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awesome updates yaar...loved it...
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Wow... A beautiful update
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Geet seducing Maan. Lovely.
Maan losing all his senses.

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
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Hey Gals ! going to update next part in an hour... Get ready wid ur comments...
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Part 45:

"Maan its about Dev" she said slowly fearing his temper nd as expected Maan's jaws tightened on the mention of Dev's name. he instantly gets up from bed nd turned to leave wen Geet hold his hands stopping him to leave

"Maan please atleast listen to me once." she said while holding his wrst nd Maan just stopped indicating her to continue further. Geet looked at him for a while nd den continues

"Maan Dev was not at fault behind Annie's Kidnapping. He did not know that the person from whom he's taking loan is a local gangster. Nayantara had introduced him to Dev as one of the investors nd it was Nayantara's hands only behind Annie's kidnapping. Dev didn't have the slightest idea about what Nayantara was planning" Geet revealed the fact in front of Maan he just sttod over dere shocked.

Nayantara was behind the kidnapping of Annie. But y did she did that? Wat harm Annie had caused to her? nd how did Geet came to know about it? Did Dev told her all dis? aal dese questions were running in his mind as he looked at Geet expectantly in order to seek his answers.

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"what are you saying Geet? Nayantara was behind all this? But why did she do that? What harm my Annie had caused to her nd how come u know all this? Tell me Geet." Maan asked impatiently while holding her by her shoulders

"Maan Annie told me all dis. she had listened our conversation wen we were at Gym nd she don't want any rift between us so she told me the thing that she's been hiding from all dese years" She told nd Maan looked at her more confusingly

"What are you trying to say Geet. tell me clearly" he said not understanding the head nd tail of what she was trying to say.

"Maan, as I told you before Dev didn't know that from the person he's taking loan is a Local Gangster. Nayantara had introduced him to Dev as one of the investors nd wen Dev's business failed den that Person started demanding money from Nayantara. One day Annie listened to her conversation with that Man on phone nd wen she has gone to meet that person annie followe her too. U were too much tensed due to KC's fall down derefore Annie didn't told you anything. After reaching the spot Annie listened that that Gangster ois planning to murder Dev if she didn't payback his money on tym to which NT said that she didn't care about whatever he do with Dev nd Annie just gasped in horror nd that grabbed their Attention towards her. To avoid getting exposed in front of you nd Dev NT had made Annie kidnapped by him nd that gangster too get chance to recover his money from you all. Wen Armaan came to know where Annie is through some of his sources he reached over dere without wasting a minute nd Luckily he reached on tym as dey were forcing demselves on her. Annie couldn't tell you or anyone else all dis because she was in trauma for months nd wen She recovered Dev nd Nayantara had already left the house nd wen she tried to talk to you about Dev you were not ready to listen anything regarding him. den after reaching to Canada she somehow managed to tell Dev everything nd he was hell shocked. but he knows dat annie cant lie about all dis so after collecting enough proofs Dev had made NT arrested nd also given her divorce. Maan, NT is in jail right now nd Dev is living his lyf all alone from past 1 nd a half years. He didn't tell you all dis because he knew that how muich you are hating his mere sight nd thinks that he deserves it to stay away from his family for commiting a mistake named Nayantara.

Maan he was not even ready to come over here even of my continuously pestering him to comeover here atleast once. Maan I had given up all my hopes but it seems that God wants something else as wen Annie come to know about our wedding then she had brought Dev over here even after his lots of reluctance. Maan Annie told me all dis after our heating conversation at the gym. She thought that u'll forgive Dev nd dis matter will never come up but wen she saw a rift creating between us den she had come forward nd tell me all dis." Geet said nd looked at Maan who went thoughtful trying to absorb whatever Geet was telling. Seeing Maan not uttering a word Geet continued further

"Maan I m not saying that Dev is all innocent. I know he did a mistake by cuming in NT's influence but Maan u only Think which brother will want his sister to land up in such situation knowingly. Maan Annie is Dev's sister too nd he had not Love her les den you. U think he'll support NT in all dis if he would have slightest idea about what NT was planning? Maan Annie had Forgiven Dev long back because she knows that Dev was not completely at fault. Maan just leave all your grudges nd forgive him. he needs us Maan. he has been alone all dese years nd now he needs the support of his family, he needs support of us. Just forgive him Maan nd include him in our family." Geet said while placing her hand on his cheek making him look at her.

