha ki Mayank Sharma ladkiyon se bhi jyada time lagata hai taiyaar hone mein"..she giggled

"Dekho Nupur...thora time toh lagega na...aur main toh just abhi office se aaya tha na"..he got embarassed

"BTW maine tumhe pehle kabhi bataya hai kya ki tum black mein bahut handsome lagte ho.."

He got flustered and looked sideways.."Ab chalein??"

She laughed at the way he blushed..

"Ohh toh mayank Sharma sharmata bhi hai..waise ek baat bolun??..apni looks ko control mein rakha karo..kya pata kab kis ladki ki neeyat bigad jaye tumhe dekhkar.."...she teased him with her eyes wide open

He looked back into her eyes and with smile on his face...he said.."Aur tumhari neeyat??"

Now this time it was Nupur's turn to get embarassed..she couldn't resist the way he was deeply staring in her eyes...

"Ohh toh Nupur Bushan mazaak par bhi sharmaati hai.."..he laughed out loud

Realising that it was a joke..she had to divert the topic.."Ab chalna nahi hai kya..."...she moved forward but he caught hold of her wrist

"You too look beautiful today Nupur!!...aur tum har colour mein hi beautiful lagti ho"...he left her wrist

She smiled and thanked him

...

The beach had a perfect view of sunset..with coll breeze blowing and lovers sitting here and there with handa in hands enjoying the romantic moment

"Woww this is soo beautiful!!..Haina Mayank??"

He nodded in approval seeing the lovely sunset and more than that her lovely smile

"Chalo yahan baithte hain Nupur.."

They sat down on the sand in front of the vast sea glistening with the golden light of the drowning sun

He observed her looking at ppl intensely

"Kya dekh rahi ho Nupur??"

"Mayank..aaj Propose Day hai...aur dekho saare couples kitne pyara se baithe hai na...?..celebrating their love and togetherness"...she sighed loking at them dreamily

He looked at them..yes the sight looked beautiful...He wished if he and Nupur could also be a part of this bliss...if he could also hold her in his arms like other couples..if he could tell her how much he loved her!!!

"Mayank...ek baat poochun??...life mein change kyun aata hai..??...kya har baar waqt ek jaisa nahi reh sakta??...she asked him with her gaze fixed at the tides of the sea
"Nupur..life is all about changes...and change is always for your betterment...Jab tak hamari zindagi mein badlaav nahi aayega tab tak hamare saath pehle se bhi accha kaise hoga??"
She didn't reply...with her eyes still staring the sea and smile playing on her face
"Nupur...tumhe pata hai na hamari shadi ko already 5 months ho chuke hain...ab sirf 1 mahina bacha hai till we are together in this contract"

Suddenly his words struck her like a painful arrow..her smile faded away and she looked towards him...with freshly forming tears in her eyes...

"Ab dekho na...tumhari life jo 1 mahine baad change ho jayegi...woh tumhe Raaj se milwayegi..hua na tumhare acche ke liye."...he tried to smile fakely..

She wasn't listening to him..the only thing which was crossing her mind was that time was slipping away and only I damn month was left'

"5 mahine guzar bhi gaye aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala..."

"Exactly..5 mahine guzar bhi gaye aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chala...ab yeh 1 mahina bhi guzar jayega..aur phir tum.."

He was cutt off in between as she hugged him tight

Tears rolled down from her eyes as she rememebred the beautiful time she spent with him

"Mayank..main tumhe bahut miss karungi..."

His own eyes became wet for the immense pain he was going through..."Main bhi"

Breaking the hugto prevent his breakdown he held her hand made her stand

"Chalo..lets make this day special...taki hum hamesha apni is friendship ko cherish kar sakein"...

"Kaha leke jaa rahe ho Mayank"

"Ek minute"

She saw a photographer clicking photographs of the couples sitting at the beach

"Ek photo hamari bhi...aur do copies"...he addressed him

"Nupur is photo ko hum hamesha apne paas rakhenge as a memory"...he smiled

She could die a million times for that smile of his

They sat on a bench posing for the click...

"Arey thora paas hokar baithiye na...ek doosre ka haath pakadiye"

They moved closer to each other..he held her one hand on the one side of his lap..and she held his other hand on the other side of his lap...looking at the camera..smiling just like each other...but both of them had something missing in their smiles...the smiile had a pain..the smile had many unsaid things...many unsaid feelings...

"Perfect Couple!!!"...the photographer announced..and they both passed an awkward glance towards each other

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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy very nice update yarr lvd it but plzz next update thoda jaldi karna & really very sweet update
Nw only nupur has to realize her fealing . thanxx fr the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ayeshu...its was a Beautiful update..really šŸ˜

U get so better wid each part...the flow of writing was so good..😃and..the part was so perfect...I wanted to read more...šŸ˜†

the first part...aww both complimenting and going crazy over each other...loved it!! ā¤ļø

and the beach part...I can so clearly see that Nupur doesn't want to part from Mayank n Mayank is more of consoling himself than Nupur that she has to leave...sigh...I hope Nupur realises soon...n U better make her realise soon...

n their talk was good...I hoped to read more of that toošŸ˜†

n do I need to mention that their sitting position for the pic reminded me of Arti's famous pic, ofcoursešŸ˜‰...Perfect couple...right said šŸ˜

can't wait for the next part😃...do update kal 😳

U stole my thunder 🤣...ignore if bothering 🤣

Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update.beach scene was very cute.plz mayur ko jaldi mila do.

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