||ABHIYA FF||- *DEAD HEART*completed Pg.162 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Awesum update...So is tht mysterous man is Abhay...Abhay kya eda bankar peda kha raha hai...😆...N Piya se yeh umeed nahi thi...😆...Hope Abhay uski watt lagaye...😆...



@ red>> 😆😆 Loved ur comment yaar...abhay zaroor uski watt lagayega... 😆😆n thnx..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anukrati

SUPERB UPDATE DEAR. I LOVE pia she don't like abhay dress sense . this ff only jahan pia abhay kii watt lagane pe tuli hain finally she got chance.i hate aarav he is so mean. iguess shadow is of abhay and he is coming with reason. precap is excited.update soon and thanks 4 pm



Thnx hun.. actually i also love this pia😳..akhir kyun baar baar sirf abhay hi pia ki watt lagayega?😕 It's not fair.. pia also shud have a chance...😆yeh, Aarav is defo mean... i'll update soon n u r welcome..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi nice update
Plz pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey read all the updates... very interesting... 👏
You made Piya soo different...I kinda like it.. i mean the change 😆 and Abhay as a nerdy...liked the mystery of the FF...do PM me when you update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Seems to be very nice concept continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdoll



ya, he is a meanie... i'll continue soon n u r welcome..😊
how much time raha nehi jata

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-4

Next morning

Pia wakes up from her deep sleep. Then she sits in her bed wrapping herself with the blanket. She is trying a lot 2 remember about yesterday night's incidents. But she fails. She can't remember anything...

Suddenly she hears knock on the door-

Pia: Come in..

Pia sees that it is Aarav...

Aarav: Hey Pia, u r still in the bed??

Pia: Yes, i m. Do u have any problem in it?

Aarav: Nope.. not at all.. But i m just eager 2 know that will u come 2 college 2day or u have the plan 2 spend the whole day in the bed? [Aarav winks]

Pia (annoyed): Aarav, control ur tongue. Or otherwise, if u lose it someday u won't b able 2 curse any1..

Aarav(surprised): Hey.. chill girl. Why r u getting hyper?

Pia: Bcoz at this moment my mind is full of bitterness. I can't remember an important incident of last night...

Aarav: Look pia.. I also can't remember anything abt last night as we were drunk but that doesn't mean that i'll show my anger on u !!!! I was only trying 2 make u smile but u r getting annoyed!! Ok, no problem.. If u like then come 2 the college by urself , i m going...

Then Aarav leaves the place but pia's behavior has made him upset also.

After that, Pia gets up from the bed n goes 2 the washroom. There she washes her face n at that moment she understands that winter season has started 2 show it's color. The water is very cold...

Pia quickly dresses up 4 the college.. She is thinking that she has behaved badly with Aarav. She decides 2 say sorry 2 him ... Afterall, she is staying in his house!!! Moreover , she doesn't know much abt mumbai's roads.. So, how will she reach 2 the college when Aarav has left her in anger...!!!

Again, a knock in the door is heard by pia. She feels that it's Aarav , but after opening the door she sees that it's Sharon-

Pia: Sharon u !!! At this hour??

Sharon: Ya, i m. Why r u surprised? Can't i visit my BFF's place?

Pia: Of course, u can.. but Aarav has already left ..

Sharon: I know..

Pia: What ? U know?

Sharon: Yeh, Aarav called me n asked me 2 pick up u 4 the college...

Pia: That means Aarav is really caring !!!

Sharon: Of course , he is caring. I know him from childhood. Yes, he can b very mean 2 others n even sometime he can stoop very low, but those ppl whom he loves , he won't hesitate 4 a second 2 give away his life 4 them...

Pia: Really?
Sharon
: 100% guarantee. Btw, as much as i came 2 know abt u , i feel that u n Aarav can b Soulmates...

Pia: What d hell r u talking?
Sharon
(laughing): I m talking the r8 thing. bcoz it seems that u r also always ready 2 sacrifice ur own life 4 ur beloved.. That's why i m talking abt Soulmates...

Pia: Oh please... S-O-U-L-M-A-T-E-S !!!!! Such a big word n i dnt understand it's meaning...

Sharon(excited): Come on pia.. I m telling u abt this.. Soulmate means when u'll meet som1 special i mean ur soulmate n look into his eyes , u will lose urself into him... Ur heart will stop beating n u'll feel that the place of ur heart is empty bcoz ur heart is already taken by him...U'll feel that ur soul has been united 2 his.. n u will fall in love with him madly...

Pia(Makes a face): What a stupid theory by Sharon mata!!!!! Me n love!!!! Never , ever... n forget abt this soulmate thing coz i dnt want 2 love any1. This love is such a stupid thing n it brings hell on the earth...

Sharon: No , Pia... 2day may b u r thinking so but in future it can happen that u will keep begging 2 get som1's love but he'll pay a damn care 2 u !!!

Pia (surprised): Sharon!!!! U r praying 4 my bad future!!!!

Sharon(ashamed): Ooops!! When i did so.. i was just telling that u dnt know anything abt ur future!! So, how can u say with so much confidence that u won't love som1?

Pia: Sharon mata... i believe in my present more than future..n my present is telling that we r getting late 4 the college.. If ur future forecasting has been ended can we start 4 the college?

Sharon: Ufff, i forgot abt college!!! Let's go quickly.. But i was just saying that u can't refuse 2 think abt ur future!!!

Pia: Oh.. not again..

then pia pulls Sharon n sits in the car...

