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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey wow, that's so nice and cute...haha Armaan...'leave me alone part ko nahi kaha ...'😆,...aww so cute!!! Love the title...'First Rain'...
Cont soon
Thanks 4 the pm
Pranishta 😊
Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome part hillai!!!!
loved it!!!!
good going !!!!!
plz cont soon...BTW the part was very short!!!!!..still i loved it!!!!
thanx
esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!!!!!!!
please continue soon.
Eid Mubarak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice update...
Loved armaan's sweet nature
thnx 4 d pm cont soon


Love Kiara
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read the last 3 parts today.
Armaan's mother led a hard life.
Armaan craved for his mother's love.
I felt sooo bad for them.
Finally Armaan gained sense and got his ather unished for his wrong deeds.
Riddhima went away to England and I was very happy to see Armaan's mom helping her.
Armaan took away Sehbeena n his mom along with him to England.
All's well that ends well.
AR faced a lot of trouble in their life but finally they are together with their son.
A happy family in the end.
I'm happy for Sehbeena too.Ayan is a wonderful person.He would keep her happy.
Maria jana this ss was a marvellous one.
It was very much different from all the ffs on IF.
I loved it to the core.
You are a wonderful writer dear.
I'm really sorry for the late comments.
I was just busy in my life a bit these days.
I love u jana.
Plz do come up with more such creative ideas.
love u
Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I read the last 3 parts today.
Armaan's mother led a hard life.
Armaan craved for his mother's love.
I felt sooo bad for them.
Finally Armaan gained sense and got his ather unished for his wrong deeds.
Riddhima went away to England and I was very happy to see Armaan's mom helping her.
Armaan took away Sehbeena n his mom along with him to England.
All's well that ends well.
AR faced a lot of trouble in their life but finally they are together with their son.
A happy family in the end.
I'm happy for Sehbeena too.Ayan is a wonderful person.He would keep her happy.
Maria jana this ss was a marvellous one.
It was very much different from all the ffs on IF.
I loved it to the core.
You are a wonderful writer dear.
I'm really sorry for the late comments.
I was just busy in my life a bit these days.
I love u jana.
Plz do come up with more such creative ideas.
love u
Asma




Hey asma aslam jana
thankx alot fro your comment i didnt mind of your late coment at all
know you busy
thankx for comenting
will surly write more
maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice start.
Cmplt it asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love (AR)



Love is a beautiful thing.Ask me what love is.Bcz i had feel the love,i had feel the immense pleasure in being with my love.It is her love which is still my reason to live.Even after 25 years.Even she left me alone with our daughter and son.Her lovely memories ae now my reason to live and our children I still her love as i love her when she was alive...
This is me Arman Mallik.Today is 14 Feb a lovers day.This is the same day when i first met her My first and last love Riddhima gupta.This is the same day when i confessed her my love,this is the same day when i proposed her.And this is the same day when she left me 25 years ago and give me two most valuable persons,our children,Ryan and Alia.

