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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
i hope u are better hun!
lagta hai wardah ke gende ke phool ka kamaal hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for new thread

nd howz u now???

missing u a lot

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WAITING FOR THE UDATE

Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for the 24 thread wow thats awesome one more and its 25. Waiting for ur update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread & get well soon Muskan😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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miss u di...hope u r well...
god ...it scared us u know...masoom si bachi ki jaan nikal di..
get well soon...
and congo on ur new thread...
if u fine then only update...though i missed pucki n mistimia...
but apki ki khatir...i m ready to wait...
lv u
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Congrats for the new thread...😊
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Congratulations on the new thread
waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhundlae aks

sorry for the delays me still down with my health will take some time
before i get more regular


PART 149

oh .. she just wanted to eat him alive right there.. she bit back her urge & slipped her hand around his waist resting her head on his arms yawning.. . mujhe ghar jana hain..
I am very tired
he almost jumped ' wanting to kiss her all he managed to do his hold her softly around the waist, walking her to the car.. driving her back home.

KM @ NIGHT

How was it that she understood everything without saying anything... he chuckled turning around restlessly on his bed. He could get away with just anything with her.. he closed his eyes all he could see was her ' he took in a deep breath... feeling his senses filled up with her scent, how was that even possible... probably he was going mad he assumed hitting his head laughing to himself.


Next day was usual morning gande phool routine & dropping her to office .. Maan came back to the KM to the questioning eyes of Daadi & Raj. They looked at the clock.. it was not even 9am & he was out for probably couple hrs since morning. He preferred ignoring them.
He quietly went & sat beside Dev in the breakfast table.
Raj was about to ask something yash walked in talking to Geet on phone.
Raj kicked Maan's feet under the table.. who was already lost hearing his dad say Geet...
Maan straighten himself.


Yash ' Geet beta hum late hojayenge
aap meeting start kar lo.
Geet ' ji sir
yash '
I guess we should be their before the 2pm meeting
ok.. bye


yash smiled & looked at every one. He was really happy abt the wedding in the house.
After the breakfast they all continued to discuss the wedding plans. The very initial bit.. & he made Maan write down every thing to give to Geet.
Raj shook his head perfect!!!
Maan gritted his teeth.. chup kar.

Mid of their discussion door bell rang. Nakul attended to it. He came back & called Maan.
Maan '
kya huwa nakul?
Nakul ' sahab registry hain
Maan '
tum le lo na
nakul '
aapka sign chahiyen
every one looked at Maan, even he was puzzled there. He made all kind of faces signing the paper & taking the letter. It was clearly some govt document. He turned around couple of times to be sure it was in his name... he tore the edge casually walking towards the hall
yash '
yeh kya letter hain Maan
he just pulled it out & froze.. he looked at the heading "Marriage Certificate" & instantly slipped it back in...
yash '
wat is it Maan?
He was mum... unsure wat to say.. was he excited.. terrified.. nervous..
aahh.. wo...
ji wo..
he smiled weakly ' trembling back to his room .. almost running back to his room

yash was taken back
Dev '
dad CAT exam ka kuch hoga..
yash '
why can't he open his mouth & say anything
he never said he wants study further.
Dev '
aap tho ussen jaanthe ho na
yash shakes his head.. I really don't understand this guy

raj was pretty sure it can't be CAT.. Maan never wanted to study further.


