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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATING...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GEET KI KASHMAKASH



Chapter 1:


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A girl sat on her bed with head phones on n is listening to her fav songs. She is waiting eagerly when the time strikes 12. but alas more 30 min time is left. These 30 min are like 30 hours for her. She is wearing her pink night dress n hugging her teddy tight. Her bed is filled with different teddies presented by her dad. She just have to tell him what she wants within 5 min that will be in front of her. She is the princess for her father. He can do anything for her daughter, but all he needed is, she should be happy.

Now the clock striked 12 n she got very excited. Her mobile rang n her smile widened.

Hello dad told that girl excitedly.

Hello princess. Happy birthday to u, happy birthday to dear princess sang her dad.

Thanku so much dad. By the is the meeting over?? r u in the hotel now?? asked that girl.

Yes princess meeting is completed.

Dad but I am very sad that this is my first birthday without u. I miss u dad.

Aww my princess GEET is sad told dad.

Yes dad told geet.

Do one thing just come to the balcony of your room.

Why dad??

Just come princess, u will come to know.

Ok dad coming.


Geet went to the balcony n was shocked, surprised n happy too. Her dad is waiting for her downstairs.

Immeidately geet ran down n hugged her dad.

Wow dad u r back, I am so happy.

How can I miss my princess birthday hmm??

Geet smiled n broke the hug.

Come with me there is a surprise for u told dad.

What surprise dad??

Arey come princess, u will get to know.

Hmmm told geet n followed him.


When they both reached near the gate, geet saw a beautiful n her favorite car there. She is so excited n asked dad this car??

This is for my princess told dad n gave her the car keys.

Wow thanku very much dad. I love u... told geet n kissed his cheek.

Dad smiled at his daughter n prayed to god that she should be happy always.


Later they both went for a small drive n came back after 1 hour.

Good night princess, once again happy birthday told dad.

Thanku dad, good night. Take rest u must be tired told geet.

Dad smiled at her n retired to his room. Geet too slept peacefully.


Next day morning :


Geet got up n stretched her arms n a smiled formed her lips when she thought of yesterday's night. She heard the knock on her door. She lazily got up n opened the door. She smiled at her bhaiya n bhabhi who is at the door.


Hey bro n bhabs wished geet.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS wished both yash n meera.

She hugged both of them n told thanku bro n bhabhi.

Meera gave her a packet n told go n get ready we will go to temple.

Geet smiled n told ok bhabs.


They both smiled n left from there.

Geet got ready n wore the dress which gave by her bhabhi. It is a beautiful white colour salwar suit with lite work on it. Geet is a simple girl, who cares about others n at the same time innocent too. She never ever hurts others. If anyone is in trouble then she will be the first one to help.


Geet came to the hall n saw her dad, bro n bhabhi waiting for her.

Chale geet?? asked dad.

Yes dad told geet.

They all left to temple in the new car. They reached temple n took aarti ki thali n entered into the temple.

Panditji took the thali from geet n performed pooja. Geet took blessings from god, then she took from her dad.

Princess what r u doing? Asked dad.

Dad u r like god to me, I am very lucky to have u. after mom's death u took care of me n bro, n because of u we r in this posotion today. So ur blessings r more important for me told geet.

Dad is very proud of his daughter n son. After geet's mom death he didnt marry again because of them, even though his family insisted but he was adamant. Today he is very happy seeing his children.

Dad(st): pooja (geet's mom), today I am very pround of our children, I didnt fail, I promised u that I will take care of our children n give them love, kaash aj tum yaha hoti.

A lone tear escaped from his eyes. He wiped it immediately.


Later they went home n had breakfast. Geet left for college.

When she entered college n parked her car but when she saw the person in front of her she got annoyed.


Hii wished that person.

Hii wished geet with fake smile.

What special today u look beautiful told that person.

Nothing special.

Dont lie.

Why do I lie.

Ok if u dont want to say dont say, but u dont lie told that person.

Hello Mr. maan singh khurana, stop annoying me n plz leave from here I have class to attend.

Oh oh calm down geet, why u r angry.

When geet was about to go from there, maan stopped her holding her wrist.

Hello Mr. senior leave me told geet.

One minute geet told maan n took out a box from his pocket n gave to her.

