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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

one chapter is finished...

but another shock is waiting for him...

continue soon...

thnx for PM>...

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

Awesome update...

hmm luved the way maan trapped Dia..

plzz continue soon

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midnight_vigil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

awesome story
hoe maan finds geet soon

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sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

amezing but geet kab aayegi pls jaldi geet aur maan ko milda do continue soon

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sdlife19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

was a nice update.. just waiting for maan to get geet back

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OsheenDGr8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Sorry for late comment dear was a bit busy...
Now coming to d update... It was awesome yaar tat Diya surely needed a dose frm MSK, he played it so smart...
Loved it so much...
Update next part soon please me want see Maan Geet together...
Love ya

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Abgina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

my heartfelt thanks to all for showering me with ur love n support...

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Abgina

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanks a ton to u all u guys for bearing wid me... pls press the like button n do comment they are my source of motivation...
Thank u sooo much to all the people who have liked and commented though m not able to reply u all individually i really luv to read each one of your comments...
Guys i've given english translations in black but if u r comfortable pls do read in hindi...
THANK U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!!!

PART 26

With a smirk Maan left devastated Dia to regret her act and cry on her fate...
Maan sat in his car and asked the driver to take him towards KM... He had a contended smile on his face...

MAAN(thinking): Ab meri pari p koi ungli nahin uth sakti... Meri pari ab bejhijhak sab ka samna kar sakti hai... Uska naam to is mamle se clear ho gaya ab bas usko sari baat bata k samjha doonga ki use ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai uske Maan ne sab theek kar diya hai...
[Now no one can point a finger towards my pari... Now she can face everyone without hesitation... Since her name is cleared from all this issue now I'll just go and tell her everything and make her understand that she don't need to think about anything her Maan has already sorted everything for her...]

He took out his phone wishing to hear his jaan's sweet voice when he saw 26 missed calls from home, Annie and Dad...
A sudden panick ran through him while he dialled Pratham's number...

MAAN(thinking): Oh god! How can I put my phone on silent and forget about it???? Kya hua hoga???[What must have happened????]

Pratham recieved the phone in a single ring...

MAAN: Dad kya hua???? Tell me Geet is alright please dad...
Pratham: Maan Geet ne wo news dekh li aur wo ghar chhod ke chali gayi hai...
[Maan Geet saw that news and she has went away...]

He felt a sudden emptiness coursing through his soul... The thought of his Geet his jaan leaving him tore him...

MAAN: Par dad maine mom se kaha tha uska dhyan rakhne ko phir usne kaise???
[But dad i asked mom to take care of her then how did she???]
Pratham: Beta jo hona tha wo to ho gaya... Maine ACP sahab se baat ki hai poori force un dono ko dhoondhne mein lagi hai... Bhagwan ne chaha to wo jald mil jayenge...
[Son the destined has already happened so no point talking about it... I've talked to ACP and the whole police force is trying to find both of them... They will soon be found if God's will is with us...]
MAAN: Dono???? Doosra kaun dad?????
[Both??? Whose the other one dad???]
Pratham: Vicky beta... I think she succeeded in escaping with his help only... And he has quiet well planned her escape... They have left their mobiles at home and Vicky's car has also been found but no trace of Vicky and Geet till now... Beta you come home first then we will see what can be done...
MAAN: No dad I'm going to police station I want to keep an eye on the search proceedings myself...
Pratham: Ok beta as you wish but beta please be patient... I think she just panicked seeing that news and took the decision of running away... Police will soon find them...
MAAN: I know dad I know my Geet that is why I didn't want her to see that news till everything is sorted out but I guess I should have been faster in sorting everything out...

Every passing moment was getting heavier for Maan with emptiness engulfing his crushed soul... The remorse of not being there with Geet was eating him up...

Pratham: Its not your fault beta these things needs time to get sorted out...
MAAN: Dad I'll talk to you later... I don't feel like talking right now...
Pratham: I understand beta but please take care and she'll be back with you soon just have patience...
MAAN: Yeah dad... Bye!

He kept the phone and tears brimmed his eyes... His heavy soul not able to bear the feel of emptiness and pain within took out its distress in form of those pearls that escaped his eyes...
Not having his jaan by his side pulverised him completely... The vaccum heart that lost its reason to beat was just waiting for one lead informing where its owner is...
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Geet slowly gained her consciousness after an hour and half... Everything that happened since morning flashed back in her mind...
Tears left her eyes recollecting the way her masiha was being protective of her every move in the morning... Her whole body felt hollow with the thought of not seeing him anymore... As the feel of emptiness touched her soul fresh set of tears left her eyes... She kept her hand on her abdomen...

