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Part 85

They both looked at each other shocked and literally both burst out into laugh.

maan in between his laugh asked "dadi kya sach mein geet hi bride ho?"
"haan maan" dadi smiled seeing him laugh peacefully after many years.
"hum hamarahi shaadi se bhaag gaya" geet said and laughed more.
"hmm" is all dadi can say.
they finally controlled her laugh and maan spoke "aareh dadi if i would have seen the bride once i would've been married by now"
"haan beta" dadi smiled.
"NO" geet said in high pitch out of blue.
maan and dadi looked at geet confused.
"if i have seen the groom even then i would've run away" geet said.
"geet yeh tu kya kehrahi ho...dont u love maan?" dadi asked confused.
"i do dadi...but now...not then" geet said. dadi looked at her confused.
without another word geet strode out of the room dadi followed her calling her name but geet left the house. dadi turned back to maan who stood there calmly.
"maan why dint u stop her? what happened to her suddenly? and y are u standing here silently?" dadi asked him.
"she have a point" maan said.
"what point maan?" now dadi was very angry on him. Firstly he dint stop geet and now he is here standing calmly as if nothing had gone wrong. For god sake just now his love rejected to marry him...is he insane?
"dadi..." maan hold dadi by shoulders and made her sit on the bed and sat beside her.
"dadi...what geet said is true from her pov" maan tried to explain. dadi looked at him confused and angry.
"dadi who ever the girl is will behave in same manner when she knows about her own shaadi on the shaadi day" maan said.

"I know maan…I m not saying geet did wrong thing. She did without knowing that u r the groom…but what she said now is…." Dadi said but maan cut her

"plz daadi don't misunderstand her. Waise what will happen even if she see the groom…that's me….u thinking that if she once see me she will fall in love with me? And agree for the marriage…no dadi she is not mentally prepared for the shaadi so whoever the groom is she would have rejected and I m not an exception." Maan said.

"how wont u be exception? She loves u" dadi said.

"yes she loves me but now…not then" he said.

"not then??? Even geet said the same before but maan I dint understand anything" dadi said.

"dadi geet didn't love me at the time of marriage..she just proposed me yesterday" maan said.

"but u know each others as friends isn't it sufficient?" dadi asked.

"dadi we don't know each other at that time" maan sighed.

"what????" dadi literally shouted.

"haan dadi…I met geet after that" maan said.

"then how did u people meet?" dadi asked.

"hmm…actually its me who helped her to run from that town" maan sighed.

"KYAAA!!!!!!!!" dadi screamed.

"maan mujhe aisa shock pe shock kyun deraheho?" dadi said.

Maan smiled a bit "dadi do u remember that day I shouted on you all for arranging marriage without telling me and I left from there..while I am diving back I stopped at a place there and then she I mean geet dashed into me and entered my car. That's the first time I saw her and….hhummm…I fell for her. I dunno she is my bride but I know that she is running away just like me….so I helped her and drove with her to delhi…..well I even brought her home and as u know she staid here for many days until her friend who is out of town that time came back and she left…then she joined in KC and well I dunno kab pyaar hogaya but kal wo confess kiya"

"omg itna kuch hogaya!!!" dadi exclaimed.

Maan just smiled.

"to yeh hai aap ki love story…….teekai maan ab jao aur aap ki 'wo' se baath kar…bye beta" dadi ruffled his hair and left smiling.

After dadi left maan called her but there is no response. He again and again tried but she is not picking up the call.

"lagtha hai madam bahut gusse main ho" maan smiled and left for her house…ahh I mean pinky's house.

He long back informed adi that he is not coming to office today.

The car came to a halt before pinky's house and he went in and knocked the door. He knows that geet will be alone as pinky would have long back went to office and geet as she came to KM she kept leave for her clg. But he should make sure to take geet from there before pinky return ad its already evening and she will be back in few more hours.

As he expected geet opened the door. Her eyes are red as if crying and cheeks turned all pink. She allowed him inside but dint speak anything.

"geet kya hua?" he asked worriedly.

She dint reply and sat there silently. He hold her wrist and literally dragged her out of the house. He locked the house and made her sit in the car. She dint speak a word and quietly sat in the car. He drove to a nearest park and stopped the car.

As the car came to a halt geet stepped out and walked into the park leaving him behind. Maan confused at her behavior and went behind her silently.

She sat on a bench and looked at the people. As its evening many peole came there. Some couples…some families with their small kids….some old people for their evening walk. They both sat there silently for hours and now its so dark outside.

Suddenly out of blue geet asked "maan I want to go to disc will u take me there?"

"what?" he shocked.

"haan…I never went to a disc till now…will u take me" geet said.

"geet are u okay?" he said.

She looked at him "yes I m perfectly fine..lets go" she literally dragged him to the car and they drove to a disc.

