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Posted: 13 years ago
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MAAN GOT AFFECTED BIN THEIR FIRST MEETING ONLY
WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN HE MEETS HER AGAIN
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comments Angel
hmm... maan is getting affected by geet na jaan na pehchann phir bhi😳
geet is really sweet kafi helful nature hai uska
are waah maan wants to protect her hai main marjaawa
chalo so finally dono ka problem solved
regarding the precap mujhe pata hai kya honewala hai but i won't tell anything over here
love u - Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanku so much friends for ur encouragement and support

Um so sorry um unable to comment individually but thanks a lot for encouraging me so much...please continue the same support...ur comments means a lot to me...


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Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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"Tu Jaane Na"



The English translations of the update are in the brackets and this time I have changed the colour as many of u asked to do that...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...

This part is dedicated to my friend maneetlover1 (Mona)...she guessed everything perfectly...😃


Part 5


Next morning''

Maan went to his office to keep a check that everything was going on perfectly. He was really happy to see the same'..

Manager: sir staff is really happy with the incentives you have given them''.all are appreciating the kindness and generosity by you.

Maan: Main Khuarana Constructions ka naam hamesha badte hue nazaar dekhna chahta hu or iske liye mujse jo hoga main wahi karunga'..main nahin chahata ki choti si baat se khurana constructions ki aabro par koi asar ho [I want to see the name of Khurana constructions growing up and I will do anything to maintain the same reputation. I really don't want that small issues create problem for the company]

Manager: waise sir hum staff ne aapke liye aaj ek choti si party rakhi hai [sir the staff has kept a small part for you]

Maan: kis baat ki party??? [party for what??]

Manager: sir aap to jaante hai ki hum staff yaha par ek family ki tarah hai'.koi khushi milti hai ki hum use celebrate saath mein karte hai or ek baat ye bhi hai ki aap kafi dino baad aaj yaha office aaye hai'.please mana mat kijiyega [sir you know that we staff is like a family here and we celebrate even on a small happiness we get and also you are here with us after a very long time]

Maan: par main abhi thodi der mein wapis delhi ke liye nikal raha hu'..par tum log apni party continue karna''next time hum wapis party karenege[ but I am leaving for delhi now'..but you all continue with your party'.next time we will keep another party]

Manager: sir ek baat or kehni thi [sir wanted to say one more thing]

Maan: haan bolo [yes say]

Manager: hume hamare wahi maan sir wapis de dijiye'..aap jaante hai staff ka har ek employee yahi baat karta hai ki hamare vo maan sir kahin kho gaye hai jo har baat muskura kar kiya karte the'..unhe dekhkar kabhi aise nahin laga ki vo hamare boss the'. chehre par muskaan liye thi'..hamesha har kisi ka saath dete the'.kabhi koi galati bhi karta tha to use bhi aaram se uski galati ka ehsaas karate the''please sir hume vo maan sir wapis de dijiye na [Sir we want our old maan sir back'..even the staff members keep saying that we have missed our Maan sir who was very cheerful''.one who never behaved as a boss'..who always stood with everyone''who use to teach with a soft tone when we did mistakes'.please give us the same maan sir back]

Maan was surprised with all those words''he could listen all those words echoing in his ears'..Maan was not that he had become''he was really cheerful'.friendly with his employees'..so bubbly'..but then what has changed him''

Maan: thik hai tum ab jao muje wapis delhi nikalna hai'..main jaldi hi yaha wapis aunga [fine'..u go now'..i need to leave for delhi'and yes I will be back soon]

The manager was about to leave when maan called him back''

Maan(smiling): or haan hamari party zaroor yaad rakhna [ and yes do remember the party is due]

Geet and Maan both boarded their flights and went off to Delhi''..Geet was all the time praying for her father's well being'..and Maan was confused on the changed behavior'.he kept thinking all the time and was successful in realizing the reason behind it.