I first met her in my last year of high school.She was one year junior to me.It was valentine day when she enter our school.She was looking cute in her pink cute shirt with regular jeans.It was love at first sight for me.I was sitting with my Friends in basket ball but when my eyes caught her,i just forgot to breath.I use to stare her during break time...these memories sometime bought life back to me.Then finally after one year on the same day 14 Feb my last valentine in our school I ask her out for date and i remember how hesitantly she put her hand in mine,how she with a cute yet nervous expression except my date proposal.I just want to jump at that instant.And then Our first date and mine first date too.She was wearing red knee length dress.I just pick her from her house and we both went to a caffe.First few minutes we dont talk but then we started talking and our talk went on till 3 am in the morning.She tells me about herself that she is alone daughter of her dad and she is apple of his pa and she is dating someone for the first time .I tell her about myself and our talk went on.It when we realize it is 3 am when caffe honer tell us.I drop her to her house ,when she as about to go out of car,suddenly she turn to me and quickly kisses my cheeks and ran to her house.I just kept staring at her until she enters her house.
Our meeting doesn't stop there on dating even we were in separate colleges.We use to go out on sunday.I had realized that she is one for me ,just was finding a way to propose her.But then she told me she going to abroad for further studies.She was very sad,I too didnt know what to say to her bcz i was shocked myself.Before i coulld any thing to her,i felt her hugg me tightly.I too hugg her tightly.she says me she dont wana leave me.I broke hugg,cup her face and then ask her why dont wana leave me,i am just a mere frnd.First she didnt reply but then she slowly brought her face closer to me and slowly kept her lips on mine.It was mine,our first kiss.We kiss each other gently.After we broke she asks me now I wanted to know i meant for her,or is our kiss is enough tp tell me what i meant for her.I smiled at her and pecked her lips again.She went to abroad for two years to finish her studies but with a promise that she will come back to me.And finally after two years she come back and i ask her hand from her father and her father accept our love and with in two mounths we were married.
Our life after marriage was heavan,my parents accept her we were very happy and this happen increase day by day when i came know she was expecting.We all were very happy.Whole 8 mounths our happines knew no bound.But our happiness came to our end when one day riddhima slips and fall.This fall cause gr8 damage,riddima's delivery was already not normal and this fall causes her labour pain before time.I took her to hospital,and our beutiful world crash when doctor told me that i will have twins but they will not be to save riddhima but they wil try.After some hours doctor came out with our kids and told me riddhima is very critical and have only few minutes.I went to her with our kids in my hand and sits beside her,she slowly but with gr8 difficulty open her eyes and look towards me and our kid,she slowly caresse our kids heads with her hand and weekly smile at them,nurse came and took them away from us to check them leaving me and riddhima alone.We didnt say anything for while but i was not able to stop me tears i put my head near her hands and let my tears come out of my eyes,she simply carase my hairs .Then i slowly look at her,I slowly kiss her for head,i was about to came back but she holds my face in her week palms and for the last time say me "I LOVE YOU,and promise me arman you will take care of our kids and your self too"More tears come out of my eyes i cant hold myself back i shut her mouth with my lips(our last kiss),for few moments she respond but after a while i felt that she was not responding to kiss.I broke the kiss and look at her,her face was not pale more but was calm and with smile.She was gone...


This was my sweet and simple love story and now I am living to fulfill her promise and for our kids...



guys it is boring i know ,But i like this concept and being a sad story lover i just love it
comments and like plz


Happy valentine day:)A note for you guys plz read plz

this story is clearly dedicated to three personsKashkidiwani,we guys didnt chat but still we become quite good frnds,2 crazzyforkash(asma love you sooo much jana,ur avi is on it way dear )and last moonlight260(I waish best of luck to your daughter may she pass test with flying colours:)
Some people whom i want to hank and not able to thank roshni api
my oe of fave song for you:its been so long that i had not wacthing your face
i wana do that with you ri8 now i wana chat with you i8 now but time !!!!!!

Mijianur bro:Hey wassup bro!hope you doing f9 bro
Geet api:how r you jana huh???hope yoyu doing well me miss u alot :)

Sai(kash_manneet_fan,anumeha rajhat,youthshafon,bluelotus,Zigway sadi,fri4911

thank you soo much for your love and support,honestly i dont have the words to thank you..last day was valentine though i dont believe in valntine day but i still wna show my lve and thankfullnes to you,thank you sooo much for your love and respect:)❤️
if i miss some one sorry
Miss93 i think i dont need to mention your name here,bcz you know you r most special person for me here on if



Edited by Riarai2346 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

RES

YEEPIEE I AM FIRSTTT😃


EDITED...😊


This is Boring..?😲...are u serious?.I men how could you say this yaar...I just love it like anything...the story is so simple yet so heat-touching...JUST AMAZING YAAR...I must say,you are growing as writer my love... keep it up the good work...The way you show Armaan's Love and his sweet story... MIND BLOWING...Do write more...Thanks for the PM... Take care...


PS: HAPPY VALENTINE DAY❤️ AND I MISSED YOU A LOT..


Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love (ARSH)



Love is a beautiful thing.Ask me what love is.Bcz i had feel the love,i had feel the immense pleasure in being with my love.It is her love which is still my reason to live.Even after 25 years.Even she left me alone with our daughter and son.Her lovely memories ae now my reason to live and our children I still her love as i love her when she was alive...
This is me Arman Mallik.Today is 14 Feb a lovers day.This is the same day when i first met her My first and last love Shilpa Malhotra.This is the same day when i confessed her my love,this is the same day when i proposed her.And this is the same day when she left me 25 years ago and give me two most valuable persons,our children,Ryan and Alia.

