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Hey dear….

Me updated Twisty Deewangi….

here's the link...

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Originally posted by: rsroopali

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Oihh madam..main likh rahi hun..and i know that all of you will love this sensous...sexy...opulent...passionate filled update...so let me write...

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Heey...me back with the longest update! Firstly I would like to thank Roopali for the amazing VM and Ruch for helping me write the proposal! I have done my bit by giving you guys 2 updates in 1...so you guys can now finish this thread for me and I will give the next update in the next thread! 

Part 60


She went and opened it. It had a beautiful black netted saree with a bikini style blouse and a few strings holding it at the back. The saree was see-through and she just blushed looking at it. There was another note placed inside it. She opened it.

 

Please wear this for me

 

Your Maan

She was ready to do anything for her maan. All day she went lokoing for him but he was nowhere around. She called office and she found that he didn't come to office the whole day which was bizarre. She asked Dadimaa and she said that she hadn't heard from him either and that nakul told her that he left at 5am in the morning somewhere and hasn't arrived back yet. Everyone was behaving strangely around as if they didn't actually care to find out where he went, actually now to think about it, his family is quite care-free but still she she thought that everyone was behaving weirdly.

 

It was evening soon and she wrapped herself in the black netted saree and then put a black shawl on top. She was going to walk out when she saw that no-one was in the house, no annie, dadi or even arjun but just the servants and no-one else. If they had gone out then she was sure that they would come to tell her but no, there was no-one. She made her way out in the crisp chill of March. As driver was waiting for her, she sat inside and they began a journey. It took 1 hour in the car, until it came to a standstill. She wasn't sure where she was but was just surrounded by forests and trees. The driver opened her door for her and asked her to step out.

 

Geet: Where are we?

Driver: Maam...that is a surprise, let me take you there.

 

Then the driver escorted her through a path way in the forest. In 10 minutes she could hear the carshing of the waves and she had realised that she was at the shore. The driver turned around and said.

 

Driver: Mam...you have to walk just straight from here and you will find maan sir waiting for you.


Geet: Hmm...thankyou!

 

The driver then left and geet carried on walking. She came to the shore and saw a cruise liner waiting for her. The floor of the forest had rose petals leading her to climb the crusie. She followed her instinct and climbed the steps but was worried not find maan there.

 

Geet: MAAN...where are you? MAAN...

Maan: Geet...carry on walking...

 

Geet carried walking as her heart was feeling secured when she heard maan's voice. Now she was on the upper deck of the boat, where flowed petals decorated the decks and the candles making it a romantic atmosphere. There was a table set already and there were white creamy sofa's placed which looked like a single bed but was in a shape of a sofa. Maan was standing with his back to her. Some women came and took off her shawl and guided her around the boat and then they left the boat, the boat soon started sailing. She looked at him, he was wearing black trousers with a black see through shirt, looking dashing like always.

 

Maan: Geet please sit down on the sofa. Trust me there is no-one except me and you right now!

Geet: Hmm... (she sat down and stared at all the arrangements that he made)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=QpGkZpBafLQ[/YOUTUBE]

(CREDIT: ROOPALI)

It was pitch black in the surroundings but the only light that was lighting up the atmosphere were the candles that were placed around the boat to luminate everything. A screen flashed up with Geet's picture on her birthday in the white saree, looking out of this world.

 

Maan: This story is about a boy who had almost given up on life and started to live in the darkness that surrounded him until you came into my life. (he turns around while Geet gasps 'Maan')

 

Maan: Haan...Geet Main..Do you remember your first day in office..when you fell down and served me the coffee cold? (Geet looks down feeling shy)

 

Geet thinks about her first day in KC and how surprised she was when she found out that Maan was the MD of KC.

 

Maan: Then your birthday...you were looking gorgeous in the white saree.

Geet: It was gifted by you.

 

Geet remembered the passionate dance of Kurban Hua and how he gifted the anklet to her.

