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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Great update. Gotta love arhi encounters! 😛

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Sorry for taking so long to update, and on top of that, I'm not quite satisfied with this!! But, oh well!! Better update before you people completely forget who I am!! 😆
And people who PMed me asking when I'd be updating, thanks a lot guys!! You have no idea how much your love means to me!!
Part 3:

Khushi sat doodling on her design book, waiting for some work to be assigned to her. Arnav had been really supportive. Of course she hadn't expected anything even remotely closer to that. Since she was free, she started doing what she always did when she was free. Design shoes. As she was wearing beige pants, she drew a beige ribbony tie ups, and was about to give it finishing touches when she felt someone behind her. She turned around and looked up to find Arnav curiously looking at what she had drawn. He looked at her for two seconds, as if thinking what he should do of her, and then called for Lavanya. Khushi hoped against hopes that she would be allowed to design shoes for AR.

Lavanya, who had seen Arnav staring at Khushi drawing (for quite a while, actually), was about to leave, when Arnav called her. "Yes, ASR?" Lavanya asked as she approached them.

"She's under you. I want the designs for the winter collection to be ready within a week. Explain her everything. You two are handling the designs." Khushi looked a little disappointed, before she thought this was for the best and smiled to herself and then at Lavanya. Arnav caught this and remembered Lavanya telling him that one of her friend studied in Khushi's college.

Arnav snorted once, getting the attention of both the women, who looked at him questioningly. He turned to Khushi as he asked, "You are here because of Lavanya, aren't you? All that self esteem talk you gave in front of Di that day was bullsh*t. Typical middle class woman. You want money too, but you can't be open about it, unless someone thinks you're a gold-digger. I'm not at all surprised." Khushi's mouth hung open, watching him with her big, brown eyes which showed her shock, hurt and a tint of annoyance. She was about to open her mouth, when she looked around and saw that almost half of the office was watching them, and she shut her mouth with a snap, and bent her head. She didn't understand why, but his words seemed to cut through her.

"ASR. I didn't go to her college that day. I mean, I had been there. But I didn't even glance at her for the whole while, because she had made me promise that I'd not take any decisions about her employment here based on our friendship! Some righteous crap she was talking about!!" Lavanya said in a dry voice, rolling her eyes as if the whole idea seemed silly! Khushi raised her eyes to look at Arnav, and she'd have been satisfied if she had seen even a hint of regret in his eyes. But all she could see was indifference, and she clenched her jaw in frustration, when she heard him mutter, "Yeah. Whatever! Get back to work!" And strode away to his chamber. Khushi turned to Lavanya with a W*F expression, and Lavanya giggled and hugged Khushi telling her not to bother.

Once Arnav reached his cabin, he sat on his chair, wondering how Khushi managed to rub him the wrong way always. He absolutely hated her, not exactly knowing why. And he seemed to be having trouble controlling his emotions around her. Especially anger. It wasn't like he didn't know that it was wrong to lash out on her without a proper excuse. That too in front of almost all his staff. But he had. And he didn't know what to do about it now.

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That evening as Khushi sat with Anjali having her tea, Anjali asked her how her first day at work was. Anjali had seen Khushi with a glum expression, and wondered if her hot-headed brother had done anything to offend or hurt Khushi in anyway. Khushi frowned as she remembered Arnav's allegations earlier that day. But then she remembered how he had permitted her to call him Arnav, but not in front of anyone. He was clearly very confusing. How could a person be so sweet one moment, and absolutely bitter the next?? Anjali shook Khushi to wake her up from her reverie. And Khushi started telling how she had spent her first day at AR. Anjali noticed how Khushi was calling her brother Arnav, and not ASR, as his other employees did. When she asked Khushi about this, Khushi explained in an awed voice, "He told me I could call him Arnav. But not in front of anyone!!"

Anjali just said, "Oohhh..." And her eyebrows raised. Arnav who was passing by heard his Di's question and waited to see what Khushi's reaction would be. When he heard his Di's "Oohhh...", he rolled his eyes, knowing where his sister's thoughts would be heading to.

What had surprised him more was Khushi's response. He had expected her to complain to his sister, and that he'd be getting a proper lecture from his sister that night. But she didn't even mention anything about that incident. As he entered the patio, he saw her finish whole of her tea in a gulp, and blinked back the tears that had come as she swallowed the hot tea, rubbing her chest. Arnav looked at this with amused eyes, as she gave her good bye to Anjali and left in a hurry, not even acknowledging him. He frowned as he saw the retreating back of her, and he was thinking he should apologize to her when he saw Di looking at him curiously, her eyes gazing into his face as if she was seeing it for the first time. Arnav jerked his head back and asked, "What?!"

"Is that guilt that I see on your face, brother?" Anjali asked, as she saw a flash of annoyance at being caught feeling guilty, pass through his eyes. "Guilt?! Right!!" Arnav muttered as he left for his room.

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The next day Arnav wanted to know how the designs were coming up, and had called Lavanya and Khushi to his chamber. As soon as Lavanya started showing the designs, she got a call and she excused herself, leaving Khushi to show him all the designs. "So what's your contribution in this??" Arnav asked after looking at all the designs. Khushi showed the accessories and shoes that she had designed for the few dresses Lavanya had designed. Arnav sat back in his chair, as he stared at her. "What about clothes? When I included you in this project, I wanted you to design clothes. Not just a few god damned shoes!!" Arnav almost was yelling as he finished the sentence. Khushi cowered to her chair, as his voice started to rise and by the end of it, was on the verge of crying, when Lavanya and Anjali intervened.

"ASR!!" Lavanya exclaimed as Anjali yelled, "Chotey!!"

