SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 7

GOD..! I loved the twist...

Awesome update...
Thank god the story is not like what i thought...
So their is a curse on veer's family...n only a pure hearted girl can remove it(means only chand can save veer)...
Well how these two different poles of earth were going to meet...
But i don't want to see veer like this...but what to do stories demand...
Beauty n the beast ki bhi kahani kuch aisi hi thi na...god i think so much...
Update soon...
Luv u...:-)

Awesome update

o .. o.. gr8 ud👏

Originally posted by: pranita1202

but wait a sec veer's mom died rite so does the curse have this effect that the hubby is saved but wife dies early or something like that🤔

but if veer will fall 4 chandni ofcourse after a detour, he might reject 2 marry her inorder to save her

you are wonderful writer. hats off to you. i am dying to read the next update. pls send me pm. love you for your creativity. It seems real story now as the way yo described. lov you for that.
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the best. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😉

isse kahte hai...

dHanvi di ka U TURN TWIST...😉

How true yaar!!!
Dhamakedaar twist in the tale...!!!!👏

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
oh my my!! my twist queen!!
the thot of curse din't came in my mind!!
so veer's family having curse!!
and digvijay was hell worried abt tht!
Manohar was eating at 1 at night?
did veer's mom died coz she took curse of his father over her?
and how much womanizer n alcoholic veer is!!
he is clearing lipstick marks n taking alcohol at his father's end time!!
no one can save our angel chand from this devil now!!
as old lady said she will herself get into it!!
waiting for reaction when veer will come to know abt curse!!

Part 4

It was not so easy for Veer to forget everything that his Father did...today his Father has left enough wealth for him that even his seven generations can sit and enjoy...but that was not what Veer wanted...he wanted his Father's some time with him...he cannot even remember last time when his Father laughed with him and shared some nice moments because that happened so less or sometimes never...Veer was thinking while staring at his Father's huge portrait in the hall, he looked at his ancestor's pictures lined up on a huge wall...he pressed his hands firmly on the arm of the revolving chair...he was all alone...even when his Father was there, he never felt like talking to him and sharing any special moment...he closed his eyes as he thought...

there was anger in his eyes...he was angry, he wasn't satisfied...he regretted to be born in the royal family, that everybody wanted him, just because of his wealth...

Manohar looked at his lonely friend and tried to sympathize with him... "Veer..."

Veer did not turn to look at him...nor he stopped moving the chair...he just stared at the pictures on the wall "Manohar...one day my picture will be hanging in this line..."

Manohar felt bad the way Veer was behaving, he knew Veer had been very quiet, he never liked talking much... "Veer...Kaka is waiting...please have your dinner" he said very humbly...

Veer did not even bothered to listen...he was disturbed...something was killing him inside...Manohar thought he must leave Veer for sometime...

He went towards the dinning hall...the room was huge, it had large paintings on all four walls surrounding it...twenty four chairs were lined up nicely against a huge table. Two huge crystal chandeliers were making the room more bright and beautiful. Different dishes lay nicely on the table... Kaka was placing them carefully from the servant when he looked at Manohar's sad face "you look sad?? how come??"

Manohar tried to smile at the old man "Kaka, Veer is not ready to come..." he couldn't meet the old man's eyes as his eyes were moist...he quickly walked out of the room... Kaka was surprised at Manohar's behavior...he had never left food and walked away without eating.

Kaka went towards the hall... "chote sahib...food is ready", Veer closed his eyes for a second and looked at his Kaka...he looked into his eyes... Kaka came closer and placed his hand on his head "everything will be alright" the moment he said Veer grasped his hand in his hands...he didn't say anything...his eyes said everything to Kaka...he knew that Veer loved his Father a lot but he doesn't want to show any feelings... "Chote sahib...please come..." Kaka caressed his head...Veer didn't say anything but simply got up from the chair and walked towards the dinning hall...

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Darjeeling

She simply enjoyed having bath...it was after her dinner that she went for a warm bath...she cleaned her body very nicely and looked at her fair and shiny skin... "how can you look so beautiful" she said while looking at herself in the mirror...she stepped out of the tub and picked up a big white towel to wipe her soft skin...her body, her hair was extremely beautiful...it seemed she had the beauty of entire universe in her, she looked like heavenly damsel as she walked towards the room with a towel around her elegant body...she looked into the mirror and brushed her beautiful silky hair...she liked looking at herself...she opened her wardrobe and took out her silk night dress...

She was reading a book at the same time watching TV when she heard the thunder storm outside...she remembered the old lady's words for a minute but then resumed her reading...

Soon she went to sleep...her beautiful big eyes had peaceful sleep...she was away from any danger but who knows she would soon get involved in the biggest danger that would take away the sleep from her eyes...that would make her hate herself...that would create a havoc in her life forever...

