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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Hey Maria...😃

😭I missed 3 updates... I feel so bad.. Was so busy with school...😒

Okie, coming to the updates... Greatly done... Arav😡

Loved Sid's friendship... How he made Riddhima understand Armaan's POV... Hope AR's misunderstandings are cleared soon...

Continue soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

oye maria. Update do na pleaseee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Part 8(ArSh)

Recap:Aravs truth comes out
Now,
Tamana was sitting outside th club and was fuming in anger.She knows how she controls her anger when sid take Shilpa away.This arman and shilpa getting into her nerves,she want to get them out of her and sid's life.She was in her own thoughts when she found some one coughing besides her to get her attention.She look back ward and smirk seeing the guy.Tamana stands up with attitude and went near him.She look at him with fake sympathy nd say:"I felt really pity..today very bad happen to you".The guy became serious listening to it and says:"same here i felt bad for you as well..sid left you alone here".Tamana some how controls her anger and say "now what next??'.The guy replied:"Today you impress me quite well,by controlling your anger.Very good now keep your this behavior with Shilpa and sid..and make your place in sid's heart strong".Tamana nods her head,she was about to leave but turns around and say:"YOU love Shilpa right??then why you do this to her"serious ness leaves his face and tamana saw something very rare into his eyes.He replied:"The way you love sid i loved Shilpa from past 4 years..and now i want her all to myself..i dont any one between us..more over I am taking revenge from them by separating them".Tamana nods her head and leave from there.
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Its 4 am..the whole city sleeping peacefully except three people.Soon sun will come out with its brightness.Its start of spring.and wheather is so peaceful.But not for 3 persons.They are wide awake.Sid,Shashannk and arman.Arman tried very much to sleep but he cant sleep.After tossing into bed he comes out side in the garden.A chill runs down his spine when a cold breeze hit.He close his eyes to get some peace but as soon as he closes his eyes,Shilpa slapping him and her crying face came into his eyes.He with jerk open his eyes.He went to the chair kept in garden and sit on it.He look towards sky.The coll breeze is blowing.As it is start of spring,the whether is awfully owe sum.It is so calm,that every one felt greatly peaceful.But arman cant.From the time Shipa slap him.There is something burning inside him.He will not lie,yes!he is angry with her to some extent.Doesn't she care for him??why she slapped him just because he beat that arav??.He was in deep thought when he felt a hand on his shoulder.He opens his eyes and look at that persons who he needs the most,at least now he needs him,his dad!.BIILLI asked him" what happen son".Arman told him what ever happen few hours ago ,he says:"Dad i don't believe she slapped me,she don't only slap my face but out friendship as well!.Billy smiles and whisper:"Man's ego!!'.Arman eyes shot up and he say:"What you say man's ego..that's great she slaps me,,and that too i am the one who is at fault not she??".Billy smiles and make him sit beside arman then says:"Arman why you not thinking about her condition,why you thinking about only yourself ,why not about her??"Arman look confused towards his father and say:"I am not getting you dad!".Billy look towards him and say:"Arman when you beat arav,she was in love with him,like you love her.if some one beat ok not beat say some thing bad to Shilpa what would you have done??">Arman think over the fact,yes his dad is right,he too have done something bad to that person,bad!he would have killed him or her who even try to hurt Shilpa...Billy again say:Arman you got the chance to get Shilpa,,be her support,she is heart broken..shashank calls me,he already had told me everything..and the he was saying i think Shilpa is really broken..she needs you ">Arman nods his head understandingly.Before he speaks or reply his phone rings,he was shocked to see shashank calling him at this hour of night.He quickly picks up the phone but what he heard make his vision blurred,his breath stops.phone fell from his hand.Billy worriedly went to him and say beta what happen.The only words came out of his mouth was:"Shilpa!Sucide".Billy was shocked,he quickly picks up the phone and ask shashank where they were??.Shashank told him hospital name..
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Arman look at Shilpa pale body.He don't know what to do or what to say??.He never in his life thought Shilpa to be like this.She never even cry and here she is lying like a life less body.As,soon as shashank tells them about Shilpa,they reach here and sahshank told them when he went to check Shilpa,he saw her lying lifeless on bed.Arman with teary eyes took her hands into his.As soon as he took her hands he saw some wound on her hands.He felt terrible how Shilpa would have get courage to k...the pain was so much that he left from there.But before he could go,he found Shilpa hand slightly slightly touching his hand.He moves back to her and kisses her forehead.Sid's condition was not good.He is silent from the time he don't even say a word.When arman came out,he saw sid sitting there lifeless.Now arman felt more miserable his love is on dead bed and here his best friend is sitting life less.Arman knows sid and riddhima share more deep bond then him.He was about to go but tamana sat beside him.He quietly leaves them both.Tamana hate Shilpa now more bcz of her sid is sitting like lifeless body.She side hug sid.The tears which sid some how has stopped now, flows from his eyes and he whisper:"Its my fault tamana!i should have be a bit calm with her..why she did this to herself why she did this,why tamana?".Tamana felt very bad for sid,she hug him.Sid keep shedding his tears until arman came.He told tamana to leave.Tamana quietly leave from there.Arman sat beside sid .He says:"Sid!now she is fine!".Sid nod his head and say:"I know she is fine..nothing can happen to her".Arman smiles seeing his concern for Shilpa:"Agar tujhe pata hai k wo theek hai to majnoo ki terha kio betha hai">Arman try to lighten the sid mood,but when he looks at sid he found no effect of his silly joke on sid.Arman ask sid" what happen yar,she is fine!".Sid smiles scarcely and says:"Yeah she is fine!but what if what if some thing would have happened to her??What if.."Sid close his eyes..even thinking of Shilpa state make him fright he continues:"Tujhe pata hai mai na jab usse bed pe dekha uski hatho per khoon dekha..pehla bar pehli bar uski asi halat dekhi arman..mai dar gia tha shaid hum na use khoo dia..."Arman embraced sid.After a while arman says:"Agar kisi ne hama dekh lia na to hamari shadi karwa degi".Again his joke has no effect on him...he took sigh...
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Shilpa slowly opens her eyes and look around.she felt her head heavy.she was not able to sit when she she felt two pairs of had supporting her and making help her in sitting.Still Shilpa cant open her eyes fully.She felt immensely weak.But after a while she opens her eyes and saw arman standing besides her with straight face and medicane in his hand.First she thought what happening over here??but then she remembers last night.Everything came back to her mind.Tears started flowing again from her eyes.But she felt arman removing her tears and with eyes saying her to took medicane.She took medicane quietly but didn't speak anything.Arman left from there too with out saying anything.Shashank came into the ward.He just hugged her and cried.Shilpa didn't respond to any one she sits with straight face.Every one was worried about her but doctor make them believe she is in shock and will be fine soon.
After two days,Shilpa discharge from hospital.But she was very weak and more over she is not talking much.Just nods her head when some one ask her anything.During this whole time sid and arman disnt leave her.Shilpa came into her house.Arman help her while walking to her room.After coming back home he gives her medicane,due to affect of meicane she sleeps.Arman took his hand into his and say:"Shilpa!I promise from tomorrow everything will change.I will make your life perfect again..that's promise".By saying this he kiss her forehead with love and determination to make her happy again...