GEET(thinking): Baby pata nahin hum apke papa k bagair kaise rahenge par meri wajah se apke papa dada dadi pe koi ungli uthaye ye apki mumma kaise bardasht kar sakti hain, haina???
Baby ap apni mumma ko samjhoge na???? Main janti hoon koi mujhe kuch nahin kehta aur sab mera vishwas karte par baby logon ka mun kaise band kar sakte hain abhi to ye koi nahin janta ki main Geet Khurana hoon par agar unhein pata chala to wo apke papa ki beizzati karenge aur main ye kabhi bardasht nahin kar sakti isliye hamara wahan se aa jana hi achcha tha...
[Baby i don't know how we will survive without your papa but some one point a finger at your papa dada dadi due to your mumma is not tolerable for her...you understand right???
Baby you'll understand your mumma right??? I know that everyone will believe me but how will we shut up others... For now no one knows I'm Geet Khurana but once they will know they will insult your papa and I can't tolerate it that is why it was better for everyone that we left from KM...]

Her baby her Maan's souvenir was the only one that was filling the hollow that leaving her Maan has created in her soul...
Car's sudden jerk broke her trance...
She looked around trying to get where they were going and she realized they on the route to Hoshiyarpur...

GEET: Vicky ye to Hoshiyarpur ka rasta hai hum idhar kyun ja rahe hain????
[Vicky why are we on the way to Hoshiyarpur???]
Vicky(thinking): Ab ise kya boloon hum Hoshiyarpur kyun ja rahe hain???
[Now what should I tell her why are we going to Hoshiyarpur???]

She poked his shoulder to get her answer...

Vicky: Haan Geet wahan Meera ke paas chalte hain na aur hum kahan jayenge tum hi batao...
[Yeah Geet lets go to Meera's place where else should we go tell me...]
GEET: Par Vicky hum Meera ke paas gaye to gharwale humein fauran dhoondh lenge... Its an easy guess na...
[But Vicky going Meera's place is quiet an easy guess for everyone and then they will find us easily...]

Vicky: Yehi to baat hai na Geet agar kisi ke dimag mein ye baat aayi bhi to wo very obvious soch ke shrug off kar dega...
[Yeah you are right that is why if this idea comes to someone's mind they will think its very obvious and shrug it off...]

GEET: Haan ye bhi sahi hai Vicky Meera hogi to mujhe bhi sahara hoga...
[You are right Vicky and if Meera will be there I'll also feel better...]

Vicky's concentration was back on his driving while Geet was left with her pained soul...

GEET(thinking): Hey Babaji ye kya ho gaya???? Apne aisa kyun kiya Babaji???? Jis Maan ke qareeb rehne ke bahane kabhi mere paas khatam nahin hote the aaj unheen se mujhe bhagna pad raha hai... Is chahat ko poora nahin karna tha to apne humein iska ehsaas hi kyun karaya Babaji????
[Hey Babaji what has happened??? Why all this happened Babaji?? I was never out of excuses to be near Maan and now I'm myself running away from my Maan... Why did you made us realise when you never wanted to fulfil our chahat??]

She felt choked with tears that were nowhere near stopping... Just wishing for some magic that will take her back to her Maan but she knew its real life and pain is part of it... One thing her mind has concluded was happiness is something that is not meant for her...
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Maan reached police station and asked for the progress in his wife's search...

MAAN: What!! You've been searching for them just in Delhi??? Its been hours they left... You really think they'll be staying in Delhi for you to hunt them out... Inform in all the police chowki's of nearby towns and villages and send the pictures immediately...
Police was instantly back in action calling in all near by areas and sending pictures through fax...
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They were about to enter Hoshiyarpur...

GEET: Vicky tu mujhe gurudware chhod de aur Meera ko wahin le aana...
[Vicky leave me at gurudware and bring Meera there only...]

Vicky: Par kyun Geet tum thak gayi hogi Meera ke ghar par tum aaram kar sakti ho...
[But why Geet you must be tired you can take rest at Meera's place...]

GEET: Nahin Vicky wahan uncle aunty honge us news ke baad main kisi ka saamna nahin karna chahti...
[No Vicky uncle aunty will also be there and after that news I don't want to face anyone...]

Vicky: Par Geet gurudwara to sheher se bahar hai mujhe Meera ke ghar tak aane jane mein 2ghante lag jayenge...
[But Geet gurudwara is on the outskirts it will take me 2hours to go and get back...]

GEET: Vicky tu fikar mat kar tu ja Babaji hain na mere saath...
[Vicky you don't worry and go Babaji is there with me...]

Vicky was not satisfied with her plan but on Geet's insistence he left her in gurudwara and went to pick Meera from her place but what was unnoticed by both was someone watching them keenly...

The person watching them was Brij's goon friend Maninder...

Maninder: Raka ye to Geet hai na??? Wohi jiske karan Brij bhai jail mein hain???
[Raka she is Geet right??? The girl because of whom Brij bhai is in jail???]

Raka: Haan sarkar ye wohi ladki hai...
[Yeah boss shes the same girl...]