They both entered a disc and the life there brought a smile on her face. Maan saw the smile and shook his head "yeh ladki sach mein paagal hai…abhi tak itna chup ho…shaayah mere uski ghar jaane se pehle roya bhi ho….par abb dekho ufff"

"maan come on lets dance na" she pulled him towards the dance floor and started dancing. Maan went with her but soon she was pushed by a bunch of girls and they circled maan like bees.

Maan gave them all a stren look and strode back from the floor and came towards the bar. Geet saw him leaving the dance floor and walked towards him. But before she reached him she saw a girl with a short dress which is not even covering her things walked to maan and stood before him.

"hi handsome" she said.

Maan ignored her and turned other side and saw geet looking at them with her eyes full of anger. Then a naughty plan stroked his mind and he smiled evilly.

He turned back to the girl "hi beautiful" and smiled.

Omg he one smile is enough for that girl to faint.

"a dance?" she aked.

"ofcourse baby" with that maan took her hand in his and they walked back to the dance floor the music started and they both danced.

Geet stood there with her mouth wide opening looking at the girl and maan dancing so intimately. She is literally fuming "iss maan ki to mein…..what do he think of himself haan??? Koi SRK or ranbir kapoor….aur uss bimbo ko dekh kaisa kaisa..chi chi babaji….arghhh I will kill him today"

Geet strode towards the bar and too the drink placed there and gulped it in one go. As its not her order its not a soft drink. Geet throat burned as the drink passed in but her eyes are on the two peole who are enjoying their on the dance floor.

"one more" she ordered and drank it in one go.

That's more for a first timer. Maan dint saw her drinking. When he searched for her and found her at the bar he saw her gulped down a drink and he literally pushed this girl and ran to geet.

He reached her and saw 7 empty glasses before her on the counter and she just emptied another one and placed with a bang.

"one more" she shouted completely out of senses. As the person there placed her order maan just rejected it and turned back but she is nowhere near. He searched for her and saw her on the dance floor in between a gang of guys dancing with them. He ran to her and literally dragged her out of the disc. She is not at all in her senses.

"geet geeet…" he tried to place her in the car but she ran way.

"geeet" he ran behind her.

"maaan pakdo mujhe" geet shouted and ran.

"geet ruko….ruko geet" he shouted back running behind her.

She ran and climbed a tree and sat there. Maan went and stood under the tree "geet come down….geeet"

But she is no where listening. He pulled her down and lifted her like a sack on his sholder and started to walk back the car but she wriggled and jumped down out of his grip and again ran. But this time maan is quick he held her by her wrist.

He pulled her. She snapped his hand and pushed him back "don't u dare to come close" she shouted and maan stood there shocked.


Sry gals thought to write office romance but changed my mind a bit…….enjoy the part and plz comment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
7shots wow...now quite difficult for maan to handle geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think ds s cool dan ofc romance..
Maan babu..ye tumne kya kiya?
Nw she s super duper angry and talli..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
loved it to core dear
and m much awaited scene is coming dear
now geet ll say her inner turmoil to him
ll be waiting dear
pls update soon
happy kiss day dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi guys another update for u for late update...

@abisamratgunjan hi dear as u asked geet speaking about men is in update...in the movie genie spoke so well but i dunno whether i spoiled it or it was good...so plz tell me...hope i reach ur expectations...

Part 86

He pulled her. She snapped his hand and pushed him back "don't u dare to come close" she shouted and maan stood there shocked.

But maan again tried and she shouted "u idiot maine kaha na don't touch me"

She pushed him and went and sat on a nearby bench…okay literally ON the bench…bench ke upper…..a bottle in one hand and another hand on her knees. Maan came to her and stood before her trying again "geet…plz listen u are drunk"

"yeah I m drunk…he he I know" geet giggled crazily.

"lets go home geet" maan again tried to hold her and she again snapped "don't u dare touch me I said…"

He left her hand confused…he is not hurt becoz she is not in her senses.

"what do u think of urself haan? Tum tumhare baaremein kya sochtaho???...ki any ladki tum par fell ho jaogi!!!..." geet shouted tumbling from the bench maan tried to catch her but she snapped him.

He dint understand what she is saying he gave her a confused look.

"you uss girl ke saath dance why ki?" she shouted again.

Oh yeah geet is J of that girl…he smiled but this situation….drunk geet is worse to handle…ufff …….

She caught his collar and pulled him towards her "tu boys aapne aap ke baaremein kya sochteho haan?...ki u r MEN….and can do ANYTHING….ki any ladki will fell for tum(she pushed him back)….waise y u care ki mein kiss ke saath dance karun…ahh(she jumped to ground and tumbled maan zaught her and straightened her and she again pushed him and pointed her finger to his chest and slightly pushed him)…..tu uss bimbo ke saath dance kar sakthe ho par mein kisi aur boy ke saath dance nai kar …. KYUN …. WHY(she pointed her hand as questioning) …. kyun ki….tu…MENNN….LADKA(she raised her left hand up in the air saying as if they are high)….. aur mein ….. ladki(she decreased her pitch of voice and pointe her hand to ground as if saying low) …. hain na" she shouted on him.

