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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear!!!! iss pammi ki toh arghhh!!!😡😡😡😡 Thank god Geet is 5n... poor meera feeling sad 4 her... hope maan sach saamne laye...
plzzz cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear...😃.
4 PMing me...
ur updates r just ...sweety...😳⭐️⭐️..
4 ur hard work..👏👏👏..
me really... dear.😃..
dear...😃
tons of to u...dear...😛
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear.

This Pammi is too mush yaar.

Lets see how Maan brings her truth out.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

updated ma comment on pg69
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
yeh pammi ki toh
ab maan kiase geet ke samne sach leyayega
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago


The English translations of the update are in the brackets... sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...

Part 10

Maan: ye to sab gadbad hota ja raha hai'..jaldi hu kuch karna hoga'..[something is wrong for sure'.will have to find it out soon]

Maan: vo geet ki mom zarur kuch aisa karegi jisse koi na koi sabot mil jaega'par iske liye unpe nazar rakhna imp hai'.or vo main to rakh nai sakta koi aisa insaan jo har waqt unke saath rehta ho [geet's mom will try and do something which can be helpful in bringing out the truth''but for that somebody has to look after her'..and one who is near to her everytime]

Maan: geet ke ghar uski sister bhi hai na use baat karni hogi,,,,par maine kabhi use baat nahin ki''.muje dev se baat karni hogi [geet has a sister at her home'..but I have never talked to her''I will have to ask dev for it]

Maan immediately goes to Dev's room and seeks his help to ask Meera to keep an eye on her mother'.

Maan: please dev tumhe aisa karna hi hoga [please dev u will have to do this]

Dev: thik hai bro par mujse samaj nai aa raha ki aap aisa chahte kyu hai?? [ but bro I am not understanding why do u want all this to happen]

Maan: iska jawaab tumhe kal mil jaega abhi main jaisa keh raha hu waisa karo [u will get all the answers by tomorrow'..but do as I am saying right now]

Dev calls up Meera who is really in a bad condition''.Though both of them were good friends but Meera had not met Dev for many days'.and dev too was feeling awkward talking to her after so long'..but he had too'

Dev: meera tumhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga [meera u will have to take care of yourself]

Meera: par dev achanak se geet di bhi'. Ye kya ho raha hai kuch samaj nai aa raha [but all of the sudden geet di also'..I cannot understand what is all this happening]

Dev: main samaj sakta hu meera'.par abhi tumhe ek zaruri kaam karna hai [I can understand meera'but u have to do an important work]

Meera: main kuch samjhi nai dev [ I didn't get u dev]

Dev: meera bro chahte hai ki tum apni mom ko follow karo vo jahan jaati hai tum unke peeche jao or sab khabar karti raho'..[meera bro wants you to follow your mom'her all activities where is she going'..u go behind her if she is going out and inform him everything]

Meera: par ye sab kyu dev'.ye ho kya raha hai [but y all this dev'why is all this happening??]

Dev: ye to main bhi nahin jaanta meera par bro ne bola ki sab jawaab kal mil jaenge'.[even I don't know meera but bro said every answers will be in front of all of us]

Meera: thik hai dev'main aisa karungi'.or tumhe batati rahungi [okay fine dev'will do that and inform u too]

Dev tells maan that meera has agreed to do as he had asked him'..maan was bit relieved''..now he went to geet to look after his condition and he found she was fine'.the medicines she took had made her much more comfortable''he also informed geet that tomorrow he himself will take her to Handa mansion. Here meera went to her mom's room to see her state of mind where she found her talking to someone on phone'..

Pammi: tumhe samaj nahin aata abhi kuch din mera ghar se nikalna impossible hai'..tumhe tumhare kaam ki keemat mil jaegi'.abhi muje pareshan karna band karo'..[you don't understand it is difficult for me to go out of the home for few days'u will be paid very soon'and stop troubling me]

Meera was unable to understand what all was going'she kept listening but she could not understand anything,,,,

Pammi: thik hai kal ek baje'.kali mandir ke peeche ek hamara ghar hai'.waha par milna par haan main zyada der nahin mil paungi'samjhe tum??[ fine meet me tomorrow at 1 pm'.there is a house behind kali temple'come there and I wont be there for much time'did u get that]

Meera came in at that very moment'which scared her mother'.

