My First FF: Pyaar Hua.. Chupke Se, Part 24, Pg 84 - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Stutz-

that line is from an ad! i sang it while typing!! 🤣



and i thought it was from your heart lmaoo ;p.. i take that back lol ;p
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Posted: 13 years ago

can ny1 tell me wen dis next part gonna get updated? m eager 2 read it...it's long bac updated..is it nt gonna continue?😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sana15

can ny1 tell me wen dis next part gonna get updated? m eager 2 read it...it's long bac updated..is it nt gonna continue?😭

hey..i m gonna continue my ff.. And i was planning to update soon..i mean tomo..but it was gona be a shock that i updated..rofl
i m updating tomo..sangeet special.. I will try to make it a memorable part :)
sorry for the delay! I was bugged to write.. And send PMs!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally, u wl update this FF...😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asawari_naksh

Finally, u wl update this FF...😃😆

haan di.. 😆😆 finally! im updating :p
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 22

Hey People! I know, it has been very long! But i guess i cudnt extend the update any further! Jutti chappal tamatar ande.. sab padenge nai toh!

OK.. important part..

Update dedication: Seju ❤️

(mariam and shivu.. u all had also requested a ixed update for sangeet, but i didn't dedicate the update to you'll coz my sej is super angry with me 😭 and i needed to do atleast something to appease her! Sorry)

Sangeet Ceremony

(I am not showing preparations as they will drain out my entire energy! I am giving you all a short update, with various characters, upon request. I hope you all like it)


Setting: Maheshwari aangan. The stage is set just like it was set for the ramleela in the show. The stage is a about 10-15 inches in height. Directly in front of the stage, gaddis are layed for the guests. On one side, akshara has sat, and mehendi is being applied to her hands. She faces the stage, so that she can see the performances.

Arnav-Khushi (Arhi), Mayank-Nupur(Mayur), Samrat-Gunjan(Sajan), Arjun-Arohi(Arjuhi), Armaan-Ridhimma(KaSh), Abhay-Piya(Abhiya), and Maan-Geet(Maneet) have arrived at the Sangeet ceremony of Naitik Singhania and Akshara Maheshwari.

Akshara is looking stunning in a bluish green lehenga, with golden work, wearing jewellery suiting her dress. Naitik is looking handsome in a similar colored kurta.

Naitik and the guys, namely arnav, mayank, samrat, arjun, armaan, abhay and maan, have sat opposite to akshara. All of them are facing the stage too.

Akshara is surrounded by khushi, nupur, gunjan, arohi, ridhimma, piya, and geet. 2 ladies are applying mehendi on her hands. The girls are talking about random stuff, and having fun.. when the announcement to start the sangeet ceremony is made.

These girls, along with their husbands (imagine everyone is married), have arranged a surprise for our beloved naksh. Soon, Arhi occupy the stage.

Arnav: Good Evening everyone.. hope you all are enjoying the function.

Khushi (gives him a disgusted look), and takes the mike: He devi maiyya! In sab ki inse raksha karyiga! (to arnav) Aise karte hai speech start! (faces the audience) Yahan baithe sabhi logon ko hum sab ki taraf se Radhe Krishna! Aaj humne hamare pyaare doston k liye ek surprise tayyar kiya hai.. aap sab ki aagya ho, toh hum shuru kare?

Aksh is shocked, and looks at all her friends. While moving her eyes here and there, they meet naitiks, who is equally shocked. She shies and looks down.. blush clearly appearing on her face. Naitik smiles.

G3: haan haan beta, hum sab intezaar kar rahe hai!

K; toh theek hai.. hum shuru karte hai!

By this time, arnav has a mike.. he interrupts..

A; aarti utare sab.. apni yeh buc buc band karo, and shuru karo!

K; dekhiye, mujhe aapse behes nai karni.. ek toh aapki wajah se mujhe dance nai karne mila!

A; what? Meri wajah se? Dekho khushi arnav singh raizada, don't get onto my nerves alright! Meine kya kiya!

K; bas bas.. apni angrezi mat jhadiye! Aapne kya kiya matlab? Aapko toh naachna aata hai nai.. aur sab couple dances they.. toh mein kiske saath naachti!

A; what the! Mujhe naachna aata hai.. tumne mujhse ek bhi baar pucha ki mein naachunga ya nai? Aise kaise andaza laga liya!

Ridhimma enters: Bas bas.. ab tum dono khud hi ladoge, ya mujhe aur armaan ko batane ka mauka donge k shaadi k baad kaise jhagte hote hai!

A; ridhima.. thanx! Mujhe khushi se bacha liya.. ab tum dono apna jalwa dikhao! Smiles 😍

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=--zmMh7DNHM[/YOUTUBE]

K; wow... kya mast wali performance din a inhone?

A; haan.. superb performance guys!

K; shocked! Checks if arnav has a temperature!

Arnav is all shocked.. holds her hand.. for a while both of them are lost into each others eyes!

Mayur and sajan come up..

G; dekha doston.. pyaar toh bahut karte hai ek dusre se yeh dono..!

S; par yeh kehne se katrate hai!

N; Pyaar mein jhagda bhi kar daalte hai yeh..

M; toh fir maafi maangne se itna itrate kyun hai?

