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Posted: 13 years ago
pre cap i m scared. i hope maan will save geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotionall update! Poor Geet! HAte Pammi! Precap is interesting! Update soon! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! Well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

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First off all thanks for dedicating such a brilliant update to all of us waise let me tell u agar aayenda hume chodkar jaane ki baat kina toh danda lekar sar par maarungi
okay now the update hasti khelthi bachhi ko rula diya yaar 😭😭😭
what an emotional part poor Geet I can understand her condition par shukr hai k atleast meera ki koshish ki wajah se wo react toh karne lagi
Maan toh Geet k dard se relate kar raha hai i m eager to know his past now shayad inhemein dard ka rishta hi ek dusre se jodega
this pammi😡 kaisi aurat hai yaar
continue soon
love-Piya


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Posted: 13 years ago
can you pls pm me the next parts...i have send you a buddy request
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

loved it very much...

why pammi is doing like dis with geet?i hate dis pammi...nw she is trying to kill geet...m scared fr geet...

thank u very much fr such a lovely prt...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
PLzzz update dear...
Waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

PLzzz update dear...

Waiting...



i will be updating tomorrow for sure...promise😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
"Tu Jaane Na"




The English translations of the update are in the brackets... sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...

This update is dedicated to my sweetest friend Piya...its her birthday today...Happy Birthday Piya...You guys do wish her...Here is the thread...

Birthday Bells Ring For the Romantic Queen(Piya)


Part 7

Days went on, Geet was trying to come out of the circumstances'..she tried spending her time with her fathers' most visited places, that really made her feel that her father was still with her. She tried keeping herself busy with her books too as her exams were too near and she was successful a bit. Here maan wanted to meet Geet for once'dint knew the reason but yes he really wanted to know her present state, was she fine or not'..Meera was brave enough but yes she was a great support for her dear sister.

Meera: Di aap kya kar rahi hai?? [What are u doing??]

Geet: kuch nahin bas apna mann padhai ki taraf laga rahi hu'..waise bhi bauji ka yahi sapna tha ki hum apne jeevan mein kuch karke dikhae'ab unke saapne muje poore karne hai or saath tumhe bhi [nothing just trying to focus on studies, our father really had dreamy off that we should achieve something in our lives'.now I want to fulfil his dreams and u should also do the same]

Meera: pakka di main bhi poori koshish karungi [sure di I too will try the same]

Pammi came in and disturbed the conversation between the two sisters'..😡😡

Pammi: meera tum jao yaha se muje geet se kuch important baat karni hai? [meera u go out I want to talk something important to geet?]

Meera leaves the room '..

Geet: kya baat hai mom sab thik to hai na? [what happened mom everything is fine??]

Pammi: tum to jaanti ho na geet ki tumhare bauji ke jaane ke baa dab ghar ki saari zimmedari mujpar aa gayi hai'or kya pata meri zindagi bhi kitni bachi hai'.isliye main ek faisla kiya hai'. [u know geet after your father the whole responsibility is on me and even I don't know about my life'..so I have taken a decision]

Geet: ma aap ye kaisi baatein kar rahi hai'.ab aap hi hamare liye sab kuch hai'or ye kis faisle ki baat kar rahi hai aap?? [mom why are u talking like that'anow you are everything for us and what decision are you talking about??]

Pammi: geet tum to jaanti ho maine tum me or meera mein koi farq nai samjha'.maine tumse meera se bhi zyada pyar kia hai'.tumhe apne se dur rakha taqi tum apne jeevan mein kuch naya seekh sako'.tum jaanti ho na?? [geet u know that I haven't ever made any difference between you and meera and more that meera I have loved you'.i kept you away from all of us so that u learn something new in your life'you know that na??]

Geet: mom main ye sab jaanti hu'bachpan se maine maa shabd ka matlab aapse sikha hai, aapne muje itna pyar kia shayad hi koi or kar pata' par aap ye sab muje kyu keh rahi hai [mom I know that'I came to know about this word mother from you'the way u loved me cared for me none other could have done like that'..but why today you are saying like that??]

Pammi: geet main tumse ek vaada chahti hu'.[geet I want a promise from you]

Geet: ek baar kehke to dekhiye mom main apke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon[ mon just say for once'I can do anything for you]

Pammi takes out some papers and put them in front of her''

Geet: ye kya hai mom?/ [what is this mom??]

Pammi: geet tumhare bauji ne mere naam kuch property kit hi'maine vo property tumhare naam karne ka faisla kia hai'.or main chahti hu kit um unpe sign kar do [geet your father had named few properties behind my name'and I have decided to name that property for you' I want you to sign these papers]

Geet: mom aap ye kya keh rahi hai'.[mom what are you saying??]

