Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 71

WALKING WITH YOU

Life has turn into a beautiful journey, though it has been since mayank entered my life. Yet with him I have realize there many more to come each an evry day.

Today when I am looking at this piece of paper I have butterfly in my stomach and I just donot know who to handle the situation…ahh its so diffult. And here he cums

Mayank: addab..

Nupur: addab, ap agay…

Mayank: ap kahain tu waps chal jao…he chuckled

Nupur: mayank ap bhi….

I was doing everything taking his briefcase to his coat and placing them at there place, yet I didn't dare to look at him, I was, gosh I just cant define wht I am feeling. And than I got caught, whom I was trying to hide, mayank who know me better than me

He hold my hand and make me cum and stand infornt of him, I know since he enter the room he is observing my each n evry moment..

Mayank: kya baat hai janab..hum ny tu kuch bhi nhi kiya..phir bhi ap kyun muskura rahin hai….koi baat hai zaroor…idhar dekhain..he made me look at him placing his hand sofly on my chin..

Nupur: ek min…she smiled shyly and went towards the drawer…

Taking out an envelope she forward it to mayank, with surprise and a bit worried frown he opened it. She was watching his expression closely, from a shock to a smile on his face he looked at her questionably

Mayank: nupur…jo hum dekh rahy hain woh sach hai…

She nooded in yes, and he pulled her closed

Mayank: acha tu islayn ap itna shrama rahin thi…he chuckled…moving forward he kissed her forehead….

Congrats biwi, he hugged her tight a bit crashing her, thanku so much…

Ap is pr musarat moqay (happy occasion) per kuch bolain gai….

Nupur: she chuckled…kya bolain…ap khush hain…

Mayank: khush …hum tu buhat khush hai..ap humain ek aur namiyat dayna wali hain,

It was nupurs pregnancy reports that came positive, she knew it form past two days, yet she was feeling so shy to tell that to him..and today seeing him so happily looking at the report confirming it again n again it was feeling gr8

Aur yeah kiya yeah report tu do din pehly gi hai aur ap humain aj bata rahin hai…

Nupur: woh humain samhj nhi araha tha k…

Mayank: uff ap aur apki sharam, janab ek saal se uper hogaya humari shadi ko, aur yeah tu jana humara haq hai bhi aur wasy bhi hum kaun sa yeah poch rahin hain k yeah sab kasay hoa nupur…..he said dramatically

Nupur: mayank..ap bhi na…

Mayank: chukled…kasa lag raha hai….

Nupur: mayank humain pata nhi kyun kuch ajeeb lag raha hai..pehly buhat acha laga , abhi bhi lag rah hai..per thora daar bhi lag raha hai

He hugged her

Mayank: asa nhi sochty , baad ki fikar abhi se kyun lay rahin hain ap, aur yeah tu humain pata hai k humara junior ko best mom milny wali hai, aur fukar tu mjhy honi chaiy, mera pyaar bhat ny wala hai ..

Nupur: ji nhi humain tu lagta hai humara….

Mayank: gahr mein bataya ..she noded in no, dia Api ko bhi nhi….no…chalein gahr mein batao…dia api ko call kerain , ami k ghar chal ker batay gay, aur neechy chalo sab ko tu batao, itni bari khushi hai nupur..chalein

Nupur: mein nhi bolo gi ap bolain…

mayanK: acha hum bolty hain bhi…tension maat lay…

reaching out nupur was standing in the corner and mayank move in side shilpa's room

mayank: ami..apk liyan ek kabar hai…

SA: kya baat hai khariyat…

Mayank: ji sab thik hai…woh ap dadi bany wali hain…

SA: kya…she shouted happly, saach nupur…she went to her and hugged her…aray wah yeah tu buhat bari khushi hai, Gunjan…

Gunjan: ji ami

SA: Samrat se kahin methi lay ker aay…

Gunjan: kyun ami …kya hua

SA: aray bhi woh chacha bany wala hai…methi tu honi chaiy na…

Gunjan: sach bhabi..jab hi tum subha se muskura rahi hoo..aay hay…

She hugged her tight and nupur chukled…

There were all celebration, after all it was first baby of Ahmed's and was same at nupurs home too..

