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Posted: 13 years ago

Well tons of thanks to my sweetest friend Piya for making this wonderful banner for me...its damm beautiful i swear...

Now first of all my sincere apologies to you all that I haven't updated from a long time.. I was out of town but now um back'. Sorry to keep you all waiting''.

Love you all'

Here is the next Part:


Part 6

Daadima: maan apko abhi hamare saath chalna hoga'or hum kuch or nahin sunna chahte hai [Maan u have to come along with me'and I don't want any excuses at all]

Maan: par daadi hume chalna kaha hai ye to bata dijiye [But grandmom where are we going please tell me]

Daadima: pados mein hi chalna hai ab der mat kijiye or chaliye [its our neighbours house now stop all this and come along]

Maan would not agree so soon going to such places wid his grandmom but this time he dint even refused once he himself dint knew the reason but most important he agreed to go.

Handa Mansion:

All the interment preparations of Mr. Handa were completed but Geet was still sitting like a lifeless soul'..Meera tried hard to bring her back to her senses but she failed'..It felt as her life had ended that very moment'..She dint moved just sat in front of her father in a hope that he will once again call up her name, talk to her, share his feelings but destiny had something else'.she never knew that it would turn to be the last meeting with her father or may be Mr. handa was really waiting for geet's arrival so that he could live the world without any further demands'.

Maan and Daadima too came to Handa mansion and sat with the rest of gathered people, they meet Pammi who too was in tears'.Maan could have some strange feelings going on inside him and it continued to make him worried and that too when he had no reasons for it''

Now it was time to take Mr. Handa for the final activities'''and yes he was been taken away from his two loving daughters and his egoistic wife'.as soon as he was picked up by people meera ran towards Geet to meet her father for the last time'.

Geet still did not react'.She was not even crying'..just sitting in the same position''Here maan noticed that strange behavior but the girl was not visible to him. Meera finally pushed up geet badly to bring her back to her senses and finally she was successful'.

Geet was all in tears she could not just stop crying''She lost the person whom she loved more than her own life''people were taking her father away from her and she ran behind madly to see her father for the last time'..

Maan was surprised to see the girl whom he met just a day ago'.He could not relate his eyes'.the girl who was helping strangers at the airport, was all the time praying for her father'was fighting to get a ticket for her''was none other than her. He could not see her in that pathetic situation'..his heart left out for her'..

Geet: bauji uthiye na please [get up father please]

Geet: dekhiye bauji aapki geet apke pass ayi or aap yu naraaz hokar baithe hue hai'please uthiye na'.dekhiye agar aap abhi ke abhi nahi uthenge to apki geet apse naraaz ho jaegi'..[please get up father'your geet has come to meet you and you are not even getting up'if you don't get up your geet will be angry on you]

Everyone was witnessing this whole scene and had tears in their eyes as well'..Daadima felt to go and hug her once but she controlled herself'..

Geet: bachpan se apne meri har iccha puri ki hai bauji aap kya meri itni si baat nahin sunenge'.bauji ek baat uthke aap mujse baat to kijiye na'main waada karti hu aapse kabhi bhi dur nai jaungi'uthiye na bauji [You have always fulfilled all my wishes since childhood'.wont you fulfill my dis dream too'..I promise I will never leave you and go away from you'please dad get up once]

The time for funeral was getting delayed'..so meera came forward and asked geet to step back

Geet:dekh na meera kab se bauji ko jagane ki koshish kar rahi hoon vo meri sun nahi rahein tu unhe bol na [look meera um asking dad to get up'.he is not listening to me u try for once]

Meera: di bauji ab kabhi wapis nahin ayenge [di dad will never come back]

Geet hugged meera and cried badly'''..

Geet: ye kya hogaya meera'..[why did dis happen meera??]

Meera: di aap chup ho jaiye please'.agar hum aise rote rahein to bauji ko bhi dukh hoga na'.humein unhe ache se vida karna chahiye [di please keep quiet'.if we keep crying dad will feel bad and then we should send him nicely na]

Geet controlled herself a bit'.Daadima finally came forward and supported her and meera as well'while Mr. handa was taken for his cremation''Handa family was left with sweet memories' [baatein bhul jaati hai yaadein yaad aati hai]

####While writing this part Silky too was crying'.but then i had to contoll myself''Oh geet!!

Khurana Mansion:

Daadima, maan and dev were sitting at the dining table''

Daadima: aaj un bachiyon ko dekh kar mera to dil bahar aa gaya'. [today I felt my heart out seeing condition of those two girls]

Daadima: sabse zyada unki badi wali beti kya naam tha uska haan geet'...bechari [more than that the elder one'what was her name'Geet]

Dev: meera to meri bhi kafi achi dost hai daadi par uski badi behen se kabhi mulaqat nahin hui [meera is a good friend of mine but I have never seen her elder sister]

Daadima: bte shayad vo yaha nahi rehti thi'.humne bhi use kaafi saalo baad dekha hai'maan aap bhi nahin mile na unse kabhi?? [I guess she doesnot lives here'I too saw her after years'Maan have u met her earlier??]