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=aEoJ1uOa7Jo[/YOUTUBE]

Abhiya come up next..

P; waah ji waah.. bahut achcha dance kiya!

A; haan bhai.. waise, ab hamari baari hai!

Geet comes and pulls abhay's ears..

G; maan, dekhiyo toh.. kaisa utavla ho raha hai yeh!

M; ab apni patni k saath dance karne k liye kaun utavla nai hoga haan?

G; Maan, aap bhi na!

A; Geet geet geet, aap plz yeh nok jhok stage k neeche utarkar kijiye na! Meri performance..

M; haan haan.. go ahead.. nai rokenge hum tumhe, nai toh hamara khoon pi jaoge!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=TM3VFu3FjnI[/YOUTUBE]

Seeing this romantic sequence, naksh also start dreaming.. oblivious to the whole world, staring into each others eyes... they go into nakshland 😍

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=TM3VFu3FjnI[/YOUTUBE]

Nupur notices the two lost into each other. She tugs everyone. Everyone starts smiling.. the elders also smile!

Nupur goes towards akshara. Both naitik and akshara don't move. Nupur leans forward, close to akshara!

N; by god, kya Jodi hai!

Naksh jerk out from their dream. Both feel embarrassed..!

Arohi interferes..

A; nai nai.. taakte rahiye.. taakte rahiye! Humein toh aapke expressions dekhke hi maza aa raha hai! Kyun arjun?

Arjun; tujhe inke expressions mein aisa kya dikh raha hai!

Mayank; please, ab tum dono mat chalu ho jaana..! tumhari performance abhi baaki hai..!

Arohi; aise kaise chup hojau! Mein kya andhi hun.. expressions nai dikh sakte mujhe!

Arjun; haan.. andhi ho!

Arohi; dekho.. nai.. tum nai.. puri audience dekhegi! Salsa kar rahe hai na hum.. use achchi tarah karke dikhaungi.. tumse better..

Arjun; haan haan.. dekh lenge!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=jc1YZOXTyMg[/YOUTUBE]

Maan; geet.. chalo.. hum jaa rahe hai..!

G; kyun 😲

M; hamara dance arjun-arohi se pehle tha.. yeh log aise kaise kar sakte hai!

G; arrey chalta hai.. chalo.. ab hamari baari!

M; nai.. mujhe nai dance karna ab!

Arohi; maan, i m really sorry.. mein bhul gayi thi.. ! sorry..

G; arrey arohi.. its completely ok!

M; no.. it isn't.. mein dance nai karunga.

G; theek hai.. mein jaa rahi hu.. *angrily starts to walk away*

Maan stops her..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=BFvjgS3HGCM[/YOUTUBE]

Dj gets up to thank everyone!

Dj; thaare sabka shukriya.. mhaare utsav mein chaar chaand lagane ke liye!

All couples smile.

Dj; mhaare ko bahut achcha lagega, agar hone waali bahu aur munna bhi ek dance kare

Naksh: Shocked

All family members: Shocked

Dj; ke hua tum sab ne? Arrey bachchon ko naachne do..!

Naitik is very happy.. even akshi..they get on the stage.

N; humne practice toh zyada ki nai hai, isiliye agar koi galti ho jaye, toh please humein maaf kar dena.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=J7Hmm9VcnpE[/YOUTUBE]

Thus ends the Sangeet Ceremony!

To Be Continued

Sorry If I forget to PM anybody

I know i m updating after long time, but i will try my best to update every sunday...😳 Will pakka try

Waiting for your comments!

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Edited by -Stutz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update stu 😃.. loved it 😃
sangeet nd last naksh ved hayee 😳 wachng der dance aftr so longg 😛
nd teeno ka combine 😛 sorry mene sirf naksh ka padha being ownest 😛 😊 😆

loved it 😊 nd me 1st me 1st 😆

Edited by -.Shriya.- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -.Shriya.-

awsm update stu 😃.. loved it 😃

sangeet nd last naksh ved hayee 😳 wachng der dance aftr so longg 😛
nd teeno ka combine 😛 sorry mene sirf naksh ka padha being ownest 😛 😊 😆

loved it 😊 nd me 1st me 1st 😆

omg.. ab mein tujhse kya kahu??? meine comedy banaya, taaki it isnt boring.. and u! 🤣 as expected!
glad u liked it..i wont call it one of my best updates, as it didnt have naksh. It was sangeet, and a mixed update.. so i couldnt give much justice to naksh😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Stutz-

omg.. ab mein tujhse kya kahu??? meine comedy banaya, taaki it isnt boring.. and u! 🤣 as expected!
glad u liked it..i wont call it one of my best updates, as it didnt have naksh. It was sangeet, and a mixed update.. so i couldnt give much justice to naksh😳


😆 sorry yarr 😔 bt m nt interestd in jodis except naksh 😳 😆 mene ved dekha naksh ka 😳 usme no efforts naa 😆 next tym i want naksh scenes 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -.Shriya.-


😆 sorry yarr 😔 bt m nt interestd in jodis except naksh 😳 😆 mene ved dekha naksh ka 😳 usme no efforts naa 😆 next tym i want naksh scenes 😛

ya sure! next update will be naksh.. and uske baad SR yaar!

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