Originally posted by: 18anila1
A deep sigh of relief!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now m grinning like hell...😆😳😃API...🤗it was d best part of dis ff till now...i loved it to d coreee...it was sooo cute n adorable...😳m sooo happy now der is no more misunderstanding...n my MayUr r together now 4 forever...😍😍😍it was sooo Beautiful part...Beautifully written API...hats off to u for dis story...⭐️its now proceeding so beautifully...i loved it lodsss...awww...i loved d way Mayank was taking care of his WIFE...n wen d way he came back home to share his happiness wid him..uff!!! le...iss Samrat ne agar pehle keh diya hota toh yeh sab problem hi nhi hota..waise phir yeh story kese hoti...😆jo bhi ho...now m sooo happy..By God!!!loved dis part till infinity...😳though was feeling bad for Nupur...bt now m really very happy for her...loved it lodsss...now i jst want my MayUr to understand each other without anyone's interference...waise now i dont wanna kill Gunjan ok!!!!!!!!!😳uff!!! d swing part was sooo peaceful n overwhelming for my heart too...i loved dat part...n den d head stroking part n MayUr lil convo was sooo damn adorable...😍😍😍awww...i jst loved der silence confession...MashALLAH...i loved it lodsss API...love u API...🤗🤗🤗1.one thing u love about this ff?
Bass 1 thing ...🤔 well...i love dis Story n d talking of all d things wid Nupur...dat is really adorable...n also MayUr's unconditional love for each other...sorry API...cant tell abt only 1thing as der r so many...😳
2. a thing u hate or doesn't like abt this ff?
ermmm...🤔 d SUSPENCE...of dis ff...By God!!!
3. wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..?
le...wht i want u already said apart from dat...🤔 well...in dat case...i wud love see MayUr sharing everything with each other der worry,pain n all...
4. wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach of changing my writing style'?
u toh very well know i love wht evr n hw evr my API write...😳 n d turning of dis story or d Twist is jst SUPERB...Mindblowing...i jst loved d way dis story turned...
5. do u understand the poetry I put at the end.? not only in this one but in every update
Yes...i do..well...sometimes it take a lil time bt i do understand...n d way u gv meaning of sm hard words it also heps to understand it...in short i love everything abt dis ff...😳
Shukar hai apny edit tu kiya ///uff I was waiting for this…specially the answers
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So my all readers are smiling n im loving it
So finally evry1 is seeing real mayank im glad for that..
Samrat sab kha dayta tu maza kiya ata…..phir tum log majan k bhajan asay gatay
Yup now all will be smooth with mayur n ofcourse gunjan cant just disappear though she will be sided
With this ff I want the feeling of peace transferring rather than loud expression of love or romace.
I don't know til now im feeling like adding abit to loud romance or not…yet maybe in future as story progress…
Okay so u didn't like suspense…rfol…n I loved one all of u where thing the way I was making u….thanku so much for liking this ff so much that u cant point one thing..wasy im not at all humble as SRK say…I love praises…lol
Maybe mayank wont be that expressive but Nupur will read the expression. .sharing lets seee…
After 16 chapters I thought mein add tu kerti hoon itna soch k kisis ko samhj bhi ati hai k nhi….initially I wrote myself than as im not Neela..so couldn't ..so add sum of lines that I like….
Thnku for ur lovly comments…
Thanks aloot
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