………..

The starting time was diffuclt for her, the sickness and things that she has to mange all together.

Specially mornings….

Mayank: nupur asay tu ap weak hogjao gi..

Nupur: cant help it…she had her head down on the table, and he was caressing her head…

Mayank: doctor ny kaha tha…ap ny note kiya hai kis cheese se apko irritation hoti hai…subha kitchen mein jany se haina…

Nupur: woh humai roti ki smell bori lagti hai..she pouted

Mayank: yaar ab bhi na…tu kyun bani…kal se hum office mein nashta kerlain ga ap kitchen mein maat jay

Nupur: nhi mayank pls..hum keralin ga na

Mayank: ji nhi…

Nupur: pls na …phr woh ami..

Mayank: acha thik hai hum bread lay lain ga…per ap nhi bany gi…aur dophar mein bhi yeahi hota hai…

Nupur: nhi tab itna nhi hota…bus subha k hi hai…baqi tu kahbi bhi shoor hojati hai…

Mayank: acha koi baat nhi..hum chaltein…

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Managing everything the household ur sickness is defiantly a tough job, yet u have to, she pretty well knew she cant get off her responsibility though gunjan do help her in certain things but that was definitely not appreciated my Shilpa.

SA: aray bhi aj kal ki lrkiyan ek bachy mein asay baat kerti hai jasay pata nhi kiya hogaya…hum ny bhi paida kiyan hai , aur sary ghar k kam ekaly kertay thay…us waqt tu naukar bhi nhi hotay thay

Samrat: tu ami kitna bora hua ..hai na…aj se hum sab is trend ko badlain gay..bhabi ab se app aram kero gi aur koi kam nhi kero gi ..jo zulm ami k sath hua apk sath nhi hoga….

Nupur glared at him n shutup, and mayank n gunjan suppressed there smile…

SA: kyun koi bemari nhi hai yeah…aur sirf kahan bany k hi kam hai…ap ko kya masala hai jab Nupur ko nhi hai tu…4 log k hi bana hota hai..hum ny tu 30 30 k banaya hai…

She left the place…and all of them burst in to laughter

Nupur: Samrat ap bhi na…kyun

Mayank: wasy bola kamal ka…

Samrat: yaar bhabi tum tu na…support kero is cause ko…woman supprt me…

Gunjan: aur phir hum dono ghar k bhar hongy…na baba na…itna suna paray ga bhabi ko, humara junior zorr se bolay ga..bus kerdo ap aur nhi saha jata

Nuupr: chukled..han hojay ga samrat..aur sach hai sab hi kertay hain..wasy bhi gunjan itni tu help kerti hain….bechari ko daat bhi pari thi…meri zeemdari hai hum keralin gay…

At night after another throwing session she was lying with her head rested on his chest…

Mayank: yaar ap itna tu kah bhi nhi rahi jitna u vomit…

Nupur: tu sara kasoor apk hai..kaha tha nhi kahna mjhy yeah ajeeb sa fruit

Mayank: nupur ..it was ur favorite

Nupur: per abhi I don't want to..bus…ainda huamin nhi kaha..

Mayank: okay baba..daat kyun rahi hain

Nupur: kyun k ap suntay hi nhi hai..abhi bhi dekhin kaha tha ap se yeah utha ker rekho do…yeah bhi mjhy kerna baray ga…….ab ap kyun haasa rahy hain..mayank..me..

He shut her mouth by kissing her sofly…

Mayank: kya kero itni mazay ki lag rahi hai na ap asay…he pulled her cheeks

Nupur: mein inti chirchiry hogai hoo na..she pouted and he hugged her

Mayank: koi baat nhi…dil khol ker daato..mjhy tu maza araha hai…atleast asay tu hum ap k sath day sakty hain..aur hum apny kam khud keralin gay pls us time ko rest mein utilize kero…aur kal hum ko ami k yaha chor day ga…kuch din reh ker ajao,,.