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Mumbai

Kaka opened the cabinet and took out the box...it was heavy and very old...there was a huge lock on it...Kaka looked for its keys that was in Digvijay's private locker...Kaka knew the code of the locker...as soon as he opened the box and saw the black crown...he felt more worried for Veer...the crown looked smooth and shiny...it was indeed black...he picked it up and saw very carefully...it was made up of iron...Kaka was sure that one day Veer will surely meet his angel...he loved Veer like his own Son...his eyes had a frown...a frown that showed he was thinking about Veer's future...suddenly a servant came towards Kaka... "Sir...they are waiting outside"

Kaka "please take care of them...i am coming in a minute" he said to the servant '.he closed the box and kept it back in the cabinet...

He walked towards the hall where Digvijay's lawyer was waiting for him "good morning Kaka sahib...how are you?"

Kaka smiled a little " I am very well Tejwani...have a seat..."

Tejwani took out a huge file... "Kaka Sahib, this is what Mr Digvijay last will says and this is what he wanted... I will read it...

"my whole property, all my movable and immovable assets, the ancestral jewelry goes to my only Son Veer Raichand...but he will only get this property and all the benefits if he fulfills my last wish..." Kaka was a bit surprised now...

Tejwani continued "i have a huge property in Darjeeling, my dream was to make a huge tea estate...but due to some other commitments I was not able to make this possible...i want my Son to built a tea estate in that area. He must successfully complete this task to get the whole property...that is my last and final decision" Tejwani eyes went from the file to Kaka's tensed face

Kaka was shocked and surprised as he knew Veer has never worked in his whole life and building a tea estate was just next to impossible...Tejwani looked at Kaka "so Kaka Sahib...should I wait for Veer to explain this to him or will you be able to pass this important information"

Kaka was very tensed and worried... "you know Tejwani, Veer has never worked in his entire life...he doesn't know what the word responsible means...it will take me some time to convince him"

Tejwani smiled and nodded "i know Kaka Sahib...but I know you very well...only you can make this possible...i am sure once he goes to Darjeeling, his life will change"

Kaka "lets hope for the best Tejwani...i will be in touch with you..." Tejwani walked away making Kaka think of what Digvijay's last condition was...Kaka knew very well that if Veer gets to know about the condition, he may not go ahead to fulfill because Veer was never interested in his Father's property...Kaka knew he had to convince him on a different note...

Manohar was busy planting his rose plant in the garden when Kaka approached him... "Manohar...this is a nice plant..." Manohar was a bit surprised at Kaka who had never appreciated him on anything... Manohar looked at him and gave a broad smile "thank you Kaka...it will grow in four to six weeks..."

Kaka smiled back "i was thinking we should go to some hill station for some time...it will be different for Veer as well..."

Manohar jumped to Kaka's idea... "wow Kaka...that is a brilliant idea...i am so excited...i think we should...i am bored of this city now...we should go somewhere quiet...but can you suggest some place..."

Kaka walked towards him... "i can Manohar but do you think Veer will come with us?"

Manohar thought something "Kaka I can convince him...i know he will never like to go but we can try to convince him...all he needs is his alcohol..." Kaka wasn't so happy "lets see if he can come to Darjeeling...i am thinking to leave as soon as possible...please call Veer and we can talk to him"

Manohar quickly took out his phone and dialed Veer's no...

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Darjeeling

It was a beautiful morning...as usual Chandni wore her jogging suit and and trailed outside the house...she went along the narrow paths...the hills were nestled within higher peaks and the snow-clad himalayan ranges tower over the town in the distance...dense evergreen forests of sal and oak lie around the town...the mornings were always pleasant...as she went along the paths the small shop owners on the side wished her...she looked as beautiful as the morning sun...she left behind her fragrance as she ran across the valley...she was out of breath when she reached the happy valley...she was breathing heavily with both her hands on her waist...she stood and watched the beautiful green valley around her...

Meenakshi had been waiting for Chandni...while she spoke to Mr Guncha...she thought it would be good for Chandni to work with this project as she already knows much about the tea garden now... Meenakshi was hard working and a very responsible Mother...she was happy that Chandni would be working with Mr Guncha...

After some time...

Chandni entered...and went straight to her room...she had to get ready and leave for her college...

Meenakshi looked at Chandni who was eating in a hurry "what's so hurry...you can eat slowly..."

Chandni looked at he Mother "mom I will get late...i have to leave...you know I hate going late..."

Meenakshi smiled... "i have a good news for you...Mr Guncha has asked me if you can assist him in his upcoming project" Chandni looked surprised and happy... "what???? ...really mom"

she was so excited...she came and hugged her Mother... "i know Chandni...this will be your first project...please make sure you follow what he tells you" Chandni was happy and confident "don't worry Mom...he won't regret..."

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Mumbai

Veer was not so happy but it didn't matter to him...whether it was Mumbai or Darjeeling...it was Kaka who suggested him to visit a hill station for a change... "Kaka I am really not bothered to plan...just let me know when you want to go...i will come with you...but please don't give me any plans...i don't want to listen..." he said and went out of the house...Kaka thought it would be good for Veer as he always stays out during nights...at least he will get rid of the girls surrounding him all the time...

Kaka ordered the servants to pack...Manohar was all excited...it wasn't easy to convince Veer but this time Kaka said it was only for few days and did not disclose his actual reason for going to Darjeeling...

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Poor veer had enOugh sadness waiting 4 him to meet chandini