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Posted: 13 years ago
Want things to get better now.Geet has suffered alot.
Hope Maan makes everything alright.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
love baby n geet's talks
i hope maan's determination will win this time n geet will fight against death n win
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. emotional waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-34

Two days passed…geet really amused looking at maan behavior. He changed totally changed…not even getting angry at anyone. He is forgiving all the mistakes which is done by nakul or employs. At same time he is taking care of geet like a child. He eyed on her each activity…

Its morning at 9 :00am.. geet at wash room…maan saw his watch…already its thirty minutes over still geet didn't came out from her wash room…usually she finish her bath within twenty minutes..but today what happened…he is again and again he is looking his watch…he is counting him self..1..2..3

Geet felt too tired after washing her hairs….she felt like her knees are going jelly…she is feeling dizzy…her eyes went blank…once she saw her self…she is totally bare…oh god ..what to do…no strength to wear even cloths…some how she managed to reach her ward robe…bra…panties..suit ..nothing …finally she pulled mann 's house coat which will reach till her knee….she slipped her self…she couldn't button also..she tied the belt…at same time maan started to knock door…she can't even move a single step…now maan really worried…he started to knock the door loudly…geet felt too dizzy…she couldn't manage to reach door and open it…she fell down …"mama…mama…kya hua…nahi mama…mama mere bath suno…papa…papa…mama will hurt…pls come soon…"baby worried about her mama……she loosing her sense…now maan confirmed some thing wrong…he started to broke the door using his hard shoulder…...again geet some how managed to reach door gathering all her stamina …her fingers removed the bolt…maan entered inside…geet started to drop down…."papa pakdo …pakodo mama ko pakodo warna mama girjayegi…"baby worrying about her mama…before she fell down maan hold her tightly. Immediately he lifted her in his arms and made her to lay on bed." Hey …mere papa mama ko pakad liya…mere papa super man hain …."baby now giggling. He made her to lay on bed..he sprinkled water on her face…he leaned on face.".geet kya huwa anke kolo…"

"mama utto na…" now baby is begging…again its went sad…

He call dadima and anni and also he call to ambulance. Within few minutes geet admitted in city hospital. Dr.shilpa is on duty..she checked geet and her face went dark…"Mr.Maan singh khurana I don't think she wait until her nine month complete….its better to go for premature delivery….now geet condition is too horrible and she is not willing to take treatment for her own health problem bcoz it may harm to baby…now no way we should remove baby and we should start her treatment. "

Maan don't know what to say….at one side his geet another side his own blood his baby.. "decide it as soon as possible maan singh khurana…now you can take her home…she might be faint again and again faint but right now her baby is in good condition….but not sure about tomorrow…one more thing geet mentally gone to week…I think her mind is not co-operating with her. her self confidence went low. She lost all her hopes...but it has to be gather by only your effort. You should assured that she can fight all over this…maan can I tell you one thing….. self confidence make miracles in human bees life. First of all she has to be ready with confidence for treatment . That job done by only you…I think you are understood. "she left the place.

Maan entered her room…geet laying on bed….next to her still scan system is on…due to observation….he can find his baby movements in monitor…its small ..small legs and hands waving… its looking like baby is swimming….oh god….what a creation…

He dipped his face down…"sorry baby…may is duniya ka sabse bhuri papa hain…lekhin muje galath math samjna..sab kuch tumari mama ki tabhiyat ke liye kar raha hu…pls baby muje maff karo…" tears fell down from his eyes …"arrey papa kugh nahi hoga mama ko rona mat…may huna may sab theek karungi…" baby trying to convince…

Dadima and anni moved out side. They understood he need to spend some time with geet. still dadima maintained distance between them.

maan kept his hand on her forehead…geet moved little…maan eyes shined…she gaining her sense…"mama utto na..utto mama….tell me how I look…."baby forcing her . "geet …dekona hamari baby ko…anke kolo geet pls for god sake get up geet…have a look on our baby…"maan entangled his palm to hers…geet sink her eyes once..slowly she open her eyes..first she saw maan next her eyes moved to monitor…what happened to baby…when I am falling down whether baby hurt….she tightened his hands…

"maan what happened to baby…baby tum theek hana….."geet going crazy…maan immediately hold her hand tightly and assured "geet hamari baby theek hain..don't worry…. "

Baby is moving fast in her tummy.. "hi mama …. heyyy…mere mama uttgayi…mama deko na may theek hu…tum theek haina…mama bolo na kaise dikthi hu…"he is kicking her forcefully…baby is make surig that he is ok. geet knotted her eyebrows "oouch…"her left hand went on her tummy.