Maninder: Ab isne Hoshiyarpur mein kadam rakha hai to ise sabaq to sikhana padega par pehle Brij bhai se baat karni hogi... Dekh Hoshiyarpur zila jail tak aane jane mein dhai ghante(2n half hrs) lag jane hain tab tak tu ispe nazar rakhna... Samjha!!!
[We have to teach her a lesson since she has landed in Hoshiyarpur but we need to know Brij bhai's opinion... See it'll take me 2 n half hours to go and come from Hoshiyarpur district jail so you keep an eye on her till then...]

Raka: Ji sarkar...[Yes boss...]

So Raka kept his eyes on Geet while Maninder left for jail...
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Jailer of Hoshiyarpur district jail was waiting for a prisoner who had to arrive from Sonepat... It was long he should have arrived but he didn't so he decided to call...

Head constable: Sonepat chowki...
Jailer: Main Hoshiyarpur district jail ka jailer bol riya hoon... Kya hua aaj ek qaidi aane wala tha kahan reh gaya????
[I'm jailer of Hoshiyarpur district jail... A prisoner was to arrive today what happened????]

Head constable: Nikal chuka hai sir... Ye bare logon ke chakkar mein asal kaam phans jata hai... Apko bhi bata deta hoon Khurana sahab ki bahu Geet Khurana ghar chhod ke bhaag gayi hai agar apko kuch bhi pata chale to Delhi police headquarter mein call kar dijiyega...
[He has left sir... These high class people due to them our real work suffers... I'll tell you also Mr. Khurana's daughter in law Geet Khurana has left her home if you get any information about her inform Delhi police headquarters immediately...]

Jailer: Humein kya pata chalnaa hai ye koi chowki thodi na hai... Khair chalo mujhe qaidi ke bare mein janna tha bas dhanyavad...
[This is not some chowki that we will get any information... Anyways i had to know about the prisoner thank you]

Their call ended...
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Vicky's car broke down on its way to Meera's house...

Vicky(thinking): Oh no ab kya karoon??? Kya karega Vicky mechanic dhoondh aur kya...
[Oh no what should I do now???? What will you do find mechanic what else????]
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Maninder reached jail and seeked permission to meet Brij...
While the jailer was going back after letting him to Brij's cell he heard Geet's name and stopped in his tracks... He further got to know her location and left from there...

Jailer immediately called Delhi police headquarters...
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The craving lonely heart of Maan finally knew where its owner was... He immediately left for Hoshiyarpur driving as fast as possible... Knowing his Geet was in Hoshiyarpur scared Maan to death... He knew Geet will land in something dangerous and he had to reach her before that... His heart was throbbing in fear while he was driving madly...
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Maninder seeked Brij's permission to kill Geet and left for his prey immediately...
He arrived near gurudwara where Raka informed him Geet was and met Raka...

Raka: Sarkar ladki to andar hai ab kya karein????
[Boss what will we do the girl is inside????]

Maninder: Kisi tarah use bahar nikalne ka intezam karna padega...
[We will have to do something so that she comes out...]

After sometime a lady tapped a soulless looking Geet on her shoulder...

Lady: Tussi Geet ho???[Are you Geet??]
GEET: Ji (confused)!!
Lady: Oji ek munda apko bahar bula raha hai...
[A guy is calling you outside...]

Geet found it strange but still she thought maybe Meera can't come inside so they asked this lady to call her outside otherwise how this lady will know her name... So she left outside...
While Geet was trying to find Meera and Vicky someone closed her mouth with palm and dragged her from there... Her slippers tore due to dragging n a glass piece pierced her feet...
A trail of blood was formed...

They tied her to a tree inside a nearby jungle...
Geet recognised Maninder...

GEET: Maninder bhaiya please mujhe chhod dijiye maine kya kiya hai????
[Maninder bhaiya please leave me what have I done???]

Maninder: Ye tu pooch rahi hai tune kya kiya hai??? Hamare Brij bhai jail mein hain iska karan tu hai samjhi aur aaj main tujhe nahin chhodoonga...
[You are asking what have you done??? Its because of you our Brij bhai is in jail and I won't leave you today...]
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Here after reaching gurudwara Maan was trying to find his Geet when he noticed the trail of blood and followed it...

Here Maninder was about slash Geet with sword when his head was hit by a big stone and he instantly fell unconscious on the ground... Raka ran to hold his boss while Maan ran to his jaan his pari his Geet...
The moment Maninder was to slash her 'Maan' escaped from her lips and remorse of not being able to save their unborn child ran through her but her Maan proved to be her masiha again... He did not fail to be her saviour even when it was impossible for him to be there for her...

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Edited by crazydevil87 - 14 years ago

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ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#569

I am first…I am first….yipee!!!!!!

ok now after the dance…..

loved the update totally…..

You described both Maan's and Geet's love, pain and point of view brilliantly

They so want to be together.

I also loved the way Maan understtod Geet and her reason for going away. There was no accusation, no complai just acceptance and need to find her.

Vicky is really stupid….I hope he finds the truth soon and feels sorry for all the mess he has created.

One more thing I have to mention. Today's chapter brought back those memories of that super duper episode, where Maan saves her after Rasika's case. Haye…mar jawaan…muaahhh