At Handa Mansion

Here mohinder's health kept to deteriorate'.it felt as if he dint want to live anymore but yes he wanted to see his geet once'..may be the he wanted to see his geet in front of his eyes before leaving the place where he could not get any happiness'..he eyes kept searching for her daughter

Meera: bauji please aapne kal se kuch nahin khaya hai'ab to kuch kha lijiye na [dad u haven't eaten anything since last evening please have something]

Mohinder: jab tak meri geet mere saamne nahin aa jati tab tak main kuch khane wala nahin [I wont eat anything till I see geet in front of my eyes]

Pammi: aapko apni sehat ki koi chinta bhi hai kya??? [do u have any care for your health???]

Mohinder: main eek baar keh dia na mujhe baar baar mat bool suna tumne or muje kuch der ke liye akela chod do [I told you na I don't want to eat and please leave me alone for sometime]

He was speaking when he heard a voice''it was geet who came back'

Geet: bauji kya mere kehne par bhi nahin khaenge?? [Dad wont u eat if ask u to do so??]

Suddenly a change in expressions of geet's dad was witnessed'it felt as if all his wishes were fulfilled and he needs nothing more in his life'.God had actually given his breath back''.Ahh'what a sigh of relief he was feeling''.now if god would have asked his life he wouldn't have not denied to that also''.

Mohinder: geet puttar to aa gayi?? [geet u have come??]

Geet was in real pain to see her father in a condition like that''..she was really sad that her father was in a serious condition and no one told her about all that'but she thought it was not the right time to talk about all this so he kept quiet and then went and directly hugged her father. Pammi was really shocked to see geet back home while Meera was happy that she could at least fulfill her father's wish.

Geet: chaliye bauji aaj aap or main milke khana khaenge [so dad both of us will eat together]

Mohinder: bas putter tu mere pass aa gayi muje ab or kuch nahin chahiye [geet you have come now I really don't need anything now]

Geet: bauji muje to badi bhook lagi hai kya aap mere liye ye soup bhi nahin piyenge'.aaj aapki beti aapki apne haatho se pilaegi [dad I m really hungry and cant u have this soup for me''today I will feed my father with my hands]

Pammi was fuming with anger so she left the room'Meera saw her mother leaving so she went back her'..here geet feeded her father with the soup and mohinder too couldn't deny'.

Pammi: aakhirkar aa hi gayi ye geet [so geet has finally come here]

Meera: mom aapko to khush hona chahiye na'.aaj aapki geet aapke pass hai'..par appki shakal dekh ke to kuch or hi lag raha hai [mom u should be happy na that geet di is here but the expressions of your faith are really opposite]

Pammi: meera abhi yaha se chali jao'samjhi tum [meera leave from here right now]

Meera: mom main to ja hi rahi hu par ye baat yaad rakhiyega aap chahe jitna marzi galat karne ka sochiye'bhagwan sab thik kar hi dete hai [yes mom I am leaving but u listen one thing,,,,u try and do as much wrong as u cam but god is there to correct everything]

Meera leaves the room '..which made pammi lose her temper more. Here geet and her father were talking after a long time

Geet: bauji apne apni geet ko apne se paraya kar dia na'.aapki itni kharab tabiyat hai or aapne batana bhi zaruri nahin samjha [dad ur in such a bad health and u dint even tell me about this]

Mohinder: puttar aisi koi baat nahin hai main to bas tuje pareshan nahin karna chahta tha [ no geet its not like that'I dint want to trouble you that's it]

Geet: par main aapse sach mein kafi gussa hu [but I am really angry]

Mohinder: acha puttar main apni galati manta hu chal ab apne bauji ko maaf kar de[ yes geet I admit my mistake please forgive me]

Geet:thik hai par aapko muse waada karna hoga ki agli baar se aap mujse koi baat nahin chupaenge [fine par u have to promise me that you will never hide anything from me in future]

Mohinder: kal ka to pata nahin aaj tuje paakar aise lag raha hai jaise babaji ne meri saari icchaein puri kar di hai [don't know about tomorrow but after seeing you here it feels god has fullfiled all my wishes]

