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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di ur updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 23

When brij came to pick her, Maan made it a point not be there. He was ashamed of himself. His failure to protect his wife. Even after being with him, all that again happened to him.. it was his responsibility. His guilt killed him within.
It was more than a week Geet was in her place. Jhanvi began to get worried. She tried to speak Geet & find out if every thing was fine between them. Geet tried not to say anything. But rano got the clue of all. Rano immediately teamed up with jhanvi.
Rano ' beta tum dono ke beej sab teehk hain na
Geet silently nodded
rano ' I was thinking of taking u for a dr check up, kuch good news wagera tho nahi hain
Geet got really conscious, especially with jhanvi sitting right there.

she tried to escape the conversation.. jhanvi tried to change the topic


Jhanvi ' itne din hogayen Maan aayen bhi nahi milne ke liyen aisen thodi hota hain
but rano was not in mode to change the topic ' yanhi kuch koshish nahi karthi hogi
Geet was embaressed to the core with wat her mom & mother-in-law were hinting at now.
Jhanvi ' pata hain I was pregnant with Maan with in the first 2 months of our marriage
rano smiled
jhanvi ' mujhe tho samjh nahi aata, Maan main usken dad jaisen koi bhi baat nahi
rano ' aisen kyun bol rahi ho
jhanvi ' wo tho aaj bhi mujhe chodke kanhi nahi jaathen
rano laughed ' aabhi bhi
jhanvi blushed furiously accepting
Geet was totally feeling out of place wondering wat this oldies r upto.

Jhanvi & rano had it all planned out. Jhanvi called Maan to pick Geet.
Geet knew had it been left to him, he would have never come. But he was bound by this bandishein. This relation of theirs was!!.
It was bit odd for Maan especially more emotionally attached to her now.. & sharing the same room after so many days in KM. He felt very awkward...filled with feelings he dare not express!!! he was even sacred to stand near her.. wat if she could read his feelings.. his raised heart beat.
Only his heart knows how much he has missed her all these days.
He silently went to the wash room & changed his dress. He wanted to ask her if, she was ok. But he preferred not to say anything. He went down to have lunch. Jhanvi had prepared food that would stir libido to revive sexual urges. Poor Maan he had no clue wat was happening & wat was he getting into. He avoided going to their room the whole day. But after again jhanv's special preparation.. he took a walk out & went in late to their room. He shook his head couple of times trying not to think anything odd.. but his head.. his body had a different plan all together. He was shocked seeing himself so aroused. Her wearing a saree & turning around in the bed definitely was not helping. Add to his misery, her saree slipped off her waist exposing her milky skin. He closed his eyes & turned his back to her. He cursed himself.. wondering wat is wrong with him.. how has he become such a cheapo. He couldn't stop himself opening his eyes & catching her glimpse in the mirror.. she turned away.. he relaxed a ..but didn't fail to notice her almost pinkish white legs.. as the sarees spun a bit above her ankle.. with a sweet sound of her payal. He gulped hard..took a deep breath, flexing his fingers, it was purely an exercise to calm his mind.. his beating heart stopped at the sight of her turning again... with her sarees slipping further up..just a bit above her ankle... it was like a shot of heat..raw need coursed through his body.
He walked straight into the wash room dragging his gaze away from his beautiful wife. He turned the shower on.. & took a cold shower at that hr. His lower part was still hard & throbbing. He covered his face in shame.. not able to believe himself. He shouted at himself.. for being betrayed like this.

Geet got up strattled with his scream. She was not sure if she heard it right, wat was Maan doing in wash room at that hr. she could clearly hear the shower. sound. She tiptoed & went near the wash room.. only to kill his control..
she bumped straight into him as he walked out wet rubbing his hair.
Oh, aap she said, her voice muffled & still shaken. She didn't dare to look up..
his heart screamed I love you. God, I love you so much!
Her face was so close...so frightened yet beautiful, so beloved, that before he realized it, he leaned closer to her. To his utter surprise she only closed her eyes leaning closer desperately. He was lost in her warmth he forgot himself whispering her name dieing to hold her.. until her lips almost feathered his, he froze & pulled back. No, sorry.. I am so sorry, he said, trying to put distance between them. It broke his heart to refuse his need. He felt the burning flush infuse his blood, as she looked up at him with blacken eyes .. he was not sure if he was reading her rightly..
even Geet was not sure ' did he actually mean to get close!!!
he immediately walked towards the wardrobe to pick his cloths & went to the other room. Not sure wat just happened. Did he force himself on her, or was she willing to.. the thought itself filled his heart with hopes. But then all this could be just his desperation.

Maan couldn't put himself to sleep next to her that night. It was impossible for him to hold himself.
GEET POV
His absence only made her more guilty. So he doesn't even want to be in the same room as her now!! but then wat did she just see in his eyes now.. why did it feel there was so much love, why did it feel he cared.. he wanted more from her. Or was it her own feeling that reflected in his eyes. She turned restlessly.. though she thought he didn't like her.. but he trusted her with Tanmay episode.. not once did question her.. why can't he like her. Why can't he give a chance to their relationship.. she looked at babaji.. I will do anything for him.. plz.. babaji. She cried.
Precap
Geet back to flat
-PREV PART 22 next LINK THREAD 4-
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice part. I don't know me feeling sad... Its becoming more distance...ab kya hoga yeh dono toh Baath hi nahien karte😭

Edited by 18mypride - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
OMG maan was really in a big trouble☺️
continue soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!!

this kind of reminds me of this scene:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSLxsBh9WKc

KIND OF... towards the end
Edited by summikhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
When will dey clear dis MU.
Nice part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Y don't they talk to each other ...kab tak aise chalenge.
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Posted: 13 years ago
so dam awesome yaar
loved it so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope things get better once Maan and Geet move back to the flat now...

Thats what we can do right... keep hoping 😳

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