BLOOD RELATIONS-EPILOGUE Pg 138 - Page 74

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb one...
some months leap and deir relation developed to a gr8 extent..!
waiting for deir date..
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first
you said that udpate is not good
i think it is best
the maneet part and shanak part is best,
let me know you take a leap for how much weeks in the story
and they went to Greece
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my favourite second romantic place
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Posted: 13 years ago
my mt tj...that was fabulous...
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loved the way story progressed...
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Posted: 13 years ago
FIRST DATE FOR MAAN AND GEET
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

waiting for date...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

HEY GUYS,

SORRY FOR DELAY AGAIN... 😛

I KNOW IT HAS BECOME A ROUTINE NOW...

THNKX A LOT FOR ALL UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES...

HERE IS PART 28

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Part 28

They parted ways saying bye and meet you in the morning... Both the girls were shocked and surprised with this...

The 2 ends of the deck were decorated for the 2 couples very beautifully...

Maan literally pulled Geet with him... Geet didn't expect this kind of behaviour from Maan... When Shaan and Khanak were out of sight, Maan pulled Geet to himself and held her from behind by her waist... Geet was flabbergasted by Maan's this kind of avatar... Maan tied a blind fold on GEET's eyes... He had done everything with utmost care and love, and wanted to surprise Geet... Geet was anticipating many things in this date, THEIR FIRST OFFICIAL DATE...!!!!

Geet-Maan, y have you blindfolded me???

Maan- sshhh, chup bilkul chup... Bohot bolti ho tum... his voice, fully husky and whispering in her ears from behind, his one hand around her waist...

His voice sent shudders down her spine... Geet didn't expect this at all... She was already blown by Maan in just few minutes, but least did she know that there is lots yet to come...

Maan held her hand firmly and directed her to the end of the deck... Once they reached, he removed the blindfold... Geet fluttered her eyes couple of times to get used to the light outside... When she was fine with it, she looked at the view in front of her and she stood their with her mouth half open and at loss of speech... The whole deck was beautifully decorated with lots of flowers and drapes all around... There were not just roses, but also orchids and many others that were found in Greece... The beauty of the sea was complimenting the decoration... The drapes covered the edges of the cruise... The lightings were also amazingly done... There was a table set for two people... Geet was totally at awe seeing all this...

Maan-you like it???

Geet-...

Maan-aare, Kuch to bolo na yaar... Tumhe acha laga na Geet???

Geet-...

Maan finally held her shoulders and shook her a little to bring her out of her trance...

Maan- Geet...

Geet- haa... She said as if woken up from her deep slumber...

Maan- tumne bataya nahi, tumhe acha laga ki nahi??

Geet- Maan, it's beautiful... Ye tumne mere liye kiya???

Maan- haa Geet, sirf tumhaare liye...

Geet- itna acha surprise aaj tak nahi mila hai mujhe... Thanks a lot Maan...

Maan- Aare, abhi to bas shuruvat hai... Aage aage dekho, hota hai kya... Maan winked at her n she gave a beautiful smile...

Maan forwarded his hand to Geet to hold it and Geet happily obliged... He directed her to the table...

Maan- so ma'am, what will you prefer first, a dance or dinner???

Geet- dance would be a better option sir coz m not yet hungry, and the surprise given is yet to be digested... Both laughed at their way of talking...

So Maan got up from his chair and sat on his one knee in front of Geet, with his one hand held high for Geet...

Maan- So lady, my I have this dance with you... Maan was profusely smiling...

Geet- sure gentleman... Geet gave her hand in Maan's...

Maan called for the person to play the song... He had already arranged for it... Obviously, date me dance na ho to vo date kaisi...

(YOUTUBE LINK- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NT2d01dC8FE)

Music...

Pehela ye pehela, pyaar tera mera soni,

Peheli ye mulaaqat hai,

Peheli ye mulaaqat hai...

