Sinful Thoughts ~ MG FF ~(Epilogue Pg 143) - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

686

Views

286.5k

Users

95

Likes

5k

Frequent Posters

shalini_s thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Neev is playing with Geet.. hope Maan comes soon..
-afsha- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Maan shuld kill ths Neev n Brij
Moon002 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
Neev is playing with Geet.. hope Maan comes soon..[/QUOTE

Yes He is Playing but lets c How Maan will save Geet?
Moon002 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Maan shuld kill ths Neev n Brij


Well that will happen soon...
Moon002 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks Devi!
maaneetfanatic thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
OKAY I JUST ALL THE PARTS IN ONE GO..AND LET ME TELL YOU..THIS IS ONE FASCINATING STORY...I WAS SERIOUSLY GLUED FROM THE 1ST TILL THE CURRENT UPDATE...WOW😛

YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER...AND I CAN'T W8 TO READ MORE😉

I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE MADE MAAN AND GEET'S CHARACTERS😳

PLEASE DO CONTINUE SOON AND OH YEAH..YOU CAN COUNT TO READ MY COMMENTS DAILY NOW😉

ALSO IF YOU HAVE WRITTEN OTHER MAANEET THINGS..PLEASE DO LET ME KNOW😊

Moon002 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

OKAY I JUST ALL THE PARTS IN ONE GO..AND LET ME TELL YOU..THIS IS ONE FASCINATING STORY...I WAS SERIOUSLY GLUED FROM THE 1ST TILL THE CURRENT UPDATE...WOW😛

YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER...AND I CAN'T W8 TO READ MORE😉

I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE MADE MAAN AND GEET'S CHARACTERS😳

PLEASE DO CONTINUE SOON AND OH YEAH..YOU CAN COUNT TO READ MY COMMENTS DAILY NOW😉

ALSO IF YOU HAVE WRITTEN OTHER MAANEET THINGS..PLEASE DO LET ME KNOW😊



Thanks A lot!!
No its the only ff I have written yet but will start another ff real soon.
Moon002 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago



Part 25

'Oh how beautiful she is looking. It's enough now. I can't wait any longer. If I will take her to the jungle no one will see or hear anything and after that I will. 'Oh no I can't Kill her I am sure I will enjoy her and I will need her more' Thought Neev

Neev came to Geet and said ' Geet I need to drink water come lets go' Geet ' But I don't see any shops hear?' Neev ' Geet I know a shop but its inside the forest and you also want to see Pinky so let's go and get her and I can drink water also.' Geet was no scared because now she knew that something was wrong Geet ' Uhh Neev I was just thinking that why don't we go back and …' Before she could say anything Neev cut her off ' Geet lets go' he held her hand firmly. She tried to release her hand but in vain. He took her inside the forest. After walking for 15 minutes Geet ' You are not taking me to Pinky? And you are not thirsty either.' Neev smirked and said ' Smart! You are right I am not taking you to Pinky because I am going to have you all for me tonight sweetheart.' Geet ' You tricked me, you lied to me. You son of b***h' Neev came closer to her she was about to runaway but Neev griped her hand ' Oh no you are not going anywhere. Not today.' Geet ' Let me go jerk. She tried really hard to release her hand but his grip was too tight. He gripped her both hands in his hand really tight and pinned her to the tree before she could scream he started kissing her lips. He loosen the grip on her hands after awhile. Taking the advantage she slapped him across the face and ran from their. He got really angry he charged towards her.

Maan and Riji were on their way to forest. Maan was in driving the car in full speed he didn't care about speed or anything because right now there was only one thing in his mind that his life was in danger. He need to save his life. His Geet, His world, His everything.' Riji 'Hey stop! I think I saw something.' Maan' What? Is it Geet?' Riji ' No! I think I saw Neevs car.' Maan ' Why will he stop the car here? It's just a deserted area.' Maan reversed the car and saw a car standing on the road. He came out of the car and looked at the other car but there was no one inside. Riji 'Its Neev's car' Maan ' I think he took her inside the forest.' Riji ' yah I think we should go inside' Maan ' You stay in the car. I'll find her.' Riji 'No I'll come with you.' Maan ' No Riji! Just trust me. I'll bring her safely' don't worry. Please sit in the car.' Riji 'Ok'

Geet hid herself behind one of the tree but to her bad luck Neev caught her from the back. He carried her in his shoulder and took her in the cave which was made of trees and branches. He threw her in their Geet ' Please let me go.' Neev ' one more word and I'll make this hard for you.' Neev ' You no what Geet I have waited fot this time for so long. I really wanted to enjoy you. I always wanted to hear you scream my name.' Geet looked at him with utter disgust. He took her scarf of which was hanged around her neck and threw it away. He now had a clear view of her milky neck.' She tried to move one more time and this time he slapped her hard across her cheek. She was nearly faint but she regained it. Neev unzipped his pants and was no unzipping her pants when something hit him on his face really hard.Geet saw a piece of wood laying next to her. She grabbed it in her hands and with all her forc on it she knocked it on Neev's head really hard that he fainted.

She ran and ran in the forest but she didn't know how to get out. After running for half an hour she stopped to breath. She was about to run when she saw a wooden cottage. She ran towards it but it was dark and there was no light. She came inside the cottage she could feel someone's presence. At first she thought that it was Neev but then her eyes fell on a bracelet which was given by her to Pinky on her birthday. Geet ' Pinky' but no sound. She moved closer and collided with something. She sat down beside her ' Pinky Pinky' She untied her mouth and hands and tried to wake her up ' Pinky Pinky please wake up.' Pinky was regaining conscious slowly and she was murmuring water water. Geet ' Water, Water where should I get water from.' Uhh God Please help!

She took pinky's one hand around her shoulder and tried to take her out from there. She somehow managed to take her little far from the cottage and now she could her the sound of river. She followed the sound and reached the huge river.She put pink on the side. Resting her back on tree. She took some water in her hands and tried to drank pinky some water. Pinky came conscious and Geet hugged her tight.'Oh thank God you are ok.' Pinky 'Geet! How did you get here?' Geet 'There is no time for that it's a long story. We need to go from her before Neev comes.' Pinky 'Ok'

They just heard the break sound of a tree branch. Both got horrified and started to ran from there.' After few minutes of running Pinky 'I can't run anymore Geet. You go from here.' Geet 'Are you made pinky? I am not leaving you here.'

Precap

Someone put hand around Geets mouth….


Add Me if you want Pm

Moon002


Kindly HIT the LIKE button and LEAVE your COMMENT.
meena.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
yeah im first🥳
awesome dear
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
ramahesh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
very nice part
poor geet n neev😡

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

22 days ago

Awaken Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 14 / 24-7-2025

INTRODUCTION A new Short story on our favorite maaneet.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-Soundless-Chap-4 to Epilogue-Pg-4 to 6-(29/6/25).

Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

15 days ago

MG-The Alpha’s Prisoner Bride-Ch-1 to Epilogue-Pg-1-(13.7.25)

Chapter One The cool silk of her wedding night shift was meant to be a comfort, a whisper of the lavish life Geet Handa was born into. Instead,...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-When Rain Tastes like Fire-Ch-5 to Epilogue-Pg-6&7-(29/6/25)

Title:- “When Rain Tastes like Fire” Chapter 1: Shadows in Stone The rain had begun its descent long before she arrived. It wasn’t the romantic...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Name That Wasn’t Mine-Ch-4 to Epilogue-Pg-6 &7-(29/6/25)

Title:- The Name That Wasn’t Mine Chapter 1: A Life That Smiles Back ⸻ The first thing she noticed was the stillness. Not the antiseptic hum of...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".