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Link to Previous Part 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2325057/ff-kaho-na-pyar-hain-updated-part-20-page-86

PART 14

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

Gurmeet sits himself down in the car next to Dadi in a confused state; all he can think about is the earlier events and how unusual it was, "Uss moti ne bacha liya aaj" he thinks to himself smiling. "Kya hua beta, mann hi mann main musqura rahe ho kyun??" questions Dadi after witnessing a slight sparkle on her grandsons face after a long time. "Kuch nahi Dadi" says an alerted Gurmeet looking trough the window avoiding eye contact."Sharma gaya lagta hain" thinks Dadi asking the driver to drive fast.

The car drives past the small market whilst Gurmeet binocular eyes spots Dharasti through the clear car window, her face was illumined under the dim street lightings, he notices her chirping away to an elderly women dressed in a white saree. He notices Dharasti hugging the elderly woman in a tight hold; she frees the elderly women after a while and is beaming with laughter grabbing into her purse and getting out notes of rupees and forcing it in to the hands of the elderly women. The elderly woman places her hand on Dharastis head and swiftly turns her light weighted body around in slow motion revealing her identity to Gurmeets wide open eyes. He recognises the women from before who was calling him Karan.

He assumes that it was all Dharasti's big plan to play this cheap joke on him, "toh yaha ye sab chal raha hain" says an angry Gurmeet. "Kya Beta?" ask Dadi. "Kuch nahi Dadi" answers Gurmeet with rage. He holds in his anger and continues looking out the window promising himself to teach Dharsti a lesson that she will never forget.

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Barun, Kushaal, Manvi and Kushi exit the college sneakily. The boys walk forward with Barun on the phone, whilst Kushi and Manvi toddle behind silently. "Dhuryudaan Kahika" says Manvi cursing Kushaal for throwing her on the floor earlier, "isko ab pyaar karna sika ti hoon" mumbles Manvi getting into position kneeling down on the floor. Kushi looks down to see her sister getting into a running postion "ab tu ye kya kar rahi hain meri maa?" she says. "Kuch nahi di, wait and watch" answers back Manvi shouting "1, 2, 3, Go".

As fast as a cheetah, before a blink of an eye Manvi runs and grabs on to Kushaal's back like a monkey jumping on to a tree.

Kushaal was unaware of the hustle and bustle behind him, causing him to lose his balance and falling on top of Barun who he grabbed by his arm which were aligned with his whilst they were walking. Barun falls on the floor with out having the opportunity to say "what the" this time. Whilst his hunky body crushes to the ground his smart phone falls out his hand, miraculously the phone remains in one piece which makes Barun breathe a sigh of relief. Kushaals well toned body comes crashing down on to Barun with Manvi on top of Kushaal. "What the!" shouts Barun as he feels a heavy load on his back.

"Manvi ki bachi, bandriya!" speaks Kushaal. "Bandar hoga tu!" shouts Manvi lying on top of Kushaal. "Chup" shouts Barun from beanth the two heavy beasts.

Kushaal tries pushing Manvi off him but she holds him tighter dissolving her existence into him, it was as if two were merging to become one. She holds his perfect body with her small slender arms which looked like it was specially made to fit his body frame. Her legs entangles with Kushaal unknowingly and for a moment she feels uncomfortable but then she brushes the thought aside and starts to romance Kushaal. "Bahon main chaale aah Kushaal my darling" she flirts massaging her soft face on Kushaals back. "Am not your bed!" says an annoyed Barun. " Bed ho hi nahi sakte itna hard joh ho bhai" exclaims Kushaal laughing. "Get off me" shouts Barun. "Main meri zindagi yaha tumara saath bitaana chati hoon" speeches Manvi not paying attention to what the boys are saying. "Mere sath, kiya bakwas kar rahi ho?" says Barun. "Tumara sath nahi bhai, mere sath" corrects Kushaal. "Hai meri pati dev" says Manvi and hugs Kushaal tigher. "what the" says Barun "you have a girlfriend, I knew bhai was wrong about you, shakaal se toh bhola hain aur andaar se mavali ho, tum meri di ki layak hi nahi''''""hold on dude" shouts Kushaal, "meri koi girlfriend nahi hain..!" "Toh main kya hoon darling" says Manvi. "tum iski patni ho" mutters Barun in frustration elbowing Kushaal in his abdomen in anger. "chup raho meri maa" screams Kushaal who Manvi was getting into trouble.