Maan was still lost in his own thoughts'.his mind was taking him back to Geet's condition'..

Daadima: maan kaha pe khoye hai aap?? [maan where are u lost?]

Maan: kahin nahin daadima bas muje bhook nahin hai main apne room mein ja raha hu [nowhere grandmom'.well I don't feel like eating'.I am going in my room]

He leaves for his room'..daadima and dev too felt bit strange by maan's behavior'here in his room maan was standing near to the window''his mind was constantly thinking about Geet'.her helplessness,,,

Maan(self-thought) muje to yehi lagta tha ki dukh sirf muje hi hai iss zindagi mein lekin jab uss ladki ka dukh ke baarein mein sochta hu to apna dukh to muje kuch bhi nahin lagta'.vo ladki jo sabki madad karti thi'.anjaan lago ke lie bhi apnapan dekha tha maine usme lekin aaj jab uske saath aise dekha to kyu muje uske liye utna bura lag raha hai '..kyu??? [I kept thinking that its me who has got troubles in his life..but when I think abot the troubles she has faced I cant even see my trouble'the girl who helped everyone'even whom she dint knew had lively feeling'..and when I saw her like that its feeling so bad why????]

He kept on thinking but then he had no answers to all that''

Days passed the same way'..the lively geet had lost sumwhere''.she speaked very less'.. Just kept sitting in her room''on the other hand meera tried to convince as much as she could to get back her old Geet but all her attempts were failing'.Pammi couldn't digest the closeness between Geet and Meera but she couldn't do anything at that time'..

Pammi: kisi bhi tarah iss geet ko yaha se wapis bhejna hoga muje [I will have to do something and send geet from here asap]

Pammi: upar se unhone geet ke naam adhi property bhi kar di hai or muje batana bhi zaruri nahin samjha'muje kuch to karna hi hoga [and moreover he had named half of the property on geet's name'I will have to do something for that as well]

Precap: Geet's life in danger''😭😭


Well how was the update friends?? Hope I lived upto each one of your expectations'..

Morover I dedicate this update to few people who means a lot in my life'.Starting from Sai, Piya, Abgina, Gudiya (AbbyluvsMaan), Ritzy di, Ana di and Zahra'.they all convinced me and motivated me to write'..Love u all'.

Please do tell how did you find today's update'If u liked then please hit the like button and do comments'...they do encourage me to write more and more'..

Love u all😃😃😃


Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago



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thnk u sooo much cutie for dedicating dis to us ab yaar mere fav ffs ko beech mein kaise chhodne de skte the bata??? isliye IF chhodne ki sochna bhi tere liye ban h...SAMJHI!!!!!!
khair bahot ho gayi abi ki patar patar ab update ki baat krte hain...
wat an update sachchi yaar tune rula diya...
maan bina talne ki koshish kiye handa mansion ki or khicha chala gaya hmmm kuch to pakka badla h bangalore trip mein...
par yaar nxt part mein d way u wrote it na i felt every bit of geet's pain...d whole scene was brilliantly written by first geet not reacting n sitting lyk a lifeless soul den meera trying to make her realise d truth...she getting bck her senses but still not accepting d truth n tryna tlk to her father n den realising n crying her heart out wid her sister...it was sooo painful n heart wrenching...
dadima first controlling herself n den consoling both d sisters was brilliant bit n maan lost in geet's thoughts n feeling her pain was superb...i luved it wen maan felt bad that how such a sweet loving caring n pure soul lyk geet can go through sooo much pain...
luved dat lost maan on dining table n his pov dat he thought dat only he has so much of pain but geet is going through more pain dat him...luved dat bit really much cutie...
n precap oh lord m sure its pammi who'll try dat...
luved d update it was a masterpiece dear d way u penned down geet's sorrow...
luvya loadzzz cutie muaaahhh...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First off all thanks for dedicating such a brilliant update to all of us waise let me tell u agar aayenda hume chodkar jaane ki baat kina toh danda lekar sar par maarungi
okay now the update hasti khelthi bachhi ko rula diya yaar 😭😭😭
what an emotional part poor Geet I can understand her condition par shukr hai k atleast meera ki koshish ki wajah se wo react toh karne lagi
Maan toh Geet k dard se relate kar raha hai i m eager to know his past now shayad inhemein dard ka rishta hi ek dusre se jodega
this pammi😡 kaisi aurat hai yaar
continue soon
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
but it was really sad part 😭
hate her mom 😡
hope maan saves her 😉
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc part, silky,
howd ur trip to V?
u really took looong tym to update dis,
lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!dat was an emotional part..
i want my bubbly geet back...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
emotional part hate pammi



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Posted: 13 years ago


Such an emotional part...

bechari Geet...😭

I hate her mother...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update dearie..it was really a pathetic update..felt very bad 4 geet..omg that pammi devil wil try to kill geet 4 property..hope maan saves her..and stands 4 her...cntinue soon..

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