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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..jyothi don't be sorry 😭

i can understand (as am too bound to update but rarely find time)😆

and we are having our daily routines to follow first than other's

take your time

i will be waiting for your pm

love rose😉
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NP jyo
will waiting 4 u😊
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UPDATING IN 15 MIN...
any one there??

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intezaar aur nahi hota!!!!!!!
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Chapter 5:


note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' to ur buddy list for pms.



Geet dossed off. Here maan too after his talk with his pagal handa he too dossed off with a smile on his face.


Next day morning:


Geet got up n prayed her babaji.

Babaji aaj na koi ulta pulta hone mat dena. Woo maan se mainly hamesha mujse jagda karta hain wo. Thik hain babaji subah subah aapko kyun pareshan kar rahi hu main. Main fresh hokar aapse uske baare mein batati hu. Ok babaji, waise good morning babaji.


Geet went to her washroom n took the shower n came out wearing her bathrobe. She opened her wardrobe n seeing which dress to wear.

Hmm kya pehnu, ha mera fav jeans n blue top, yes that will be good.

She got ready n went down. Her mom is preparing breakfast n dad is reading newspaper n her brother is going through some office file.


Geet (st): aaj sab apna apna kaam kar raha hain, main itni jaldi uth gayi kya.

Geet saw the time n its just 7:30 am. She made a baby face n complained to her babaji.

Babaji main aaj itni jaldi ready ho gayi. Haila..

just then yash saw her complaining n was shocked.


Dad once pinch me told yash.

Mohinder looked at him weirdly n asked r u mad??

No dad once pinch me.

Mohinder pinched him hard n laughed.

Ouch.. yash rubbed his hand n told kya dad ?? itna zor se.


geet saw them n wished them good morning dad, good morning veerji.

Even dad too shocked seeing her.

Yash pinch me once.

Yash laughed out loud n hi-fied with mohinder.

Geet made a baby face n asked what happened dad?

Geet beta aap itni subah, its unbelievable.

Ha geet aaj kuch tho hoga. Meri behen the great geet handa itni subah uth gayi. Yeh tho breaking news hoga.

Very funny veerji.

Hahaha just kidding gudiya. Tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na.

Ohfo veerji I am fine. Mujhe bhi pata nahi main itni jaldi kaise uth gayi.

Just then rano came there n told acha hua, make it a habit. Shaadi ke baad...

Oh maa kuch nahi hoga, main geet handa hu mera prince charming mujhe bohot pyaar karega aur mujhe kuch kaam karne nahi dega.

Rano rolled her eyes n told u wont change.

Geet gave her a cheeky smile n told I love u mom n hugged her.

Rano too smiled.

Thik hain sab log chalo breakfast karte hain.

Ok rano told all in unison.

Geet n yash winked at rano.

Besharam bache told rano n laughed.

Rano n mohinder left from there.

Veerji.. called geet.

Ha gudiya.

Aaj na mujhe shopping jaana hain told geet cutely.

Yash smiled n gave his card.

Thanku very much veerji told geet happily n hugged him.

Yash too hugged her back n both went to dining area.

Rano saw her smiling n asked geet y u r smiling.

ku.. kuch nahi mom.

Acha? Yash todha sa bhai ki tarah behave karo. U r spoiling her told rano.

Arey mom bechari shopping karke kitne din hue.. let her enjoy told yash.

Geet smiled at her mom.

Thik hain mujhe bhi tho mere bete ka paisa karcha karne do, chalo geet hum dono aaj sham ko shopping jaate hain told rano.

Sachi mom, chalo chalo we will go told geet excitedly.

Babaji aaj mera card ka kya hoga told yash dramatically.

Sambhalo yash apne aap ko, kabhi kabhi aisa hota hain told dad.

Rano n geet made a gol-gappe face.

Dad n yash laughed seeing them.

They all enjoyed their breakfast.

Ok mom, dad main nikalti hu told geet.

Thik hain beta told mom n dad.

Chalo gudiya I will drop u told yash.

Ok veerji.


They both left from there n got into the car.

Princess ur bike is ready sham ko aajana. Koi jagda nahi ok?? told yash.

Veerji main kuch jagda nahi karti hu. Sab uss...

princess...

ok ok.. no jagda. Main aajati hu. Thoda smile tho dedo mujhe.

Yash smiled at his little sister.

He dropped her n went to office.

Geet entered the office n saw none of her friends came still. N more 20 min time is left.

Hmm no one came still, I will go to caf n have some coffee.

Geet went to caf n ordered coffee.

When she was sipping coffee one of the employee of that office came there n wished her.

Hii told that person.

Geet smiled n told hii.

I am samrat.

Hii I am geet.

Just then other girl came there.

She is gunjan, gunjan she is geet.

Hii geet.

Hii gunjan.

So geet u r new intern here? Asked samrat.