"hai meri behan" says Kushi running to her sister after seeing the 3 fall like dominos on top of each other. Unintentionally she stands on top of Barun's phone which cracks open with her full force on top of it. "what the" shouts Barun noticing a pair of legs on top of his phone. His eyes roll upwards to identify the owner of the legs.

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Shabir is shocked to see a man and women romancing in the middle of a jungle on top of each other. "Kya zamana agaya hain bhai" he thinks to himself. He notices the red beaded saree worn by the lady but doesn't manages to see her face as it was fully covered by the man on top of her. Shabir decides to ignore what he was seeing and continues searching for the water.

"cake toh gaya" spoke the man on top of Prachi getting off her smiling. Prachi remains silent and gets off the floor trying to clean her saree. She stumbles on a twig on the floor and her heel gets stuck in the soil. She falls backward onto a leafy bush. "Ouch" she screams as she pricks her back.

Behind the bush stood Shabir sprinkling the icy water onto his hot face from the stoned well near by. He shivers when the ice cold water makes contact with his delicate skin, "is tandi raat main ek larki dilado bhai" He chirps to himself complaining shamelessly to God by looking up at the dark blue night sky, when suddenly he is thumped down onto the ground with full force.

Prachi who fell onto the bush ended up falling on the other side whilst she was struggling to get off from it. She fell through and ended up colliding with Shabbir and now both were on the moist soil ground, with Prachi on top of Shabbir.

The floor beneath them was going downhill and both Shabbir and Prachi started rolling down in fast speed. Prachi closed her eyes and had her head buried in Shabbirs chest, she clutched onto his stomach out of fright and her nails were digging inside Shabbir's flesh.

Shabbir was initially numb and thought he was in the middle of an earthquake first but gradually he understood it was a girl who crashed onto him from behind and now they both were rolling to some unknown destination. "God tussi great ho ek ladki maangi thi tumne tho bochaal diladiya" he whispered in his mind as his wish was heard. He couldn't see the girls face, her face was hidden in his chest and the dark night didn't help either. But one thing he did know was that she was not heavy at all.

The wind was blowing her silky hair onto his smooth face, the fragrance of her hair seemed familiar to Shabbir, he couldn't help but breathe in the essence. He closed his eyes and his hands moved on their own accord to hold her in his firm grip.

The rolling was going on for eternity, sometimes Shabbir was on top and sometimes it was Prachi, this uneasy journey was too much for Prachi, she wanted to free herself from this strange man who was holding onto her, "choro mujhe" Prachi managed to speak at last which came out as a whimper. Shabbir was amused, he let his arms slip away from her but the rolling didn't stop, "maine tho chor diya ab tum bhi mujhe chorlo' Ya phir tumhara aur koi iraada hain?" Joked shabbir in his usual manner. Prachi misunderstood his joke, she started crying "main aisi waisi ladki nahi hoon". "tho choro mujhe" Shabir spoke again. Prachi didn't know what to do she was scared, she couldn't leave him but didn't want to hold him either.

The broadly built man who was on the other side of the bush realised Prachi was amiss. Without a flash of a second he located Prachi, her scent was engraved within him and no matter where she is hidden he can always reach her. He saw her trapped with a man turning over non stop, he reached in front of them and Prachi and Shabbir's rolling came to an immediate stop. He picked up Prachi and disappeared from the spot within a second. Shabbir was left flabbergasted "Allah bachaye husnwalo se!" He chirped still laying on the ground as he saw the girl who was on top of him being carried away in the arms of another man. Their faces were still unseen by Shabbir all he saw was her red sequined saree "oyee woh tho wohi jodi hain'" He shouted as he realised that was the couple he saw making out earlier.