Maan look into her eyes only to find hope in it that he will forgive Dev. He was blessed for having a girl like Geet in his lyf who had never considered her family less den hers. Who was here trying to Prove Dev innocent in his eyes. but he was still not come up in the decision of Forgiving Dev. He knows that Geet is expecting him to forgive Dev but he just cant forget all the things by just a blink of eye. He needs tym to think about all dis, to make sure that everything is all fine now den only he can forgive him.

"Maan" Geet called out soft;y to gain his attention nd Maan turned to look at her

"Geet I believe on whatever u said but Geet I m just not able to Forgive him." he said helplessly

"Even after hearing whatever I said" Geet looked at him questioningly

"Mishty, I said it before also that I believe on each nd every Word u uttered but Geet just think from my P.O.V. its not easy for me to forget everything so easily. I told you before also for once I can forget wat loss KC has faced due to Dev buit I can never forgive Annie's traumatic condition nd though indirectly Dev is responsible for it. had he not so much adamnant in marrying Nt den all dis can be avoided. Annie may forgive him because she loves me nd Dev a lot but I cant forgive him so easily. I need tym." Maan said wid a tone of finality nd Geet knows that its useless to argue further yet she tries one last tym.

"But Maan..." She tried to protes wen Maan interrupted her yet again.

"Geet had u forgive Vridant for wat he had done?" Maan said out of blue nd Geet frowned on his sudden question.

"now from where Vridant came in the discussion? He had no connection wid dis conversation?" She asked looking at him confusingly even Maan knows that he don't have to bring Vridant in the conversation knowing how terribly Geet fell hurted reminding wat he did to her but he just blurted it out in order to prove his point nd by the tym he realize its too late.

"Maan I am asking you something?" Geet said yet again to know the reason of his sudden question

"Geet Vridant too had committed the same mistake that Dev had committed."

"Maan dere's a big difference between wat Vridant had done nd wat Dev had done. u cant compare both of dem" Geet retorted back.

"not really Geet. Just like Dev Vridant too came in the influence of the person he loved nd Geet now he's realizing his mistake also. ok I knw that he did try to play dirty wen he realizes ur value but Geet if that day he wont tell me wat actually the truth was den dat misunderstanding would always be between us. Just like Dev Vridant too needs his best friend, his kaddu because he's too spending a lonely lyf." Maan reasoned himself nd dis tym Geet went thoughtful.

"Geet I knw its hard for you to forgive him but atleast think of it." he said seeing no reaction from him.

"Watever Maan, I cant forget everything so easily." She said after lots of thinking

"in the same way Geet I too cant forget everything so easily."

"But Maan..."

"Geet I'll forgive Dev the day u'll forgive Vridant." Maan said sternly. He knows that Geet wont forgive Vridant so easily nd it'll give him enough time to contemplate on everything. Apart from dis he himself want Geet to give a chance to Vridant's friendship as he knows wat dis friendship was meant to both of dem.

"Maan that's really not making any sense." Geet said irritatingly

"I don't know Geet. but that's my condition." Maan said stubbornly.

"Maan..." she tried to protest only to be interrupted by him

"Geet pls now no more discussion nd I don't want u to hurry u can take your own tym for contemplating everything nd I promise you Geet that I wont be harsh on Dev by the tym he'll be here. I'll treat him as the other family member of dis house but don't exect me to forgive him so easily pls." Maan said wid the tone of finality nd Geet understands him. she knows that Maan will not brong out Vridant issue like dis without any reason. He too wants to see her happy like she wants nd as for now dey both need sometym to consider each nd every fact nd as for now its good if dey don't ruin dere blissful moments on being so much stubborn in their views

"ok Maan I'll consider about forgiving Vridant only if you consider forgiving Dev."

"As you say Mishty. I'll do whatever you say. Nd as for now lets compensate for the tym dat we had spend in arguing wid each other." he said in order to divert her mind from all the tensions.

And before Geet could understand anything he pulled her in a deep nd passionate kiss nd unknown to herself Geet too started responding him back. after wat seems like eternity dey broke apart to take breath.

"Geet I am sorry for the way I behaved wid u in the morning. I just carried away in frustration nd anger." Maan said while touching his forehead wid hers panting heavily.

"u don't have to clarify anything Maan. I understand in wat situation u were in" Geet told him assuringly.

"Promise me one thing Geet dat no matter how much we face the tensions around us for any matter we'll never spoil our blissful relationship in the amidst of dese."

"I Promise Maan no matter wat happens but our relationship will not be the prey of all dat." She said nd hugged him tight assuring him for each nd every word she said.

"BTW Geet, I really like the trailor of the film dat u showed me few minutes back now I cant wait to watch full film." He said naughtily in his baritone voice making Geet blush hard nd he just hids her face more to his chest.