How was it???I know very bad...But this is what i can write with high fever..Guys I am sorry for late update actualy whether in pakistan suddenly change from hot to again cold.I got the cold.Seriously this headache and flue both getting into my nerves.I would have not updated today as well but its backy darling b day how could i stop my self from writting:)
Important note lolll:)
Those who dont have commented guys this will be last pm by me to you..i will now myself delte you guys from my pm list.I will be happy if i pm only ten people and those ten people comment:)Who dont want to read fine they will not get the pm

Edited by Riarai2346 - 13 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Part 8(AR)

Recap:Aravs truth comes out
Now,
Tamana was sitting outside th club and was fuming in anger.She knows how she controls her anger whne sid take riddhima away.This arman and riddhima getting into her nerves,she want to get them out of her and sid's life.She was in her own thoughts when she found some one coughing besides her to get her attention.She look back ward and smirk seeing the guy.Tamana stands up with attitude and went near him.She look at him with fake sympathy and say:"I felt really pity..today very bad happen to you".The guy became serious listening to it and says:"same here i felt bad for you as well..sid left you alone here".Tamana some how controls her anger and say "now what next??'.The guy replied:"Today you impress me quite well,by controlling your anger.Very good now keep your this behavior with riddhima and sid..and make your place in sid's heart strong".Tamana nods her head,she was about to leave but turns around and say:"YOU love riddhima right??then why you do this to her"seriousness leaves his face and tamana saw something very rare into his eyes.He replied:"The way you love sid i loved ridhima from past 4 years..and now i want her all to myself..i dont any one between us..more over I am taking revenge from them by separating them".Tamana nods her head and leave from there.
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Its 4 am..the whole city sleeping peaceful except three people.Soon sun will come out with its brightness.Its start of spring.and wheather is so peaceful.But not for 3 persons.They are wide awake.Sid,Shashannk and arman.Arman tried very much to sleep but he cant sleep.After tossing into bed he comes out side in the garden.A chill runs down his spine when a cold breeze hit.He close his eyes to get some peace but as soon as he closes his eyes,riddhima slapping him and her crying face came into his eyes.He with jerk open his eyes.He went to the chair kept in garden and sit on it.He look towards sky.The cool breeze is blowing.As it is start of spring,the whether is awwfully ow sum.It is so calm,that every one felt greatly peaceful.But arman cant.From the time riddhima slap him.There is something burning inside him.He will not lie,yes!he is angry with her to some extent.Doesn't she care for him??why she slapped him just becauze he beat that arav??.He was in deep thought when he felt a hand on his shoulder.He opens his eyes and look at that persons who he needs the most,atleast now he needs him,his dad!.BIILLI asked him" what happen son".Arman told him what ever happen few hours ago ,he says:"Dad i don't believe she slapped me,she don't only slap my face but out friendship as well!.Billy smiles and whisper:"Man's ego!!'.Arman eyes shot up and he say:"What you say man's ego..that's great she slaps me,,and that too i am the one who is at fault not she??".Billy smiles and make him sit beside arman then says:"Arman why you not thinking about her condition,why you thinking about only yourself ,why not about her??"Arman look confused towards his father and say:"I am not getting you dad!".Billy look towards him and say:"Arman when you beat arav,she was in love with him,like you love her.if some one beat ok not beat say some thing bad to riddhima what would you have done??">Arman think over the fact,yes his dad is right,he too have done something bad to that person,bad!he would have killed him or her who even try to hurt riddhima...Billy again say:Arman you got the chance to get riddhima,,be her support,she is heart broken..shashank calls me,he already had told me everything..and the way he was saying i think riddhima is really broken..she needs you ">Arman nods his head understandingly.Before he speaks or reply his phone ring,he was shocked to see shashank calling him at this hour of night.He quickly picks up the phone but what he heard make his vision blurred,his breath stops.phone fell from his hand.Billy worriedely went to him and say beta wat happen.The only words came out of his mouth was:"Riddhima!Sucide".Billy was shocked,he quickly picks up the phone and ask shashank where they were??.Shashank told him hospital name..
