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Posted: 13 years ago
oms abhay got shoot . hope he is fine . superb update dear .
continue soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice up date ,hope abhay will be fine ,nice and amazing story
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhay was shot!!!!!!!!!!
OMG, they were just leaving for london and this happened. Abhay and Piya need to leave that place. I hope Abhay's condition wont be too serious
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update
bt i think neil saved abhay and neil was shot na
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
PIA POV..
i open my eys and saw blood..i really got scared..i saw abhay lying and above it was neil...and the blood was coming out of neil's leg...I SCEARMED...RAN TOWARDS THEM...i could see pain in neil face and abhay tried to sttod up...sid came running towards us...he picked neil and ran towards the car...abhay tried to follow but sid stopped him"abhay..take pia and panchi...and leave this country now...u have to take this flight.."but bro...""i will come later just go...we can't wasted a another minute...now go!!!"...abhay hold my hand and ran inside...later...when we reached te airport from out side was closed...and we were waiting..for condition to be solved..i was cut on abhay's hand..he was trying to hide but i took his hand into my hands...and started teing cloth over it..he was lost looking at me..."abhay.."i sound..like i will cry now...he came closer"pia...don't worry everything going to be fine okay?""what okay?...neil is at yur place... u were target of those people some one is trying to kill u!!!..don't u understand!?""pia...look i still here with u!"yeah...abhay...i almost losted my life once with jeh..u have any idea to start a life over again?...to start a new begining...i will die now..if something happens to u...y can't i live a peaceful life...my life is turning into hell!!!"...now i was crying.."i already lost my love, now my friend..abhay..i am tried"...he took me in his arms..made me rest on his chest...i was still crying..."nothing will happen after we leave this place pia!".."promise me abhay..what ever happens u will never leave me..promise me!...plz""i promise okay?"..now i felt little comfortable..my head was still on his head..and i planned to keep this way...onther side panchi wasn't feeling well due to her look...i closed my eys praying to end the nightmare...

ABHAY POV
i could feel her...she was shivering with fear...she was scared to lose me...i didn't let her go out of my arms...later i saw her she was sleeping peacefully...smile was on her face...she was looking like my sleeping beauty...just waiting for a love kiss to wake her up...flash back...i couldn't stop thinking what had happen back there...i just came out...and saw pia shouting neil runing to wards me..i got confused..neil jumped on me..and we both fell on ground badly...bullte reasling sound came...neil waist belt was stuck with my hand i tried to realsed but during it i cut of my hand...i saw everyone were panick..now i had understood someone tried to kill me...i wanted to forget this...later annocement came...i wake up pia..and panchi..pia was still in sleepy mood...she couldn't stand up staright...she holded my arm with both hands..resting her head on my shoulders...her eyes were partily open...we walked towards our flight...starage thing...from whom i pass...they kind of smile at me and pia..."what a love brids"they look so cute...""look at that beauty resting her head on her love"...i was feeling little happy by these statements but pia was still in her dreams trying to get up but eyes weren't allowing to be open ..panchi was smiling at us...later we took our seats..i made pia sit...put blacket on her..and wisphered"a long jouerney..have a good sleep.."pia already have closed her eys and went back to sleep..panchi satnding behind"she is worried abhay..""i know""u need to take care of yourself for her""i know""that's good that something is cooking between u two..""nothing as changed""wait dear things chanage with time"...we both smiled..later panchi couldn't stand..i grab her from falling down and made her sit"r u okay?""yeah...just little weakness...""worried about sid?"""nope i called him an hour later...he say everything is fine neil is okay..he is little weak and haven't woke up yet...sid says he will soon come here when everything gets better""i really wana thank neil.he is the true friend..""okay...now go sit with pia..otherwise she will started getting worried...""but..""don't worry i will be fine here...and anyway...there are airhostes ..now go..."..i smiled and went back to pia..i sat beside her..she was smiling in sleep..i was starring and later i went to sleep...

PIA POV
i open my eyes..i was feeling great..relaxed...i took a sigh...later i found my self on some one..look up...and saw abhay sleeping...i got shock..i was sleeping on abhay chest...that moment abhay also open his eyes and looked at me,we were starring..i could feel his warm breath on my face..we came closer...and closer..that moment a air hostess arrived...smiling..getting little embrassed..."what i can get this beauitful couple..tea or coffee"...i jumped i was hell shock where were we?..i look around and saw i was in aeroplane...i came back to my seat..abhay was for a little then he turned towards,the airhostess.."will i would have a cup of coffee..and this lady will also have the same""means two cup of coffee""yess missbeauitful.." and she went, i couldn't belive that abhay was trying to impress that lady..i turned to him.."what did u said to her?""what?i just said we both would like to have coffee..our favourite..remmeber?"".after that!...grr...never mind""what did i said"..i knew abhay would never going to lose his charm...but really y i m feeling bad just beacoz abhay said her beauitful...later after some time..she came back..with our food..placing front of us...and here it go he and that wicth started talking..i was getting annoyed...after we finished with our food...i tried to ignored..him..but he called me"pia.."i turned"yes?""do u know?""i don't know""but.."i don't care""but!..""i don't counted!""pia!""what?""y r u so upset?""abhay i don't want to talk..""fine..don't talk,,i was going to tell u that panchi is pergant""what eve..r..what!!!!?""what?...wait.did i...grrr,,me and my big mouth...""tell me!!!..now!""fine..fine...well panchi soon going to be a mother...that's why she is was not feeling well...and i just got to know the day we had our marriage..""oh..so sweet""well now sid is not here so we need to take care of her.."..i smiled and turned around to see..and i spot her..sleeping peacefully...i sat again...and looked through the window..."u r happy?" abhay asked..i didn't turned"yeah...being a mother..having your child in our womb...enjoying every moment...i always imagined that i will carry jeh's child in my womb..we would enjoy every single moment...we will both bring our child in this world...and we would completed our family...abhay...u have no idea...how much i wanted to become his me and jeh..."..i stopped...i realized...i have said too much ..

