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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update😛
take care ur self dear
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you clearly know i can't have it evn den ur doin dis
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Originally posted by: icy_magma



Wow...puchchka...yum...
Muh mein paani aaj gaya...
Leaving the forum for a while...wil come back after having some tangy treat... 😛


meri bhi but dis idiot know i cant have it rt now
dats y doin dis with me
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Originally posted by: kamiya

lovely update😛

take care ur self dear
continue soon😃


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A Life For You
Part 3

he remembers clearly their wedding day



she looked angelic clad in red lehanga

a beautiful princess descended from heaven

he wonders how she manages to look beautiful always


Geet, Maan's bride is approached slowly with a down cast eyes, a soft smile and radiant face looking just breathtaking'Maan turns to look at his bride and his gaze stays transfixed on her face'mesmerized, hypnotized, spellbound with the innocent vibrant beauty in front of his naked eyes
Living angel on earth'maan murmured under his breath
Geet lifts her eyes and sees her Groom dressed ever so sensuous in magnificent shervani in looking nothing less than a Greek God and shyly smiles at him'
Maan keeps on looking at his bride approaching him shylyv feeling contented that the most gorgeous and the beautiful face of this earth is going to be his forever'only his'Maan's Geet



Geet comes near the stage and Maan bends little and extends his hand for his bride' Geet graciously puts her hand in his and lifts herself to come on the stage'And comes and stands near Maan'

Maan's eyes does not move from her face from a second'Bride and Groom just keeps on staring at each other oblivious of all'just in their own world free of the world'just two of them

Geet looks at his dark desirous eyes with full love and affection and Maan just couldn't muster the courage to remove his eyes from those deep hazels speaking volumes just of love
Beta abhi zara sabar rakhiye aaj ke baad yeh sirf aap hi ki hai'dadi poked Maan's arm playfully
Man'what she has done to me'behave Maan...behave...keep yourself calm'just some more time'Maan mentally scolded himself

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A tear made its way down his blank eyes'with a sweet smile living the past again realizing himself and his lady love'living the most beautiful and pleasurable time he had with the one who gave her everything without any demand or word

The time he was suppose to treasure he lost somewhere in the unknown world of his

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Both turn to each other holding the garland in their hands'Once again Maan keeps on looking at the face of his happy radiant bride'Geet also looks at her handsome prince and smiles at him and keeps on looking but with Maan's intense gaze she feels shy and looks down curtaining her eyes'




They both made each other were the garlands lovingly looking deeply in the other's eyes seeking an unknown permission to enter their hearts

The mandap was set bride and groom were called upon

Maan remembers the vows he did to his wife that time

The vows he broke at each and every step'

His own failures

His own hatred to himself

A feeling of guilt remorse pain encaptured his heart
Realizing each and every word now





**With our first step together we pray to God to provide us with pure and nourishing food. Together we will live our lives with honour and respect for each other.

I provided you with everything but yet I failed to give you anything'you always respected me honoured me but I always'always mislead you





**With our second step together we pledge to grow in physical, mental and spiritual strengths. Together we will share happiness and enjoy life.

We did grow but I never let you grow with my ownself we always were two different souls I never let you meet me in a real sense it was me who made these crevices between us





**With our third step we promise each other to earn and increase wealth by righteous way and provide comfort to the family. Together we will share all our sorrows and joys.

I earned and increased wealth but I failed to give you the comfort of a family a real family mishty'you always gave me a family love but I failed to reciprocate it





**With our forth step together we pledge not to forget our parents and elders. Together we will maintain and strengthen the family bonds.

I forgot my own love what else was there to remember'I was the one to break my own family, to shatter everything, I had'which I was suppose to nourish, I demolished it with my own hands'still you gave all your courage all your power to protect My family





** With our fifth step together we pray to God to bless us with beautiful, kind and brave children. Together as responsible parents, we shall provide them with good education and values of life

You were the one who took all the pain, all the longings to bring up this child all alone, I just lend you a bloody sperm for this fetus who will be called my blood but it was always you who gave all her strength to make this fetus a baby in real sense'gave him the right to be called are love'symbol of love which I failed to give you




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**With our sixth step together, we pray to God for a healthy and disease free life for us and our families. Together we will live a balanced and harmonious life.