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Arman look at riddhima pale body.He don't know what to do or what to say??.He never in his life thought riddhima to be like this.She never even cry and here she is lying like a life less body.As,soon as shashank tells them about riddhima,they reach here and sahshank told them when he went to check riddhima,he saw her lying lifeless on bed.Arman with teary eyes took her hands into his.As soon as he took her hands he saw some wound on her hands.He felt terribly how riddhima would have get courage to k...the pain was soo much that he left from there.But before he could go,he found riddhima hand slightly slightly touching his hand.He moves back to her and kisses her forehead.Sid condition was not good.He is silent from the time he don't even say a word.When arman came out,he saw sid sitting there lifeless.Now arman felt more miserable his love is on dead bed and here his best friend is sitting life less.Arman knows sid and riddhima share more deep bond then him.He was about to go but tamana sat beside him.He quietly leaves them both.Tamana hate riddhima now more bcz of her sid is sitting like lifeless body.She side hug sid.The tears which sid some how had stop flows from his eyes and he whisper:"Its my fault tamana!i should have be a bit calm with her..why she did this to herself why she did this,why tamana?".Tamana felt very bad for sid,she hug him.Sid keep sheding his tears until arman came.He told tamana to leave.Tamana quietly leave from there.Arman sat beside sid .He says:"Sid!now she is fine!".Sid nod his head and say:"I know she is fine..nothing can happen to her".Arman smiles seeing his concern for riddhima:"Agar tujhe pata hai k wo theek hai to majnoo ki terha kio betha hai">Arman try to lighten the sid mood,but when he looks at sid he found no effect of his silly joke on sid.Arman ask sid" what happen yar,she is fine!".Sid smiles scarely and says:"Yeah she is fine!but what if what if some thing would have happened to her??What if.."Sid close his eyes..even thinking of riddhima state make him fright he continues:"Tujhe pata hai mai na jab usse bed pe dekha uski hatho per khoon dekha..pehla bar pehli bar uski asi halat dekhi arman..mai dar gia tha shaid hum na use khoo dia".Arman embraced sid.After a while arman says:"Agar kisi ne hama dekh lia na to hamari shadi karwa degi".Again his joke has no effect on him...he took sigh...
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Riddhima slowly opens her eyes and look around.she felt her head heavy.she was not able to sit when she she felt two pairs of had suporting her and making help her in sitting.Still riddhima cant opn her eyes fully.She felt immensly weak.But after a while she opens her eys and saw arman standing besides her with straight face and medicane in his hand.First she thought what happening over here??but then she remembers last night.Everything came back to her mind.Tears started flowing again from her eyes.But she felt arman removing her tears and with eyes saying her to took medicane.She took medicane quietly but didn't speak anything.Arman left from there too with out saying anything.Shashank came into the ward.He just huged her and cried.Riddhima didnt respond to any one she sits with straight face.Every one was worried about her but doctor make them beleive she is in shock and will be fine soon.
After two days,riddhima discharge from hospital.But she was very weak and more over she is not talking much.Just nods her head when some one ask her anything.During this whole time sid and arman didn't leave her.Riddhima came into her house.Arman help her while walking to her room.After coming back home he gives her medicane,due to affect of meicane she sleeps.Arman took his hand into his and say:"Riddhima!I promise from tomorrow everything will change.I will make your life perfect again..that's promise".By saying this he kiss her forehead with love and determination to make her happy again...

