SEDUCTIVE TEMPTATION.. teaser ..pg 136 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupanzal



She wz going 2 marry vansh whn geet kidnap her 😲


no dear...
she was going to marry some one else...
she kidnapped her so that she can mary her brother...😉
i wish i had a sister like her😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Central theme of the story is impressive but needs clarity . story too much jumbled in one go...
Geets character is shown vry strong in 5 part but what happened when she was forced in a marital relation...inspite of her parents n brothers support wht happened????????????
Need a clear view of past related how marriage took place...
No offence dear writer i just expressed my view point as a reader...
I enjoy it thoroughly...
Waiting...Give us faster updates pls
Edited by pinkybedi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy



no dear...
she was going to marry some one else...
she kidnapped her so that she can mary her brother...😉
i wish i had a sister like her😆



For this u hv 2 b a boy ab dulha tu kidnap nahin kr sakti na
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupanzal



For this u hv 2 b a boy ab dulha tu kidnap nahin kr sakti na


ab yaar dulhe ko bhi kidnap karwa denge...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago


precap ...


geet sat in front of vikram on her knees ... she was wearing a very beautifull saree and her open curly hairs were done to one side ...
while the whole collage was looking at them ...
she streached her one hand towards him .. adn looked at him and said ...

tera dil main meri saanson ko panah mil jae ...
tera ishq main meri jaan fanna ho jae...



these 4 years ... yes i have loved you since long 4 years ... par kabhi keh nahin pae ...
4 years i was with you but very far away from you...
maine kitni baar kosis ki tumhe batane ki ...
par himmat nahin hui ki mian keh paun ...
main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon ...
i love you ...
i love you very very much ...


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mahi!!!! mahi!!!!

main tuse bohat pyar karta hoon mahi...

mujhe maaf kar de... mian tere pyar ko samajh nahin paya ...
jaan nahin paya ki tu mujhse kitna pyar karti hai ...
par aaj jab ehsaas hua ...
tab mere paas kuch nahin hai ...

main tujhse bohat pyar karta hoon mahi ...
bohat pyar ...


hope you all like it ...

love ,
sia...

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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting promo dear waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum promo dear
omg!
do really proposing vikram
is maan there
pls update soon dear
cant wait more dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting promo plz update soon and add me in pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet maan ke saath hi achi lagti hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6

Geet ' if you all could just ask for the names before fighting '.. but wait a

minute what are you all doing here????

Arnav ' you have invited us remember ?????

Geet ' freak!!! Don't tell me ki you are from kharagpur '..

arnav ' I am GS of iit kharagpur '..

geet ' very good!!! ho gaya hari om tatsyat '..

arnav ' well mahi '. Are you sure that these two are swayam and khusi????

Geet ' haan ji' khud hin pooch lo aur karlo pyar bhara bandhu milab'..

Swayam ' GS of NIT trichy '..

khusi ' GS of iit delhi '. God .. you are GS of IIT roorkee'..

geet ' I do think so '..

arnav ' I don't believ it '' He is the cool dude ???? and she is the chamkili ????

khusi ' and he is the lad governer '. Iske attitude se dikhta hai '..

swayam ' hey mahi' kya hua??? You looked tensed'.

Geet ' do i??? I am not'.. she said while bitting her nails'.

Swayam ' you chop your fingures only when you are hell tensed ''

Arnav ' and we know the reason of her tension'' don't worry mahi' mian

yahan vikram ke saath war karne nahin aaya hoon '.

Khusi ' vikram kaun????

Arnav ' vikram singhania'. Brother of maan singh khurana and son of abhimanyu singh khurana '. AGS of iit roorkee '..

Vikram ' how do you know it arnav?????

Aranv ' come on !!! we already know each other' on your brother's marriage remember ?????

Vik ' yah!!!

Arnav- tumhare class mates ko dekhke pata chalta hai ki no one knew that you belong to khurana family????

Vik ' no!!! we actually'..

Khusi ' don't tell me ki no one of your group haad decided to tell who they actually are ????