I never let you live a healthy peaceful life'I never let you live a balanced peaceful harmonious life with a myself'you always gave into all my needs..to give me pleasure of life you always succeed to give in but I failed again mishty'I failed again





**With our seventh step together, we promise to be a loyal companion. Together we will live a life of mutual trust, love and friendship.

I was never loyal to you'never'I always failed to give you my loyalty again'you always blind trusted me knowing my all flaws my all mistakes'you were always my friend guide love mentor but I failed to be a good human being even, I am a mentor'I was never a companion'never





That was it

He broke down in tears flooding like no tomorrow, no bounds he knew he did a grave mistake
realization of your own mistake in this damped earth to the one who meant you the world, without the one is more painfull and soul seething

He knew and he realizes he was at mistake this time his love'his mishty always gave in willingly with all his love, power till the time she can give in

I failed Geet'your Maan failed you'

Geet I don't deserve anything...I don't deserve you...nor your love neither your hatred...but I can't live without you jaan...I can't
I don't know how to breathe without you
I don't know how to feel anything accept you
I know I deserve to go through the burning pain of hell
I deserve the worst
But please jaan don't leave me
I will die...without your touch on this sinful heart
It suffocates me over here without your smell around
I feel chocked...here without your breath falling on my lips
it burns my eyes without that perfect smile of yours
please..
please come back to me once
The Maan Singh Khurana is no more MSK he is just your Maan...just yours
from soul to spirit...I am yours and only yours
please a last chance to this deadliest animal
please jaan i beg you for this last chance...he bowed down on his knees tired exhausted with a aching heart...come back to me
I can't take this longing pain on this burdened heart



please...his sobs turned into hiccups choking him with his breath
his throat went dry...eyes puffed up...his body left like a living corpse...a desperation to see her
a need to touch her...feel her...embrace her
an urge to kiss her madly...to love her insanely
a sudden fear to lose her ran through his veins an anger to see if she is fine
a rage to fill the desperate heart with her closeness with her being safe and secure with him

all he could wish was her breath talking smile full of her heart and love

but
he knew now things won't be same...he will not be same...she will not be same...there relation, there bonding...they will not be same




soon his thoughts were again drifted towards their past
where he first came to know about her unconditional love

he entered the room beautifully decorated with flowers candles and chandeliers with a mild sensuous smell
and saw a sight he would die a million deaths

his bride standing near the window looking intently towards the full moon giving an extra glow to her face
her milky white skin was shinning like a white marble in the dim moonlight of the

her blushing cheeks, dreaming hazel eyes, that cute little nose
uff those rossy lips...she indeed looked breathtaking


he came closer to her from back and nuzzled near her ear tracing his hands on her belly
hugging her, bringing her closer to him

you look beautiful...
She hide her face in her crook turning hugging her tightly hiding her blush from his lusty eyes
he moves her hairs to one shoulder and placed a wet kiss on her exposed shoulder

maan...she moaned

geet I wanna ask you one thing...

Hmm...that's what she could manage to utter after his continuous assault on her neck and crook
lost in his desire

you know everything about me...every fact about my life..
.maan asked nuzzling the tip of her nose near her ear and tracing patters with his fingertips on her shoulder

then why did you agreed for this alliance...maan asked in a serious yet lost tone

that brought her sense back

she freed herself a little to look in her dark eyes trying find something in them

She freed herself from his embraced moving back a little and again looked contently towards the moon

Maan aapne kabhi iss chand ko aaram se dekha hai...ye kabhi apni chandani se dur nahi hota...jitna bhi andhera ho...jitni mushkile ho...chand ki chandani humesha uske sath rehti hai

main jhuth nahi bolungi...maine humesha se ek uss insaan se pyaar kia jise pyaar ka matlab bhi nahi pata...jiske lie pyaar ka wajood hi nahi...jo sirf khelna jaanta hai...

or main uss insaan ke sapne dekhti thi aaj se nahi shuru se

maan looked at her and an unknown fear ran through him'she loved someone

jab se pyaar karna sikha...jab se jeena sikha...jab se mehsoos karna sikha iss dill ke zazbaat
iss dil hi har dhadkan...har aahat main bass ek hi naam basa tha, hai...