Pammi(stuttering]: tum yaha [meera u here??]

Meera: vo mom maine socha aapka haal puch lu'.shayad geet di ke jaane ke baad aap kaisa mehsus kar rahi hongi'[I thought to enquie about your health'I thought u might be feeling lonely after geet di]

Pammi: nahin meera hum thik hai'.tum chinta mat karo'.hum jaante hai tumhe apni behen ke jaane ka kafi dukh hai'or tumhari tabiyat bhi thik nahin lag rahi'..aisa karo'tum jakar rest karo' [I am fine meera..u don't bother,,,,,I know u rea really sad because of her sudden demise'..and u don't feel in a good condition too'u go nad take rest]

Meera was unble to understand what all was going on''she went away there and then'

Pammi: kahin meera ne meri baat sun to nahin li'shayad nahin suni hogi'.nahin to mujse poochti zaroor [I hope meera did not hear any convo'if she had'.then she might have questioned me]

Meera immediately called up dev and told him everything''here dev informed maan about Pammi's plan which made maan sure that he will get a clue for sure'..

Next morning'..Pammi was all set to go and meet some people and she told Meera she is going to gurudwara as she wanted god to offer her peace'..meera did not knew but she back followed her''and told everything to maan'maan knew the place so he straightaway went to geet to take her'..

Maan: geet tum ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?? [ geet how are u feeling now??]

Geet: main thik hu aap please muje meri maa ke pass le ke chaliye na'.muje unki chinta ho rahi hai'.[I am fine now'..u please take me to my mother'I am bit worried for her]

Maan: thik hai geet chalo'.[lets go geet'.]

Maan(self-thought) bhagwan jis kaam ke liye main jar ha hu usmi muje apki zarurat hai'..aap please mera saath di jiye ga [god the work I am going for really needs your strength ..u please be with me]

Maan drove the car to the kali temple''.that was the other way for Geet's house but was a long way indeed'..

Geet: ye hum iss raaste se kyu ja rahe hai'..dusre raaste se kyu nahin gaye [why are we going from this way'I mean we dint go from the otherway??]

Maan: vo geet vo raaste muje kuch khaas pasand nahin hai''iss raaste se bhi tumhara ghar aa jaega na'.[geet I don't like that way''.your home will come from this way as well'']

Maan: waise geet iss raaste mein kali mata ka mandir hai agar tum do minute do to kya hum waha ja sakte hai'.[geet kali mandir comes in the way'if u give two minutes we can offer prayers to god]

Geet nodded her head in approval'..they went down and offered prayers'..and while coming back she saw her mother going somewhere behind the Kali temple'..

Geet: ye mom iss waqt idhar'..areey haan bauji bataya karte the iss mandir ke peeche hamari koi jagah hai '.par haan vo thodi akeli se jagah hai pata nahin mom kyu ja rahi hai'. [mom here'..o yes father use to tell tht we have a place somewhere behind kali temple but it was not safe to go alone'.dont know why is she going there]

Maan: tum kaho to hum chal kar dekhe?? [ if u say we can go and have a look]

Geet: thik keh rahe hai'chaliye [you are right 'lets go]

Here meera had asked dev to accompany her and maan was with geet'Meera did not still had any idea that her sister is alive and is fine'..they both were following pammi''here pammi met few people whom she gave some packet...

One men: kya madam kya masterplan tha aapka'apni hi beti ko marwa diya'''[madam'u actually made a masterplan'.and killed you own daughter]

Pammi: chup kar jao'.or khabardaar ye baat dubara muh se nikali to [just keep your mouth shut and dare you say that again]

Pammi: badi hi mushkil se vo sab hua hai jo main chahti thi'.main nahin chahti tum bevkufo ki wajah se main kahi phas jau'..kya nahin kia maine uss property ko paane ke liye'..pehle to mohinder handa se shaadi ki'.uski bachchi geet ko pala'.na chahte hue bhi muje uski maa banna pada'.shukar hai ki muje usko zyada paalna nahin pada or maine usko boarding mein daala'uske baad bahana daal dia ki uski padhai ke liye muje use dur karna pada'.[after so much struggle all that happened as I had thought of'.and I don't want that because of you idiots something wrong happens'.i did a lot to take that property'had to marry mohinder handa'..then had to take care of his daughter''and had to become her mother'.thank god I didn't had to take much care of her'.and sent her to boarding'I had to tell her that to make her career I had done all this'.]