She was about to say sumthing

Weekend per lay lain ga…chup…

Nupur: aur yaha kaun dekhy ga…ap bhi next weeks late aao gay closing hai…

Mayank: han tu islayn na…ap waha arm kerain…yaha hojay ga sab..hum raat k kahana bahar kah layn gay..aur ab dobara argument nhi warna ap ko chup kerna humain ata hai haina…

Nupur: she smiled..okay..per ap tu bahar se kah lo gay yaha k kiya hoga…mein do ten dishes bana ker cahli jati hoon

Mayank: nupurr..baghir is k kam nhi bany ga

Nupur: nhi…dekhain mein manti hoon gunjan buhat badali gain hai..per is k yeah matlab nhi k hum faida uthay….aur ami ko yeah pasand nhi k hum dono buhat zayada ek dosrao ko is tarah support keray, hum tu chaly jay gay sunay gi woh, aur phr kahin dobara se woh sab na shoro hojay, suna tu us ko meri wajah se hi paray ga na…

Mayank: hm..pata hai khabi khabi humain lagata hai ami divide n rule wala formula apna rahi hain..he chukled

Nupur: mayank…asa nhi kahtay…un ki apni insecurities hain…

Mayank: acha yahin ap un ki side lay rahi hain..tu ap bhi yeah kerny wali hain meri bechari bahu k sath

Nupur: hay Allah khuda na keray, beti k tarha rekho gi…

Mayank: jasay k apko pata hai k apk beta hai…beti hoi tu..

Nupur: pata nhi I am feeling like k beta hi hai..

Mayank: hmm ..chalo thik hai abhi meri khwish k liyan next options try kerni paray gi, wasy bhi he is the first abhi tu teen paky aur hain

Nupur: MAYANK…

Mayank: aray ap nhy hi tu kaha tha..mein kya bol raha hoon….

Wincingly she hide herself in him, and giggled he took her in arms to make her sleep

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Nupur: uff yeah larka ullu…

Mayank: aray humary betay ko ullu kaha ..kya hogaya

Nupur: aur nhi tu kiya, in janab ko raat ko hi football khelna soochta hai…

Mayank: ek tu us k pata hai , baba meets him at night, aur dossra, ap bhi tu us ko raat ko hi milti hain…

Nupur: mayank n khud soota hai n mjhy sony dayta hai…ajeeb tamasha lag rekha hai…

It was her ninth month and sleep was far away from her at night, and morning the household things wont let her, the only time she se to get to sleep was in afternoon after fisning her day works, or the day she has an off from household.

Nupur: hatein ap, mjhy se seedh nhi lata jaraha…

He was lying on her shoulder, placing his hand on her stomach enjoying the movements of his son, and who was actually seems like playing with his hand…

Mayank: u know wht champ, I am missing my wife…

Nupur: sorry na…woh hum

Mayank: aray baba its okay I know, jasa dil ker reha hai lat jao but kal ki tarha pls dara na maat, raat k 4 bajay ajeeb lag rahin thi ap, messed hairs mein koi sofay per bahita tv dekh reha hai…

Nupur: tu kya ker neend nhi arahi thi…

Mayank: nupur u need to see the doctor na….whn..

Nupur: socho gi..

Mayank: ab yeah socho gi se kya murada hai….u have to na…galat baat hai…

Nupur: Mayankk

Mayank: kya mayank…

Nupur: ami ko uthay plsss….MAYANK PLS…..

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He was standing at the corner of corridor, telling his nerves again n again not to panic she will be fine, diya was with her, and have told him she is fine at times cuming out of the room..

Adi: don't worry woh thik hain..i know how u feel

Mayank: pata nhi yaar ajeeb helplessness se feel horahi hai..mein kuch bhi nhi kerskta…sigh

Adi: relax..dua ker woh thik hai..khuda us ko himat day….aur tujhy bhi

Mayank: tum mera mazak urarahy hoo..apn waqt yaad hai na….