Jo keh rahi hai aankhe,

Vo keh rahi hai baate,

Jagi tu bhi saari raat hai,

Jagi tu bhi saari raat hai...

Pehelaaa aa aa aa

Haa pehela, Tera Mera Pyaar...

Music...

Maan held Geet by her waist by one hand and another hand held her hand firmly and Geet's other hand was on Maan's shoulder... Both were lost in the song... The song spoke their mind... It was their first love, first moment together, just the 2 of them and no one to disturb... They needed no words, that job was done by their eyes... They were lost in each others' eyes, speaking so many things to each other yet not uttering a single word from their mouth...

Dil pe chala Na, jab zor koi,

Dil pe chala Na, jab zor koi...

Tu mere paas aa gayi,

Haaye, me tere paas aa gaya...

Pyaasi hai teri saanse, pyaasi hai meri saanse,

Uss pe ye barsaat hai, uss pe ye barsaat hai...

Pehelaaa aa aa aa,

Haa pehela, tera mera pyaar...

Music...

Their hearts were not in their control now... It was thumping loudly, making it clear to both of them that they are alive and living this moment... Maan left her hand and held her by her waist fully and Geet slipped her other hand around his neck... They were very close to each other, but still maintaining proper distance... Both had a very soothing smile on their faces when they were gazing at each other... They were just swinging with the music... There was no barsaat, but the sea was enough to compliment the song...

Kabse the hum tum, tanhaa akele,

Kabse the hum tum, tanhaa akele...

Aaj tujhe chain mil gaya,

Aaj mujhe chain mil gaya...

Bahoon me meri tu, bahoon me tere hum,

Aur ye jawaan raat hai, aur ye jawaan raat hai...

Pehelaaa aa aa aa,

Haa pehela, tera mera pyaar...

Music...

Their loneliness was now very far away with the presence of each other in their lives... Maan slowly left her and went a little bit far sliding his hands from her shoulders and holding it at her palms and again pulling her near ever so slowly... He turned her in such a way that she got entangled in his arms and her back touching his chest and his chin resting on her shoulder... Geet kept her hands on his, holding them lightly... Both their eyes closed and just enjoying their proximity...

Ruksi gayi hai, teri meri raahein,

Ruksi gayi hai, teri meri raahein...

Tum jo saath aa gaye,

Manzil ke paas aa gaye...

Aaye the kaha se dono, jaayenge kaha pe dono,

Yeh to abb kise yaad hai, yeh to abb kise yaad hai...

Pehelaaa aa aa aa,

Haa pehela, tera mera pyaar...

Now both are at the same point in their life waiting for a companion, waiting for a JEEVAN SATHI... They are near their destiny to accept each other in their lives at a different level, a level ahead of friendship... They came near each other in a very different way and they will go further in indeed a very very very different way... Destiny has a very important role in their life... A different kind of twist is stored in their lives... But at this moment, they think nothing else, they remember nothing else... They are just with each other, for each other... Maan left the position and twirled Geet around a couple of times and made her laugh... They were just enjoying this moment together... Maan again held Geet closer to him, this time in each others' embrace...

Pehela ye pehela, pyaar tera mera soni,

Peheli ye mulaaqat hai,

Peheli ye mulaaqat hai...

Jo keh rahi hai aankhe,

Vo keh rahi hai baate,

Jagi tu bhi saari raat hai,

Jagi tu bhi saari raat hai...

Pehelaaa aa aa aa

Haa pehela, Tera Mera Pyaar...

Haa pehela, Tera Mera Pyaar...

Haa pehela, Tera Mera Pyaar...

Music...

The song was over but not their dance... They were still moving slowly in each others' arms as if the music was still on [KKHH style ;-P]...

Geet was now totally lost in Maan's eyes... She could see pure love for her in his dark chocolate eyes... They spoke volumes to her of how much he loves her... For once, Geet felt very low of herself to hide such a big thing from him, which would surely change his and her lives... So she decided that she will tell him now itself... She was about to speak when Maan cut her without realising,

Maan- Geet, how did you like this cruise???

