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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved geet
sooo sweet
poor dadi
cant wait 4 more of maan's past
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome concept
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated my comment on page 17...
plzzz do read... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am bookmarking it dear.
Will read and comment after I get back from my ho;liday.
Thanx fro pm.
Continue soon pls.
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Posted: 13 years ago
GREAT UPDATE

MAAN IS SO UNCARING ABOUT HIS DADI, WHAT HAPPENED TO CHANGE HIM
I HOPE GEET IS ABLE TO REACH HOME IN TIME AND MEET WITH HER DAD
SHE SOUNDS LIKE A VERY CARING SWEETHEART

WILL THESE TWO MEET IN THE PLANE
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanku so much friends for ur encouragement and support

Um so sorry um unable to comment individually but thanks a lot for encouraging me so much...please continue the same support




Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago



"Tu Jaane Na"

The English translations of the update are in the brackets and this time I have changed the colour as many of u asked to do that...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...

This part is dedicated to my sweetest friend and ya my CC- Piya...love u dear...this one's for u...


Part 3


Maan singh Khurana reached his Bangalore office in his great MSK style''

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9wrvI7hLYI[/YOUTUBE]

Each and everyone was surprised by the shocking entry of MSK'..on the other hand the staff workers were about to go on a strike as their needs were not fulfilled''.

Maan was quite friendly to his staff workers but circumstances had made him bit arrogant and rude and it was almost an year that maan had not visited his Bangalore office. He went to his cabin and asked one of the managers to tell him about the problems going around

Maan: Ye main kya sun raha hu Staff strike pe jaane ki baat kyu kar rahe hai??? [What am I listening'. why the staff is asking to call off a strike??]

Manager: vo sir'[Sir']

Maan: jo kehna hai saaf saaf kaho[say clearly what u want to say'.]


Manager: sir vo staff ka kehna hai ki pichle kuch time se unhe kisi bhi tarah ka koi benefit allowance nahin mile hai'aise main unka kaam karna mushkil hai ialiye sabne milke yeh faisla liya hai[Sir the staff complaints that they are not been given benefit allowances from past few months'and its difficult for them to work.. so all of them have decided ]

Maan: tum office mein abhi ke abhi announcement kar do ki sabhi ki salary mein 10 percent increment laga hai'.Maan singh khurana ke hote hue Khurana constructions ko kisi bhi tarah ka nuksaan nahin ho sakta [u go and announce that each and every staff member will get a 10 percent hike in the salary''No damage will happen to Khurana construction till Maan singh Khurana is there]

Manager: thanku so much sir'main abhi hi yeh baat sab ko bata dete hu [thanks'I will intimate everyone about this right now]

Maan: hmm'par khurana constructions ke naam per koi kharabhi nahin aani chahiye [Well Khurana constructions name should not be ruined with all these small things]

Manager: I assure u sir this wont happen in the future'.

Manager: sir ek baat or kehni thi? [sir wanted to say one more thing?]

Maan: hmm

Manager: sir apko bhi kafi time baad yaha office aate dekha hai'.aap delhi jakar kafi busy ho gaye'ek time tha jab aap hum logo ke saath kitna waqt bitaya karte the'.hume hamare maan sir wapis de dijiye na sir. [Sir I too have seen u after a long time in this office'There was a time when u spent a lot of time with us'We want our same maan sir back//]

Maan was shocked with all those words sent by the manager'he then immediately realized that he dint even informed Dev and daadima that he has come to Bangalore..


Maan: tum jao abhi'main baad mein baat karta hu.. [U go ryt now'will talk to u later]

Maan(self-thought): ye mujse kitni badi bhul ho gayi,,,main daadima ko bina bataye yaha chala aaya'..vo mere liye pareshan ho rahi hongi'. O god'.[What have I done..I dint even informed grandma and came here'O god..]

He immediately calls up at Delhi'

On the other hand'geet was getting tensed with the message meera had sent her'usually she dint get such messages'.

Geet: muje meera se baat kar leni chaiye [I should talk to meera and ask her what happened']

She calls up meera'.

Meera: hello geet di aapko subah se call kiya par aapne uthaya hi nahin [hello sis was calling u since morning but u dint picked up??]

Geet: pehle ye bata ki hua kya hai sab thik to hai na [first tell me what is wrong'is everything okay na]

Meera: vo di'.

Geet: meera tu mujse kuch hupa rahi hai na[meera ur hiding sumthin from me?]

