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Hello people!This is my first OS and i hope you guys like it!😃
This story takes place after the sangeet where Khushi has realized her feelings but arnav hasnt because of his ego. So Khushi takes an oath😆 that she will make her LG realize he's in love!
Here goes nothing:

Khushi stepped in RM determined, after all she had a new mission: Her Laad Governor! She started looking for him the minute OP let her in.

'' Oh Khushiji, you're here! There's a lot of preparations left for the wedding, so will you help me??"Anjali said as soon as she saw Khushi.

"Of course Anjaliji", Kushi said smiling," Yay kaya pochne wali baat hain, chaliye".

Anjali led Khushi into her room. Suddenly Arnav showed up," Di app nay meri file dek...", his voice trailed of seeing Khushi.

"Kounsi file, Chote ", Anjali said clueless(as always!)

Arnav came back from replaying what had happen at the sangeet the previous night and said," woh... Mr.Sharma ki file, jo maine app ko di the rakhne kay liye".

"Oh, woh wali file, han yaad aya, woh humne tumari file almari(closet) mein rakhi hain", Anjali said.

"Di , wah nahi mili iss liya hi app ko puchne ayya hun",Arnav said annoyed.

"Khushiji, app chote kii maadat kar daingy?"Anjali pleaded.

"Ji, bilkul", Khushi said happily.

I finally got a chance, is ko gawa mat dena, Khushi, Khushi murmured to herself while following Arnav to his room.

"Arnavji, app ne hamarey saath dance kiyon kiya tha?", Khushi said out of nowhere .

Arnav turned around and said angrily," Tumme kya lagta hai, muche shok hai tumhare saath dance kar ne ka? Then you're wrong, Khushi Kumari Gupta!" Arnav holds Khushi's arms so hard that the whole circulation of Khushi's arms would stop if he put just a bit more strength."Meine iss liye dance kiya tha kunki mein yay saabit karna chahta kay tum mere bina kuch nahi kar sakti! And I don't need you to find my file, I'll find it myself! GET OUT!

A tear rolled down Khushi's cheek and she ran downstairs, crying.

As soon as Khushi left, regret hit Arnav like a huge rock.

"Dammit!," Arnav said outloud.

Khushi bumped into Anjali on the way out the door.

"Kya huya Khushiji, app ro kyunrahi hain? Chote nay kuch kaha kya?"

"Nahi, kuch nahi kaha unhu nay", Khushi said wiping her tears," Humme bas gar jaana hai". And with that Khushi hurried out the door.

Khushi was walking home as she was too miserable to wait and call an auto. She was so busy in replaying what had just happened at RM that she didn't hear a truck beeping from behind her. In a flash, she found herself on the ground. She had no idea what was going on, she could only feel a terrible pain on her head. She couldn't remember what had happened after that as all she saw was darkness. Suddenly an ambulance came and lifted Khushi on a bed and carried her to the vehicle.

Back at RM, Arnav came downstairs to check on Khushi only to find out that she had went home a while ago. He sighed and started up the stairs when he heard the phone ringing. He saw no one in living room so he decided to go pick it up.

"Hello, Raizada house?," The guy at the other end of the phone said.

"Yeah, kya chaiye?", Arnav said uninterested.

" Ji, humare hospital mein ek larki admit hui hai, accident kay wacha say or woh accident app kay gar kay pass hua hai to humne puchna tha kay woh app kay gar say to nahin hain na?"

Arnav suddenly got worried," Us larki ki chooti hai? Or pom-pom dress paina hai usne?"

"Ji! Lagta hai app unko jaante hain", the guy said.

"Mein abhi hospital pay ponchta hon", Arnav finished.

Arnav told everyone and they all hurried to the hospital.

The doctor told them that Khushi might go in coma as she had injured her head very badly. And because of that only one person could visit her for today.

Everyone started to fight over who should go.

"Mein jaonga," Arnav said. Everyone watched in shock as Arnav headed toward Khushi's room, but no one dared to stop him.

Khushi was awake when Arnav came into her room.

"App kyun aye yaahan?," Khushi managed to say," Hamari aukat hi kya hai kay app apni zindagi say waqt ikal kay yaahan aye.Hum apke hain koun?

"Tum jaana chahti ho to sunno, tum meri zindagi hon or mein tumhare bina ji nahin sakta. Di sahin kahtin thi, jab app kisi say pyaar karte hon to uske bina appki saasen ruk jaati hain. Han, mein Arnav Singh Raizada, Khushi Kumari Gupta say pyaar karta hai.

Khushi smiled as her mission was completed!

So how was it, i know pretty boring but plz comment anyways even if you want to tell me how bad it is😆Your comments willl tell me if i should write more stories or stop and that writing isnt for me😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was nice dear!! 😃
And dont ever feel that u cant write..everyone has talents..u just need to nurture it!!
Keep up the good work!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome bubs !!

you can write don't let little mistakes put you down... i think you're great.. Keep it up!
even i though i cudnt write until i wrote an Os and now i have my own writing index too lool xx

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great job! Continue writing. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww, That was so wonderful.Fabulous.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, that was fantastic os👍🏼
great job👏
i really loved it
agreed, for him 2 realise something big should happen 2 khushi .then only he will realise that he is in love with her
plz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazin OS...
loved it...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it..!!..👏...And you're quite good..trust me..even I couldn't write previously but now I'm writing a whole FF...Just don't underestimate yourself..!!..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice Os...😉
plz pm me d nxt tym u write a update...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Orange101

So how was it, i know pretty boring but plz comment anyways even if you want to tell me how bad it is😆Your comments willl tell me if i should write more stories or stop and that writing isnt for me😆

Itna bhi boring nahi hai sweetie.. it's actually very evry very cute.. love the way you used urdu.. 😳

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