 

Maan: The Mumbai trip...where we first became friends...and then how your forced me to eat the gol gapes (he chuckles)

 

The memory of them at beach came flooded back to Geet where they were just enjoying them selves playing in the water and the gol gapes ofcourse.

 

Maan: Last but not least the day we confessed during Diwali. These were the most special moments of life because you were the there.

 

Geet: Maan (she gasped)

 

Maan: I always valued self made people and that's the reason i hated women because they were only after rich guy's money but when you came into my life, you were like an enigma, from a hardworking and efficient secretary, to an extremely intelligent creator of Jarvis, to my role model SM, to the owner of KPMG. I didn't even realize when, while figuring you out, I fell for you. but the problem is you are too perfect for me, so would you like to accept a guy who stands nowhere near you in terms of perfection but promises you to be just there for you forever and love you with his life' (CREDIT: RUCH)

 

Geet: No maan, i am not perfect. i had a scarred past with Brij in the picture, and a very dangerous life of SM. Till now I had my family and friends but there was not even a single person who could understand my unsaid words. You have not only filled that void but also accepted me along with all the dangers that i carry. I know you value me more than your life and i have seen the proof of it many times. Neither of us are perfect but we complement each other. We are meant to be Maan. yeh MAANEET KI PREM KAHAANI babaji ne khud apne hathon se likhi hai (CREDIT: RUCH)

 

Maan bends down on his knees and takes out a ring and holds it in front on her.

 

Maan: Geet...will you marry me?

Geet: Yes...I do (she puts her hand forward and he slips in the ring.)


Meri Har Ek Dhadkan Aap Ke Liye Hai

Meri Har Ek Muskurahat Aap Ke Liye Hai

Aap Ke Ada Mere Dilko Churane Ke Liye Hai

Ab Tho Meri Yeah Zindagi Bhi Aap Ke Liye hai


Maan gets up and pulls Geet in a passionate hug. After what seems like ages they break apart and maan leans forward and kisses her forehead.

 

Maan: I Love you Geet!

Geet: I love you too Maan! Thanks for all of this...I loved the arrangement.

Maan: Thanks for coming into my life...by the way you are looking gorgeous in the black saree (his hands travelled from her back to bare waist squeezing it gently)

Geet: Maan you have totally become besharam...

Maan: Ab toh license hain meri jaan...ab chalo...khana thanda horaha hain...

Geet: Hmm...(they walked to the dinner table).

The dinner table was already set with her favourite Punjabi food, she could see the extent that he went to make this night extrememly special for her, which no-one uptill now has done. She was about to pull a chair for herself when a hand pulled her and she landed on his lap.

 

Geet: Maan..yeh..

Maan: Oh come on...Jaan...what is the need of two plates when we will become one very soon! (he smirked) (that statement just had two meanings)
Geet: Maan...aap bhi...naa...aap bahot sharathi ho gaye ho...

Maan: Tumne meri sharath abhi tak dekhi hi kaha hain? (he smirked)



CONTINUED BELOW


Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
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He was holding her by the waist in his one hand and the second hand took the first morsel of food and started to feed her but geet stopped him, she took the food from his hand and placed it in his mouth. He licked her fingers thoroughly and bit one of them playfully while she made a cute baby face. So then he brought his mouth forward and kissed the finger sensuously. Geet closed her eyes with the touch of his lips. They then took it in turns for feeding each other, while maan was playing with geet's almost bare back making her moan and hiss and gasp his name. Soon they finished and he played some soft, sensual music in the background.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=xUDaYXj8ozA[/YOUTUBE]
 


Oooh..