Arnav closed his eyes, and sighed in exasperation, thinking that he really didn't need this right now. "I told Khushi to design the accessories for the first few dresses. Until she got an idea of what kind of dresses we'd prefer!!" Lavanya explained, and Anjali continued, "Even otherwise, is that a way to talk Chotey??!!" Arnav cut her, "Di, please!!"

And before Arnav could say anything more, Khushi stood up and told everyone, "Its okay. He's right. I need to design clothes too. Not just shoes." She turned to Arnav and said, "I'll do it. . . . . Sir." and left the room. Anjali gave him a scathing look before she followed Khushi. Lavanya gave him a disapproving smile and shook her head before she went out too. Arnav simply shrugged and sat down on his chair, when his gaze fell on the accessories that Khushi had designed. He ran a finger over her drawings as he smiled. . . . . . .

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Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

res

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Harshi, It's been a looong time u updated ur works..! Don't you feel you are making me impatient?? Not good *Ofcourse for u 😆**

I felt the update was smaller. But still the ending of it was good!!

Anjali saying 'Ohhh'.. Very very cute 😉

When she was allowed to call him Arnav she called him 'Sir ', poor girl😭

Last part, when he ran his fingers over the designs 😍

Hope, he'll apologize..!'.

Edited by Sivaranjani - 13 years ago

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

what is his problem ? mad guy he is one !! 😆 oh i love this mad guy!! lol
superb update!!!

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

ws good to read but short one ! ( or i felt like that)

psl update fast.. it's a pleasure to read!!!

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Res;)
u know i thought of asking many questions for sooo sooo late updt but,yesterday u told me y ur not updting, so i think its okk okk;)
so i hv list
here i go:D
1. Tell me how much our love means to u?
2. 4 things imp- i was jumping in joy tht many updts :|lol my dreams and me:)
3. Pretty woman i want updts
4. Crass and u, what the?
5. For this updt
awsome goshh this arnav and his mood swings
6. Last part she called him sir :(poor girl and he smiled aftr watchin her designs lovely but tooo short
7.last but not least
BLOG u deleted the blog lol
y :)

so hozz it?
I want long reply
and yeeeyy se i rembered to edit my post
7 POINTS:*

Edited by aparna5293 - 13 years ago

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anjs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

nice update...thanks for the pm

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neena

@shadesofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

nice👏👏👏
i loved it!!!!
thanks for pm...

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

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edit: First things first hey you have adapted the title from a song of Rihanna's right

But there is a movie 10 things i hate about you...(Its an adaptation of aming of the Shrew by Shakespeare) there is cute litlle poem in there which i am pasting here and also my own edited version also along with it...

I hate the way you talk to me
And the way you cut your hair
I hate the way you drive my car
I hate it when you stare

I hate your big dumb combat boots
And the way you read my mind
I hate you so much that it makes me sick
It even makes me ryhme

I hate the way you're always right
I hate it when you lie
I hate it when you make me laugh
Even worse when you make me cry

I hate the way you're not around
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.

My horrible adaptation

I hate the way you write fabulous stories
And the way you still ask if its good!!!!
I hate the way you make me beg for updates
I hate it Shiva stalks and comments on it befor me

I hate your language, so wonderful it is!!!!
And the way make me emote with your words
I hate you so much that it makes me feel inferior
It even makes feel worse as I can't even rhyme while you write so superbly

I hate the way you're always update regularly
I hate it when you still make want for more updates
I hate it when you make me laugh
Even worse when you make me cry and feel everything you characters do

I hate the way you're not around or don't update
And the fact that I can never be as good as you
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.

Harshu I know its not good but then its one of the first attempt so bear with me!!!!!

I promise under you wonderful writers influence i will improve!!!

Now hey what was with that PM dear!!!!!

You write wonderfully and nope never have i ever felt your writing as crass...those who do well they can save their time and read you FF...you better ignore them...I am too much in love with your works so don't you dare to be without updating any of your works...be it blog or here i leave that choice to you...but i want updates and for god's sake don't stifle your creative streak in you!!!!!

You are such a good writer that i can almost cry along with Khushi when she is hurt or feel sacred for her when she is afraid...and when someone rubs ASR the wrong way i can literally feel his anger...thier love and the environment/ scene that you create and develop are all too good...for gods sake don't stop writing!!!!

Hey do not worry about the blog...keep giving it a try and you may come out with flying colors..not that i want you to quit IF but then i do not want you restrict your self only IF...blog may also have more reach...you never know...so keep trying and have your blog don't close it...and of course be in If till they send you away and if they do send you away then we all look forward to only your blogs son't we so don't lose touch of your blog!!!!

Well as for the Pretty woman...I personally feel you should continue it!!!!!

Plagarism: A piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work

But you have owned it up to pretty woman so i don't see nay issues her e!!!! Moreover if your pretty woman is copied work then each and every fan fiction story is also ...are we all not influenced by the characters someone else has created and write about them...

and in any case you have already warned people not come in if they have any objection so those who have objection will browse away you must continue that...

Now coming to this update:

Hey it was fantastic update...i just love how Khushi defends him and his touching those designs after she has left...awww that was so cute you know...you must write more you know...reading your work leaves this pleasant feeling in heart!!!!!

Well now i request you to give another personal touch here...see ARnav has told Khushi to call him Arnav when they are alone ...which is a teeny weeny sign form his side showing she is special i want Khushi also to show something like that to him...in direct words rather than just defending him...and hey at least one or two ARhi moments yaar catching and falling...staring and staring etc

superb update do update soon

Edited by uniquebluerose - 13 years ago