Maan caressed her tummy…he understood that baby is moving…he try to sooth her sweet pain..geet eyes again moved to monitor…this is the first time she is watching her baby on screen…before she gone for scan but she is unconscious in those situvations…now her eyes filled with joy…after confirming that her baby is safe her happiness raised…she hold maan hand…"thank you maan sir…thank you very much bcoz of you I am watching my baby at first time…"he smiled at her for a little while she forget everything..only in her small world maan and her baby…non other then…

Maan leaned on her…once he looked at her eyes…her eyes shining ..his hand caressed her cheek softly…"geet from today ill help you to take bath…" she embraced …her cheeks turned to dark pink…she looks so beautiful….his breath is fanning all over her face…geet once she closed her eyes and opened…she pushed him from her weak hands and turned other side.

Same day she discharged. Shilpa didn't forget to remind about baby to maan….maan is too serious…how to save geet and baby….

Few days passed….….he had urgent meeting in office…after meeting he is returning to home. suddenly his car stopped due to heavy traffic…casually he turned to right side…temple…mathaji temple…he remembered how geet claimed for anni when she is missing…yes that day geet prayed for god by climbing steps from her knees bcoz of her prayers today anni is safe with us….yes only mathaji can save my geet…a mad thought come to his mind…he removed his shoes and started to climb the steps by his knees…"mathaji..may maan singh khurana hu…aaj tumare samne hath jodkaer mannat mangulungi…pls mere geet ko muje vapas dedo…mey kabhi uska asali chehara dekne keliye koshis nahi kiya..geet fulfilled dadima mannat that day…bcoz of her prayer today anni is safe…pls whatever punishment I deserve pls give to me but keep geet and baby safe…pls mathaji …madath karo…aaj se rooz may yaha akar iss mannat pura karungi..par kuch be karkar mere geet ko vapas dedo."

Now he is in last step .he is about slip…some one hold his shoulder…he lifted his gaze…same saint who met him at first time in temple…he handover one tarbeez to him.. "beta…take this and tie to your wife..she will be fine…"his eyes shined like a diamonds…he taken the thabeez and try to give some money…but the saint smiled at him and went away. Maan placed it on his pocket carefully…after pooja he return to home….

He found geet in her room…"geet …ek minute…"he sat next to her…he folded her sleeves to arm and tied tarbeez to her right arm.

"ye sab kya hain…"

"kuch nahi…"maan went away…geet sat like doll…from when he started to believe in all these…she remember dadima words…not even once he visited to temple after his parents accident…he is only believing o his own power and confidence….after many days geet eyes filled by tears….don't know why…is these tears are for happiness or for sadness…not sure…

…it's a tarbeez magic or something else but nowadays geet seems much better then before…her cheeks were slowly filling..now she is in eight month….dadima , anni and maan love and care kept her safe….nowadays her head ache also not much..her baby also speaking with her..and its become too naughty…when anni kept her ear to her tummy its kicking her…anni challenging with baby "tum ek baar bahar anna…decklungi…"

Even baby challenging" may be decklungi…"

Now she roaming hole KM…she attend pooja…some time she help dadima and nakul…dadima is taking care like her own daughter..slowly even geet gaining some happiness in her life…but her and maan relation remained same…after bathroom issue he removed the lock…he is helping her in each step..some times its seems too much but maan ignoring her protest. When ever he is free he is searching in goole how to be a good father and husband and also he searching other way to treat geet..still her health problem is longing like a sward on his head.