Maan locked the door behind & looked at the envelope. He was not even sure if he wanted to open it again. He kept it away in the table & kept staring at it like.. something would come out of it & eat him now!!!

finally after almost an hour he managed to calm down & open it... his fingers were still trembling as he pulled out the content.
He smiled reading their names together...
Maan Singh Khurana & Geet Handa..
& her name now as Geet Maan Khurana.
All their details filled in correctly. He chuckled..
we r married
wo paka nahi maanegi..
after thinking over it... he hid in his wardrobe.
Usne dehka tho... paka phad ke phenkdegi.. he pouted cutely.
He closed the wardrobe & turned to see raj standing crossing his arms over his chest
maans heart almost jumped out to his heart.
raj - wo kya hain
Maan pretended like nothing happened kuch nahi yaar
wo aisen hi
raj '
Maan !!! main dad yah Dev nahi hoon.. I know clearly ur not doing MBA.. SMBA... sach sach bool wo kya hain
Maan cleared his throat '
kuch nahi hain yaar
aisen kuch form fill kiya tha..
he said looking away
raj knew it clearly he was lying. He didn't want to embarrass him further he left it there .. though he felt a bit sad, well that was with Maan.. he rarely shares something that is really close to his heart.. even his feelings towards raj he won't express unless he is really drunk.

Later in the afternoon yash gave the complete plan details to Geet hand written by Maan..
no body had to mention.. she knew it ' it was his handwriting... it took a moment for her to run her fingers softly over them.. biting her lips.. chuckling within... not paying any attention to wat yash said all that while.
Yash ' teehk hain na
Geet was still lost in the note pad
yash '
Geet!!!
she snapped out '
ji sir
yash '
teehk hain na?
She looked at him blankly wondering wat did he say!!!
yash sighed '
pata nahi kya hogaya hain aaj kal ke bacho ko
ghar main Maan... aur yanha tum
she blushed furiously thinking.. even he was .. OMG... she so much wanted to see him.

She couldn't wait to see him in the evening.. neither could he... & when they met..
neither could open their mouth
he didn't know whether to tell her.. he tried to .. he just couldn't.
Wat if she asks to apply for a divorce..
shaadi huen nahi.. aur divorce.. nahi nahi..
he shakes his head
wat if she tears it off
wat if she gets angry again
wat if she refuses to... ..to wat!!!
come on.. it just an accidental thing.. if he doesn't tell anyone.. kisi ko nahi pata challega
but how can he hide it from her...
she has the right to know.. lekin
he just couldn't manage to tell her

She sat their cutely knotting her shirt not daring to look at his face.. she was strangely feeling shy... butterflies in her tummy.. He silently dropped her home.

She went back home & cursed herself..
waisen tho bahut kuch plan hota hain... unke samne moo band
wo bhi kuch nahi bolten.. bus hogyen aisen tho
she looks at the big puchki & complains
he didn't say anything
mujhe bhi nahi bolna

she peeped out cutely.. lekin mujhe tho bolna hain na


KM @ night

finally the fact was sinking in to the majnu's head.. that it is their marriage certificate..
wow means she is his wife
his wife!!!!
his!!!!
he probably spend the whole night imagining her like his mom ..
the way she did things for dad... his misti would do for him..hian...

he woke up from his dream land when the alarm clock buzzed next morning.

He got up quickly & dressed up smartly in his jeans & t-shirt. He brought a tokri full of gende flower & walked straight into her room. He poured the tokri of flowers on her head.

She was fast sleep... kind of felt tickled first..

then suffocated..
not able to breath.. she panicked & opened her eyes to see all yellow.. orange.. & that stupid yucky smell.. she tried to reach her eyes... she couldn't.. so many flowers in between.. he cutely sat next to her on his knees.. pushing the flowers away.. trying to cup her face...through the flowers.
She coughed.. breathing really hard..
puchki yeh kya hain
he snapped back
phool hain
koi aisen phool detha hain kya
he looked at her angrily tumhari problem kya hain.. phool do tho problem na do tho problem
she got really pissed cann't he do one thing romatically nahi chachien yeh phool.. she tried to push them away... oh god.. so many of them
he looked at her trying to push them away.. GRRR
u will have to keep them.. he shoved them all back on her..
puchki stop
nahi.. yah bhi!!!


Precap
haila 😲Geet knowing abt the marriage certificate

-PREV PART 148 NEXT PART 150-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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