I first met her in my last year of high school.She was one year junior to me.It was valentine day when she enter our school.She was looking cute in her pink cute shirt with regular jeans.It was love at first sight for me.I was sitting with my Friends in basket ball but when my eyes caught her,i just forgot to breath.I use to stare her during break time...these memories sometime bought life back to me.Then finally after one year on the same day 14 Feb my last valentine in our school I ask her out for date and i remember how hesitantly she put her hand in mine,how she with a cute yet nervous expression except my date proposal.I just want to jump at that instant.And then Our first date and mine first date too.She was wearing red knee length dress.I just pick her from her house and we both went to a caffe.First few minutes we dont talk but then we started talking and our talk went on till 3 am in the morning.She tells me about herself that she is alone daughter of her dad and she is apple of his pa and she is dating someone for the first time .I tell her about myself and our talk went on.It when we realize it is 3 am when caffe honer tell us.I drop her to her house ,when she as about to go out of car,suddenly she turn to me and quickly kisses my cheeks and ran to her house.I just kept staring at her until she enters her house.
Our meeting doesn't stop there on dating even we were in separate colleges.We use to go out on sunday.I had realized that she is one for me ,just was finding a way to propose her.But then she told me she going to abroad for further studies.She was very sad,I too didnt know what to say to her bcz i was shocked myself.Before i coulld any thing to her,i felt her hugg me tightly.I too hugg her tightly.she says me she dont wana leave me.I broke hugg,cup her face and then ask her why dont wana leave me,i am just a mere frnd.First she didnt reply but then she slowly brought her face closer to me and slowly kept her lips on mine.It was mine,our first kiss.We kiss each other gently.After we broke she asks me now I wanted to know i meant for her,or is our kiss is enough tp tell me what i meant for her.I smiled at her and pecked her lips again.She went to abroad for two years to finish her studies but with a promise that she will come back to me.And finally after two years she come back and i ask her hand from her father and her father accept our love and with in two mounths we were married.
Our life after marriage was heavan,my parents accept her we were very happy and this happen increase day by day when i came know she was expecting.We all were very happy.Whole 8 mounths our happines knew no bound.But our happiness came to our end when one day shilpa slips and fall.This fall cause gr8 damage,shilpa's delivery was already not normal and this fall causes her labour pain before time.I took her to hospital,and our beutiful world crash when doctor told me that i will have twins but they will not be to save shilpa but they wil try.After some hours doctor came out with our kids and told me shilpa is very critical and have only few minutes.I went to her with our kids in my hand and sits beside her,she slowly but with gr8 difficulty open her eyes and look towards me and our kid,she slowly caresse our kids heads with her hand and weekly smile at them,nurse came and took them away from us to check them leaving me and shilpa alone.We didnt say anything for while but i was not able to stop me tears i put my head near her hands and let my tears come out of my eyes,she simply carase my hairs .Then i slowly look at her,I slowly kiss her for head,i was about to came back but she holds my face in her week palms and for the last time say me "I LOVE YOU,and promise me arman you will take care of our kids and your self too"More tears come out of my eyes i cant hold myself back i shut her mouth with my lips(our last kiss),for few moments she respond but after a while i felt that she was not responding to kiss.I broke the kiss and look at her,her face was not pale more but was calm and with smile.She was gone...


This was my sweet and simple love story and now I am living to fulfill her promise and for our kids...



guys it is boring i know ,But i like this concept and being a sad story lover i just love it
comments and like plz


Happy valentine day:)A note for you guys plz read plz

this story is clearly dedicated to three personsKashkidiwani,we guys didnt chat but still we become quite good frnds,2 crazzyforkash(asma love you sooo much jana,ur avi is on it way dear )and last moonlight260(I waish best of luck to your daughter may she pass test with flying colours:)
Some people whom i want to hank and not able to thank roshni api
my oe of fave song for you:its been so long that i had not wacthing your face
i wana do that with you ri8 now i wana chat with you i8 now but time !!!!!!

Mijianur bro:Hey wassup bro!hope you doing f9 bro
Geet api:how r you jana huh???hope yoyu doing well me miss u alot :)

Sai(kash_manneet_fan,anumeha rajhat,youthshafon,bluelotus,Zigway sadi,fri4911,BACKY
thank you soo much for your love and support,honestly i dont have the words to thank you..last day was valentine though i dont believe in valntine day but i still wna show my lve and thankfullnes to you,thank you sooo much for your love and respect:)❤️
if i miss some one sorry
Miss93 i think i dont need to mention your name here,bcz you know you r most special person for me here on if

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