||ABHIYA FF||- *DEAD HEART*completed Pg.162 - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Pia she just caannot figure out Abhay and to make matters worse Tanisha she was of no help. And how is the ring protecting her. Its very mysterious . The precap is like keeping me on the edge of the seat so waiting fo rthe next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME update dear:-) SUPERB :-) OMG:O WHO KILLED TANISHA??? And Pia saw this:O cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing superb writer yar...wow abhiya scene were too superb...who killed tanisha tht piya is so shocked yar...piya knows tht man lets see tht...happy now atleast no one come to abhiya hahhaha...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb it awesome loved it really mysterious? are abhay and abhendra the same or different? poor tanisha feel bad for her. and feel bad for abhay but piya will be there for him so i am happy. thanks for the pm just read the updates thanks for the pm and update soon n sorry for reading them late.
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Posted: 13 years ago
when you up date next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello friends, 😛

I m so sorry that i kept u all waiting 4 the next update☺️☺️ ...But i m really busy these days with my study. 🤢That's why i cudn't update 😳...I m really overwhelmed 2 see ur fondness 4 my FF.. I m grateful 2 u all. ⭐️😃

I'll try my best 2 update it 2mrw😉... Thank u all...
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Posted: 13 years ago
best of luck dr!!!!
we will be waiting!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing story

plz add me 2 ur pm list!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar r u updating today? Waiting)!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi, frnds... so sorry 4 giving late update n keeping u all waiting...😳But i m here with brand new update.😆 hope u'll like this...😳


PART-12

As soon as pia gets the idea of following abhay, pia remembers that her car's key is in her purse. She quickly opens her purse n finds that really her car's key is here. Pia takes a deep breath n rushes 2wards her car.. Then she starts driving with high speed. But after coming near of the forest, she finds that she has lost abhay's car.. pia stops her car n then gets down from the car...

Pia(in her mind): Sigh... i've lost the golden opportunity.. Abhay has gone. Now, how'll i find him?

When this thought were revolving in pia's mind , suddenly pia hears a harsh scream. It is coming from inside jungle... n it is a female voice..

This sudden scream makes pia nervous n scared.. But pia decides to follow the scream n find out what is happening.. So , pia enters into the jungle.

after entering into the jungle pia checks her around well but couldn't find anything.. then she takes decision to go more inside of the jungle.

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After entering into the middle of the jungle , pia sees such a scene which makes her freeze. Pia is feeling that she is watching a dream.. Dream??? It is not dream , it's a nightmare... a terrible nightmare ... Pia tries to scream but she feels that her voice isn't coming from her throat. What has happened to her voice? Now, she has left with no other option but to see this !!! Pia can't believe her eyes, what is she seeing? It's abhay who is holding tanisha's almost lifeless body n sucking blood from her neck with his sharp fangs!!!!! tanisha's beautiful white dress has turned red with her own blood flowing from her neck... This scene resembles to pia as a cunning and cruel eagle is attacking a helpless white pigeon with it's sharp beak... then pia sees that after sucking all of the blood from tanisha's body , abhay throws her body like a child is fed up with his doll n throwing it away.. after this abhay wipes his lips n takes his fangs inside... at this moment a panic sound comes from pia's mouth after seeing her dream boy in this this avatar...Pia never imagined that she has to see abhay in this form!!! Abhay's beautiful n attractive face starts seeming ugly to pia.. Pia's heart suddenly starts becoming full of hatred for abhay...Pia's heart which once used to beat fast after seeing abhay in love, now pia is feeling that her heart is beating fast but not in love..in fear!!! Abhay !!! He is a beast .. It's have been ok if he was a vampire but how could he kill tanisha whom he used to love !! Or his thirst is much more than his love? Today a beast won over a human.. A demon won against an angel... Now, pia clearly understands what is abhay's mystery.. He is a cruel n heartless vampire.. He has no hearbeat..How'll he have? He has a dead heart ..

When pia returns from her thinking in the present, she becomes shocked , she feels that her heart has come into her mouth... Abhay is just standing right near to her!!! He is very close to her, so close that may be abhay can hear the fast breath sound of pia...pia looks into his eyes n finds that his blue eyes r glowing n his eyes r seeming extremely cold. It's like a dead look...there is no emotion or feelings. Pia can't take all these more.. she has understood that it's her death time... Pia is seeing only black in her eyes .. Pia faints...

