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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 13

Mujhe is rishte se koi aitraaz nahi. He look at her lovingly. Infact I would be really happy... but I just need one thing...he take his time and then say.Time. I need little time. Jab tak tum apna MBA katam Karo aur main apna business.

She stayed quiet listening to Jim while he was busy in her eyes searching for some answer. He wanted her to say something but she just stares at him with her usual blank eyes and said nothing.

When she didn't reply but just look at him he continues. Geet. I have not answer dadi yet, because I want to know you decision first. She looks at him. If you have any problem, you can reject this marriage, main sab sambhaal lunga, par tumaari Marzi k bina kuch nahi hoga. She looks at him in awe. This was the first time ever someone asked for her decision, no one ever asked for what she feels or never have anyone asked her opinion except Samar and his mom dad.

She looks at him in so much respectful eyes.You can think about it and take as much time you can. He looks at her eyes but find her blankly looking at him. He was already feeling nervous how will she react after his confession but here she was sitting starring at him giving not a single hint from her expression.

Geet. He called to ger but she still continuous to look at him. If you need time. Then why didn't you rejected me? She asked from nowhere, he smile looking down and hesitated for some time but finally hold her hand. She looks down at his hold. I was all ready for that. He softly strokes his thumb on her skin. But you have become very special for me. She looks at their hold but maan could see her turning bright, he tightened his hold still stroking her finger with his thumb.

Par tumaari Marzi k khilaaf kuch nahi hoga. She inhaled for air; his strikes were only making her week to even say a word. His every word was building a new feeling inside her making her so week to even look up at him for a glimpse. My life is all yours now. Accept it or reject it. He whispered moving close to her she immediately closes ger eyes and ger hold tightened. Geet. It took a moment for her to open her eyes slowly and again concentrate on their hands.


The choice is yours now. He whispered softly removing a strand behind her ear. I'm all yours. His lips move close to her ears, her breath caught on her throat, she gasped lightly feeling his breath on her skin behind her ear.

He was almost loosing himself, wanting you feel her skin for just one time. Wanting to at least kiss her skin soft skin, he hide his face on her nape inhaling her sweet aroma, he was about to touch his lips on the skin of ger neck when. Suddenly loud noise of mobile ringing brings both in reality.

He sighed and moves away slowly without removing his hand on hers. She nervously put ger hair behind her ear and quickly answers the phone. Sam was calling her to come home quick but she was still lost in him. Still feeling his soft breath on her skin. She sighed mumbling to Sam just an ok and disconnect the call.

Both sat in silence for sometime avoiding looking at each other's. He was only looking out while she was looking down on her lap in pin drop silence. The only thing which was connecting both was the hold of the hand. It was still tight from both. No one was willing leave but was not sure how to talk.

They sat for some time, not once looking at each other's but still their heart was in peace, not once did they cursed or felt guilty about their moments but they were only feeling damn shy. He looks down at their hand and brings it up to his lips pressing a soft and long kiss keeping her hand on his lips for longer time.

Moving it back he strokes his thumb and look at her finding her looking outside. Geet. She sighed and slowly looks up at him. His eyes were only looking in her eyes searching for an answer still. She didn't say a word; she didn't once try to protest even. She didn't show any sign of protest yet any sign of agreement.

He silently starts the car and drove to home but didn't let go of her hand. They reached home and sat there for little moment not wanting to leave each other's hold only if dev wouldn't have shown up giving a teasing smile to maan. Geet reluctantly release ger hold and went inside leaving them alone.

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Precap: MAAN WAITING FOR THE ANSWER'

Edited by zoha25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi zoha me first

excellent update zoha
me to kushi ke maare uchal rahi maan ka dilogs se osum
Geet. I have not answer dadi yet, because I want to know you decision first. She looks at him. If you have any problem, you can reject this marriage, main sab sambhaal lunga, par tumaari Marzi k bina kuch nahi hoga. She looks at him in awe.
geet ki khushi to satvi aasmaan pe hi
This was the first time ever someone asked for her decision, no one ever asked for what she feels or never have anyone asked her opinion except Samar and his mom dad.
maan waiting nervously for geet reply wow simply wow
You can think about it and take as much time you can. He looks at her eyes but find her blankly looking at him. He was already feeling nervous how will she react after his confession but here she was sitting starring at him giving not a single hint from her expression.
scene was breath taken simply osum
when maan holds geet hand
If you need time. Then why didn't you rejected me? She asked from nowhere, he smile looking down and hesitated for some time but finally hold her hand. She looks down at his hold. I was all ready for that. He softly strokes his thumb on her skin. But you have become very special for me. She looks at their hold but maan could see her turning bright, he tightened his hold still stroking her finger with his thumb.
maan ladki se ijajat mang raha hi shadi ka ya propose maar raha hi samaj nahi
i am damn shore ladki pata rahe ho

Par tumaari Marzi k khilaaf kuch nahi hoga. She inhaled for air; his strikes were only making her week to even say a word. His every word was building a new feeling inside her making her so week to even look up at him for a glimpse. My life is all yours now. Accept it or reject it. He whispered moving close to her she immediately closes ger eyes and ger hold tightened. Geet. It took a moment for her to open her eyes slowly and again concentrate on their hands.

zoha hatsoff the each and very line u wrote today has so meaningful to maaneet and us
ye meri dil ko chugayee ha kaise kaha i am all urs pata liya geet ko u r too good man i love u

The choice is yours now. He whispered softly removing a strand behind her ear. I'm all yours. His lips move close to her ears, her breath caught on her throat, she gasped lightly feeling his breath on her skin behind her ear.

zoha kiss miss kardi ha
He was almost loosing himself, wanting you feel her skin for just one time. Wanting to at least kiss her skin soft skin, he hide his face on her nape inhaling her sweet aroma, he was about to touch his lips on the skin of ger neck when. Suddenly loud noise of mobile ringing brings both in reality.
ye line badiya hi
The only thing which was connecting both was the hold of the hand. It was still tight from both. No one was willing leave but was not sure how to talk.

highlight of part

He looks down at their hand and brings it up to his lips pressing a soft and long kiss keeping her hand on his lips for longer time.
dev na kya jaroorat ti tease karne ki wo kitne khush the ek dooje ko leke
all in all nice update zoha
i really loved it very much from my bottom of heart
abi se next part ka waiting ore kitne nazdeek honge maan

Precap: MAAN WAITING FOR THE ANSWER…

interesting
Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago
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Love it graphics
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not only maan but me to waiting for geet's answer...i'm 100% sure its gonna yes...no one has asked her opinion or preference except our maan...
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Thank You Cards
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awsem maan asked opinion hope geet say yes
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even though we know the answer we all r waiting to hear it from geet along with maan. beautiful part. loved maan saying "I'am all urs"
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Awesome part.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon
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