Prachi turned around and looked over the shoulders of the tall broadly built man and she was shocked as she saw Shabbir. She turned around straight away and became nervouse "isne mujhe dheka tho nahin" she spoke in her mind. "Nahin dheka" stated the man who was holding her ordinarily as if he could read her mind "bohat andhera tha". Prachi smiled and looked back around to see Shabbir galloping backwards in his white horse, as if by a strange force her eyes were glued to him until he faded away from her view.

The broadly built man with Prachi in his arms walked in a rapid speed and in no time he reached their earlier spot. He made her stand on the ground and looked at her with his love filled eyes. Prachi couldn't stare back at him, she lowered her gaze and her face went a shade of red. The man opposite her smiled and looked at her body which was now stained with mud and the cake. He went up close to her and with his big hands held onto her small hands, he started walking and Prachi followed obediently, completely trusting the man she was with.

He stopped near a lakeside, which had a waterfall which was gushing pure water onto the ground. Without a word he placed his hands onto the water and dripped it onto Prachi's face, he started rubbing her face with the water in order to erase the marks, he dripped water onto her arms and rubbed it in order to free them from the dirt. His every touch was causing Prachi's heartbeat to race fast, she was in no control and had lost her self completely in his touch. The man was finished with his job, Prachi was now cleaned and no remains of the cake or dirt was on her. Water was visible on her body, the man observed with his blue eyes that tiny water droplets were falling from her red bangles that she wore only for him. Water was also dripping from her shining earings that also she wore only for him. His eyes then fell on her neck that was empty, he smiled a smile that meant a million things. He was fully aware that Prachi left her neck empty on purpose. He walked close to her, Prachi stopped breathing, he walked closer, Prachi closed her eyes, he walked closer still, Prachi clutched her saree, he placed his big hands firmly on her smooth hips, Prachi moves a step backwards, he moves a step closer and places his cold lips onto her bare neck.

The earth comes to a standstill for these two souls, the wind causes the tree branches to bow down in front of true love and the waterfall showers them with blessings.

The two souls stood there for eternity relishing their moment of passion. His lips savoured her skin and Prachi allowed him full access. He moves away from her neck hesitantly, still close to her he asks with a looped smile "mera gift?" Prachi was about to turn to look into her bags when he stops her and pulls her in closer, "usme nahin hain, ghar pe bhool ayi tum, bracelet tha na" he clearly states. Prachi nods in agreement and curses herself mentally for forgetting his birthday gift. "Don't swear at my Prachi" he whispers into her ear which makes her smile. "Give me a kiss!" He demands sweetly, Prachi's smile vanishes and she shudders in his hold, she becomes shy once again but the man is insistent and she knows he won't let her go until he gets his birthday gift. She slowly tiptoes on her feet and brushes her lips on his cheek. She quickly pecks him and then pushes him and runs away giggling. The broadly built man remains rooted in the spot, caressing his cheek where she kissed him, he whispers "Kehte hain khuda ne is jahaan main sabi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hain banaya har kisi ke liye' Tere milna hain us rab ka ishaara mano mujko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye'" and the smile on his face refuses to disappear.

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Dharasti reaches home to find none of her sister are home yet. "Where are them two gone" says a concern sister "I thought it will be nice if I take them out to a restaurant for evening dinner".

"I know I'll call the restaurant and book a table for us, and wait for them meanwhile" says Dharasti making the phone call.

Meanwhile in the Sobti Chaudhry house Dadi is also making plans to take her family out. She speaks "Gurmeet beta, aaj bahar jane ka mann kar raha hain kuch alag khane ki", "kya Dadi" asks Gurmeet. "Kuch bhi, Jab Barun aur Prachi ghar ajaye, take us all out for a lovely meal".

Gurmeet: "Nahi Dadi, aaj time nahi hain"
Dadi: "han tumare pass toh mere liya time hi nahi hain"
Gurmeet: "sorry Dadi, maybe tomorrow I'll take you."

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"Tum" Shouts Barun, tightly holding Kushi's right leg and pulling it really fast causing her to fall and lay beside him.