How was it???I know very bad...But this is what i can write with high fever..Guys I am sorry for late update actualy whether in pakistan suddenly change from hot to again cold.I got the cold.Seriously this headache and flue both getting into my nerves.I would have not updated today as well but its backy darling b day how could i stop my self from writting:)
Important note lolll:)
Those who dont have commented guys this will be last pm by me to you..i will now myself delte you guys from my pm list.I will be happy if i pm only ten people and those ten people comment:)Who dont want to read fine they will not get the pm..sorry for being rude:)

Edited by Riarai2346 - 13 years ago

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youth_showsfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

hey maria

sorry for commenting late

was busy

but the update was awesome

finally dt aravs chapter over

he ws two timing how disgusting

aawww armaan still cares for riddhima

even after recieving a slap frm her

hope they fall in love soon

btw take care of ur health

update super soon

nd thnx fr d pm

Edited by youth_showsfan - 13 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

It has been ages i replied to your lovely comments guys|:)
And i am guitly for that but from now on i promise to reply each and every comment:)
Here you go:)

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Resss😎

PS: I am First as alwaysss😉

EDITED😊

Hey Maria baby...How are you.?...Love the update but it was so short yaar...Anyway jtna bhi tha written very beautifully...Arrgghh That Arav is a jerk..Poor AR feeling bad for them...But thank god that now Ridzy knows about that jerk..Love the way Sid support Ridzy...waiting for AR confrontation now...so do try to continue soon...hanks for the PM...Taker care

Lots of Love
Geet

ap ko to mai kia kaho api you always the first one to comment hetric kar li hai apna..😃
thank you soo much for your lovely comments api:)thankx a lot
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: Riddss

nice part
continue soon

thhankx a lot rid for your comment dear:)
glad you like it:)
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Nice part.

thankx alot dear:)
love
maria:)

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
that was reallly nice and emotional part...
hope AR come up soon...
n tammana...im feeling something wrong...
she cant be like letting go sid for t.c of ridz...
n armi...feeling bad for him too...
thnx for the pm...

thank you soo much dear for your comment dear
yes there is not something but too much wrong with tamana...
hope you like up comming part as well:)
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: teenorchid
yar i guess it was arav. Cox in party he winked tammy.
Yar dun gt disappointd easily u r a fab writr. Trust urself.