Armaan ' you know us all????

Khusi ' of course ' I know' when you are behind my cousine since 4 years I am bound to know '

Armaan ' riddhima is your cousine ?????

Khusi ' see' khusi kumara gupta and riddhima gupta '. Well shilpa is also my cousine '.. you know because ridz and shilpa are fraternal twins ''

Mahi ' you all are revealing more than we have decided '..

Arnav ' we will talk about this later '. And the main reason I have come here to IIT ROORKEE is to put an end to the invisible war between the two institutes and the families'.

Vik ' and how do we do so ????

Arnav ' very simple'. For these days' lets forget that you are khurana and I am a raizada and just behave like normall students'.

Vik ' I don't believ it'.

Arnav ' that depends on you vikram ' according to me we should let the completion be in our parent's office cabin and not in to our lives'. I am here to make a peace deal' if you agree than '. He said taking out his hand for a shake'..

There was a deadly silence in the field'. All were looking at them'. Everyonewas aware of the rivalery and were waiting for vikram's descision ' and just then vikram laughed'.

Vik ' you talk exactly like mahi '. Do you know that ???? and surely ' I am fed off this khurana ' raizada war '. It makes me feel like I am making an enemy even before I have a chance to see him'..

And with that he shook his hand and pulled him to a bear hug'' and then every one cheered up '.after some time they came out of the hug'.

Vik ' it looked like every one was fed off too''. This function will make the end of every rivalery and will establish friendship '.

Arnav ' surely we will do that ' par pehle '.. he went to geet who was standing and looking intently'.. mahi breath '.. breath mahi '.. he said and laughed '.

Geet took a long breath'.

Geet ' plese tell me ki this is not a dream'..

Arnav ' this is not '..

Geet ' gadhe.. suar' frog' monkey ' cow.. bull '. Useless hankey '.. she cursed '..

Arnav ' what???? He asked befalled while the rest laughed out listening to it'.

Geet ' you scared me do you know that???? I thought ki aaj 3rd world war ho jaega '. and wait a minute '.

And then she gasped and looked at him accusingly and poked him '.

You' had..not..told ..me..that .. you ..were..GS..of' kharagpur '.. neither ' who..you..are '.you ..all '.

Khusi ' we do have reasons behind it '. Mahi '

Geet ' I will be glad '. She said with a tight smile as she left and walked to her hostel'.

Vikram ' you did make her upset you know that ????

Khusi ' no '.

Khusi /swayam /arnav ' we made her angry '..

Arnav ' hey mahi ke babaji ' raksha karna'.

Armaan ' but she isn't angry'.

Khusi ' well armaan ' she does gets angry '. And her anger means hell a lot of trouble '.

Swayam ' she is not even an ounce of anger then what we have seen her'.

Abhay ' tum log kab se jante ho mahi ko???

Khusi ' near about 17 years'

Vik ' I don't believ it'..

Khushi ' we 4 have been friends since we began our schooling'.. and believ me ' a warning for her '. When someone says something and mahi doesn't reacts as normal person would do it means '. She is going to kick your ass ' hard and tight'.

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It had been almost 6 hours and no one had seen geet 'alone '. She was always busy around instructing her fellow mates '.. managing around the collage ' running from one class to anathor ' getting datas from the teachers and making sure that every thing was perfect before they start the function the next day '.

Oye!!! Meri kabar khodne ka irada hai kya ???? hatao whoh roses wahan se ' and this hall should be empty armaan'. Geet shouted as she held one note in her hand and walked inside the hall '.

It is perfect mahi '. She heard some one said and she turned around to see arnav and vikram standing there '. In a short time they had been very good friends just like as if they had known each other since years'

She knew the reason why'.. and it hurted her very much'.

I just wish so '.. she replied'.

Armaan ' so lets go to our usual dhaba for tea????

And with that a huge group of 20 students walked out of the main hall and the collected laugh rocked the whole collage '.

