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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

interesting.
Update soon.


thanx n sure😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

thanx 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx n sure😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sweat_poison


yap yap yap
ur 2mrw have long strted now updte or els
i need to complain abt u😛


i will updt 2day bacha...pakka pakka
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sweat_poison


oooyyeee wat did mum do
u dint called evn knowing m nt well
i shall be angry nt u

n we all missing yae as wel di cum soon na
i hate ur xamz n file wrks
y cant u fly sooner



wat can i do if ur australia dsnt want dis poor soul back on rum soon
meri kyaa galati

n sorry na i dnt knew u know it clearly

y gttin mad on me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47



Heart Of Heart

Part 1



Guys where the hell is she 10 mins more just 10 then, I have to make
announcement for her...I can't help it anymore...do it fast...
10 mins mark it

saying so the convener left leaving behind a filibustered audience

sam where the hell is she...u know how imp is it for us...dev barked in anger

I don't know guys...she is not picking up my call...sam restlessly answered trying call her again
pick call the god damit
is she fine...godd I shouldn't think like this...she must be stuck in traffic somewhere...please come soon gudia...are whole reputation is at stake
sam prayed god


**********

5 mins more
god...isko bhejo na...dev prayed god with eyes closed

**********
3 mins
mereko iss duniya se uthaa lo babaji...sam cribbed to babaji

**********
2mins
babaji yeh mereko marr denge...ab aap hi bachaao mereko...sam faked anger to babaji

**********

1min
babaji....sam almost cried out this time

m dead...dev shrieked

**********
Time up

"and the announcement was aired

now we have DAV Public School, New Delhi...
So here we go"

taking the breath away from all the DAVians present for competition


ur so soo sooo dead now...m not gonna leave you now..sam shrieked in anger banging her head with the counter crying
Mereko koi marr do...dev cried wishing the earth to crack open and engulf him within

lights went off...curtains rolled again

mummmyyy...sam cried looking up at heavens waiting for some miracle to happen

spotlights...

N here it goes...

(

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E8E-11Woy48 )
(Hmm... hmm...
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge

Hmm... hmm...
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge
)




and here she was swinging her body with full force yet elegantly letting know everyone she is back

back to rescue...

Her innocent baby face gave means to words

her naughty eyes said her spirit

her pouting lips had a voice of it's own

she swayed like a little princess letting know everyone she is what she is...who never wanna change...live life always the way she wants


Geet...
.sam gasped with happiness almost jumping with joy seeing her on stage dancing whole heartedly with the rhythms

(Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge, apni adaa
Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge)


she made a silly face shrugging off her shoulders to sam and dev dancing along the rhythms

to which sam just gave her an angry fake glare and dev looked at his two idiots grinning fully showing his 32 teethes

she held her ears making sorry face to which dev looked at her in aoww while sam instantly melting giving her flying kisses and imaginary huggs


she turned back to the audience swaying in the air


letting them know her presence


(Hmm' ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
Haan' ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
Sar pe aanchal kyun rakhe, dhhalka toh dhhalka
Ab koyi khush ho ya koyi roothhe, is baat par chaahe har baat toote
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge)


her white flair lehanga swayed along with her each turn giving her a real princess look complimenting her ever charming face

giving her innocence more angelic looks...she looked like a litle baby doll dancing showing all her antic expressions with each word

she held her dupata on her head and den let it fall on her shoulder following each word


den held one co dancer's hand and danced giggling...and then left her and held other repeating her steps


( Hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
Ho.. hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
Hamaare liye toh apna ghar hi bhala hai
Sunta agar ho toh sun le kaazi, lagta nahin kabhi ham honge raazi
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge )


she showed her palms to everyone and shaking her head in denial

and then danced with beats moving back to the stage

She twirled round jumping on one feet

she was flowing with each beat, each word as if she was floating peacefully in air without any bonds or restrictions

as if a free bird ready to flee away from the whole world to reach her destiny


(Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge apni adaa
Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge

Aa aa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh ho ho ho ho ho ...)

she danced whole heartedly
with all her sprit and enthusiasm, enjoying her each move her each step carelessly but still her each step was holding a certain perfection...