Adi: han tu yaar buhat zayada hai yeah sab…next time c section..bus…

Mayank: chukled..

Mr ahmed….

Mayank: ya..he went worriedly as the doctor came out…

Doc: .congrats it's a boy…just wait 2min we will give him to u..

Mayank: thanku …hows my wife..

Doc: she is perfectly fine…we wil shift her to recovery room u can meet her…

Mayank: thanku…

SA: ya Allah tera shukar….mubarak ho beta….she hugged mayank…

And he received congrats from all…yet still its seems unreal to him

The moment he was let hold his son, made him belive yes he is a father now..a proud one, that has sumhow made him thing he needs to be more responsible and mature.

Moving inside her room, the sight was definitely not reliving, she seems so tired and pale…placing his hand on her forehead he called her name…he opens her eyes..and smile weakly

Mayank: ap thik thi …beta hai humara…

Nupur: apny dekha…kitna handsome hai na…

Mayank: he chukled hain…mera beta hai akhir ko…

Samrat: sorry yeah credit sirf mjhy jata hai….mjhy per gaya hai

She chukled…

Mayank: khuda na keray ..ap per jay …itna namaqool beta nhi hosakta mera…

Life changes, yes it does, and that so upside down, no it certainly become a fast n furious ..the new addition to there family certainly has made life more beautiful but yes has added a new responsibility too…

It was almost 10 in night whn mayank enter his room, as today he was late stacked in a meeting, and the sight infron of him made him forget every tiredness he had..

Nupur was sleeping cuddling to Muhammad, must have slept while making him asleep. His heart warmth with affection , she manges verything so well, either its home or himself, or his little mischievous fellow, who is habitual to remain a wake whole night at sleeps in morning..but in all this the only one that suffer is her

Moving near them quietly, he peck her sofly and than his son, and found him opening his eyes, but took him in his arms before he crys and nupur wake up…he is just a month and a half old, but he is turning more and more cute, rubbing his nose with him, he made his way out of the room, to let her sleep for sumtime knowing once he will strt crying he has to make nupur wake….

Gunjan: kay hua bhai yeah janab phir uth gay…apny kahan khaya mein laga do…

Mayank: nhi thnks gunjan..hum ny kah liya tha..han in janab ko apni ama sooti hoi pasand nhi hai..raat bahar yeah larka hungama macha ta hai..

Gunjan: aur din bahr sukoon se sota hai…kitna try kerlo nhi utha..bad boy..she said tickling him a bt and he move in irritation…attitude tu dekho….

Mayank: giggled……jay ap bhi soo jay..kafi raat hoagi hai…

Gunjan: ji…shab kahair…khuda hafiz ..sojao ab tum bhi..

He kept playing with him for sumtime, but than find him making face in urge to cry, he treid n tried but al in vain, he strt crying in full volume

Nupur: ap se nhi hoga…she smiled watching the sight…an adorable one, mayank can be such she never though, he doesn't to much interact with children yet they way he always does so with his own son, chuckled akahir apan beta hai …

Mayank: uth gain app..

Nupur: she took him from him, and proceed to her room, ji…bus woh ankh lagai , in kia awazz aai tu jab pass nhi paya tu samhj gay ap lay gay hongay in ko….

Mayank: yeah cheating hai..hum kya kaat rahy thu apko…ama k pass chup…

Nupur: ap fresh hojao…in ko soolado phir kahna lagti hoon..

Mayank: ap in ko solaing hum lay lay ga….aur sath he sojao, ankhein dekh itni dropy horahin hai..jo…he kissed her forehead and went to freshen up…

Cuming out he found Muhammad a sleep n nupur missing,

Mayank: apko chain nhi hai na, hum ny kaha tha hum lay aay ga

She came inside with food…

Nupur: mjhy bhi bhook lag rahi hai…tu socha kuch kah lo

Mayank: mein ny kaha tha nupur kahlein phr….

