ArHi FF: His Gardening,Her Jalebi 4(Parts 26-29)

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..-Niru-..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Congrats on the 4th thread !!
beautiful update!

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Aparna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

OMG 32
where r u bristy?
Ur hospital is running in full speed:D

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

When are you updating????

30 Pages - Check

300 Likes - Check

Update - No check?!

Theees eeez not fairrr! *Maamiji style* ;) :D

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Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Plzzz update sooonn !!!!
It's page 32 now !!!!!!

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

"Hanna Barbera? Is that your friend? Wait, is it a girl? Hannah is a girl's name right? Foreigner girls' name...wow! You've got a foreigner friend who has a pet mouse named Jerry, he he he, why did she name it after a fruit? Is the mouse red?"

I was like O.o during this whole conversation while going 🤣

Bechara Arnav! Lol!

Why did they fight?! *Whines*

*Goes over to next part*

*Expression changes to :| at the mention of Lavanya*

Mami toh is whatever! :s

YAY! They made up! So cute! "Anything for you." SIGH! <3 <3

This conversation is EPIC CUTE! <3 <3

And she knows what he is about to say...awww! I just loved it but then you brought Lavanya in and my expression went from <3 eyes to :| :/

SMARTY Arnav! I like! :D

And Nani, please just listen to him!

And writer mahudiya, you didnt give us the 'I love you'...actually you dangled it like a carrot and then took it away. I no like. :s :/

You have to update super soon now! Get well soon! :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

"What else do you know?" he asked, suddenly scared.

"I know that as well," she smiled.

"Please?" he pleaded with her. She lay stiff for quite a while and then nodded. He could feel the shiver that ran down her spine. "Khushi, I.."

"Aaargh!"

You're a tease you know that? You do this on a purpose don't you? I bet you're laughing at us like a villain from an old melodrama. Muhaaahaaa *evil laugh* and creepy BG music included😆

But yes GREAT update... Power infinity..

Anjalie.. Oh that poor soul...Her abusive relationship with Shyam is bound to have some aftermaths.. And she accepted Khushi after all that shit Shyam put her through.. She's really damaged isn't she? I want to see where you take her story with Shyam now back and all..

As for Arnav, well Khushi understands him even if he doesn't understand himself! i think she knew he loved her even before he did.. Awww... can they get any cuter??

And Lavanya is bugging me... I wonder if she's going to be just a pawn?

So many questions and only one person with answers (read you)... Which means update soon hon..

Cheers

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Varsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Awww! Get well soon!!

*edited*

I honestly didn't mean to take so long to comment. But i had this weird urge to go read the whole FF once again, which I did! 😃 you know, just to clarify a few things. 😛

I love how you merge the flashbacks so well with the storyline. Revealing just enough to pacify us and at the same time keep us hooked!

If I'd though the precap was hilarious the actual scene was beyond that!
"he was surprised that he could still remember the name of the makers of Tom & Jerry. Wow, he actually didn't have a life!" 😆
"You've got a foreigner friend who has a pet mouse named Jerry, he he he, why did she name it after a fruit? Is the mouse red?"🤣

It was really cute. The banter between Arnav and Khushi. She brings out the child in him 😊

Arnav's exasperation at not being able to say what he wants and having a stupid conversation which ended up in a fight. "Mr Smartzada" 😆

Lavanya has a conscience. But she is also easily influenced. I dont know which part is going to rule over her when the time comes. 😕 I wish you wouldnt keep us hanging like this.

One moment I'm all calculative trying to figure out La and then you make me go Awww..

The Arhi scene was so beautiful. 😳 Khushi doesn't need words to know what he feels. There's still that insecure part in her that doesn't want to jinx her happiness by acknowledging it out loud. And now that Arnav has realized it, he wants to put it out there in the open and not hold back anymore. (Btw I'm glad to note he realizes how secure his position is)

I'm actually glad Arnav didn't get to complete what he started. It would only be more special when he actually gets around to saying it right? RIGHT?! 😉

and La scared of a snail? Why am I not surprised.

Loved how Arnav first noted Khushi's discomfort and only then the fact that a person who he thought was responsible for the sabotage of his business was residing in his house! 😆

Precap seems promising! I hope La reveals all in her surprise. 😊

Take care and get well soon! Cant wait for the next update!!

Edited by Psychedelic - 13 years ago