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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Continue soon. Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Arnav is feeling jealous.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god you updated!!! 🥳 I was going kind of 🤪 then after reading the update, I became 😃 😊 Awesome, fantastic, fabulous update!!! 🤗 Jealousy doesn't suit very well on many men, but on Arnav it is very very cute, I think it makes him more lovable. And a dance between La and Arnav? Then please make sure to give us a repeat of Khushi and Arnav's "teri meri prem kahani" number. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooo jealous Arnav!!!! is Khushi coming to the party too so that she can get jealous 😉
update sooon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Bawari Piya Ki

Love Beyond Commitment
Part 17
So Part 17 up! Hope you all will enjoy and give a lot of comments.😃 I really have no idea how its come up but have tried to make it HOT😈. Any how all those who are thinking why ita La and not Khushi, just read the update you'll know that if Arnav and la can be this hot? Imagine what would our Bawari piya Ki with her piya would do😳😳😳. For now read on and you better LIKE it😛

Arnav took a shower and came out wearing his towel tied on to his waist. His hair was still wet and dripping water on to his chest with the smell of fresh shower all around in his room. He took his colon and wore it on himself when he heard his phone buzzing on the vibration mode. It was NK and there were already seventeen missed calls from him. He picked up the phone.

Arnav: Yeah?

NK: How much more time are you going to take to reach here? And don't tell me that you aren't coming.

Arnav: I am coming. But there's a problem.

NK: What?

Arnav: I threw the entry pass in the temple somewhere.

NK: I knew you would do something like that. That's why I bought an extra pass. Now come soon we all are waiting for you.

Arnav: Fine just an hour. Bye

Arnav changed into a black trouser and a transparent black shirt which made his toned body look even sexier. He gelled his hair and took his phone and car keys and left for the venue.

Arnav reached the venue at half past ten and called NK to come out as he was waiting there. NK came out and gave Arnav his pass.

NK: you go inside; I am coming in a minute.

Arnav: where are you going?

NK: client call. Have to attend this one.

Arnav: At 10:30 pm?

NK: At 10:30pm India time and 5:00 pm UK time; remember!

Arnav: Uh oh! carry on.

Arnav went inside and to his utter surprise the lights went off making everything around him dark. He was planning to look out for Akaash somewhere but now he couldn't even figure out a thing.

Play this song in the background now : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MbpBO2xRp8

Just then a beam of red colour light fell on his face as the music started. All he could see around was beams of red colour lights on different platforms with shadows of what looked like of girls in some lacy and leather lingerie or so. It took him a minute to adjust his eyes to the light in the pub.

Imagine La wearing this:

And then he saw a La next to a royal looking chair with a metallic chain her hand. But before he could process anything going around him, he felt someone blind fold him and push him on to a chair which he guessed was the same near which La was standing. His hands were tied down behind and he couldn't move an inch off the chair.

Yeh.. raat ruk jaye
Baat tham jaye..
Teri bahoon mein

As the blind fold got removed off his eyes, he saw La and some other girls dancing in front of him sensuously around poles.


Khwaishein jagi hain
Pyase pyase labon pe
Sii..
Khud ko jala doon
Teri aahon mein

La came close to him and traced her fingers on his face which she licked as they touched his lips and then showed an expression of getting burned.


Aagosh mein..
Mere aaj samah jaa..
Jaane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile'

She hovered over to him moving her upper torso in circular motions just in front of his face. She pulled her head back making her open hair fall on her back and her color bone and neck inches away from his lips. She slowly moved away from him and danced around the pole.

Music:

Yeh jahan..
Saara bhool kar..
Jismon ke saaye tale
Dheemi dheemi saanse
Chale raat bhar
Pal do pal
Hum hain humsafar
The abhi dono yahan
Honge subah jane kahan
Kya khabar

She made him sip the wine and took the glass away before he could continue drinking. His handcuffs were opened and she made him get off the chair putting his hands around her waist. They danced together with her falling on to his chest.


Aa ja zara
Khud ko mujhme mila ja..
Jane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile'

Music: Arnav left her and went to the bar counter to make a drink for himself while La took it as the perfect opportunity to get changed. She came out wearing a black satin sheet tied around her body with her hair left open.

Khwaab hoon
Main toh makhmali..
Palkon mein le ja mujhe
Maine diya mauka tujhe ajanabi'hi'

He was making a drink for himself when she took the glass of his hand and made a drink for him herself. She made his hand trace around the soft cloth of her dress and rubbed her nose with his making him smile.


Hosh mein
Aaye naa abhi
Ik duje mein hi kahin
Khoyi rahe teri meri zindagi..
Khamoshiyan dhadkanon ki
Suna.. jaa
Jane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa jaa.. (Aa jaa..)
Jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile..

He picked her up in his arms and she left her hold on him making her all weight fall on him. He turned around in cirles holding her in his arms and then put her down on her feet but still held her close in his arms.

Raat ruk jaye
Teri bahoon mein
Aagosh mein
Aaj mere samah.. jaa
Jane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se
Aa, aa zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile..

Arnav and La burst out laughing with La in Arnav's arms.

Arnav: I can't believe that just happened between us. La is it really you or am I way too drunk to recognize the dancer. He said between his laugh trying to calm down and level his breathing.

La: No Donny, Its really me.

Akaash came to them with a drink in his hand and raising a toast to La.

Akaash: way to go La! If you would have done this in front of a prisoner, he would have spit out everything right there and then. Believe me!

Lavanya giggled at his comment.

Arnav: yeah right, thanks for ruining my bachelor party. You are the biggest turn off I have ever met in my life. He joked with her.

La: Hawww! You are such a loser Donny. She said smacking him on the shoulder.

Arnav smiled and pulled her in a hug warmly.

Arnav: But on a serious note, now for sure I know why you are such a successful criminal lawyer. And why in general women turn out to be more successful while dealing with criminals. He said winking at her and teasing her further.

La: Just shut up will you? Just because you couldn't be daring enough to take criminology and went on to become the corporate servant that you are doesn't mean'..

NK: okay okay guys, just stop it now. I can't handle this Law stuff anymore. You both are in a pub for god sake not in the court. So just STOP fighting.

Akaash: Point to be noted my lord!

Arnav: Point to be noted? He asked La in the drunk state to which she nodded.

Arnav: Alright so the decision is taken, POINT NOTED.

NK: uff! All four of them burst out laughing and moved towards the bar.

Next: Arnav gets to know who actually had planned his BP?😲

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love ya

Shopau

Edited by Shopau - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god...just plain awesome...can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
great updates!!!!
i really loved the inner chatter of arnav...it was really cute
thanks a ton for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates loved it arnav is being set up and not realizing it thanks for the pms
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!!
hot one!!!!
bt too eager fr nxt part!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳i had the music on as suggested while reading and now i don't know whether i'm coming or going!☺️

thank goodness you had arnav joke with La afterwards..phew!!

👏 the music really complemented ur update btw!!!!felt the whole reddish atmosphere as i supp u intended
Edited by karisma - 13 years ago

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