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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome update...

but wht nw...both in love...not confessing...

its amazing...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



thanks a lot dear...
love you for liking it so much...
will update it tonight...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Aww my baby is waiting so much.. But abhi time hai... 10 bje ke baad ol aaungi tab update karungi...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



Aww my baby is waiting so much.. But abhi time hai... 10 bje ke baad ol aaungi tab update karungi...


yeh tho cheating hain... 😭😭😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


yeh tho cheating hain... 😡



Cheating kaisi..? Now my sis is using lappy.. She will give me lappy at 10... Then I ll update... Now I am replying through cell...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



Cheating kaisi..? Now my sis is using lappy.. She will give me lappy at 10... Then I ll update... Now I am replying through cell...


hey just kidding take ur own time.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


hey just kidding take ur own time.. 😊



now me updating... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



now me updating... 😊


mere yaha 10 baj gaye hai, tere yaha nahi baje kya?
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Posted: 13 years ago
part-41


Saza ye kaisi mili hamein dil lagane ki,

Ro rahe hai magar tamanna thi muskrane ki,

Apna dard kisey dikhau ye dost,

Dard bhi usne diya jo wajah this muskurane ki..

On the other hand geet is very sad…feeling suffocated…fighting with herself what she is feeling for him… the jealousy after seeing them… she is still crying in her room… she is feeling very restlessness without him…

jane tu mera kya hai jane tu mere kya tha

she doesn't know that what he is for her now and what he was for her….this moment seems waste without him... yeah she can't left that moment when she doesn't think about him...

tu hi mera har pal tu hi har lahmaha tha

jane kaisi kashish hai jane kaisi khalish hai

kinyu ye saans thami hai aanko me kinyu nammi hai

why she is feeling breathless without him? She was with in every moment… he pampered her a lot.. she is in a great confusion….he is like a world to her now..imagining her life without him is very difficult for her...

hai dosti humko yankeen dosti to aur kuch bhi nahi tha

she knew that they are friends nothing more than a friendship…. But now why she is feeling that something beyond the mere friendship…..that is called love but love..? is really..!!

hai kaisa dard nayasansa kinyu dil lagta tuta tuta sa

what is this new pain, new feeling for him? why she is feeling that her heart is broke down..? why she is feeling that she is cheated in love by him? But where is love? Is she really love him or anything else but what? Does she knew that she love him? She has mixed feelings but she is craving for him...

jana dil jana kaise manine na jana ki ye pyar yahi hi hai ye jana tu ya jane na

jana dil jana kaise tune na jana ye pyar hi hai han ye jana tu yaa janena

why does she not know that is that friendship or love? Why she didn't felt that is it love? Why?

jane tu mera kya hai jane tu mere kya tha

tu mera har pal tu hi har lahma ha tha

hoti thi tujse har subah tere dhohpar se sham ki dhoon thi

hoti thi rate teri baato me khoye teri khayalome hi jage aur soye tu janenahi tu kya raha

her morning starts with his phone call… all the while she thinks about him.. met with him at evening in office , he dropped her at her home… she slept after hearing his voice… her day starts with him and ends with him….all the while she engrossed in his thoughts…. Sometimes she didn't slept because of him… thinking about him.. dreaming about him in day and night.. sometimes with open eyes…. But stil confused why? Or she don't want to accept the fact that she loves him and she if fighting with herself...but why? What is reason for fighting with herself...

jane tu mera kya hai jane tu mere kya tha

tu mera har pal tu hi har lahma ha tha

jane kaishi kashish hai jane kaisi khalish hai ,

kinyu ye saans thami hai aanko me kinyu nammi hai

jana dil jana kaise manine na jana ki ye pyar yahi hi hai ye jana tu na jane na

jana dil jana kaise tune na jana ye pyar hi hai han ye jana tu na jana

later after 1 hour nt & rano entered in her room with dinner and found that she is sleeping but some marks of tears on her cheeks.. the dried tears… but still her lashes are wet… they let her sleep and went out..but she is ot sleeping… she is lost in her thoughts… is really maan cares her or something different? But … this but word is ringing in her mind. on the other hand in club maan is on his table and atif is sitting beside him…. He asked what happened? Maan was in drunken state.. he narrated the whole incident don't know why he shared all this with him….

Atif-I can understand that how are you feeling now.. maan dipped his down in shame… shame on his act.. guilt for making her cry…. Don't do anything which hurt you more than your love… don't try to find out that is she love you or not.. if she love you than she will confess by herself , by her words or by her acts… she will come to you by herself… never try to do this.. just wait for sometime for her answer…. She will surely tell you what is in her heart…

Maan-really..?