Yes samrat I am new intern here. But I am very happy that all my friends joined here. We will have so much of masti told geet.

Wow geet thats cool told gunjan.

Yup, main bhi bohot khush hu. Aaj koi bhi aye nahi abhi tak told geet.

Just then maan entered caf seeing none of his friends in the office.

He saw geet there n she too saw him.

Lo agaya MK told geet.

They both turned back n saw maan.

Samrat got up n hugged him. Maan too hugged him back.

Maan too settled down unfortunately beside geet. Geet gave him an angry look but maan ignored it.

So dude how r u?? asked samrat.

Fine dude. Hey gunjan how r u?? asked maan.

I am fine maan told gunjan.

How u know each other asked geet.

We all work in the same NGO geet told samrat.

Ohh ok.. waise kya karte ho aap log waha?? asked geet.

Every weekend we will go there n teach the children there. So many children are there who cant offord for studies. So we all will teach them. U know each children has different goals. Some want to become doctor, pilot, engineer, architect etc etc. we can see the glow in their eyes told samrat.

Wow thats really great told geet proudly seeing maan.

For the first time in these years geet smiled at maan.


Guys I think we r getting late chalo kaam karte hain told gunjan.

Ok chalo told maan.

Samrat n gunjan left from there.

Now only maan n geet are left.

When maan was about to go geet stopped him.

Maan called geet.

Maan turned back n was shocked seeing geet in peace. He is just staring at her.

Umm.. maan called geet hesitantly.

Maan came to his senses n told sarcastically wah aaj kuch tho hone wala hain. Geet handa itni shant wo bhi mujhse. Its 8th wonder.

This angered geet n told tum thik se kuch bhi baat nahi kar sakti na. Tumse baat karna hi bekar hain.

She is hurted listening to maan. Why they hate so much. Will they be friends again. One small reason made them hate each other. But actually will they hate??


geet left from there n a layer of tears formed in her eyes.

Caf boy came there n asked sir, wo madam kaha chali gayi.

Kyun? Kya hua asked maan.

Madam didnt pay the bill.

Acha?? kitna hua.

That boy gave the bill n maan paid it.


Even maan felt bad seeing hurt in her eyes. He was thinking about their old days when they were friends no no actually best friends. Who share each n every small things in their life, they play pranks on other friends. They both are partner in crime. They enjoy their life to the core. But some silly moments, some silly incidents made them like that.


Maan paid the bill, but his wallet fell down when he was going from there, he didnt observe that.

Here geet remembered that she didnt pay the bill.

Oh god I forgot. I will go n pay it.

Geet went to the caf again.

Sorry chotu I forgot to pay the bill. Kitna hua?

Arey madam uss sir ne aapka bill bara diya.

Kaun??

wo sir aapke saath the.

Tumne kyun usse paise liya ? Asked geet angrily.

Mujhe kya pata madam, aap tho chele gaye na.

Hmm thik hain.

Madam ek minute.

Kya hua?

Wo sir na apna wallet yaha bhool gaya.

He gave the wallet to geet n left from there.

Geet took his wallet n left from there. When she reached her cabin. Just then nt entered her cabin.

Hii geet.

Hey nt. How r u??

I am fine yaar. Waise tum itne gusse mein kyun ho?

Dont ask me anything yaar. Waise yeh lo tumara best friend ka wallet. Tell him to keep his things with him only.

Nt took it n left from there dont want to increase her anger more.

Nt saw the photo in the wallet n was shocked to see that.

There is a gropu photo of priya, maan n '...


precap : Nt talk with maan.


hello friends so here is part 5. I am so sorry for late update. From now onwards I will update regularly. Hope u all liked the update..


Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Waill be waiting for ur response.


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-jyothi.


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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
*EDITED*
HEY DI ME FIRST!!!!!!!
very very happy...
awesome update di!!!!!!
loved it...
wow 8th wonder geet handa woke up early😉
oh wow maan working in NGO...
proud smile i liked tat😊
oh god wat happened b/t them!!!!!!
how can best frnds get separaed...
waz the past di!!!!!
wwanna know more...
oh god i tot geet ll see the photo...
i think it was the photo of maaneet wit priya...
donno...
wanna see wat happens...
update soon di😊
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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😃luv yu loads😃
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

update soon...

count down starts...


updated... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haaye...Awesome Update Jyo!!
Loved the family bonding ...Geet ,Yash , Mom and dad..all are soo sweet and adorable!! 😃
Hahaha...no-one was ready to believe that Geet woke up so early!! 😆
Aaaww..Maan and Geet were best friends but what happened to their relationship now??
I thought it was all fun but now I'm eager to know what happened between them that they keep fighting with each other!! Aaaw...Geet got sad after remembering those days.
Precap is interesting !!
Continue soon
Waiting for the next part.. 😍
Love ya !! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited ma comment...

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