And abt the part. Hope it ws sad one. Hope shilpas condition gt better soon. And friends reunite sooon

Aslam farwa:)
first of all congo pak won!!!
well lets is it arav or not:)
thank you soomuch for your comment
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: fri42911
please don't be disappointed dear!!!!!!
i did not ask this question b/c i thought it'd be revealed in the next update. but since you did not, so i guess i have to wait for the next update.

loved the update!!!!!!!!

please do take good care of yourself, and please do consider your decision to continue khuda or Muhabbat FF.

hey dear hi wats up:)
You know what when i write part i recheck it and post it with my heart...when you did hard work for others you want aprriciation and when it didnt aprriciated well it hurts
but thank you soo much for your comment dear:)
dear you want khuda or muhabbat..dear including you very persons want me to continue it..so i discontinue it:)sorry for that
but after 1 year exam which are in may i will try to update that as well..actualy i forget the consept for my story and i am re hearing song khuda or muhabbat only crap cme into mind..but i will try to continue that as well:)
thank alot for your concern and comment dear
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

THANK YOU😊

Originally posted by: KSGforever08
sorry yaar maria my bro came after 4 yrs so was busy 4 the week do couldn't reply early.anyway u r gettin better with each update.luved it

HEY WATS UP DEAR:)
IT BEEN SO LONG I CHAT WITH YOU
ohh dont worry about the comment..atleast you commented now:)
thank you soo much for your comment dear
love
maria:)

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: hotKaJen
awesome part!
felt bad 4 AR! but atleast Ridz now knows about dat jerk!
eagerly waiting 4 next part...cont soon
thnx 4 pm

love
Sunita

hey dear:)
thank you soo much for your comment dear:)
glad that you like the part:)
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER
Hey Maria...sorry didn't comment for the last update also, but hectic time at school...

Love the updates, yet so sad yaar for AR...
Love Armaan's talk with his dad, well he told him he loves Riddhima...n then shocking She slapped him...she herself couldn't believe it, n now both are hurting !!!
well it's really good Riddhima came to know about that Arav...
that's a really beautiful part u've shown, that friend bonding between Riddhima and her dad with her telling him about her love...hmmm...so now Arav i supposed won't leave like that, he surely gonna create problems, n is he the one Tamana was talking to??

Cont soon
Take care

Muahhh
🤗
Pranishta

Hey hi:)
how r you??and hows your study going:)
its ok dear..you commented atleast:)
well lets see its arav or not??
thank you soo much for likking the part and for your comment dear:)
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: vidu87
awesome update
luvd it

tc of urself

thnx 4 d pm

Hey dear hi:)
thank you soo much for your comment:)
glad you like the part:)
u too take care of yourself
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: KSG-ROOP
Awesome update, luvd it..
wait for the next part...
Do update soon...
TC and keep smiling...
Thanks for the PM...

hey dear hi:)
thank you soo much for your comment
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
awesome ff
i think arav was the guy who was with tamana
poor shilpa she is in so much pain
waiting for more
n plz pm me when u update next

hey dear hi:)my name is maria:)
welcome to my ff:)
glad that you like the ff:)
thank you soo much for comment:)
will surely pm u:)
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: roshni_A
Hey sweetheart...😊

1st of all as u know i am relly veryyy sorry for commenting this late...
i hope u forgive me...

now for the parts...the story is going great...in previous part i was happy to know that AR won the competition...i hate that Tammana...she is acting so mean...and now she is conspiring against ARS...i was thinking who that guy was ..and i think he is Arav...shit ...how could Ridzy slap Armaan?...he is her best friend...u hav show their emotions really good...but i am really happy that now Ridzy know about that bloody Arav...now i just hope Armaan try to help Ridzy forgetting his anger nor now...she needs him...and i wish that now Ridzs realize that Armaan is the one for her and not Arav...i want to see what Sid does to Tammana once he come to know about her...hope she gets her lesson...i am really liking the character of Sid here...

hope u continue soon...
byee 4 now...going off l9
love ya...

hey api hi:()
Sh*T i for get your avi but dont worry i will make it by tonight..i totaly for get that i have to make your avi but i promise by tonight your avi will be ready:)
aww its okk..der ai dros ai you commented atleast
thank you soo much for your comment
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: Liashna
Hey Maria...😃

😭I missed 3 updates... I feel so bad.. Was so busy with school...😒

Okie, coming to the updates... Greatly done... Arav😡
Loved Sid's friendship... How he made Riddhima understand Armaan's POV... Hope AR's misunderstandings are cleared soon...

Continue soon dear...

Love
Liashna

hey dear hi:)
hope you doing well:)
dear its ok..i know you were not online
gald you like updated and will keep writting
thankx for your comment
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: Harry93
awesome part

hey dear hi:)
thank for likking the upate
love
maria:)

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan
hey maria
sorry for commenting late

was busy

but the update was awesome

finally dt aravs chapter over

he ws two timing how disgusting

aawww armaan still cares for riddhima

even after recieving a slap frm her

hope they fall in love soon

btw take care of ur health

update super soon

nd thnx fr d pm