And then the song ends with her final twist and she looked at everyone with her hands held up in air thumping heartbeat, exhausted yet mesmerizing facial expression with the breath taking smile plastered on her angelic cute chubby face

letting everyone know how much she was drifted in the world of her dreams while dancing

an unexpected silence prevailed in the dark hall

and then

again an unexpected applaud replaced the silence with hooting giggling and praising from everyone for her mesmerising, hypnotizing performance

her big smile widened more listening her praise

she bowed down elegantly and made her way back stage

yyyiiieeesss...

Geet screamed at high pitch hugging dev and sam in a teddy bear hugg


aahhh...mera ears...u'll burst my eardrums someday for sure...
dev whined rubbing his ear

while geet made a baby innocent face with wide hazels looking like the most adorable huggy bear

dnt irritate my princess...she hugged geet protectively while geet smiled foolishly winking at a cribbing dev

how was it...she asked desperately with glint in her eyes and lots of emotions

not gud...sam broke the hug with a disappointed expression

leaving a shocked dev and teary geet at a verge of breakdown

acha nahi tha..aoww are lil baby princess asked sadly


nahhh...sam dramatacized a little more just to make geet cry now

she turned to see geet crying and instantly hugged her...jhalli dat was simply perfect...spell bound...idiot i was kidding

sachi...geet asked with glittering eyes in sam's embrace

muchi...sam kissed her cheaks and wipped off her tears

aoww my idiots...dev joined the hug...i was gonna have a miny heart attack u know...
he said dramatically pointing at his heart just to get waked by sam

while geet giggled at her plee

auchhh lady bheem...kitna bhari hath hai jaanti bhi hai...and here comes another wake from geet

auchhh...gundian... now wat was that for...dev whined rubbing his arm now

you deserve it...geet showed her tongue and ran for her life from an angry dev

after a long cat rat fight ended and all landed over couch catching there long lost breaths

geet asked out of blue...hum jeet to jaayenge na...

Ofcourse we will...sam assured giving a side hugg

or nahi to kya we have the best dancer of whole Delhi...dev said proudly

whole country nahi keh sakta tha...geet pouted cutely

whole country...whole world...whole universe...whole eternity...ab khush meri shehzadian...he asked kneeling on his knees in front of both extending his both hands in front

hmmm both made a thoughtful face

sochenge...
geet said thinking keeping her finger on her cheeks

dekhenge...sam answered rubbing her forehead


and yes....both answered in unison
gave one hand in each of his hand making him stand elegantly like little prince and princesses dancing together

nautankia...dev shook his head in disbelieve

and then the trio got lost in there fighting, waking, manofying and giggling session again

now the time for results...


Precap:

Result...fingers crossed 😉

n apna hero to reh gaya

chal next time hero ki entry 😛


Perv. Intro Next Part 2


so here was part 1...LoLz

i rly dont know abt the dance bit

so bear wid me on dat part


will updt 2mrw again waiting fr ur lovely lovely comments n likes again


AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

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❤️ Luv Divzi



Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
ME 1ST...YEEEPYYY...UPDATE SOON...N GEET IS SOOO SSWEEETYYYPIE...N MERE MAANU JANNU KA ENTRRY NAHN KIYA...NOT FAIR...JALDI JALDI NXT UPDATE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


i will updt 2day bacha...pakka pakka



i hateee u
now need to slp
will read both in morn now

hate u
fr late updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz



wat can i do if ur australia dsnt want dis poor soul back on rum soon
meri kyaa galati

n sorry na i dnt knew u know it clearly

y gttin mad on me


yap yap yap
u neva know wats happening wid ur own lil sis
n u bttr hurry up n make it up wid aus
otherwise think urslf dead

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