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The event was to continue for 5 days ' and the three days had already passed ' and so had increased the friendship of the students of all the collages present there'. Every one could see the great bonding between arnav , khusi , swayam and geet ' inspite of being from other collages they helped her in each and every thing she did '. Even in her collage works '.

With the display of friendship of geet and arnav .. maan was burning '. When he acted indifferent towards geet ' it seemed as though she had picked the same attitude but with more dedication '. She never looked to his eyes ' never gave any indication that she was any way related to vikram's family'. He should have thought once before saying what wife's should do to her '..

Near about 4 years should have been enough for maan singh khurana to know his wife'. But he had failed to know her '. Because in these 3 and half years he had not bothered to call her or even once cared to know about her '.

Yes he had not called her even once ' he only used to call his brother and take the needed info about her ' she had called him for the first year and must have sensed his lack of intrest and she stopped calling him after then'..

He did not believ her at all' he knew the vikram she loved was reading in her collage and so there was chances that she would be playing games with him and was planning to run with him' but he was maan singh khurana and he wont allow that'.

But what happened that evening took away his senses'..

It was the evening of the third day when many students were sitting around in groups after their function was over and half of collage being in side the hall enjoying the party arranged for them '' and ofcourse the largest one being geet's group that was called SEDUCTIVE TEMPTATION ' and now' EXTENTED S.T'..

They had just come from a dance party in the hall while the half was still busy in the hall '. The girls were wearing sarees while the boys were wearing suits'. And no doubt the whole group was looking so exotic' beautifull.. colourfull ' sexy and no doubt tempting that the name seductive temptation suited their group'. Because each one of them ' could seduce the on lookers just with one look and they tempted them till the time the on lookers begged for their attention'..

They were playing truth and dare ' and they gave a new meaningto the game ' the truths were so that it would make one wish the earth to open and he would go into it '.. and the dares ??? one of them was that shilpa who was wearing a tight saree had to climb up the tallest tree ' and what did shilpa do ??? she folded her saree and actually climbed the tree while her long legs were visible '. And the reaction ???? sidhant was standing just below her fear clearly shown on his face and was looking up at her '. And then as she gently slided down he took her in his arms and shouted his energy out on her '.

Sid ' what do you think by climbing this damn tree in a saree shilpa????

Shilpa ' why do you care sid???

Sid ' why do I care??? Why do I care ??? you could have fallen and injured youself shilpa '..

Asher ' a confession is coming up '. He hissed and all looked at them '..

Shilpa ' why do you care sid????

Sid ' BECAUSE I LOVE YOU GOD DAMN IT'. Fine??? Got your answer '' or is it anything you want to hear????

Shilpa ' and this is how you tell me that you love me???? She asked hands on her waist '

Sid ' what ?????

Shilpa ' ridiculous'.

And then she went to sit with her friends leaving sid with a ridiculous expression '.

Sid ' babaji!!! I just confessed and she said ridiculous ????? and made a funny face'

The bottle again moved and stopped in between geet and arnav'.

Arnav ' truth or dare????

Geet ' dare '..

Arnav ' fine' think that you love some one and you have not been able to confess to him ' and then you got separated for 4 years ' and now after 4 years you have got the chance to say him what's in your heart and propose him '. And go and propose him '..

There was a long silence '. Her friends were shocked' they knew that geet was married though she loved some one else and only khirod and shilpa knew who he was '. Vikram and maan were double shocked it ment that arnav also knew the truth '..

Geet ' but mr.raizada' I need a boy to propose you know '. Khali main hawa ko propose nahin kar sakte naw ????

Khushi ' how about vikram ?????

Geet ' huh???? '.

Swayam ' right ' he is awesome '. You two are great friends '.. and he wont mind it'. Will you vikram ???? ' he asked focoiusing on the word friend'.

Vikram ' no .. not at all '.

Arnav ' fine then ' go on mahi' how woud you like to propose your lost love ????

Geet ' I just need an open space ?????

Shilpa and khirod looked at her and she nooded confirming the fact that the three knew whom she loved'.

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Exatly after 5 minutes they were standing in the basket ball court and geet was no where to be seen '.