Mohinder: puttar aaj mujhe tuje ek baat batani hai [I want to tell you something geet]

Mohinder: puttar mere pass kafi kamm waqt bacha hai'.main jo kehne ja raha hu use aaram se sun [I am left with very less time'.so listen to what I am saying]

Geet: bas kijiye bauji ab main aapse sach mein gussa ho jaungi [enough'.i will really be angry]

Mohinder: puttar ye main nahin keh raha doctors ne kaha hai ki ksii bhi waqt ye saanse mera saath chod dengi [its not me but the doctors have said so]

Geet(crying): bauji please aap aise mat kahiye'aapko kuch nahin hoga'aap jaldi hi thik ho jaenge [please donot say like that''..u will be fine very soon]

Mohinder: puttar tu meri baat pehle sun [geet first you listen to me]

Geet: kahiye bauji aap kya kehna chahte hai??[tell dad what do u want to say??]

Mohinder: geet tuje jaise maine bataya hai ki mere pass zyada waqt nahin hai''maine apni property ka hissa karwa liya hai''usme do hisse hai jisme se 50 percent maine tere naam kar dia hai'..or baaki meera ka naam'.ye baat maine pammi ko bhi nahin bataiye hai''[geet as I told u that I don't have enough time'.. and I have divided my property into two halves one for you and other for meera'I haven't told pammi about all this]

Geet: par bauji aap aise kyu keh rahe hai or aap to jaante hai na ki muje sir aap chahiye ye property muje nahin chahiye [but why are u saying like that'..i just want you'I don't want any property]

Mohinder: geet main jaanta hu ki tu hamesha se mera pyara bachha raha hai'tune wahi kia jaise tujse kaha gaya hai par main nahin chahta ki mere baad tuje kisi bhi tarah ki koi takleef ho [geet u have always been my sweet child and u have done as u were told''..but I don't want that u suffer any problem after me]

Geet: bas kijiye bauji'.ab aap or kuch nahin kahenge''samjhe aap'ab aap aaram kijiye'or haan main raat bhar aapke pass hu aapko kisi bhi tarah ki zarurat ho to aap muje awaz denge samje aap [enough da'..u will not say anything else now'u just take rest'..i will stay along with you for the whole night and if u nedd naything u will just tell me]

Mohinder(self-thought) aaj tujhe sab batakar mera dil halka ho gaya'bas muje ab kuch or nahin chahiye'..[after telling you everything im feeling quite light hearted'I don't want anything]

Here pammi heard all the conversation between geet and her father. Geet sat beside her father with tears in her eyes(though she dint show them in front of her father)

Pammi(self-thought) mujhe jis cheez ka darr tha wahi ho gaya'..isske liye bhi kuch sochna padega [so the thing I was scared off has taken place'.i will surely do something about this]

Khurana mansion:

Daadi was sitting in her room with all the food lying beside her bed''Maan came in and was really sad to see that all that had happened because of him'he was really guilty about his deeds.

Maan: daadima

Daadima: maan aap aa gaye'jaiye hum aapse baat nahin karenge [maan u have come''I wont talk to you]

Maan: baat to main bhi nahin karunga aapse'..aapne mujse waada kia tha ki aap zarur khana khaengi'.or aapka khana sab aise hi pada hai''[ I too wont talk to you'u promised me that you will have something to eat but you haven't]

Daadima: gussa muje hona chahiye or vo aap hokar dikha rahe hai [I should be angry on you but you are doing that]

Maan: chaliye aisa karte hai aap bhi apna gussa khatam kijiye or main bhi karta hu'.aise chalega na?? [we will do one thing,,, u also cool down and I too will do the same'ok??]

Both maan and daadima started laughing'..

Daadima: aap jaante hai na maan hum aapse dur nahin reh sakte to aap kyu karte hai aise?? [ u know na maan I cannot live without you so why do u always so like that??]