What is this?? asked geet.

Ur birthday gift whispered maan in her ear n left from there giving geet his killing smile.

Geet is shocked n blushed.

Geet immediately sat in her car n opened the box n saw a beautiful chain n a watch in it.




(for my love, junior, kiddo geet)

Geet smiled n took the chain out n blushed n kissed it.

I love u maan told geet.

Suddenly she heard a voice ahh geet if u give me directly then I would be more happy.

Geet didnt answer anything, maan immediately sat beside her n asked so miss. Junior how did u like the gift.

Beautiful told geet but turned her face away.

Oh why my junior is angry on me asked maan.

Hello mr. senior why didnt u wish me yesterday night asked geet angrily.

Maan raised her brows n asked I didnt call u right?? once check ur mobile, I called u many times.

Geet bit her tongue n made a baby face n told ohh sorry senior, I went out with dad.

Hmm its ok my dear junior told maan.

Dont u want to go to class today?? asked geet.

Na told maan.

Ufff maan, grow up go to class told geet.

Ya ya I will go I think priya came to college today, so time pass hojayega told maan.

Geet made a angry face n stared at him n told oyy if u again see her na, then it will not be good. I will kick her out from this college.

Maan laughed out loud.

Why u r laughing?? asked geet angrily.

Ahh u look so cute when u r angry, thats why I like to annoy u told maan n kissed her cheeks.

Geet blushed n hid her face in his chest.

Will meet in lunch, come to canteen ok?? asked maan.

Ok... but dont go near that priya told geet.

Maan cupped her face n told geet I am just joking kiddo.

Geet's face became sad n told I dont know maan, what if u leave me n go thinking that I am innocent n a kiddo.

Maan smiled n told geet, may be I am a flirt n dont care about others but I love from my heart n I never leave u. its my promise.

Geet smiled n hugged him.

Waise where is my return gift asked maan.

If u ask suddenly what will I give now told geet.

U can give now..

What?? asked geet confusingly.

Maan bought his lips close to hers, geet blushed n kissed his cheek n left from there immediately.

Maan smiled at his innocent junior, his love n left from there. With no other option he went to class as per his geet's, his kiddo's order.


Later in the afternoon they both met in the canteen in the college n had their lunch. Even though when geet joined in the college maan use to tease her n irritate her to the core.

But he loved her innocence, helping nature. He loved her.

Geet being a princess to her dad n brother, they never ever hurted her in any way. But seeing maan's teasing n irritating her for small things. First she use to hate him but after that she started loving it. If he did not come to college then she felt lonely n became sad. First she was confused by her feeling, always she wants to be with maan. She liked his teasings, later seeing his carefree nature she too started teasing him. They became best friends, even though they are seniors n juniors they never felt like that. They always mention each other as senior n junior.

Now they both are in deep love n they both became inseperable. her/his day starts with their phone call n end with that.


Precap: maan n geet outing.

hii friends this is part 1 of geet ki kashmakash. Hope u liked it.

Plz plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Will be waiting for ur response.

Silent readers plz hit like n comment. They mean a lot to me. Plz pen down ur opinions.

Guys let me know u r liking this concept or not. Plz tell me should I continue or not.


Love

-jyothi.




Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update dear
u know i could relate my ff to it but usme geet doesnot have fellings for maan
well leaving that
beautiful update
loved it
the way geet is beein pampered by all her family members
great
loved maan's and geet's bond
continue asap
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Wow!Loved it JO!!!!
She s pampered by all...even by her love..
But still insecurities lingers in her mind...
Loved the part when geet took blessings from her dad and then her words..
And maan's gift was so beautiful...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...

love her bond with everyone...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n beautiful n superb update...

kiddo n junior is in love with senior...dats amazing...

really loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww just superb ya..lovd geet and her dad's scene..she's really princess to her family and also maan..lovd the way he called her kiddo..aww they r choo cute...and chain and watch were beautiful..thanx 4 cute update..excitd 4 maaneet's outing..
Cntinue soon..
Love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet-Maan both are in love with each other...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet is ladli of her family and loved the bonding they all have!!! and off course the romantic gifts were too good😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
loved it... awesome.. do continue... waiting for the next update...

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