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Posted: 13 years ago
😍😍😍😍😍eagerly waiting for next
update soon
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear .i loved it.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

time for new start...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks to all of you for you such an encouraging and lovely comment.
You all really deserv a BIG HUG.
--Anu
Part 46
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It was very early morning when Geet's eyes opened up and she realized how she was glued to Maan and how tight he was holding her to himself and sleeping so peacefully.

Since his childhood he never had peacefully slept. First the shock of his father has troubled him for so many years, then working hard on building up Khurana Empire and along with it his conflicting emotion for Geet and then his ego dominating over his heart. So many things had made sure he never gets the peaceful sleep.

Geet could feel the peace he had on his face as he held her bare body tight to him. She carresed his face, smiled to herself feeling him so close to her. She was his now all his and this was the biggest thing for Geet. He is in slepp and Geet slowly starts caressing his face with her finger. She wants to feel him in each way'. Each way she wants to know he is hers.

She softly brushes his eyes' Maan feels her hand on his face and is about to open his eyes when he decides otherwise'. He want to cherish her love' wants to feel what she feels for him and thus keeps his eyes closed. Geet then traces his nose then move to his cheeks'. She rubs her hand on his stuble the with one thumb very softly rubs his lips' she has by now gone in entirely different world. Maan is all lost in her love, he wants more and more of her love which is coming right from her heart.

Geet moves her hand down to the hollow of his neck and places her other on his cheek' Maan shivers and wakes up unable to take any more.

He lays Geet down and start caressing her face.

Geet Shivers under his touch'. She holds him tight around his nape and closes her eyes.

He traces her in same manner she did but with the tip of his nose, making her feel more sensitive by the feel of his breath as they fall on her face as her moves on tracing her face then moves down to the hollow of her neck'.

Geet is Shivering. But this time Maan is confident, he is in and out sure she desires him and craves for him' he keeps going down that way. Geet hold his shoulder tight as that is what she could catch when her eyes is closed and senses lost in him.

Maan stops at her curves' nuzzle them one by one with his nose' Geet wiggles. She is all wet and she can feel his hardness touching her thighs.

He then licks the tip, kisses them and bit them , each them one by one' patiently enjoying them' She is so special. He slowly moves down, kissing each part again but with different passion this time. Geet is not able to take this slow torture of his and wants him in but she controls' relishing the fact that he is really treasuring their love.

After long Maan went inside her and they had a passionate love making.

Later both laid their quiet in each other arms. Physical pleasure was there but along with it there was something much more that they felt satisfied for.

Geet after a while got up. She got her shower and went to kitchen while Maan was still asleep.

She was busy with breakfast making when she felt his finger tucking her hair behind her ears' she turned to look at him' he was just in his tracks and bare top'.

Shiver ran down her again seeing him like this and so near to her'

"Ji woo' breakfast" Lost in her he ignored what she was saying'

"woo hee hua na jiska darr tha mujhe' somewhere I knew this long back"

Geet got confused, now what happened "Ji?? "

"I somewhere knew once I come near you I will not be able to spare a minute without you' isee baat ko jhutlane kee koshish kerta raha tha'. This was the fight I was fighting with myself all along."

"Throughout my life I have been sandwiched between my Ego and my Deewangi for you and in all this every time I ended up in hurting you"

He turned her towards him, caressing his fingers all thru her from face to waist'. She shivered.

Geet had always thought he hated her but also knew he always needed her but she had never known his this feeling'. Like he had such strong feelings for her and he was fighting within himself and only in his fight he had hurted her.

That is why when he had realized his love above his ego he had openly come to her but she took it otherwise.

She laid her head on his bare chest' "I am always yours'. Did I complain anytime for those pains' if they soothe you that time, that's what my love have to do'. Take your pain inside me. I was doing my duty of love' and those rights that you showed on me only made me feel I was yours, waise to aap mujhse dur he rehte the'. Apkee yahi harkate to mujhe apne pan ka ehsaas dilatee thi"

"Don't be sorry for me please' I am all for you Maan."

They again stood quiet in each other's arm without any word lost in their own thought.

Geet was feeling bad as how she could for these few days try to fight with him for her own safety'.

Just came out from her mouth "I am sorry Maan"

Maan immediately seperated her from him and held her from her shoulder'.

"No' never say sorry and never ever feel sorry'. Between us that is word only for me and not you' your love is to only be proud of, samjhi tum'. Kabhi kisis baat ke liye bhi sorry nahi bologee tum"

Geet saw the intensity with which he spoke it and he deeply meant that'.

"Ok then you have to promise me one thing"

"You don't need to take promise from me Geet'. You demand and think it's a promise from my side' what do you want, say"

"I want you too, not to be sorry for anything'. Never ever and from your heart."

"We will do a fresh beginning were there will be no place for pain, regret and guilt' just love"

Maan just looked at her for a while making some resolusion.

He thought for a while "Ok I promise, for you I will give away all' you just have to be happy"

"Thanks' it means a lot and lot to me'."

The he just kept looking at her face' Geet felt shy and looked down.

The Maan suddenly placed his hands on both her waist and pressed them harder and jerked her towards him'. Geet closed her eyes as it pained.

Then in a very deep voice "are you sure you can handle my obsession for you'. It really can be too much" and he released her waist.

Geet said nothing, just came closer, hugged him tight and her hands on his back.

"I am all yours I said you'.. I know how to handle you real love' your deep love'. Pehle se bhi jo saha hai woo aapka sacha pyar hee to tha'. I know when it is going to come from you it has to be different, per aapkee Geet ne na pehle uff kaha hai na aage kahegee"

He placed soft kiss on her fore head and with a teasing smile.

"I just wanted to warn you"

"Good'. Now take your shower and be ready for breakfast"

Next to be continued

Part 47
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
meettu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY WAITING FROM SOOO LONG


FINALLY DEY R ONE AND EVERYTHING IS CLERAED
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Posted: 13 years ago
its touching how beautifully they have bared their souls to one another now... after so long . and such misery..

looking forward to this new beginning.. continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey great part...yay everythings good now :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just found this thread yesterday and I was glued to it since then, read the whole story in one go! It's mind blowing to say the least =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
WOW i still can't believe that they got together and became one at last
cont. soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic...loved it...he loved her...m happy

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