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hey guyz um baq with ma fan-fic thnx 4 the nice response..so enjoy this part 😛

episode#13

recap= mukti wants 2 get engaged as s0on as possible

the next morning evry1 is buzy getting the decoration done prerna nad rishab didnt lack in anything startting from the decorationz 2 the food evrything is perfect

prerna= array birju kak yeh jo stage maine sajanay keliye kaya tha yeh ho gaya hai ya nahi yeh workkers kya ker rahay hai innse kuch bhi nahi hota

prerna gos up 2 premz room
prerna= prem chalo utthay bohot so liye aaj mukti ki engagemnet hai
as s0on as she said this prem got outta the bed
prem= to mein kya karu?
prerna= tu assay kyun baat ker raha hai help ker jakay nichay sham tak sab kuch perfect hona chaiya ja tu jakay dekh stage achi terha say ban hai ya nahi mein mukti ki enagegement kuch baki nahi rekhna chahti

prem= oh god mom aap mujhe iss engagment se mujhe door hi rakhengi to acha hoga..i dont want to be part of all this mere paas aur bhi kaam hai im leaving

prerna= aaj tujhe kya ho geya hai assay kyun baat ker raha hai

prem= mother india mein aab koi bacha nahi raha so plzz jus let me be ok?...

prerna leavs dissapointed

she gos 2 muktiz room 2 check on her

mukti= beta ut aaj teri sagai hai
prerna- ab kya sara din soye gi kya?

prerna removes the blanket and sees no one..
prerna- ye mukti kaha chali gayi

prem gos down with his old attitude and lo0k sneha kuki tushar doris all r shokced 2 see prem

prem= what?..ab log mujhe assay kyun dekh rahay hai
sneha- kal tak to tum bohot decent kapre pahan rahay tha aaj kya hogeya

prem- lo0k i hav no time for all this mujhe bohot hi important party ke liye jana hai

prem leaves

sneha- mein janti hu prem tumhari party kaha hai
prem is heading out when he sees mukti entering bajaj house

mukti and prem bump into each toher and keep lo0kin at each toher with sad faces and tears in eyes

without saying a word both go in different direction

prem is sitting on hiz brothers samadhi
suddenly he sees sneha
prem= tum yaha?
sneha- kaise chal rahi hai tumhari party enjoy ker rahay hona?
prem- oh stop it sneha
sneha- sach kerwa lagta hai prem per dont worry jabtak sneha yaha hai tumhari behen tabtak yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti mein mukti ko khud samjhaungi..ok?
prem- koi faida nahi sneha ager wo mujhse sacha pyar kerti ahi to wo khud mere paas lot ayegi.

sneha leaves from there aftr she leaves prem is sayin 2 himself
wo ayegi lot kay wo kaise kissi aur se shaadi kersakti hai mujhse gussa hai per ajaigi kyun bahi?..and cries 😭 😭
suddenly he notices an envelope nxt to prem samadhi he picks it up and reads

hai baghwan prem prem prem tum itnay budhu kaise ho
uss raat mukti ne tumha kaha kay usske aur samarth ke beech kuch nahi to tum ne maanliya or aaj ke halat dekh ke tum kya kaho ge
tumhari akay khol ne keliye phir wo tesvire bhej rahi hu dekh lo phirse per iss baar andhay vishwas ko hata ker sachay ko dekh neki koshish karo
tumhara shubchintak
he opens it and sees the same photos he saw in delhi..in range and anger he says..mukti tumne mere saath thik anhi kiya..mujhe use kerke phek diya badla layne keliye..jo kuch bhi maine tumahray saath pehle kiya uss ka badla tum mujhse lay rahi hu..im not gonna leave you mukti uss din to mein tumhare pyar mein andha hogeya tha per aaa..he wipes his tears and takes those pictures and heads home

evry1 is in the negagaemnt..mukti is getting ready...samarth and his family are here
evry1 is present
suddenly prem bangs in calling out mukti mukti evry1 is shocked....

sorry guyz will update later..i was gonna add more buh kinda buzy 😃 so keep guessing wehat is he going 2 do?.... 😃

hey hey hey jus came baq and thought of finishing this part ok dso here u go

prem bangs in calling out mukti out loud evry1 is shocked prerna gos up2 him

prerna- beta?..ye kya hai itni zor se mukti kyun bularahay ho dekho party mein koi tamasha nahi chahiye ab chupke sabko sorry kaho r u listening prem?..acha sunno yeh thali tum samarth ke hato mein do..samjhay goahead ho tumhare dost jaise haina cmon give it to him

prem pushes the thali from prernaz hand and evry is stunned 2 see prem behaving lyk this

prem- stop this drama i said stop it aur aap appni choti si mukti ko bulaiya call her call her right now

prerna- ye kya bat tamizi hai prembehave yourself tumay ho kya geya hai

samarth- prem r u okay?..i think u need 2 chill

prem- no i dont have 2 chill..anywayz mein aapna time yaha waste ker raha hu ager aap log mukti ko anhi bulayenge to thik hai il rbing her

evrybody tries 2 put some sence in prem but he takes the steps 2 bring mukti donw

mukti was getting ready putting on her dress she was tieing the back part of her dress..when prembangs in

mukti- prem what the hell tum knock kerke nahi assaktay kya cant u see im gettin ready..

prem dosnt say anything and holds muktz hand tightly

prem- r u kuming ya mujhe

mukti- prem whatz wrong with you meri chooriyan tooth rahi hai

prem- chooriyan toot rahi hai?..tumhe iss ki fiker hai per jo meri zindagi bikhar rahi hai issay tumhe kuch nahi

prem holds her hand tighter and drags her down...mukti keeps shouting prem ye tum kya ker rahay ho

he brings her down he lets her go whn she is almost falling on samrth hold her

samrth- prem how dare you tum mukti ke saath

prem- you shutup mere aur mukti ke beech bolne valay tum kon hotay ho ha?

prem troguhs those photyos on muktiz face...mukti is shocked..evry1 is lo0king at the pictures that dropped on the floor...a person steps in only his footsteps are shown he pickz up one of the photo and lo0ks at it

and from one side evry1 hears a loud slap..that dropped on muktiz face😭

now guyz guess who this person iz?...and what will happen next what is prem going 2 do?...😃 hope u enjoyed it

Edited by desi_gr3l - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
i think it's probably her dad am i rite anyways thanks 4 updatin n i hope u'll continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
yaar prem ko hi kyun har waqt misunderstanding ho jata hai. He is Mr Misunderstander 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
I thinkits samarth's mom!!Gr8 fan-fic!
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Posted: 19 years ago
I thinkits samarth's mom!!Gr8 fan-fic!
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks for the update continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dying to know what happens next, i hope samarth realises that he has to get the two lovers together again and prem gets to marry mukti, just a guess lol 😆

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