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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice... Would like to see a jealous maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yar dekho jst 3 mre lyks left...plz thoda compensatn to chalta haina yar...
PLZ PLZ PLZ NW GIV D UPDATE!
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Posted: 13 years ago

KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
PART- 17


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He jerked her away, not believing his own words.

Geet- Maan's Soliloquy


Did I really said that?

Yes, he said it.


No, I did'nt. I don't believe it.

I knew it. I am his wife n he do feels something for me


How could I? What is happening to me?

For the first time he conveyed his feelings


That was a weak moment. Yes, just a weak moment.

It was the best moment. Yes, my life's best moment.


End Soliloquy

Though Geet was numb by his proximity but how could she not register his very first confession. Her eyes became misty but this time with happiness, sheer happiness. What else she could ask for 1st a gift from him n then his acknowledgement.

We are getting late. Maan said still shocked n confused by his actions.

Geet looked at him. He was standing with his back towards her. Closing her eyes for a brief moment she decided not to make a fuss about the dress. It was a gift from him n she would respect his choice.


They entered the grand party hall n Geet gown sparkled complimenting the dark, black n red decor.

Everyone was dazzled seeing the new girl with MSK least they knew that she was not another girl but his permanent wife.

All knew about his obsession for girls n also that he chose best amongst the lot but this one was different she looked innocent yet breathtaking. Moreover they never saw her before in any other gathering.

The little confidence Geet had gathered earlier went in drain when she saw that everyone was eyeing her. But suddenly Maan's warm touch made her feel relieved as he slipped his arm around her.

He walked through the crowd n was proud as he knew that the most beautiful girl was beside him.

But his heart burned when he saw everyone's gaze on Geet. How dare they eyeing his girl?? He held her waist telling others that she was 'his'.

For her, his gesture was an assurance that she was not alone while for him a way to show his claim on his wife.

No one could have imagined that he himself once called her filth, middle class dirt. May be Maan himself forgot that because these adjectives were no where in his mind when he sees her now.


Sharmas came to them.

Hello Mr. Khurana. Mr. Sharma said extending his hand.

Hello Mr. Sharma. Maan shook hands with him.

Hey! Maan Said Apeksha, Sharma's daughter, fluttering her eyelashes, idiotically.

I would prefer Mr. Khurana. Said Maan not in a mood to incourage flirting.

Apeksha was taken aback. She did'nt knew him personally but he was famous as a casanova. Then why this behaviour? She assumed Geet to be the reason.

Maan turned towards Geet when he felt a light tug as Geet grabbed his hand. He found Mrs. Sharma looking at Geet suspiciously.

Meet Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana. He stated answering her unasked question.

As soon as the words escaped his mouth camaras started flashing to capture the breaking news. Everyone was flabbergasted that how n when he got married.

Sharmas excused themselves n just then Shaan joined them.

Woah... I did'nt knew my bhabhi is this hawt.

Any other man at Shaan's place would have been strangled to death by now. But why??

What is this feeling??
Why can't stand anyone one else seeing her, praising her??
Why I feel like cocooning her in my arms, saving her from the whole world??


He was not able to contemplate his own thoughts. He was annoyed n was now regretting this gown thing.

Maan Singh Khurana n regretting his decision, again because of this girl. He thought to himself n freeing his hand from her grip went away.




CONTINUED BELOW...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONTINUED...!!



She felt bad that Maan left her. Par wo hamesha tere saath toh nai reh sakte na. She reasoned n felt a bit at ease as Shaan was with her. She looked around n OMG!! Other girls were far more scantily dressed than her.

Agar mai saree me aati toh kitna ajeeb lagta. She thought n thanked Maan in her mind although she was not comfortable in that gown but it did'nt matter.

Apeksha saw Maan alone n went to him. Sitting beside him, she started talking on the pretext of business. His support would prove a boost for her career n so she tried her best to woo him.

Mai abhi aaya bhabhi. Saying so Shaan walked to his friend. Now Geet was standing alone.

She saw Adi n knew that he worked for Maan as he visited KM many times.

Adi sir. She called him.

Heheee...Ma'am Why are you calling me sir?

Call me Geet. Geet told. Waise Adi sir uss old age home ka kya hua?? She asked hesitantly thinking if she was interfering unnecessarily.

Oh! That old age home. Well the old people were not ready to leave it but when Maan sir wants something no one can stop him. The old people had to leave atlast n now we are preparing to demolish the building.


He continued talking but Geet did'nt had it in her to hear more. Her hope shattered into million pieces. Was she expecting too much? She did what he said, then why he did'nt listened to her?

Her eyes searched for him desperately n she caught him sitting on sofa n Apeksha leaning over him, showing something on phone.

That was it. Her eyes burned with tears. It was proved that her expectations were too high. May be she was not worth him. He deserved someone better.

She decided to leave, this was not the place where she belonged. His world was his n no matter how much she tries she could never be a part of it. She could never be part of him.


We can't be together in a single view
Because I am not worthy of you
I feel so small because I can't give anything rather than love to you
I cry as this failure is sharper than the knife
All I can give you is just love
but I am afraid that this love would'nt make you satisfied
So I cry, can't stop thinking about you
Still can't tell you how much I love you
Now I am running away n its all because
I am not worthy of you.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Awsome update Osheen 😃

Whaoo maan jealous 😆😆
I really want geet to leave him so he can understand her importance 😉
Pleasee updatee the next part soon 😊
I seriously keep on fantasizing what would happen in the next update 😆
Peasee jaldi jaldi update karna 😭
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum part dear
superb
loved it so much dear
so she wann to leave
and here msk is J dear
great
waiitng for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear just lovely and awesome update...really love my cute,jealousy maan
cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part dear...

loved it...

poor geet😭...uff ye maan...

continue soon dear...abhi se me waiting for next part😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update dear...awesome
Maan unwantedly and unkningly is changing but I guess Geet needs a reason to balance her goodness with some thinking on hot to start this marriage and handle Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8...
maan feelg j nd geet 2😉😆
omg i lv dis ff yaar...😳


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