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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi




mein theek hu

26th feb ko final exam

uske baad result phir sem start hogi..

haww sirf 23 days..and u are here on IF😡😡
go back to books😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

tahnk you sooo much darling🤗

weell about maan/..//...the fact that we alll are latto over him has gone to khotte ka head😡😆
but we alwaz love the bad guys...*sighh*😳


thank u so much for welcoming me with all those hugs.🤗this is the first time i commented on your thread. i m new to IF . i used to be a silent reader but couldn't stop myself from commenting so here i m .

i salute the man who sketched the character of maan. hats off to him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello shello😳😳😳
Lo mai wapas aa gayeee🤗🤗🤗
Eid e Milad Mubarak to all of u guys. Please do remeber me in your prayers tomorrow😳😳
There is a VM in the update. The song and music are for the update, but the VM has no connection. i just liked it so i am putting it here.
Missing maaneet like hell😭😭😭
and in the VM there is a glimpse of "adha nanga pura wet khotta" in my friends words!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Happy watching him😉😉😉

CHAPTER 13:

They say the darkness of the night hides everything. But what about a tortured soul, the unheard cry, the unseen tears long dried? Does the darkness seeping into your soul alter the realm of your consciousness? Years of piled up misery finding an outlet to grieve can cleanse the soul of its burden and let life breathe in anew.

Geet sat there crying for a long time.

She cried for herself.

She cried for her life.

She cried for a broken dream.

She cried for a broken mirage.

She cried for the death of her expectations.

She cried till there were no more tears left.

The echo of her sobs had vanished soundlessly into the realms of the night but the pain and despair loomed in the room. The palpable feelings of hurt and despair settled down around her encasing her from within till she could no longer bear the injustices inflicted on her.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8BUJXw06Dc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Credit for VM goes to the uploader😳

Dhundhla jaayein jo manzilein

Ek pal ko tu nazar jhuka

Jhuk jaye sar jahan wahi

Milta hain rab ka rasta

"Why Babaji? Why? What is my fault that you are punishing me? Till date whatever you have decreed, I have accepted with no complains. But still you keep testing my strength. Babaji aapki Geet itni mazboot nahi hai ke wo ab aapke aur imtihaan sehan kar sake." She cried with her head bowed into her palms.

Teri kismat tu badal de

Rakh himmat bus chal de

Tera saathi, mere kadmon ke hain nishan

Her sobs echoed in the room, wrenching the stone heart of even the gloomy shadows present there. But the one for whom she cried was oblivious to her agony. He didn't care! "Geet unhe teri koi parwah nahi hai! Tu unpe kyu apne aasoun barbaad kar rahi hai?" She opened her eyes and tried wiping her tears and controlling herself. Her eyes found the photo of her Babaji, whose blessings she had seeked just a few hours before. She looked at the photo questioning it with her eyes, seeking answers for her life.

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

The photo looked the same as always. Babaji was smiling down benignly at her with his hands raised as always, assuring her of his presence while granting her the strength and courage that kept her going. Nothing had changed, as far as Babaji was concerned. So why had her perception changed? Wasn't she the same Geet who had always believed in her Babaji more than anything else?

Khud pey daal tu nazar

Halaton se haar kar

Kahan chala re

So why did she feel her faith waivering today? "No Geet! You will not give up your faith. Babaji pe vishwas rakh. Wo tujhe kabhi akele nahi chodenge."

Maybe this was another of Babaji's tests for her. "You have come through all of them till today. So why are you giving up today Geet? Haina wo tere saath tujhe hausla dene. He will guide you through the thick patches and ensure that you succeed. "

Haath ki lakeer ko

Modhta marodhta hai hosla re

To khud tere khawabon key rang mein

Tu apne jahan ko bhi rang de

She remembered her promise to Darji. Hadn't she promised him that she would make this marriage work? So she will give it her all. She will not accept defeat. She will not let any man defeat her.

She got up with determination, wiping off her tears. A young woman determined to make her husband acknowledge their relationship.

Ke chalta hoon main tere sang mein

Ho shaam bhi toh kya

Jab hoga andhera

Tab payega dar mera

Uss dar pe phir hogi teri subah

"Since you are asking me, let me make it clear to you. Nahi maanta mai tumhe apni patni! Nahi maanta is shaadi ko! It means nothing to me. Understand? For me you are just a liability, an unwanted one at that!"