ABHAY POV
she was telling me ...that how much she wanted to be jeh's forever..to have a completed family with him...it was hurting me..when ever something build between us...she breaks it by bringing jeh in between...i know jeh loved her most..and she still love him...but i also have a heart...i try to fill those wounds...but again she gives new...y do i build hope even i know it is useless...she never will be in love with me...i wish once..only once..i could tell her that how much i love her,what is she to me...what she has value in my life...i m crazy about her but again...she is jeh's..panchi was wrong!!... nothing will change...nothing...any way...jeh is important to her...and she is important to me...i care for her...i don't want to be the bad guy...make my place in her heart by force...i will remain the same...and i hope...atleast..she see some value of me...pia got quiet...i moved my gaze away...i didn't know what to do...later pliot annocced we were landing...me and pia were slient ...then we heard panchi scearming...we both turned and saw panchi in bad condition...i stood up and ran towards her...pliot annocced to tie seat belts...i came to her.."abhay!!!...abh...abhy.."and she faint...pia was behind me sacred..i made her sit beside panchi and waited for the aeroplane to land!!!...later after landing..we took her into clinic there...and after a long time..daughter said that she is weak...the news affect will keep distrubing her!!!

PIA POV
after a long exceiment events..we reached home...tried...i made panchi sleep in her room and later i enter...saw abhay sleeping on sofa,without changing his clothes..he was also wearing his shoes..i wanted to laugh at him...but true...he was tried...exhausted...i came to him..saw something was troubling him...his hand was on his forehead..."abhay.."abhay opened his eyes..."abhay..what is troubling u?""nothing pia..just a small headache...""let me help u..""no pia...go rest...after we came a long jouerny..""done...now shudup..and let me do the work.."...i came sat next to him..i kept him lying there...and placed his head on my lapses...his eyes were starring at me..i smiled.."close your eyes..."and he closed..i placed my hand on his head and started to press...after sometime he s was sleeping...smiling..he had captured me by his hands grabing my knees..i planned not to move..and..start moving my hand in his thick black hairs i slept at my same position..

ABHAY POV
i woke up and found myself on pia'lapses...i opened my eyes and saw her sleeping...with the position ..i smiled..she didn't move for me..she didn't wanted me get disturbed...i smiled at her..i felt i had some place in her heart..maybe small but still...i sat...looked at her sleeping like a fairy..i carried her towards the bed..made her lyed and i was about to leave when her hand grabed mine wrist...i turned and saw her smiling with her gritting eyes..."i m already awake"..i smiled...later pia got ready..and went down to perpare the breakfast...i took a bath and later i went down saw panich and pia already sitting on dining table i came and sat next to pia..we were ignoring eachother again...painchi was smiling at us...later panchi started to get up..pia ran towards her"pia u don't need to i can go""no..i u need us.."..she smiled and they left after after few mintues pia came and sat beside me...after a long slince...she breaks up"um..abhay..what now?""well...we stay here until..dad say back in india is everything is back to normal...""when will sid coming back?""i haven't talk to him yet...but i know he will soon coming back and later he and painchi go to london""what?!...wait...why?""dad said sid is already handling bussines in london..and here things are bad so he wanted me to handle here...""abhay..one question""yeah""why does your dad not allows live us together...?""he thinks...it will damage the bussiness""how?""pia just leave..can we talk this later..""yeah sure..." i didn't wanted her to get hurt bad again..i didn't to rewind the past...later we came towards our breakfast... i stood up and about to leave when pia called my name i turned towards her.."abhay..there is little jam sticked on our face.."i took the tissue try to clean but i couldn't see..later pia came to me..used her tumb to clean..the jam was right side of my lips...after cleaning it..we starred at each other..pia traced her fingers on my lips..and later she kissed me on my right cheek!!!!
Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar pls bring pia out of her jeh dreamland. it drives me mad to read pia imagining about jeh like that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update,
Now abhays in denial mode,
Hope every thing come back to normal,
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
its so nice update great work...tht god abhai is saved now...
i also feel pain of abhay when piya described her feelings 4 jeh child stuff...
panchi is preganat wow thts great...but piya has feeling 4 abhay she did now tht...last scene of abhiya tht awsome piya kissed abhay yupieee...hope so soon piya realize tht ...but who is the one who want to take abhays life yar...
waiting 4 next part yar cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


Awesooome update
loved it
i hope .. Piya starts a new life with abhay & forgets jeh !
She brings jeh in every thing..its making me MAD & poor abhay is hurting so much !
Eagerly waiting for the next update
continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon

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