Maan: abse ye beta aapko shikayat ka ek bhi mauka nahin dega [now this son of yours will not given a single chance to you']

Daadima: (hugs him) hamara purane walein maan wapis de dijiye hamein [please give me my old maan back please]

Maan feeds him with his own hands''.and then daadima feeded him too'.

Next day'.

Geet too was tired from her journey so she could not keep her eyelids away from each other''whe she got up it was the next morning'..her father had not called her once since night'so she herself thought to woke him up'..she called up her fathers' name for long but there was no response'..she went to him but he never opened his eyes'..he had left the world now''.she gain called him up'..meera and pammi to came and tried waking him up but all the trails were in vain now'..they were left with tears in their eyes'''the doctors were called up but all was finished he had already gone'..gone when he told geet everything'''he was free from tensions now'''.

This confirmation from the doctors made geet unconscious as well'..meera threw water on her many time but it felt all her senses had stopped working'..she sat like a lifeless soul''..

Khurana mansion:

Daadi was sitting in the drawing room'..Nakul came in from outside running in'

Daadima: kya baat hai nakul??[ what happened nakul??]

Nakul: daadima vo pass walein ghar mein kisi ki maut ho gayi hai'shayad unhi ki jo kafi samay se bemar the [daadima someone from the nearby house has passed away'..guess the person who was not well from past few time]

Daadima: vo kahin tum mohinder handa ki baat to nahin kar rahein [are u talking about mohinder handa??]

Nakul: ji daadima wahi [yes]

Daadima: ye to bada bura hua [that is really sad]

Maan was passing from the drawing room after his exercises when daadima stopped him'

Daadima: maan aap hamare saath abhi ke abhi handa mansion chaliye'.or aapko hamare saath chalna ho hoga'. [ maan come along with me we are going to handa masion right now'.and you will have to go with me..]

Precap: maan sees geet in a pathetic condition''..😭😭



Well friends I hope you liked the update'.i tried to give a bigger one this time''..Well I have a news for you all'..I wont be able to update for the next 10-15 days as I will be out of town'..the updates for both my FF's this as well as Kismat Connection will resume back as I will be back home may be by end of this month,,,,so please donot forget me by that time'.

Take care all

Love u guys'.😃

Silky

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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I luvd d update Golu di...

Beginin se hi..d cnvrsatn btw d manager n Maan ws rly touchin..
Dey wer misin their Maan sir...
I luvd hw Maan actualy cnsidrd d toks n prmsd hm 2 cum soon nxt tym n party 4 sure.. Dat ws sweet.. N he said dat smilin.. Yippee.. MSK smild..

I luvd hw durin d plane journey Maan figured out d root of hs changd behaviour..

I luvd hw geet went n tokd 2 hr fathr n made hm eat...
I hatd pammi's attitude..luvd meera 4 sayin things 2 hr...
I felt sad 4 geet..she cudnt spend much tym wd hr fathr..
Mr. Handa peacefuly died telin geet hs wil.. Bt damn.. Pammi heard hm..i wondr wat shes gonna do nw...

I luvd d convo btw maan n dadima..it ws sweet.. I luvd hw maan pacifyd dadima n made hr eat..
Me kinda seein d jhalaks of d old MSK... Yippee..

I felt so sad.. D way Mr. Handa died... He jz passd away sumtym.. Bechari geet cudnt even realys.. OMG... Nw shes unconscious... Hlp hr..

Dadima is gonna take maan wd hr..
Maan wil see geet in d pathetic situatn.. I wondr hw he'l react n wat he'l do..

Alrdy waitin 4 d nxt.. Luv u golu di.. Gr8 job..
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written. Geet is so sweet! Maan worried bat Geet n follows her! Maan wonderfing wat happened to him lol! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very touching update 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part...loved it...
Thanks 4 d pm...
Wish u a happy nd safe journey 😳
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part 5
poor Geet...
this Pammi is not good woman...
hope she doesnt harm Geet...
cont soon...

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