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In the next day morning

Rays of sun r falling on pia's face... Pia gets up quickly n discovers herself into her own bed!!! Pia looks her around n finds that she is in her own room of her home!! Meanwhile Madhu comes n starts scolding pia-

Madhu: Oh ! U've got up!! What is this pia? U've no such thing named responsibility!! How could u do this?

Pia(surprised): What have i done mom?

Madhu: Now stop this drama pia.. u r not a child anymore.U've grown up.. But ur actions r still remained as a child.. Yesterday i told u to come earlier from Raichand's party but u??? U didn't return home whole night.. do u know i was in how much tension.. i couldn't sleep the whole night because of u... n in today's morning at nearly 5a.m u were found asleep in ur car in front of our home!!! This is terrible...i tried to wake u up but u didn't respond!!! U know if our watchman haven't been noticed u then i was going to call mrs. Raichand...

Pia: I was in my car!!! sleeping?

madhu: Yes pia.. u were sleeping...

Pia: But mom, i've returned home after nearly one hour u've left from the party!! Abhay dropped me here by his car!!!! So, how can i get inside my car??

Madhu: Arghh, pia..again lies!!! If u've returned home that time so why didn't u come inside? or any1 watched u coming inside home? I m telling the truth .. u were in the party whole night n then came home n u became afraid that i'll scold u bcoz of late , that's why u got into ur car n started sleeping there!!!

Pia: Really? I can't remember anything..

Madhu: How'll u remember? U must be drunk...

Pia is surprised to hear these incidents from her mom.. Is it true that she returned from the party late? pia is feeling that may be her mom is true.she can remember that she was fully drunk after the party.n abhay has left her in home!!! But after that, she can't remember anything !!!! What did she do? Everything seems so fishy!!!

When pia takes a break from her thought , she can again hear madhu shouting on her. Pia thinks that she has to stop her mom ..

Pia : May b mom u r right... But i m really very sorry. I won't do this again . Plz mom, forgive me this time, plz!!! [pia makes a crying face]

Madhu: Ok pia.. This is ur last warning.. Now, go n freshen up .. then come for breakfast.

Pia: Ok..mumma..u r such a sweetheart...i m coming..

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Madhu leaves n pia goes to washroom. When pia sprinkles cold water into her face , pia feels that something is really wrong. She is missing some links... she clearly remembers that abhay has dropped her home, so why she need to go in her car..n if she returned home earlier, then why didn't she enter inside ? n the most important thing, her mom was telling that she wasn't home in the whole night n at 5a.m she was found sleeping im her car!! How's this possible? But she can't remember anything. Why she can't remember anything ? What happened last night after abhay left her here ???

Pia is feeling that her brain isn't working in this case..

Pia(in her mind): I wish i could share these incidents with sharon n aarav ..may be they would be able to help me n give me some idea... but they r not here .n it's meaningless to call them n disturb them with my silly problems moreover then, when they r unaware of abhay , the raichands n my problems... but still here i have a friend who can help me in this problem .. yes!!! TANISHA!!!!! She can tell me about last night... I should get ready for the college quickly n there i can talk with tanisha...

After thinking that pia quickly dresses up n takes her breakfast.. Then she rushes to the college.

In the college, pia has looked everywhere but she couldn't find tanisha..suddenly pia sees a small crowd of students where they all seem excited n discussing something...pia becomes curious n goes near the crowd.. there she hears the news which breaks her down.. Tanisha is no more!!!! Some1 has killed her brutally!! May be some animal has done these...Hearing the word tanisha is dead, a lighting strikes in pia's head which makes her feel that she is aware of this fact n she knows something about this ..but she can't remember anything!!!! Tears start flowing from pia's eyes...

Pia is crying , at this moment she gets a phone call..it's madhu –

Madhu(excitedly): Pia have u heard about tanisha?

Pia(in a broken tone): Yes, mom...

Madhu: How did it happen pia.. yesterday i met the girl, she was so happy n such a sweet girl, in a night how can this happen to her..[madhu's tone starts becoming heavy]

Pia(crying): I m also thinking this mom.. she was a very good girl mom..and a great friend but i took a long time to understand her.. she was pure at heart mom... how could this happen to her ?

Madhu: Pia, i think we should go at Raichand's place..they need consolation n support in this bad time.. We should increase their courage ...I m coming to pick u up...

Pia: Ok mom...

In 15 minutes , madhu comes to pick up pia.. In the car suddenly pia remembers that what will be abhay's condition now? He must be broken down... But pia isn't feeling the same attachment for him as she used to feel before.. this is strange...

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pia's car stops in front of the Raichand's house... pia n madhu get down from the car n see that the place is crowded with peoples... Pia n madhu enters with a lots of effort from the middle of this crowd..