Maan smiles sensing her blushing nd held her closer in his arms which was his only solace. Both remained in each other arms silently promising that dey'll never let anything to disturb the blissful relationship dey share.

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2 days went by nd guests had started gathering as the marriage is just 5 days ago. Vansh nd Vindhya were supposed to arrive next day nd so dis Gee's friends from Amritsar. Armaan had very well arranged for guests accommodation. Even Dev was participating in all the activities. Though Maan had still not forgiven him yet but he makes sure that he doesn't behaves rude wid him. so to avoid it he decided to maintain a safe distance wid him until he comes up in any decision. Dev too dodnt want to trouble Maan due to his presence wen he was entering in another stage of his happy lyf so he too avoid cuming in front of him.

It was one fine day nd all Armaan, Maan, Dev, Adi nd other male members of dere friends nd family were gathered in Maan's study nd it seems that dey were discussing on some serious matter. All the female members were strictly prohibited to disturb dem by the tym dey all will be in study which makes each one of dem curious especially Annie who had no idea wat her favourite brothers are discussing.

"Armaan just think about it once again" Maan said still not convienced by his Idea.

"O C'mon Dude! Stop being a spoilt sport. I mean its our right yaar. Wat say guys" Armaan said while beckoning others nd everyone agreed to wat he says.

"I am not being a spoilt sport but Bachelor Party that too without telling anyone is not a gud option." Maan tried to reason himself.

"o God! Wen I m saying that we'll not tell anyone. We'll tell but only half truth. We'll just say that we all are going for partying dats it. wats the use of telling everything to girls." Armaan said as a matter of fact.

"but wat if dey come to know by any other means." Maan said in a doubt.

"no one will cum to know anything. Until and unless u wont tell anything to Geet." Maan said while eyeing him mischeviously

"Wat do you mean I cant keep a secret from Geet." he said while narrowing his eyes.

"Well I haven't said that but if u want to admit it den I don't have any problem."

"its nothing like dat ok. I can keep a secret form her. nd we all are going for a bachelor Party by just telling half truth to everyone. MSK never gets scared from anything." Maan said with his full MSK attitude nd Armaan laughed inwardly at his victory.

"Great so 8 PM at xyz club. Ok." Armaan said nd everyone gives dere approval nd started getting dispersed from dere to get ready.

But unknown to all of dem someone had witnessed theor so called plan. It was annie who had listened to their conversations nd nw her mischivious mind is preparing a devious plan to gate crash dere party but she cant do it alone she needs someone's company nd who would be better den Shilpa nd Geet. she thought nd smiled naughtily nd headed to meet Geet nd Shilpa.

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"Wat???????" both Shilpa nd Geet said in unison while others just gaping at annie.

"yes its true Armaan Bhai, Dev Bhai, Maan Bhai, Adi nd all other boys are going for Bachelor Party." Annie said while sitting comfortably at couch.

"But Annie wats harm in that. I mean dey had already told us that dey all are partying before marriage." Geet said don't know whom is she conviencing.

"Bhabhi dere's no harm in partying but did they told you wat all dey are going to do over dere? dey had just told you the half truth." Annie said nd everyone knotted dere brows in confusion.

"Half Truth?" Shilpa said confusingly.

"yup. Nd the full truth is that along with partying dey all were booze nd their will be a girl's item number nd not to mention the girl will be indeed hot nd Sexy!!!!!" Annie said while giving stress on last two words.

"No Annie dis cant be true. Maan cant hide such thing from me." Geet said still not believing her.

"Bhabhi mujhpe vishwas nahi hai aapko, Main jhooth bolungi aapse." Annie said all innocently nd Geet realizes that she's saying true. [Bhabhi u don't believe me, will I say lie to you]

"Hawww wen I asked Maan he just told me dat dere will be only guys nd dey were just drink a bot nd will play pool he haven't told me about dis girl thing." Geet said while pouting

"Ab Bhabhi Bachelor Party hain to girl's item number to waha hoga hi. or elae wats the use of bachelor Party?" Annie said innocently only to enrage Geet further. [Ab Bhabhi since it is bachelor party then obviously dere would be Girl's item number]

"So cant he tell me all dis?"

"As if u'll allow him if he told you dis? BTW Bhabhi u know wat I heard that the girls which use to come in dese parties are hell bent in gaining guys attention nd guys wanted to touch dem in anyway but decent" Annie added while adding more fule in the fire.

"Nahi nahi My Armaan is not like that." Shilpa said all of a sudden after listening to Annie.

"Armaan Bhai? Do you know he's the master mind behind all dis. everything is arranged by him only including that item girl too." Annie said while giving Shilpa another shock.