"aisa nahi hai geet mere baath suno" maan tried to speak to her.

"nai sunni hai mujhe kisi ki baath" she shouted on him.

He looked at her perplexed.

"kyun sunu main kisi ki baath….haan….ek wo…mera baap….meri shaadi hai…aur mujhe bataya tak nahi…aur wo…uss….brij veerji(she mocked his name)….wo to mujhe batane ka zaroori bhi nahi samjha……kyun sunu main unki baath haan!!!...KYUN….issiley mein bhaag gayi….." she tumbled and fell down.

Maan caught her and tried to pull her up and instead she pulled down and both sat there on the road. She hold his shoulder for support and almost sat on his lap while maan controlled her.

"aur ab wo yaha bhi aagaya….phir se meri shaadi karne keliyeh…" she cried in his arms.

"geeet" he said helplessly holding her.

"geet no one will do anything with u till I m there….i promise not even ur family can hurt u" maan said.

"sach!!!" she asked like a kid.

"sach geet" he said sincerely.

"I m telling the same thing to me from the morning maan….par dar lagraha hain…uss call ke baad bohot dar lagrahahai maan" she cried still in her drunk state.

"call????" now maan confused what call is she speaking.

"geet kya call??? Who called u geet?" he shook her worriedly.

"brij veerji" she said trying to open her eyes which are almost one verge of closing due to drug she felt heavy.

"kya??" he asked again "kya kaha uss ne"

"ki meri shaadi hai….dus din mein…aur iss baar kuch gadbad kiya to mein wo mujhe maar dega…." With that geet fell asleep.

Maan insides boiled with anger. He picked her in his arms and walked back to car. He placed her in the car and drove back to KM. in this state he cant take her to pinky's house. So he from geet's mobile texted pinky saying she will stay with her prince for that day and he took her to KM.

He picked her up again and walked back to the guest room where she staid when she came with him while she ran away from her home. He placed her on the bed and covered her with duvet and turned to leave but she held his hand and dint let him go. So he sat beside her on the floor and lost looking at her face. He decided to speak to daadi tomorrow morning and no way he is letting her family do this to her.

He drowsed into sleep looking at her angelic face.

The early sunrays fell on his face and his peaceful sleep was disturbed. He got up and saw her angelic face. He caressed her face with the back of his hand, she stirred in her sleep and slept back like a kid. He smiled at her and left the room.

He went down and asked nakul to keep a lime juice glass on beside table of geet's bed and also told him to call him when he woke up. He straight away went to dadi's room.

Maan knocked on her room and dadi instantly replied "come in nakul"

"nakul nahi mein hoon dadi" maan said as he entered.

"maan beta aap….avo ander aavo" dadi called him in.

He went and sat beside dadi on the bed.

"kya hua maan" dadi asked him.

"dadi kal uss brij geet ko call kiya" and maan said everything what geet told him to dadi.

Dadi smiled "aap lo kabhi nai sudarogi"

"dadi yeh aap kya bol rahiho….i just want to kill that brij…how dare he threaten my geet" maan gritted his teeth.

"maan shaanth hojav…I know that brij is wrong but her family is not trying to marry her. Actually its my decision. Geet's marriage…I want to see u both married so I decided to arrange ur marriage in 10 days and I just invited them becoz I don't want geet to feel alone in her marriage….i know what a girl feels at that time…so I want her mother to be beside of her." Dadi said.

"mera aur geet ki shaadi…dus din mein…" maan exclaimed. He was so happy to listen this.

"daadi abhi mujhe shaadi nai karni hai" maan said.

"maan yeh aap kya bolraha hain…." Dadi asked angrily.

"haan daadi…I will marry geet but not now…….daadi geet is in her last semester…she loves to study…..in another month her studies will complete and I am planning to make her do her internship in KA….internship will take 6 months…after her internship we will do as u say…plz daadi" maan pleaded her.

She caressed his hair and smiled "teekai maan…as u like…I will wait until her internship completes"

"Thank u daadi….thank u soo…." Maan started to say but soon was cut by a sound. They turned and found geet standing there at the entrance of the door with tears in her eyes.

"geet beti" daadi called her lovingly.

Geet ran in towards daadi and sat beside her with her head in daadi's lap and started crying.

"geet beta…kya hua" dadi caressed her hair.

"kyun daadi…aap log itna ache kyun ho….my own father and brother dint understand me par aap dono mere baaremein itna soch raheho…..i am so lucky to have u all dadi…..thank u babaji" geet cried.

Daadi signaled maan to leave the room. Maan saw the both ladies and smiled and left the room.

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow awesome update dear

loved both the updates plz continue soon
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both the updates
plz continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
but i thought ui ll little elobatate dear
hope only maan knows the truth abt the bride
and like a movie u know
but i loved it dear
osusm part
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates dear!!
loved it how well maan understands geet!!
just awesome!!
continue soon dear!!
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