FF: Dhoop Kinare: New Announcement Pg. 33 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
understanding is the basement of a relation . u have portrayd it very wel.
really a heart warming update... expecting ur update tdy. sorry , i'm greedy abt it k...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow !! Another masterpeice by you .👏 luved it to the core...Love the way you have portrayed the understanding btween the two...
Looking forward to more🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Miisshh Its beautiful. Lovely awsome , super👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mish ONE WORD for this part ROLLER COASTER👏

You have taken us on a hell of a ride for that one and loved every min of it.

You have depicted Ashu as I see him indeed he may be older but he is the one who is emotionally weaker and Nids on the other hand may be younger and more impulsive is emotionally stronger, you have shown how they complement each other in that Hospital scene . DB is a necessary obstacle , as she represents the old school thought, yet col verma has brilliantly challenged her op and i love the silent mutual support of ASH NI then

  • the letter in the room is awww😍 its so Ashu, and the noddle scene is a masterstroke, best moment more than wedding has been the hospital scene , you see how they complement each other and how Nids can read Ashu so well

  • simply superb brilliant mind blowing and awaiting for next part

  • indeed yeh dil mange more



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Posted: 13 years ago
hi!!!i have read all from part 1-part 21...i have noticed that with each parts the story is becoming more n more matured n lovable...as nidhi from a very michievous,carefree girl has become a matured understanding and a responsible girl...would love to read the next parts...waiting for your updates..😊😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot everyone for the overwhelming response. I will reply individually later. But wanted to give a heads up. The rest of the story is sorted out in my head now and it is coming to a close. Here is a list of what all is left
  • Honeymoon
  • A twist in Delhi
  • Lived Happily Ever After + A short epilogue
So, probably 2 or 3 more updates. Keep reading!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Beautiful update👏please continue


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice part dear! loved the way u described their relationship, so natural and so real 👍🏼 the passion and desire in their SR were too good 😳 😃

it was even better when you took so much care of describing their understandings, comfort and caring for each other in their 2nd night 😊



Well done dear!! 👏 it made my day yet again. waiting for the next part EAGERLY 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

@Sharmi...bheatifull update...

love the realization off Ashu...
love/marraige doesn't have to be a burden nor does it ad up a zimedari...it's about sharing and understanding each other...


Thanks Shali 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimoha

Hey Sharmishtha. Found A's fear that his personal life might affect his dedication and commitment to his profession quite interesting. I would imagine that he will lighten up a bit now that he is married or may be not as he is so involved with N's PG. Would love to read how you take the story forward. Loved the way N stepped up to support A when he got nervous. A heartwarming update as usual. Look forward to next chapter.


Thanks Mimoha. The idea here was that for somebody like Ashutosh, who hasn't thought about having a personal life for so long and who has completely dedicated himself to his work, this would be a little bit of problem. Relationships need emotional and time investment. And learning to balance the two is a tricky skill, even for normal people. More so for someone like Ashutosh. To dramatize it, I introduced the crisis on the morning after their wedding. 😊 In real life, it is more likely to show over a period of time in small, little moments.

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