Pia sees that Mrs. Kiah Raichand is sitting on a sofa n crying n mourning with a picture of tanisha.. This scene again makes pia's heart heavy.. Then pia's eyes go into a a man who is standing alone far from the crowd.. His face seems gloomy.. But it has to be accepted that this man has a class.. his sharp eyes can be seen from his high-powered spectacles.. n at first sight it can be understand that this man is something different .. madhu slightly taps on pia's shoulder n indicates at that man ..then she whispers into pia's ears-" This is mr. Aksh Raichand..Abhay's dad."

Pia: oh...

But pia's eyes were searching for some1 else... may be for abhay!! Suddenly mrs. Kiah comes near to pia n says-

Kiah: U r abhay n tanisha's friend right?

Pia: a..ermm.. yes..

Kiah: then can u plz go near to abhay n console him? Since he has got the news he has not spoken a single word or even shed a drop of tear.. He is just sitting like a rock...I m scared for him...

Pia: where is he?

Kiah: In the garden...

Pia: Ok..aunty i m going...

Pia told this to kiah , but her feet r not wiling to go there ... but still pia goes in the garden...She finds that the garden is extremely beautiful!! She has never seen such a garden before... There is a dazzling fountain in the garden..pia goes near to the fountain n discovers that abhay is sitting on a bench near the fountain...

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Looking at him, pia's heart jumps .. this is a strange feeling which can't be defined.. Pia sees that kiah was right , abhay is really sitting like a lifeless statue.. Pia goes near to him n sits beside him... Pia is wondering that what will she say to that person who has lost his love of life just now?? Pia is feeling uncomfortable but she tries to speak out but nothing comes from her mouth ..

then she just puts her hand on abhay's shoulder .. in this , abhay looks at her ...Pia looks into his eyes n finds that these eyes r full of pain .. that pain can't be described into words , only can be felt.. pia can read his eyes which want to tell- " Why this happened to tanisha? She has never done anything wrong to anybody..so, why this punishment to her?" Pia's heart starts wrenching into in abhay's pain.. It is strange that a little time before she wasn't feeling any attachment towards abhay and she was a feeling a strange disgust for him but now after looking into his eyes , pia feels that her pull towards ahay has become double n she can easily understand every feelings of him without uttering a word!!

Pia puts her hand on abhay's cheek n says-" Everything will be all right..." This word breaks abhay n he puts his head on pia's lap n starts crying like a small child ... his pain n sadness can be felt by pia... he has become alone.. very lonely... it seems that the nature also mourning in his pain..a pin drop silence is everywhere... it isn't tears which r coming from his eyes, it is drop of blood which r shedding from a hurt heart ... n pia is here to wipe his tears n to put medicine on his injured heart... Pia is slowly moving her hand on his hairs n saying- "plz don't cry...plz.. i can't bear it".. For the first time pia is feeling that it is so hard to console som1 at that moment when ur heart is also full of pain...Pia's eyes also becomes full of tears. Though it is very hard for pia to see abhay crying , but she lets him to do that ... crying lessens the pain of heart...

Half and hour has been passed by this.. but pia is still sitting taking abhay's head on her lap n abhay continued crying... pia's dress has become wet by his tears ... but pia is quiet n calm...

Suddenly pia's phone rings..it's madhu-

Madhu: Pia, where r u? We've to leave now...

Pia: I m coming mom...

Pia cuts the phone n before she could tell anything abhay quickly gets up n tells-

Abhay: I m sorry... U can leave..

Pia: Ermm, it's ok... r u alright now?

Abhay: I m ok.. u must have been late.. thnx 4 ur support..

Pia: umm...

Then pia understands that she has nothing to say more.. abhay's eyes have turned red , he really needs rest ... pia is not willing to leave him alone in this time but she has no option...

Pia: Abhay , can we go inside together? Ur mom was being tensed 4 u... plz come along with me..

Abhay gives a node n then both of them comes inside ... Pia n madhu bids adieu from raichands n other peoples also takes leave...

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When every1 has left, a police car comes ... an inspector tells kiah that tanisha's post mortem has been done n may b she was attacked by an animal..that animal has sucked her blood only but any other sign of injuries weren't found...Kiah thanks the inspector n inspector leaves...

Kiah closes the door..Then Mr. Aksh raichand speaks out-

Aksh: Animal? huh?...

Hearing this abhay gives a fiery look to his dad which is full of hatred...

PRECAP: Abhay is fighting with his dad where all the mysteries n the truths r being revealed!!!!

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