It is Friday…dadima taken geet to temple…dadima went to buy some pooja things…at same time geet gaze stuck on steps…who is climbing their by knees…is it maan…she went near to confirm it..yes its non other then maan…her eyes went wide…she remember from last few days maan moving early morning from KM..some times she found some blood stains on his pants …she didn't cared much…but he is coming to here…oh mathaji….did maan doing all this to me…oh no…

When dadima and geet reached temple pandithji given her prasad and blessed her "dirga sumangali bhava…"geet lifted her gaze "you are very lucky to have a such a lovely husband…maan daily come here to pray for your health..now how are you beta…"geet just nodded…dadima didn't understood much but still she is against to maan. only for formality sake she is speaking with maan.

Same night geet rolling on her bed…today she couldn't sleep properly..something is disturbing her…maan working with his UK clients by laptop..but he had eye on geet activities.. "kya howa geet…"

"kuch nahi maan sir…"still her addressing style is not changed…

Her baby is silent today what happened to baby…"baby why are too silent what happened…"baby is not responding her properly. Geet smiled her self nowadays he become too lazy…suddenly the head ache is capturing her head…she started to role on bed…its too much paining..where she couldn't control….tears started to flow from her eyes…maan immediately sat next to her geet "kya huwa…"

"maan sir…head ache..i can't control it…"maan heart slipped for a while..shilpa very clearly warned him last time…if she get attack it mey damage her brainh …he counted…still there is one week to complete her eight month. He saw her she cursing she is rolling on bed…he pick the pain killer from table draw "geet have it ..it reduce your pain…" she curled her self… some where she scared…with out giving birth if I dead …no…bhabhaji pls..help me until my baby birth keep me alive ..keep me safe…her baby is now too silent…baby utto na…apki mama ke sath bath karo…she is begging with her baby…is bay is safe..the thought it self made too weak .she started to trembling…

Doctor words echoed in her ear…these medicine harmful to baby…She refused to have painkiller…its more then one hour….she suffering…when he call to shilpa she is in out of station other doctor refuse to handle her case bcoz they know how delicate geet case.

Maan just squeezed his hands to each together…how to sooth her pain…he couldn't share this with anybody…again he handover the pills to geet…"geet for god sake have it…I can't see you in pain…"geet thrown all the pills on ground…..maan stood like a criminal…how much pain she going through everything bcoz of me…how to sooth her pain….he couldn't see her pain….he went near window…just he searching the way how to sooth her pain…he turned back…geet still in pain…she is twisting her body like a snake…anyone can realize that how much pain she is going through…but still she refused to have pills…only reason baby…this is the big gift from each mother to each baby…hats of to women…she is ready to go through pain..but her aim is not to harm baby….he remember when he is too young some one told him" god couldn't be with every human bee's that's the reason he created another god in the name of mother…"its true….not only geet every women is equal to goddess…

Maan sat next to her…sorry geet this attempt might be hurt you but there is no other way to sooth your physical pain…I can't see you in this pain…he is taken her back in his left hand and cupped her face in other hand..before geet guessing what is happening to her maan slowly taken her lips to in …….she try to push him but he hold her tightly…….

It's a simple psychology….when any one going through pain..its better divert their mind in other side…even maan tried samething on geet…..

Precap: did maan make her to forget her pain….

Hi friends,

Thank you, so much for your likes and comments…really yaar some times your comments make me to think much about the characters. Its really challenge to me write a FF without damaging the characters…don't know how much I succeed on this process. Only your comments and likes cheers up to me.

Yours,

Varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice and emotional part...
good to see maan is taking good care about geet...
first time in his life he entered temple for his geet hope she deliver a healthy baby and confidently face the treatment...
hats off to a mother who can bare any pain for her child...
awesome part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
yea...i think this will b helpful...bt y maan is nt taking her in th hospital...n nw its 8th month...that means baby is nw in a total shape ys the growth is nt so gd like a 1oth month baby bt geet is also in pain..plz take her to th doc ... ys same time plz shows maans lv towards her like this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
very emotional part...
waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 13 years ago
update emotional also hope maan make her forget her all pain do next soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome upd.
simply fab..
Maan has changed so much..
loved it..
do cont.soon..
thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
emotional part
poor Maan ...he is trying all possible way to give comfort to Geet&baby
waiting for the coming up

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