Atif-trust me…. Atif took the glass from his hand and kept that aside…. Maan looked at him with very respect who helped him… maan stood up and left from there with his guilt… with so much struggle he reached to his car…. Tried to walk straight but his steps are not on the right place… somehow he opened his car…. Took the water bottle and washed his face.. he whole drenched in water… now he can walk straight a little bit….he stepped in the car and drove to mansion…. He straightly went to his gym area….tore shirt apart… he is very furious on himself… guilt is eating him… and top off that his ego is hurt very badly with the harsh words of geet… he couldn't imagine that his geet can say these words to him…. He set everything there… he arrange the set of 4 bricks at 5 places… a punching bag in middle and a iron chain is kept aside….he tore is vest too.. he wants to punish himself for making her cry… he want to regret… he knew this can't help to eat her wound which he gave to her but this is for him.. for satisfy his ego… for satisfy to him that he punished himself for his deeds… he knew he can't face her again… how will he see in her eyes again.. ?? she is too nave.. .. he determinant on his decision now that he will punish himself… he took the stripes of white cloth and tied it around his palms… his eyes are red in pain, in anger, in frustration, in guilt…. He move towards the set of bricks… his whole focus on bricks… he jumps and broke the bricks…. Blood oozed out the side of his palm but he didn't flinched in pain… no whimper came out from his mouth… he drank the whole pain.. this pain is nothing more in front of his mental pain….he move towards to another set of bricks… again jumps and broke the bricks… more blood oozed out from his hand… he broke the bricks set one by one… broke all.. his hand his full of blood…but still he is furious on himself… it is midnight now and he is still in gym… he hold the punching bag and starts punching the bag hardly with his whole force…. Punching and punching continuously…. It's now one hour he is punching the bag but still his ego is not satisfied… he wants more.. he wants to hurt himself more.. he wants take pain more.. more than his mental pain.. the physical pain which can divert his mind but he knew he can't get success in it… he wants more… he took the chain and starts his exercise with it.. it's 1am now and he is doing his exercise… lost in his guilt… some red marks on his bare chest and bare back of the chain…. This pain is nothing more than that pain he is going through the mental pain… next morning she woke up very late because maan didn't called her… she is missing his call… she thought that why maan didn't called her but she forget that where he called her.. she broke her cell… but now she is thinking that why she is missing his call…? She is longing for hearing his voice… but it's been some hours she fought with him and now she is missing him.. his night and morning calls… she got up with heavy heart… she totally forgot that she broke her cell and now blaming to maan that he forgot to her call now.. no no he is not interested to talk to her now..she is thinking that…she left for the dinning table… on the other hand maan is very worried for geet…he wanted to know that hows she? He is trying to call her but unreachable….he was very desperate to know about geet but how to know? If he calls to nt then he have to tell about last night incident…. Both are longing to hear each other's voice but their ego are stopping them… the day was horrible for both of them.. geet missed her college today and didn't went to office… she didn't talk to anyone.. even nt se bhi nahi… nt is very worried for her.. she talk to jai about this… she is not opening herself… at evening both felt miserable… not talking to anyone but here maan is scolding everyone in office.. he is waiting for geet.. may be she came.. the whole day he is waiting for her one call, for her one glimpse, but no use.. she didn't came in office… that's why he was removing his frustration on his employees….the day was horrible for him… first he didn't talk to geet and top of that office problems… jai came to her house and straightly went to her home where sat with her long face.. very sad..

Jai-kya hua tujhe? Aise itne sad face ke sath kyo baithi hai? He knew something is bothering her… and that too about maan..

Nt-dekh na jai, mujhse to baat hi nahi kar rahi hai..

Jai-tune college kyo bunk kiya? He knew that because of maan.. lst time when bunked her college wo bhi sirf maan ki wajah se… and this time too…

Geet-mujhe kuch nahi hua.. don't irritate me with your talks….

Jai-ohh to ab hamari baate tujhe irritate karne lagi ya fir maan ki baate achhi lagne lagi….

Geet-stop jai.. mujhe kisi ki baate achhi nahi lagti aur maan ki to bilkul bhi nahi…. She murmured something about maan…

Jai-kya? Kya kaha tuney.. kuch maan ke bare me.. hai na nt?

Nt-haan.. tera unse jhagda hua hai kya?

Geet-mera kisi se jhagda nahi hua hai.. jao tum log yaha se…mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni…tum sab bahut bure ho aur wo maan bhi…. Now jai got the point..something happened between these two…

Jai-kya hua hai? Won't you tell us? Jai talk to her in his very soft tone… she melted immediately..

Nt-haan geet.. bol na kya hua hai? Kal se bahut pareshaan hai tu…. Geet broke down in tears immediately….nt panic seeing her cry like this…

Nt-geet, geet why are you crying… stop crying…

Jai-geet,, kya hua..bol na.. tu ro kyo rahi hai… she shook her head in no… nothing happened…

Jai-maan ne kuch kaha… she nodded like a baby…

Nt-tell me hua kya hai?

She told them while sobbing…. Their eyes widened in shock why maan did this but the question qhy she is feeling jealous….


precap

maha update

ok chalo ek hint de deti hu.. "realization"

and rest you can imagine what will be in next update...run the horse of your mind and tell me what will be in next update...


tell me friends hows it?

waiting for your response...

love neha...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update neha...
loved it to the core...
the song is very touchy... n their pain... oh no... geet is crying for whole night...
here maan is drunk fully n drive to his house... n he directly headed to gym...
omg... whole night he was in gym n in pain n guilt...
he is hurting himself so badly... me crying seeing maan's condition...
omg... his hand n heart is bleeding...
both r missing each other but not ready to talk...
geet darling u love maan... nothing wrong in it..
finally she said everything to jai n nt...
hope she realises her feelings soon...
continue soon dear...

love u...
hugs to u...
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29


mere yaha 10 baj gaye hai, tere yaha nahi baje kya?



mera net dc ho gaya tha bich me isliye late ho gaya...

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