Her body comes crashing down, hitting the hard floor, the glass red bangels on her both arms break into tiny pieces, her long traditonal earing come off her ears and bounce on the floor. Barun stares blindly at her face which seemed cute to him with her nose twitched and her eyes red in anger, she was muttering curses under her breath which seemed like sweet singing to Baruns ears, his eyes were madly lost in her face that radiated a fatal attraction which Barun couldn't resist. However this moment was short lived as Baruns eyes fell onto his broken phone.

Barun tries to pick himself off the floor at once shouting "get off me damn it" to Kushaal and Manvi. Manvi quickly jumps up as she sees her sister laying on the floor. Kushaal also bounces back up immediately commenting "maza aya nahi?". Barun shoots daggers at Kushaal with his eyes and immediately regains his standing position.

Kushi struggles to get up and Maanvi comes to her rescue. Barum makes his way to his white Lamborghini and Maanvi looks at him in shock "yeh sexy tumhaari hain kya?!!" She blurts, Barun ignores her stupid comments and continues walking, Kushaal jumps and sits on top of the bonnet of Baruns white vehicle "this is a classic piece dude, ek ride pe chale kya??" Barun looks at Kushaal in disgust as he was no way going to let them enter his car "leave me alone you stupid people, you can only admire from the outside and only dream about setting foot inside!" Barun shouts sitting himself in his car and shutting the door with a thud.

Maanvi smirked and thought of this as a challenge "Daaarrrlling Kushaal!" She screeches "I dare you to sit in his car come on I dare you!!"Kushaal thought for a second and screams "Challo!" Pulling Maanvi along with him and Maanvi doesn't forget to pull Kushi along with her too.

Kushaal opens the back door and sits himself down and Maanvi and Kushi join him. "Driver shuro ho jao" he laughs. Barun looks behind at the three clowns and is annoyed "what the" he mutters "get out my car". "No way saale saab" Kushaal laughs "tum gari chalao ya phir main dadimaa ko phone lagao" he threatens jokingly. "Damn it" screams Barun igniting his car as he knew very well that his Daadi will kill him if she hears of this mess.

Barun starts driving in a very angry mood with the three passengers enjoying the journey to the fullest. Barun drops Kushi and Maanvi to their house first and both the girls walk away with Maanvi shouting "thank you" and giving a forced hug to Kushaal. Barun then drops Kushaal home "mazza agaya bhai" he beams punching Baruns shoulder playfully and leaving his car. Barun then leaves for his own home and wishes he never meets these people ever again.

Precap:

Kamaal Dhaamal in Restaurant at night!

Note:

Hi guys, aplogies for writing after such a long time but we hope you have enjoyed reading this part and is looking forward for the next' also please comment on what was ur favourite scene and don't forget to mention if you are intrigued by the mystery man?

STORY SO FAR can be found on:

Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Definitely intrigued by the mystery man..gosh who the hell is he? sb hot definitely

i luuvv barun/khushi..khushaal/ maanvi

each n every line of theirs makes me go Lmao

most fun part was the group fall

hottest part was prachi with that unknown guy n lol she went back to the passionate interlude after the roll...haha

most hot-headed male wd be ..actu there r 2: gurmeet n barun! luvv gurmeet n geet of course

i like the guys' names..it sets them apart for this FF without leaving sight of their distinctive trait of the character they've played

most chilled out guy wd be shabbir..lol..that comment abt get me a girl god was hilarious! ie he asked 4 a girl n an explosive was sent his way

my fav couple wd b barun n khushi;p Maanvi n Virat r awesome!

luuvd the update


Edited by karisma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice

dadi too wants to go out..perfect
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god u update yaar
its been soo long
it was a nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

but who is dis man in prachi's life...dey r all sooo funny...always dere to pull each other's leg...he he he...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waooo ... nice Start Plzzz contninue
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing part yaar

bechara barun kaha phans gaya!!!!!!!!🤣

nd gurmeet uska toh popat bana diya drashti ne🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!


keep writing...



love ya,
vishruta😳
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