In the college

Aarav is chatting with some of his friends while Sharon n Pia reach 2 the college. Pia notices that Aarav is busy with his friends. But she decides 2 say sorry 2 Aarav 4 the morning behavior.. So, she starts waiting 4 Aarav 2 become free. After sometime Aarav takes bye from his friends n Pia quickly comes near 2 him... Aarav tries 2 ignore her but pia holds his hand n plants a light kiss on his cheek...

Pia(making a puppydog face): I m sorry... Really sorry...

Aarav (smiles): It's ok , pia. If u will ask forgiveness with a kiss then i've 2 forgive u...

Then aarav bursts into laughing..

Pia: U won't change!!!

Aarav: That's how i m ...

Sharon: ahem...ahem... U both have forgotten me so easily!!

Pia: Come on honey , how i can forget u so easily after ur soulmate lecture??

Aarav: What's about this soulmate???

Pia was going 2 reply but at this moment they heard a chaos... the trio rushes 2 the spot from where sound was coming n the spot was the OLD LIBRARY !!!!

They see that there is a crowd including teachers, students n officials in front of the old library where a cleaner is describing the whole incident-

I came here 2 sweep the veranda , then i noticed that the lock of the library is open.. Then i got scared n understood that something is fishy..So, i called 2 other peons .Then all of us opened the door n entered into the library.. n then we saw this dangerous thing... We found the boy lying in the floor of the library n he was senseless... Look, still he is senseless !!!

At this time, Miss Anita comes here..

Anita: Who's that boy ? Do any1 know him?

Peon: No madam... We cudn't recognize him..

Anita: Let me see his face...

After seeing the face of the boy-

Anita: OMG!! He is Abhyendra!!! My student!!!!

Another teacher: Ur student!!! U know him???

Anita: Yes, i saw him yesterday in my class n he is a very attentive student...He is a fresher...

Teacher: So, what was he doing at this old library?

Anita: How can i say?? May b the library door was opened by somehow n he came there in search of books!!! But its my guess... only he can answer this question...

After hearing Abhyendra's name araav n gang remember abt their prank of last night...

Pia(scared): OH GOD!!! What we have done!!! We forgot 2 open the door... the whole night he was locked here!!!!

Sharon(scared): OMG!! OMG!! we had plan 2 open the door after just 10 minutes but we forgot abt opening the door due 2 the party n alcohol !!

Pia(panicked): Oh no.. now what will happen if he is dead???

Aarav was listening all these quietly but he now speaks out-

Aarav(tensed): Will u both shut up?? Can't u see that the peon is sprinkling water into his face? Let's 1st see the situation n then u both can keep talking abt these rubbish stuff 4 ur whole life...

After remembering last night's 1 incident , pia slowly tries 2 remember abt that shadow mystery... but she can't remember properly as she was drunk.. but she can remember that som1 was talking in the phone n telling something but what she can'rt remember...But at this moment she decides 2 keep quiet abt this matter as every1 is tensed...

After sprinkling water into Abhyendra's face, he comes into his senses n Pia-Sharon-Aarav take a deep breath after seeing that he is alive.. But with this relief , again 1 fear controls over their mind that what'll happen that if Abhyendra tells that they sent him inside 2 fetch books? Every1 will come 2 know that they played a prank on him n 4 this mistake they can b rusticated from the college also!!!

They start waiting 4 Abhyendra's re-action...But abhyendra seems clueless..

After getting his sense , Abhyendra's 1st reaction-

Abhyendra: Where i m ?

Anita: Abhyendra, u r in the old library of the college...

Abhyendra: Oh...how i reached here???

Anita: Dnt u know that how u reached here?

Abhyendra moves his head that means no...

Anita: Try 2 remember , how do u came here ? n how u entered inside? Then what happened 2u??

Abhyendra: I can't remember anything... I dnt know anything ... i can only remember that i came in the college 4 fresher's party...but after that i can't remember anything...

Anita: Hmmm. i think somebody has played a prank on him , 1st of all that person made him drunk n after that left him here...

Hearing these lines, pia feels that her heart has come into her mouth...

Another teacher: I think u r r8.. But how we'll get 2 know that who played the prank? n we can't ask each n every student in this matter n can't harass them...

Anita: I agree with u.. Only Abhyendra can tell us abt that person... But now he seems very weak... I think we should calll a doctor...

Hearing abt doctor-

Abhyendra: No ma'm.. i dnt need a doctor... i m ok.. I just want 2 go home n take rest there. Believe me i'll b fine..

Anita: Ok .. u can go .. but as soon as u can remember abt anything abt last night , tell us soon. We'll take proper action...

Abhyendra: I'll try 2 remember ... n if i can remember anything i'll tell 2mrw...

Anita: Then ok... u can go home.. do u need any1 who'll help u 2 go home?
Abhyendra: No..ma'm.. I m fine.. I can manage...

Then abhyendra leaves the place n Pia-aarav-sharon starts thinking that why didn't abhyendra tell anything abt them? Did he really forget abt them? Is this possible?

PRECAP: Pia sees abhyendra doing a strange thing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update aditi🤗
yeh kyun itna arrogant hey...poor my abhay baby😆
aarav was silly n stupid 2 d core!!...u know wat i like stupids😆
sharon mata ki jai😆...woh philosophy proffesor ki tarah hoon😆
hmm..so abhay is planning smthng big...m damn sure he was d shadow!!!..
but i luv him like this too...no matter abhay is arrogant or innocent !!,,,he is hawt😍
ab jaldi update karo😆..me wanna read!!
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
wonder wat d strange thing is
thanx 4 d pm😊
Edited by pkyekvisu - 13 years ago

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