"Wat? You are saying the truth Annie?" Shilpa asked in hope that it wont be true.

"unfortunately yes."

"Fine dese guys think that dey all are very smart now its tym to clear dis misunderstanding of dem." Geet said finally standing up from couch.

"Wat do you mean Di?" Shilpa said suspectingly.

"I mean lets Gate Crash dere parties nd tell dem that its not easy to hide the things from us." Geet said nd Annie smiled inwardly on the success of her plan.

"Rite Bhabhi. I am wid you. We'll teach dem a good lesson" Annie said while joining hands wid her

"even I m wid you Di" Shilpa added nd everyone nodded in the room.

Annie did a victory dance mentally imagining the condition of her brothers wen dey will see the girls over dere. "Oh it'll be so much fun" she thought as she tried to suppress her evil laugh from the girls.

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Here at the club everyone is busy enjoying demselves while Maan was just sitting at the corner at bar sipping his drink. He didn't want to hide it from Geet about the item girl's performance but Armaan had challenged him to keep it as a secret from Geet nd MSK never backs out from any challenge. Yet he don't feel like hiding it from her.

but he also knows the nature of his Possesive sherni. If she got the slightest idea of wat the boys have planned den she'll not hesitate in coming here nd strangle that poor girl's hair so its better if she don't know anything. Nd anyways its good if we hides something from our Love, he thought. But den the thought of Geet had made him forget all his other thoughts so he decided that he'll tell Geet everything after the party. He was lost in dese thoughts wen Armaan came nd sits beside him.

"hey Dude! Its ur Bachelor Party nd u urself is sitting over here at the corner, not fair." He said while ordering a drink for himself.

"stop it Armaan. U knw I dnt like partying nd all." Maan replied while sipping his drink.

"o yeah den let me remind you the MSK who had arranged best Party for his would be wife's B'day then whats wrong wid him in own Bachelor Party dude."

"that was a different Thing Armaan nd dis is different."

"C'mon yaar Maan. after 5 days u'll be no more the most eligible bachelor of town so a party is must to celebrate these last days of ur Bachlerhood." Armaan said nd winked while Maan just rolled over his eyes.

"Ya but if you are getting afraid from Geet den its different thing." Armaan said intentionally nd dat did it. the facial expression of Maan's face told Armaan that now Maan wont back out from Partying

"Armaan, MSK don't get scared from anyone. I was not partying till now because I don't feel like but u know what after having a couple of Drink new energy rejuvenated in me so I am in for it." Maan said in full MSK attitude nd Armaan smirks seeing the success of his plan.

"Great that's like a Great MSK. U don't know dude what ur best friend has planned for you tonight. U are definitely gonna enjoy it." Armaan said while patting Maan's shoulders nd Maan knotted his brows in confusion.

Armaan just winked at him nd den signalled someone nd lights of the hall went dim nd everyone's gaze including Maan shifted to the middle of stage to see the object of attraction who is all set to take everyone's breath away

ok so dis is it guys! hope u all are going to like dis Part... Pls hit the like button if u all like it nd please please please leave ur Comment/Criticism.

nd also an important note... i am going to finish dis FF in next 6 parts or may be 7 because i dont want to drag it much because already i am feeling that i had dragged it much so finally this journey is cuming to an end nd derefore its my humble request to you all dat pls pls pls Do hit the like button nd Leave ur comment/criticism...

next update will be after 30 pages of comment nd guys i am serious dnt take it lightly... so sooner i'll get my 30 pages of comments sooner u'll get ur update...

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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
an awesome update...the understanding bet maneet is amazing...
Edited by aarthiash - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum part..
Maan said a valid point..
Its not easy for maan to forgive dev so easily..
If he hav been careful he should have avoided all dese problems..
Now bachelor party..dat too hiding from girls..!!!
That will be pretty interesting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice please update soon. cant wait for the update.
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loved it...naughty Annie..Boys r for rude shock
btw the intial part was very good. i hope they both forgive and move on
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...omg...maan n bachelor party n with dat geet n girls team gate crashing into d party...

its really awesome...

dis annie is sooo naughty n she just put ghee in d fire...heel bent to spoil d bachelor party...m just enjoying it tooo much...

i liked d way geet n maan both make demselves think abt d situation dey both r in...regarding vridant n dev...dey both r true to deir situation...n dey r handling dem successfully...

but m waiting fr deir gate crash in d bachelor party n d reaction of d boys caught in deir axn...maaja ajayega...he he he...

i really loved it a lot...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 45
awesome...
cant wait for the girls to gate crash the party...
cont soon...

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