Arnav ' just 2 minutes lift '. After that punishment '..

And then they heard a slow guitar music'. And all turned around to see geet coming towards them playing her guitar '.. the music was a sad one ' and the words confirmed '.

Tere pyar main jal raha hoon,

Teri yaad main ro raha hoon.

Teri neend ko sun raha hoon ooo,

Tere khuwab main so gaya hoon.

(Musik)

Intezar tha tere pyar ka,

Bekarar tha tere pyar ka.

Dil ki lagan kuch yoon lagi,

Rangi ye sham dhalne lagi.

Tere pyar main jal raha hoon,

Teri yaad main ro raha hoon.

Teri neend ko sun raha hoon ooo,

Tere khuwab main so gaya hoon.

(Musik)

Meri sanso main, in nigahon main,

Dil ki raho main, tum hi tum to ho.

Meri khamoshi, meri guftagu,

Mere roo baroo, tum hi tum to ho.

Juda kioon hue sochta hoon ooo,

Tujhe raho main dhoondta hoon.

Tere pyar main jal raha hoon,

Teri yaad main ro raha hoon.

link for the song...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4k-ovkUShuM


Her voice was soft and her emotions were reflected in her voice '. She kept her guitar in a seat walked towards vikram and sat on one knee'.


geet sat in front of vikram on her knees ... she was wearing a very beautifull saree and her open curly hairs were done to one side ...

while the whole collage was looking at them ...

she streached her one hand towards him .. and looked at him and said ...

tera dil main meri saanson ko panah mil jae ...

tera ishq main meri jaan fanna ho jae...

these 4 years ... yes i have loved you since long 4 years ... par kabhi keh nahin pae ...

4 years i was with you but very far away from you...

maine kitni baar kosis ki tumhe batane ki ...

par himmat nahin hui ki mian keh paun ...

main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon ...

i love you ...

i love you very very much ...

jab se pyar ke ehsas ko jana hai tumhe hin samne paya hai '

jab bhi kisi aur ko dekha hai tumhara hin cehra nazron ke samne aaya hai'..

jab bhi aankhein band kiya rone ke liye ' tumhe hasta hua aakhon ke samne paya hai ..

I may not be your princess ' but you are my life '

I may not be in the air you breath ' but are in my every breath '.

I may not love you more than my guitar'. But I love you so much that I can sacrifise my guitar for you '.

I may not choose you above my family ' but I have tried to get you along them '.

I may be nothing you have dreamed off ' but you are every thing I had ever wanted '.

I want to grow old with you ' to live every summer with you'. which I know cant be ..

But I can promise you ..in every sadness' summer ' winter ' problem ' you will find me walking with you '.

I have loved you since long but you saw me nothing more than a friend '.

And then some thing happened and we got separated '.

Though I was not with you but with you '.

Though I looked at others' I saw just you '..

Though I talked with other ' I thought only you '.

And now we have met after 4 years ' I am sitting in front of you '.

She lowered her other knee and sat on them totally submitting herself'..

I have confessed '..

You can accept it or reject it '.

I wont force you to echo my feelings unwillingly '. For it will make me die every second of the rest ofmy life '.

I wont force you to stay with me '.

I have submitted my emotions' my feelings' my want' my everything that makes me a humen on your feet '

Cahon toh apnalo ' ya phir thukrado '

Tumhara har faisla'. Sarakhon pe '..

She said and it followed a long silence ' she still had her head down casted and was sitting before him ''




precap ...


mahi!!!! mahi!!!!

main tuse bohat pyar karta hoon mahi...

mujhe maaf kar de... mian tere pyar ko samajh nahin paya ...

jaan nahin paya ki tu mujhse kitna pyar karti hai ...

par aaj jab ehsaas hua ...

tab mere paas kuch nahin hai ...

main tujhse bohat pyar karta hoon mahi ...

bohat pyar ...


hope you aall liked it... please comment and motivate me...


love,

sia...

Edited by lovelycutietedy - 13 years ago

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