Pammi: baat yahi tak nahi thi'.maine apni khud ki beti bhi use dur rakhi''pata nahin kya jaadoo tha uss ladki mein'har kisi ko apna bana leti thi or meri khud ke beti meri baat nahin sunti thi''.par inn sab mein muje kya mila'..unhone jaate waqt apni property meera or uss geet ke naam kar di''mujse poochna bhi zaruri nahin samjha'..vo to acha hua maine uss din geet or unki baat sun li thi or geet ko baton mein lagakar papers sign karwa liye or vo propert apne naam kara li'.[it did not end here'.i had to stop my own daughter to stay away from her''I don't know what miracle had she done on her'she did all that geet wanted'..and my own daughter didn't listen to me''but in all this what did I got'.nothing''he named all the property on meera's and geet's name'and dint bothered to tell me'.i thank god that I overheard the talk that day between them and made geet fool and got the property papers signed behind my name]


Pammi: par yahi nahin'hume apne peeche gunde lagwaye or chot bhi khani padi'..ye sab kiya ki vo geet hamari zindagi se hamesha ke liye chali jaati'or waise hi hua'..jab police walo na aakar iss baat ki pushti kar di'.tab jaake chain aaya'..or ab vo geet hamari zindagi se hamesha ke liye ja chuki hai'..[ I had to ask goons to follow me'..and I even got hurt muself''I did all this so tha geet moves away from our lives'..and that too happened'.the police confirmation made me feel the best'.and now geet is away from our lives']

Pammi: chalo ab main chalti hu agar muje yaha pe tumhare saath kisi ne dekh lia to musebat ho jaegi'.par haan yaad rakhna ye baat kisi or ko pata nahin honi chahiye ''.iski tumhe maine double keemat bhi di hai''[I think I should leave before someone sees me here''and do remember this thing should not ne known to anyone else'..and I had paid u double to money'..]

She turns back with a winning smile and her all smiles are lost when she sees someone standing behind her and listening to all this''..


Precap: geet's reaction to all this conversation😡😭


Well how was the update friends???.please hit the like button and do comment if u liked the update...it means a lot to me

I will be waiting'.😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


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what a thrilling super dhamakedar update cutie par cliffhanger p chhod diya :(...
but jo bhi ho MSK n his plan rocks!!!!!
full on maza aa gaya...
maan's idea of asking dev to talk to meera was perfect...
n yeah i luved d way u portrayed d awkwardness in dev's heart bout talking to meera...luved their convo...
n m in luv wid meera shes d most aqalmand member of handa family...
plan wala scene was nyc...thnks to goons pammi hired maan ka kaam asaan ho gaya...
maaneet scene was awsome bechari geet jis maa k liye itni pareshan h usi ne use marwane ki koshish ki ye jaan k kitna hurt ho jayegi...i really feel sry for her...
ye pammi kitni duffer h gunde ko chup rehne bol k khud hi saari katha sunane lagi lol...khair uski bhi galti nai h aakhir uparwale ko MSK ka saath to dena hi tha :)...
to finally both meera n geet knows d real face of pammi specially our bholi bhali geet...yaar me eagerly dil thaam k waiting for nxt...
luvya yaar...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb update...geet ko sab pata chal gaya..iam dancing dinka chika dinka chika
aakhir maan is successful in showing geet real face of her kamini mummy pummy😆
thankgod meera helped them warna pata nahi sab kya karthe..geet ab pammi ko apni gift dedena..ek accha sa damakedar TAPPAD!!!!she really deserves it and now me waiting for maaneet's love track...continue soon...
love u and big big hug for such an awesome update🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part..
Finally maan made her realize the truth..
I think meera too listened to the truth..
But i noe geet vl silently give all properties to pammi and go away from their lives..

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