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Mayank: kya baat hai aj tu yeah bari kahmsohi se soo raha hai

Nupur: shukar hai…mayank..nhi..chehray nhi us ko..abhi uth jay ga..

Mayank: kya yar pyar he tu ker reha tha…..wasy not a bad idea, mera pass ek aur opions hai…

Nupur: kya…

Mayank: ap ho na, dipping his head in her neck he planted sum kiss there, just when he was about to capture her lips, the heard him crying, the both looked at each other and burst into laughter…

Mayank: jealous beta apk..

Nupur: acha mjhy tu lagta hai baba zayda jealous hain

Mayank: dekha hum ny kaha tha na, humara pyar bait jay ga….koi baat nhi hum bhi nhi chortay ap ko, he hugged her from back, placed a playfull slap on his son face, buhat maza araha haina….

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Nupur: Muhammad ap kitchen mein kiya ker rahin hain

Muhammad: mama khelain naa…

Nupur: mama kam ker rahin hai na…

He moved his hand in air and asked her too take him in her arms…

Nupur: jani pls ap kehlain na…mein kam ker k do min mein ati hoon..ap dadi k pass bahito

He nodded in no and pouted…

Nupur: aao..taking him in his arms ..she did her work with him in his one hand …making him sat on slab she gave him som boxes and spoons to play with..while she doo her work….now and than checking him and engaging him something or the other

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It was morning and mayank was getting ready for his office, but was in close observation of someone, who was lying on bed and was drink his milk in his superman night suit, a boy of around 2.5 years…finishing it he was about to step down from bed and mayank was chking him from mirror tht he do so without hurting himself…

He cume and stood beside mayank..

Mayank: Aslamulakium…he forward his hand and he shokk

Muhammad: baba offish…

Mayank: ji baba office jarah hain….

He was keenly observing him wht his father was doing how he is doing all this, moving away from maaynk he brought a strip of cloth and circle it around his neck…pulling his pants he asked him to look at him

Mayank: ji kya hua…

Muhammad: Muhammad bhi office…

He chukled looking at him who was pointing to the strip in brought and asking him to make a knot of it..he picked him in his arms..

Mayank: acha tu ap bhi jay gay office…woh bhi tie laga ker he nodded in yes, he tied his little tie…ab thik hai…and he kissed him

He nodded smilingly , start coming his hairs like his father do…

Nupur: she laugh entering the room..yeah kya horaha hai …

Muhammad : Muhammad baba sath officsh

Mayank: hmm muhmmad bhi office jay ga…

Nupur: acha really…she giggled…abhi tu hum nashta kerny jay ga…ap kaha bahr jarahy hain…dekha yeah phr nashty k nam per bhag gaya…..rukho…

Kaha gay ap…

Samrat: babhi meray pass hai..

She entered back in her room

Mayank: aur app idahr aay..he pulled her close…yeah kaun keray ga

She corrected his tie and gave him jacket

Nupur: kya hua…ap kya soch rhy hain..

Mayank: mera beta meri ek chees follow ker raha hai..

Nupur: zahir se baat hai ap k beta hai apko follow hi keray ga..

Mayank: hmm….tht increase the responsibility ..apny kabaly bhi dursat kerny paray gay. Janab( need to correct my ways perfectly)…ab pata chaly bachy kasy sudhartay hain

Nupur: chukled …so tu hai…chalein nashta dhnada hojay ga..

Okay he kissed her and went down..

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SA: is ko kuch khilaya kero…subha utha hai…kuch banti hi nhi ho tum tu, her chees bazaar k lay ker dayny mein tum logo k asani lagti hai…

Nupur: ami woh kahta kab hai….

SA: khelo gi tu kahy ga na…mehant kerni parti hai..

Mayank: kya ap log subha subha shoor hojatay hain…he said highly irritated as now its highly enough for him to listed n everyday a new bulletin,

SA: lo bhi koi nashihaat dayna nhi bekar hai….jo kerna hai ker ….hum tu bhaly k liya hi kah rahy thay…

Saying so she left from the dinning room

Nupur: mayank na bolo keray pls..

