VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16 - Page 6

Immensely loved the nok jhok between Viraat n Maanvi...

Where will she go now...??

Loved the update... Continue soon

Thanks fr d PM!!

VirMan scene was rocking😃😃...loved it a lot!!
superb update sweetz😳
i'm a bit worried for Mannu...pls do continue soon😊

love u🤗

Nice update jaf... thanks for the PM and continue soon dear,, loved the first meeting of virmaan 😉

wow great start ur i lovd it great job👍🏼 waiting 4 the nxt part

Thanks for the PM, apologize for reading it late... Awesome meeting between VirMan. Can't wait for the next part😊

Loved the second part and the almost takkar... Very interesting concept and am definitely looking forward to seeing where you take it!

I finally read your update and I loved it please do continue soon. 😊

Chapter 3 - Virat saves the day

Manvi walked on dragging her luggage with her whilst Virat stood arms crossed leaning on the front of his car glaring at her with a little smirk on his face. Manvi stood still for a while before she turned around to catch a final glimpse of Virat as he walked over to get in his car. She saw him get inside and started walking again. Virat sat inside his car and went through his phone he looked up through his window and saw Manvi trailing off at a distance.

Manvi carried on her journey unable to find a hotel she started to feel a little scared as she was alone and had nowhere to go she was in a city shed never been in and she didn't know anyone there. Manvi stopped when she realised she was surrounded by a bunch of goons staring at her and whispering amongst each other. Manvi looked down and tried to walk past but one of them grabbed on to her hand "choro mer haat varna mein" Manvi threatened. "Varna kya" the man asked still gripping on to her hand making her wince in pain. Manvi released her hand and slapped the guy on his right cheek. The man fumed in anger and Manvi became nervous he walked closer to her and pulled of her scarf "ab mein tumhe nahin chorunga." Manvi walked back nervously but she bumped into another member of the gang. Her tears started to build up and she became even more fearful as she looked around for help but there was no one in sight she pushed them away and ran off whilst they chased her Manvi didn't stop and was almost breathless but she carried on running until she slipped and dropped forward. She looked up to see two feet in front of her and a hand of help approach down...

Virat was driving along the roads making his way back home when he noticed a bunch of guys torturing a girl he stepped out of his car and before he knew it the girl fell at his feet, he bent down and held his hand out to help her up. She grabbed it and stood up "thanx" she told him looking towards the ground and shaking the dirt of her hand she looked up towards him "tum" they both shouted recognising the familiar face in front of them. "Haan mein tum bilkul musibat hon" virat told her. "Mein aur musibat phhssht...meri kya galti hain" Manvi replied in anger. Virat was about to argue back but stopped when he saw the guys approaching then he walked over to them and gave a digusted look before punching them one by one he carried on beating them black and blue until they were unstable and in no state to get back up. He gave one of them one last kick before spitting at him he dusted of his hand "job done." He said as he walked back to Manvi who was stunned she stood there almost lifeless "tumne yeh kya kiya" she questioned. "umm I think I saved you" "what yeh kya tareeka hai agar yh margaye to" "margaye to" he mimicked Manvi before continuing "toh kya ladki ko torture karne me maza ata hai na ine ab kabhi aisa nahi karenge." "Your seriously mad" Manvi told him. " mein pagal hoon aur tum jo yeh akele gum rahi hon koi gar pata nahi hai kya get in the car ill drop you home" he opened the door for her. "nahi mein gar nahi jasakti" "kyu" he asked curiously.

Manvi tried to think of an excuse as she didn't want to tell him the truth. Virat looked her suspiciously "gari mein beto" he demanded. Manvi sat inside. "So kaha hai tumhara gar" he asked. "Hrishikesh" "kya to tum yaha kya kari hon" "woh mein gar se bhag ayi" "tum zaroor koi pagal kane se bhag kar ayi hon" "please mujhe pakao mat agar koi achi hotel jante te hon to waha drop kardo" "teek hai" Virat started his car and drove off.

Manvi sat crossed leg on the car seat she fiddled with the seat belt bored she noticed the CD player and went over to it and switched it on a loud music started to play and she fiddled with the buttons to switch it off she switched on the radio which was playing a soft romantic song. Virat looked at her annoyed and switched the radio off. "Kyu band kiya" Manvi questioned. "Meri gari hai meri marzi mujhe nahi suna toh band kardiya" "lekin mujhe suna hai" she insisted. They both argued over the radio not looking ahead. A big van approached them which were out of control they both looked forward and screamed Virat tried to turn to control the car and move it out of the way he managed to move out the way but the car went off the road and crashed into a tree.

pms will go out late to tired and its a long process just to make life easy for me those who im supposed to pm van you add me to ur buddy list so its easy to and quick to send out pms no worries if you dont its just to make it easier

That was amazing.
I loved it! do PM me soon for the next part.

Wow,VirMan can't meet normally I guess...😆 They fought at first meeting,and had an accident on da second.😆 awesome!! Thanx for da update Jafe🤗.continue soon! 😃