Geet decided to tell him later after dinner because the topic is difficult to digest... So she went along with the ongoing conversation...

Geet- it's beautiful Maan... but itna kharcha karne ki kya zaroorat thi... We would have dined in a nice Greek restaurant...(CA mind)

Maan- ohh ho, CA ji, kabhi to paise bachane ki baat se aage socho...

Geet- agar me paison ke baare me sochna chod dungi to mera CA honeka to koi matlab hi nahi banta...

Both were laughing their heart out after saying this...

Geet- Maan, on a serious note, this would have been really expensive... It wouldnt even have been in Indian currency...

Maan- offhoo, uski chinta tumhe karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Me itna to kama hi leta hu ki me mere doston ke liye kuch khaas karu and You are very special... And anyways, mene aur Shaan ne ek saath book ki hai to zyaada nahi laga hai... And that too for 3 days...

Geet- ok...(realising what Maan said) What..!!! 3 days..!!! Have you both lost it... 3 din hum iss cruise par kya karenge??? And what about our lugguage?? Vo to hotel me hi reh gaya hai...

Maan- tum log nikalne ke baad, we had told at the reception to pack up all your belongings and send it here, so your lugguage is already here... Aur vaise karne ke liye bohot kuch hai..!!! Maan said leaning more on Geet, indicating his intentions and immediately straightened himself and winked at her and Geet blushed a lot...

Maan- haa, sachi bohot kuch hai... We have decided to visit all the islands of Greece in these 3 days... And also some deep sea diving, so see the marine life...

GEET was ecstatic listening to this... The plan was simply awesome... That would be so much fun and exciting...

Geet- wow, that a brilliant plan... Mujhe ye sab karna pasand hai but kabhi aise kuch karne hi nahi diya... Wow, this would be my first experience... Thanks a lot Maan...

Maan- you are welcome... Vaise, pehele jab mene kaha ki karne ko bohot kuch hai to tum chup kyu ho gayi??? Tumhe kya laga??? Maan asked it purposely... He loved the blush that appeared on her face...

Geet- vo, umm, kuch...kuch nahi, bas soch rahi thi, ki tum kya keh rahe ho... She turned to the other side to hide her blush and not to be caught...

Maan very well knew she was blushing but didn't press it further... The expression on her face was enough for him to tell what she thought and felt...

Geet proceeded to the edge of the deck to have a look of the sea and started thinking...

Geet (ST)- abb hum chaaro bhi 3 din tak ek saath honge on this cruise... So abhi batana would not be a good idea... Kyunki, ye baat sunne ke baad he would definitely need some time alone to listen and understand what I said... Aur abb mahol bhi acha nahi hai ye baat barane ke liye... He is in a very happy mood today, and I don't want to spoil it... Mumbai jaane ke baad hi bolti hu, yahi sahi hoga... Aur yaha se vo doc ko call karke puchega, usse behetar hai ki vaha vo face to face baat kare... So it's final, me usse abhi kuch nahi bata rahi hu... I know it's high time that I should tell him but this is not the place to break such a news on him... I will have to wait till we reach Mumbai... Yaa, that's a good idea Geet... Chal, abb jaate hai Maan ke paas nahi to aa jaaega puchte hue ki kya soch rahi ho...

When she turned to walk towards Maan, she collided with him on his broad hard chest and she was about to fall but again, as usual Maan held her firmly in his strong arms... GEET had closed her eyes but still she very well knew who had caught her... How can she forget his hold now, itni baar to vo uski baahon me gir chuki hai... She smiled slightly without opening her eyes... Maan knew what she was thinking but he didnt straighten... He blew some air from his mouth on her face to let her know his intentions... That sent shudders down her spine... She slowly opened her eyes and uttered his name in total whisper,

Geet- Maan...

Maan- hmm Geet, bolo... Me sun raha hu...

Geet averted her gaze to save herself from loosing in his eyes...