Mayank: kya na bolain nupur..her din k masla hai her baat k, khabi tu koi baat achi hai yeah bhi kah diya kerain….roz subha…

Muhammad: aa lov u…

The voice made both of them starlet and they turn to find Muhammad in samrats arm ans saying so

Mayank: kya..

Muhammad: aay lov u..suith hrth…(sweet heart)

Samrat was laughing and enjoying..

Mayank: Samrat…ap ki herkatein nhi sudhray gi..koi achi baat nhi seekh sakty hoo…

Samrat: bhai yeah itna cute lag raha hai bolty hoay

Mayank: is se door rekha kerain …he said standing up from chair closing the newspaper, going out..Allah hafiz…

He said to everyone and pcked his son..

Samrat said sumthing in Muhammad's ear..

Muhammad: baba…

Mayank: ji…he turned back

Muhammad: lov ya….he said and kissed his plam and threw the kiss to him…

Mayank: he droped his jaw but couldn't help to smile at his sweetest gesture…love ya too beta…he said and came out ….Samrat se door rekhin is ko…he said laughing….

Nupur: humain tu khabi nhi bola…she said mischievously leaning to door and he came back lean to the door..smilingly

Mayank: zaroorat hai kiya…aur apny kab asay kiss kiya sab k samny

Nupur: mayankkk…ab jay office, as hi thik hai…. Allah hafiz…

He chukled..and quickly pecked her lips…said bye to her and left….

Life has indeed turn beautiful, so what it has increased responsibilities, yet the pleasure that has added to the black white world has surly made it colorful….

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This was an area LAIBA said I missed in WWU, and surly I did, I nevr though u all might have wanted to read it. Thnks for reminding me Laiba…

Hope u enjoyed it thought it turned quite long

Lov fiza

API...🤗

Fiza... Seriously this is too beautiful to even comment on.

You have written it really beautifully... potraying all the right emotions.
Starting with Nupur's shyness about her pregnancy, it was so real and a natural things for some women.

And then Mayank's happiness, everything it was so.. beautiful. The joy of becoming parents.
Seriously this was way more than what I expected.
So many things... From the very start of her pregnancy and Mayank's affection and care towards her was really heart warming. :)

And then as the months went by his care increased... Even Shilpa Aunty's comments were so real.. I mean aisa he hota hai, its the exactly comment that many girls hear.
And Nupur's mood swings, Mayank being naughty, ect.. You have included every little detail. :)

Another thing I think you wrote perfectly was Nupur's responsibility... Yes with a child or a pregnant women zimmedari barh jaati hain. Don shauhar aur biwi ki.. Par ek biwi ki phir bhi zimmedari ziada hoti hain.. baccha, sasuraa, shauhar aur tamam aise choti choti cheezein.. Akhir main bohat kuch ho jata hain. Shauhar ki bhi zimmerdati barhti hain, par itni ziada nahin.

Aur aap ne yeh ek boaht achchi tareeke say pesh kiya hain. Keeping it very sweet yet realistic.

One more thing I noticed that was acutally "real" or close to reality was when Muhamad came to the kitched and insisted Nupur to carry him. Sach main... even when she was working.. she carried him and played with him...

I could go on and on... But I'll stop here..

FIza.. really beautiful OS... its so much more than I actually wanted, but it was AMAZING. Yeh sab chote chote scenes... They are all so beautiful. ;:)
I think what made the FF in the first place was that from the beginning, you have written everything in detail. Their journey you added every little detail. And maybe that's why when you took a leap the whole FF seemed somehow incomplete. But this OS filled that emptiness. Sach main, bohat he khubsoorat hai. THANK YOU for writing this. With this OS you truly made Walking With You even more special. :)

.SilentPrincess

wow this was sooo sooo sooo beautiful...lovely part...

sweet n lovely update...❤️

so beautiful,romantic and cute os

so so so beautiulll...