Baby, come stand by my side
Come and be my guiding light
Ooo' I'll be what you want me to be

I'll give all my love in whole of my life


Maan: May I have this dance with my fianc? (Geet forwarded her hand and took her to the centre)

Soniyo, o soniyo

Tumhe dekhta hu to sochta hu bas yahi
Tum jo mera saath do, saare gham bhulake
Jee lu muskuraake zindagi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath

 

I get this feeling now, I cannot wait no longer
I know your love will keep me happy
Will keep me stronger
I get this feeling now, I cannot live without you

I know your love's the only one so true

 

Maan pulled her closer and placed his hand on her waist. He then started to dance with her moving side to side. He then slowly dipped her, bending close to her so that she could feel his breath fanning her face sensuously.He then helped her up.


Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu

Sang tere safar poora karu
Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu
Sang tere safar poora karu
Kya kahu ae zindagi
Tu hai meri saans, rehna tu paas har ghadi

Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat,
Tu bas de de mera saath,

Tu bas de de mera saath

 

He twirled her effortlessly around the dancefloor and then pulled her back into the safety of his arms and swayes gently to the music as if saying all the lyrics to her.


Tujh ko jo, paaya toh hai yeh lagta kyu

Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon
Tujkh ko jo, paaya to hai ye lagta kyu
Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon

Tum bano, saaya mera, zindagi mein aao
Zindagi bitaao bas yahi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath

Chahe jo bhi ho baat

 

He then lifted her up like she only weighed a feather and span around and slowly brought her down with her chest massaging his face gently and heplaced her on her feet. He then brought her close again and dipped her and pulled her back. He then twirled her once and pulled her back into her arms. 


Tu bas de de mera saath

Tu bas de de mera saath

Baby, come stand by my side
Come and be my guiding light
Ooo' I'll be what you want me to be
I'll give all my love in whole of my life

Baby'. Come and be my guiding light

 

They were gently swaying to music when he brought her even more closer than she was and lightly brushed his lips with hers. He picked her up and brought her to a room and locked the door. 


The room had leather sofa's, a big double bed and bathroom. It was covered in rose petals and candles. Geet tried to absorb her surrounding and then she looked at maan. Maan looked into her eyes and it had the acceptance. So he dipped dwon and grabbed her face into a passionate kiss, taking the relationship to another level. Geet was feeling drugged in his love. Maan was kissing her and walking her backwards at the same time. He pushed her down to the bed and came on top of her. He released her saree paloo from the shoulders and kissed her passionately in the crook of her neck, nibbling on her white skin and occasionally giving her love bites and then sucking it to increase her passion. "OH MAAN" Geet moaned as he was teasing her with his touch. Out of passion, her hands went inside his shirt and were digging her nails in his back. Maan could feel how much his sherni was turned on by their act.

 

His hands moved to her waist roughly and squeezing her waist softly and then pinching her navel. "Ouch" screamed Geet, while Maan was naughtily smirking at her. His hands to her bikini style blouse and started to rub them softly and then gradually getting harder, feeling her soft skin in his manly hands.

"You look Sexy Geet" he said huskily making her turn scarlet red, she just hid her face in the crook of his neck, blushing madly, while maan was still drowsed in her beauty. His hands travelled her bare back and opened the hook of her blouse leaving her back completely bare. He then twisted her around in a jerk and started to kiss and nible on her back. Geet could feel herself getting wet between the legs and had no idea of stopping, at least in her drowsed state. Maan could feel her submission and felt that if h did not stop now, there was no-going back, and he knew his geet would want to wait. So he carefully lifted himself off her and turned her around to see her flushed face and her eyes closed. She looked like an angel, he just wanted to capture her at this moment in her heart to know to what extent she loved him but he knew that could never be measured. Even if he had carried on, she would have given in because she loves him too much to stop him, thats why he felt that he should stop, before they regret itt later.

 

Geet slowly opened her eyes and looked at his handsome face which was staring at her.

 

Maan: Umm...geet why don't you go and change, in that room there.

Geet: But maan...I haven't brought anything for me to change in...

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana never leaves work undone! (he smirks)

 

Although Geet wanted to go and change, she couldn't because she was barely clad in a blouse and underskirt. She couldn't just walk infront of him, she felt extremely shy. Maan noticed her hesitance and picked her up swiftly in his arms and walked in the bathroom.