she smiled a little holding her heart in a tight fist...or ab to yeh dill bhi ushi ka ho gaya

he looked at her with a confuse and astonished expression to register what she exactly wanna share


she turned looking deeply in those dark confused eyes

haan maine aapse humesha se pyaar kia...humesha se aapko chaha...dur se dekh kar humesha aapke paas aane ki chahat ki...
Aapki har kamayabi pe...dur se hu aapko dua maangti rahi
humesha MSK ko ek nayi ladki ek nayi roop main dekh kar asali Maan ko jaan'ne ki tamanna rahi
aapke haar pe apni haar samjhi...aapki jeet pe aapse zaida khush hua hai yeh dil...

aapka dard saha hai maine...aapki hasi sanjoi hai maine

people have many treasures but I always cherishes the moments where I felt you...where I breathed the same air with you

Maan looks at her with great concentration with an excitement an unknown feeling filling her heart her blood with contentment

she chuckled a little...maan you must me thinking am mad...yess I am mad...I am madly irrevocably, irreversibly, unconditionally, insanely irresistibly in love with you

Love with Maan'my Maan'MY HUSBAND'my life

Maan was thrilled with her every word and expression

aapne kabhi wo bird dekha jiske wings cut kar die jaate hai...main wahi bird hu maan
mujhe wo har cheez mili jo koi bhi aam ladki sapne main dekhti hai'in a blink of an eye I got everythin I desired, I ever wished, magar har cheez ki kimat ek nayi bandishon main bandh dia gaya

Indian conservative family main born hone ka kimat kuch to dena than a'I knew I won't be able to get my first love

My desire but I what I dint knew was my fate is entangled with the love of my life

With my Maan not for this life but for each and every life

She searched something in her eyes and was astonished to find the same love hidden in those dark eyes


aapko kya laga aagar main manaa bhi kar dungi to papaji meri shadi aapse nahi karayenge...

nahi maan to bhi papaji meri shaadi aapse karwaa hi dete'agar aapse nahi to kisi or se...

an unknown anger cursed his veins he closed his fist tight to reduce the out flow of emotions

magar mere lie kisi or k sath zindagi jeene se acha to main aapke yaado ke sath marr jaati
so maine aapke sath zindagi jeene ka faisla kar lia
haan maanti hu or jaanti bhi ho aapko...

magar maine aap jaise ho waise aapse pyaar kia tha...bina kisi sharat yaa saude ke
maine kabhi aapse wapis pyaar nahi manga bass chaha hai
Wo to maine peechle janam main koi bahutt acha kaam kia hoga jo aap mujhe mile warna meri aisi kismatt kaha

I know you don't love me now...but you will love me one day and that's for sure...and even if that dosn't happen my love if more than sufficient for both of us to live our lives with love and dreams

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I Love you mishty...I love you more than anything...I love you more than anyone...I love you more than myself

I love to love you...
You were right...you were always right I will love you...I love you not from today from the day I saw you...from the day I felt you...from the day I touched you...I loved you all the while

but I am such an idiot that I failed to realize...I failed to know the depth of are love

yess your love was sufficient for me...to filled the hidden crevices of this hollow heart without acknowledgment
it was all dream we lived...dream of love... affection ...truth... desire
it was always a fairy tale I lived in...a beautiful dream supposing it to be a happy ending
but like always I failed to make this dream come true

your maan failed to dream of a lovely realty
failed to fulfill your dreams...your desires

failed to show you a real heaven which an angel like you always deserved

you were a fairy of my dreams descended down the earth from that angelic heavens to fulfill each and every dream of mine

but I failed to fulfill even your small wishes
your small dreams

Your Maan is a failure Geet...The Great Maan Singh Khurana is a big time failure
I failed again my ownself
my ego, attitude, power took tool on my heart and emotions
I failed against destiny


Precap: Geet or Baby 😲😭

Prev:Part 2 Next:Part 4

My Other FF Heart Of Heart

so here i did my part 3
m really really sorry for dealay was really down with health
so i gave a long updt wid all the pix to make it up wid u guyz😉
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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago

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