Pammi: geet tumne mujse waada kia hai or waise bhi ye property tumhare naam rahe ya mere kya farq padta hai [geet u had promise me and this property remains with you or me..This won't make any difference]

Geet was fooled by the fake emotions of her mother'.she signed the papers without even looking at them and handed over back to pammi.

Geet: thik hai mom aapne jaisa kaha maine kar dia'.[fine mom I have done as u wanted me to do']

Pammi hugged her back but at the same time she had a winning smile on her face'''''meera listened to everything but she could not really understand her mother's changed behavior towards geet, she was sure that something was going wrong but she had no perfect answer

Pammi: acha geet ab tum aaram karo'main baad mein tumse milti hu'.[okay geet now u take rest..will meet you later]

Khurana mansion

Daadima: humara maan hai ki hum ek baar handa's ke ghar jaakar aaye [I really wish to go and meet handa's once again]

Dev: thik hai daadima aap ja aaiye [alright daadima as you wish]

Maan was passing by and he overhears the conversation between dev and daadima'.he was finally getting a chance to see her but he dint knew how would he tell her daadima that he too wants to accompany her.

Maan: daadima aap kahi ja rahi hai??[ grandom are u going somewhere??]

Daadima: haan maan hum soch rahe the ki ek baar vo handa's ke ghar ho aaye' [ yes maan I was thinking to visit handa's for once]

Maan: chaliye daadima main aapko le chalta hu [okay daadima I will take you to them]

Daadima: maan pass mein to jaan hai hum chale jaenge [maan its just nearby I will go by myself]

Maan: daadima main free hu main apko le chalta hu [I m free right now'I will take you don't worry]

Daadima: chaliye thik hai'

Maan alongwith daadima went to handa mansion. Meera came and greeted them'.but Maan's eyes were searching for geet'.

Daadima: bte aapki ma kahi nazar nahi aa rahi [where is your mom ??]

Meera: vo daadima apne room mein hai shayad'.bas aati hi hongi'maine bheja hai unko bulwane ke liye' [she might be in her room'.i have asked someone to send her the message]

Daadima: or vo tumhari behen?? [ and your sister??]

Meera: vo apne room mein hai'aajkal badi chup chup si rehti hai vo'.maine to unhe hud aise nhin dekha [she is in her room'.she remains very quiet dese days,,,,I have never see her like that]

Daadima: pita ke jaane se kafi dukh laga hai unko'.lekin ab aap logon ko milke iss dukh se ubharna hoga'.[the loss of father is really so much but you altogether have to get over this]

Meera: ji daadima

Daadima: aap muje unke pass le chaliye'..main use wahi baat kari hu [u take me to her room'..i will talk to her there only]

Meera: daadi ma main unhe yahi bula leti hu aap kyu taqleef kar rahe hai'. [I will call her here itself'y are u troubling yourself?]

Daadima: koi baat nahin bte hum wahi chalte hai'. [its okay dear'.we will go there]

Maan , daadima and meera went towards geet's room'..Maan was bit behind both of them'.he had his mobile phone in his hand which got slipped from his hand'..he got to pick that up where he overhears someone talking on the phone'he slightly opened the door from where voice was coming'..and hears Pammi talking to someone

Pammi: adha kaam to ho gaya hai'par haan main koi chance nahin lena chahti'.hume kisi bhi tarah use raaste se hatana hoga jisse baad mein koi bhi pareshani na ho'or ye kaam kal hi karenge hum😡😡 [half of the work is done and I really don't want to take any chance'.we will have to kick her off from our life so that there is no problem in the future'.and this work will be done tomorrow itself'..

Maan was shocked to hear those words from her'.he did not speak anything and moved forward thinking what was pammi planning to do'.but yet he had no answers'..😕😕

Precap: geet's life in danger'..😭😭


Well how was the update friends???.please hit the like button and do comment if u liked the update...it means a lot to me

I will be waiting'.😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


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superb but sad update yaar...only maan wala part was a bit funny baqi to i feel lyk tying dat pummy on a railway track wat cunning n cruel person she is kaise geet ko emotional karke beep ne usse sign le liye...but cutie u really executed dat part amazingly...i really felt like putting some sense of reality in geet n killing dat beep...
waise d way u wrote wat geet is going through n how she is trying to put up n move ahead was brilliant...
n hamare dd maan ko geet ki fikar ho ri h :)
dadima n dev ki convo sun k kaise uchhal para maan dadima k saath jane k liye hehe...barhiya h maan great going hehe...
dadima is such a sweetheart sooo caring...n m glad ki wo sab geet k room mein ja re the warna maan pammi ki baat kaise sunta...MSK n adhi baat sun li h to poori tak pahonchne mein use zyada tym ni lagega n m sure is beep ki band to hamara MSK hi bajayega...n yeah geet ko bachayega bhi :)
superb update cutie sad to tha but end mein maan ka pammi ki convo sunna filled me with excitement...fantastic job dear...
luvya...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago

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