 

Maan: Everything you need is in the cupboard!

Geet: Hmm...

 

He put her on her feet and left after a quick peck on her cheek. Geet quickly took a shower and opened the cupboard to retrieve another designer saree with heavy works though. It was red and white with heavy golden work making her look out of this world. She also noticed that there were matching inners and she blushed at the thought that maan had saw this. There was also matching jewellery and various different types of make-up left in a bag. She applied a bit and then walked outside the room, to see maan ready in a cream and gold sherwani. He placed his hand out for her and she placed her hand. The cruise came 1o stand still, near the shore again. They were back to the shore but this time another one, it was a small island with a big house. They stepped outside. They were about to go in the house, when maan stopped her. Maan placed a blind fold on her eyes.

 

Geet: Maan aap..

Maan: You trust me?

Geet: more than my life...

Maan: Then lets go and don't you dare remove the blind fold.

 

They walked inside the house and Maan opened Geet's blind folds.

 

Geet opened her eyes and everyone yelled "SURPRISE!"

 

Geet was shocked and surprised. She found everyone there her family, her friends, some respected clients and workers from both KC and KPMG. She turned around and looked at maan and she saw him coming closer to her. He held her by the waist and whispered in her ears.

 

Maan: Welcome to our engagement party would be Mrs. Khurana!

Geet: maan yeh sab..it is fantastic...aur aapne...

Maan: Don't think it was all done by me...it was done by our friends.

 

Dadimaa and Geet's parents came forward to them and they took their blessings.

 

Dadi: I am soo happy for both of you right now...jeethe raho...

Mummiji: Haan puttar...jeethe raho

Papaji: We are all so happy with both of you and I know geet puttar that I won't get a better damad than Maanji...

Maan: Please aap mujhe maan bulayiye...

 

Precap: Engagement



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Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
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He… He... me was waiting when you remove the do not post tag!!!😆

ME FIRST!!!😉

Damn hot update!!!☺️

am really overwhelmed you used my suggestion completely…. Love you…🤗

Loved all the arrangements… cruise, rose petals…. aww so romantic!!!!😳

Beautiful description of their feelings!!!!👏

feeding session was extremely romantic and cute…..😳

I really loved Maan for respecting Geet so much that he chose to wait…..😳

uh..oh..he even got matching red inners????😳

OMG khurana, handa and KPMG clan in there to make their moment special…😳

that was the part i loved the most!!❤️

Loved the extra looong update…..😆

already waiting for next!!!😉
Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchs

He' He... me was waiting when you remove the do not post tag!!!😆


ME FIRST!!!😉

Damn hot update!!!☺️

am really overwhelmed you used my suggestion completely'. Love you'🤗

Loved all the arrangements' cruise, rose petals'. aww so romantic!!!!😳

Beautiful description of their feelings!!!!👏

feeding session was extremely romantic and cute'..😳

I really loved Maan for respecting Geet so much that he chose to wait'..😳

uh..oh..he even got matching red inners????😳

OMG khurana, handa and KPMG clan in there to make their moment special'😳

that was the part i loved the most!!❤️

Loved the extra looong update'..😆

already waiting for next!!!😉


thanks me glad you liked it...

yep...well your suggestions were really good...so why not use it?

yh i added a bit to romance in it...

well it was the proposal...

glad you liked the engagement idea...

well it was MSK's idea actually 😉

haha...I know I had to put that tag because my update was too long to put in one of the chat boxes thing...so i put it in 2...

haha...well yep...the next update on the next thread!


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it that was  so cute love the decryption of the sari  very nice loved your beautiful word well written perfectly done loved how he proposed loved all the arrangement's rose petal their clothes the cruise and the  engagement party thanks for the pm 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee
superbbb
luv u apppsss
it was hot senuse passionate n surpriseee
wowww
superbbb
n me going gaga over d vm i madeee