Maan's words echoed in her ears making her step falter. "Agar wo hi nahi chahte to mai kya kar sakti hu? In this male oriented world, who will even listen to me? If he is anything like my family, to how will I fight for my rights?" she mused remembering the way her Veerji used to hit her bhabhi for no fault of hers! "Will he hit me too? Punish me for being a mere female?" she wondered, her Veerji and Mamaji's opinion on women coming forth in her mind.

The thought frightened her for a second, as she had no one here to turn to. Then she remembered her new family. She also recollected the look of respect on Maan's face when he looked at Naintara or his indulgent smile when he talked to Annie. She recollected the free camaraderie between them and it re instated her decision, firming it.

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

She was Geet Maan Khurrana and she will win this fight. She looked at herself in the mirror. Still dressed as a bride, the sacred vermillion colour in her maang and the mangalsutra around her neck. They were all she needed to fight for her rights.

Mit jaate hain

Sabke nishaan

Bas ek woh mit-ta nahi hain

Maan le jo har mushkil ko

Marzi meri

She looked back at her life, how she had always bowed down to every decision which had been taken for her. Not that she had had any say in the matter. But no more, she will not let fate play with her life. She will fight the world for her rights. She will not let Maan throw her away like unwanted baggage. She will find out why Maan had married her if he was so against this marriage. She will make him give this relationship a chance.

She will write her own destiny not the other way round

Ho humsafar na tera jab koi

Tu ho jahan, rahoonga main wahi

tujhse kabhi na ek pal bhi main juda

All her life she had been alone, with no one to listen to her woes or worries. No one to affectionately guide her through her growing years. No one to lovingly caress her hair when she stood first in her exams. Rajji and Tito had been there, but they couldn't make up for the absence of her loving parents.

She walked over to Babaji and looked at him with tears in her eyes.

"Aapki Geet ne aaj tak sirf aap pe bharosa kiya. Aaj bhi wohi karegi. Mujhe yakeen hai aap humesha mera saath doge." Saying so she bowed her head before Him and took his blessings.

An unknown peace settled in her heart as soon as she admitted her faith. Her soul recognized the meaning of trust and faith in her only Savior.

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

She silently moved towards the bedroom where her luggage was kept, still waiting to be unpacked. She moved towards one case, and opened it to find a framed photograph of herself with her parents.

She looked at them hugged the picture to her chest. She looked around at the decorated room, the burning candles, the flowers, all of which held no meaning now. The room was still was the same.

But she had changed from within.

She was no longer the Geet who had expected her life to change for the better. But she was the Geet who was determined to make her life change for the best!

She smiled at her parents and sat down on the bed, resting her head on the headboard, waiting for her husband to return.

The inner piece she found within coupled with the day's tiredness and emotional upheaval made her drop off to sleep, with a slight smile adorning her lips.

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Maan on the other hand, stormed into his office and banged the door behind him! His inner tumult making him edgy and anger erupted from within him at his helplessness.

Her stricken face loomed in his conscience, making him restless.

Sitting back in his chair, he closed his eyes and rested his head back to get some respite. But his inner battle wouldn't allow him any peace.

"Why did I give in to Darji's demands! I could have found some other way out of this mess." He hit the table hard in frustration making the files bunched in a corner to spill on to the table.

He removed one of them and glanced at it, again trying to get around the truth reflected from the figures. But to no avail. They were still reflecting the same dismal reality.

KRK Constructions was headed towards bankruptcy unless a huge amount of capital investment was made ASAP.

And to get that money he had sacrificed his life and principles. He had done what he had vowed he would never do.

He had married Geet Handa!

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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Edited by CherubNoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

my sexy legged khoti❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CherubNoor


thank u so much for welcoming me with all those hugs.🤗
hey Noor...can i call u that dear🤗🤗
this is the first time i commented on your thread. i m new to IF . i used to be a silent reader but couldn't stop myself from commenting so here i m .
we are all the same..one fine day we cant resist...maaneet ka jadu hi aisa haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i salute the man who sketched the character of maan. hats off to him.

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️i do more than salute dear☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

moi jalebiwala☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oooh awesome...i love the fighter in Geet. Yeah yeah I'm a feminist all through.

Bechara Maan, he'll probably have no idea what hit him.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice teaser...

but pl cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey u updating..?? Great... Update b4 12 pm plz...

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