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kahkashansakina

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome part

intersting wise kaun tha woh.

loved it

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

awesome updt
just luvd it
luvd how d person said & geet heard "tumhai"
its all getting creepy
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome updt
just luvd it
luvd how d person said & geet heard "tumhai"
its all getting creepy
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

thankyou so much

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Kamalika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

A short but highly interesting update! You sure do know how to capture ur reader's interest Samra! Great job!👍🏼

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: KamalikaG
A short but highly interesting update! You sure do know how to capture ur reader's interest Samra! Great job!👍🏼

thanx buddy

tat was so sweet of u 😉

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: seemamary
I will go mad thinking is it maan a human or what and why is he after geet. 😍 continue soon.

thanx buddy

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

some1 was there...but who??

waiting for next part...

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

awesome ff

i think maan is a real ghost in this the way u have potrayed him till now i feel so but im not sure

waitinggg for the next update

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

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for pm plz add sschPm to your buddy list

Part 6

geet's perspective:

i sat there in the car . i had suddenly felt a strong pull the moment i had landed. what was it i was too scared to voice it out i was already liking it here.it was easy enough to persuade meera to come to shimla she had not once doubt my sudden decision of coming here when i did not even knew about this place 5 mints before i had talked to meera.

sudden terror ran down my spine as i recalled how i had came across shmila.

after that horrible incidence in that hotel room we had vacated the room immediately there was no avbailable filght for the next 3 days so we checked in another hotel. meera on my request had not told anyone at home about the incidence though she was as scared as i was but strangely my fear was long forgotten.it had been replaced by those eyes and those breaths. even remembering those made goosebumps on my arms. meera rubbed my arm and gave me her shawl thinking that i was cold and scared but i was not i let her drape in her shawl and closed my eyes feigning sleep.

ii still clearly remebered how that night i had again seen the same dream the same eyes in agony teling me to run to save my life and me promising him that i will come back. and then the same accident.but this time i had a distinct vision of the place where i fell there was a road sign telling shimla city 20 km ahead.

the following morning i googled everypossible place that was 20 25 km around shimla but i could noty come to a conclusion so i formulated a plan.

i very conveniantly convinced meera that i need a change and i had heared that shimla is a very beautiful place i want to go there and meera as always agreed.

i opened my eyes meera was sleeping beside me and the taxi was going on unknown roads.i sighed and looked outside and then it hit me it looked familiar. that was strange i had never been there.and then it hit me out of no where bhaiya turn right the taxi driver came to an abrupt stop. meera woke up aith a start kia hua

per madam ji ye sarak to shehar se bahir jati hai

mujhe yaha jana hai

per madam ji yaha khali kuch farmhouses ya bangle hai wo bhioaik dosre se koso door. yaha koi hotel nahi mile ga khali chakar pare ga.

ap ko extra pase mil jae ge ab chaliye.

per geet

meera plz hmm she nodded and surprisingly seemed satisfied maybe she had seen the sudden hope and happiness in my face as if i was geeting near my manzil.

PRECAP:

maan r you okay? you seem extremely happy..

he smirked and then the bell rang.

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