Maan- vaise Geet, tum jaan bujke mere baahon me girti ho yaa sach much me girti ho... He said it to ease the atmosphere... He had no such intentions(use ur imagination for the intentions), he was just playing around to see her reaction...

GEET immediately straightened herself and got 2 steps backward to avoid the closeness and inturn the blush that occurs...

Geet- mujhe koi girne ka shauq nahi hai... Abb tum hi saamne aa gaye to isme mera kya kasoor...

Maan- acha thik hai, abb khaana kha le yaa abhi bhi bhuk nahi hai... Mujhe to zoronse bhuk lagi hai...

Geet- ok, chalo...

They both sat down and relished the dinner... They had a heavy meal, talking to each other on all the topics they knew about including business... Whatever might be the topic, they didn't care... They were just happy with each others' company... They had a gala time together... After dinner, they had dessert, spoke for some more time, almost past midnight... They later retired to their rooms as shown by Maan... They didnt want to go but it was their decision to be silent for some more time... So this Dooriyan was zaroori... Both went to their rooms and just jumped on the beds thinking about the beautiful evening spent together and dozed off dreaming about each other...

On the other side,

Shaan and Khanak also had their lovely time together, dancing, talking and even being a bit intimate... Shaan also told Khanak, their plans for the next 3 days on cruise and Khanak was also very excited to experience something new... Later after quite a lot of time, even they retired to their respective rooms half heartedly... These 2 also dozed dreaming about each other...

The next three days passed like a very cool breeze for them... They saw almost all the islands of Greece... They dropped at each island to see the tourist attractions nearby and buy some stuff for them and their family... Geet helped Maan to buy some stuff for Annie and DJ, and she also purchased for Pinky, mom and dad... Shaan and Khanak also purchased some stuff... The 3 days were just amazing... Deep sea diving or scuba diving was the most wonderful thing they did... They saw many fishes and also experienced the marine life... The many colours, they saw inside the waters and also above it, were astounding... They would never have thought of doing something like this... It had been a great experience... The cruise was also very relaxing... All of them had their time all these days... Boys had their own time and even girls too... They also had a great time together... They got to know more things about each other, their likes and dislikes, some of their past funny and embarrassing memories, although it was not needed by Geet, to know more about Maan, she knew almost all of them...

THE CRUISE


SOME ISLANDS IN GREECE

MARINE LIFE IN GREEK ISLANDS


After having all the fun, they returned to Mumbai, leaving the cruise at the Greece port and getting into the flight at Athens... They got back to business as soon as they returned home... But Geet had some other plans in her mind... Since the date, she had decided that now, its time to let Maan know what she feels and why she took so much time to tell this to him... Her work in KC was now done and she will not require going and working in KC... So, whatever be the consequences, she will be ready to accept it however hard it is... ITS TIME FOR SHOWDOWN...!!!!

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SO HOW WAS IT...

PLZZZ TELL ME HOW DID U FEEL ABOUT THE DATE...

LOVE U ALL... TJ...!!!!! 😃 ❤️

Edited by Tammana_Maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
R
So sorry TJ
i ma late 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
please is time maaf kardo
I know your Chappals may be waiting for me
but please throw it on My cable wala
who downed the server
okhhh now back to update
that was owesome
Mind blowing
fantabulous
heheheheh
Bole toh chyayela ekdum Raapchik thi
heheeh
okkhhh so there First Official Date
hmmm uff kaash maan propose kar deta
Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
One more r [:-D]
EDIT
Sorry Dear again wanna add some pics too for you but F.O. my lappy it is creating hell problem
hmmm Angelic wondering what they did whole time there.
hmmm im imagining that movie ka scene(umm i dont remeber the name) but where the peples are romancing in the water
or may i say that
TWILIGHT SAGA'S THAT scene where they meet in middle of see
well welll well me and my Wild thoughts😆
okhh so keep updating and get the basket full of love
wanna make this post very special but 😭
Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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awsem update love it and pics were awsem

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