Meera: geet di bauji ki tabiyat thik nahin hai'.vo aapse milna chahte hai [Geet di'.father health is not fine..he wants to meet u]


Geet was all in tears listening this''..she somehow controlled herself'

Geet: ye tu kya keh rahi hai meera'kya hua bauji ko [what are u saying meera?? What happened??]


Meera: di aap jaldi yaha aa jaiye'.please'vo bauji.. [ u please come here as soon as possible...father is..]

While she was telling geet everything pammi comes in between and takes call from meera

Pammi: hello geet kaisi ho??[ hey geet how are u??]

Geet: mummy ji main thik ku pehle ye bataiye bauji ko kya hua hai??[me fine but please tell what happened to my father??]

Pammi: vo thik hai geet'bas waise hi thodi tabiyat kharab hai'aap tension mat lijiyega'..sab thik hai [he is fine'.its just he has got some minor problems'he will be fine soon'.u don't worry at all]

Meera was stunned by her words'.and leaves for her father's room/

Meera(self thought) ye mom ko kya hua hai'geet di se jooth bol rahi hai'..samaj nahin aata inka bi'[why is mom lying to geet di'I really cant understand'..]

Geet: mummy ji meri please bauji se baat karwaiye na[ mom please make me talk to my father once]

Pammi: beta vo abhi aaram kar rahe hai jaise uthenge hum aapki baat unse karwa denge [he is taking rest geet'as soona s he gets up will make u talk to him]

Pammi cuts the call faking that there was a network disturbance''.

Geet: zaroor koi badi baat hai muje jaldi hi jaana padega [its something serious need to go as early as possible.]

Geet tells Nandini (her roommate) that she is going to the airport to get a ticket booked for her

Nandini: geet ur mad where will u go at this time'weather is also not good'.

Geet: I don't care

Nandini: and its not safe to go out right now geet

Geet: don't worry ill take care

Nandini: when u have made ur mind then what can I say'shud I accompany u??

Geet: no dear'its perfectly okay''ill manage''

Khurana Mansion:

Daadi ma was not ready to take anything'.She asked Dev to call maan but his cell was still unreachable'..

Finally Dev gets a call from a landline number'.and it was Maan

Maan: hello dev

Dev: bro hum kabse aapko call kar rahe he par aapka cell out of coverage aa raha hai [bro trying calling u since long but ur cell is out of coverage]

Maan: haan yaha office mein kuch signals ka problem hai [yes there is some signal problem in the office]

Dev: bro aap jaldi wapis aa jaiye'daadima ne kuch bhi khane se mana kar dia hai [u come back as soon as possible'Daadima has refused to take food even.]

Maan too became completely restless'

Maan: meri abhi daadima se baat karwao [make me talk to grandma]

Dev takes his cell phone to daadi and makes her talk to Maan

Maan: I am sorry daadima vo achanak se yaha aana pad gaya [I m so sorry I had to rush here]

Daadima(crying) aise bhi koi karta hai kya maan'subah bhi aap bina bataiye chale gaye,,,,or uske baad bina bataya Bangalore'aapko kisi ki parwah bhi hai kya?? Jaante hai hum kitna pareshan hai aapke liye [Maan what is wrong with u..in the morning also u left like that and without informing u left for bangalore'Do u really care for anyone?? U know how much was I worried for u?]

Maan: daadima apko jo kehna hai keh lijiye par pehle khana khaiye [say whatever u want to grandma but please have sumthing]

Daadima: jab tak hum aapko dekh nahin lete hum kuch nahin khane wale [I wont eat anything till I see u]

Maan: ye kaisi zidd hui daadima'main aapse wada karta hu'.main abhi khud airport jaake apne liye flight book karaunga or sabse pehli flight pakad ke delhi aa raha hu [ why are u being so stubborn grandma..i promise I myself wil go to the airport right now and will get my ticket booked for the first flight to delhi]

Maan: par aap please kuch kha lijiye na [but u please eat sumthin]

Daadima: thik hai'par aap jaldi wapis aayiye or agar aap ka wapis nahin pahunche to hum sach keh rahe hai hum khana peena chod denge [fine but u come back soon and if u don't cume back by tomo I will stop eating]

Maan cuts the call and rushes for the airport

At Airport:

Geet: I want a ticket for Delhi for tomo

Maan too comes for getting his ticket booked'..he too comes behind geet and says the same thing'

The ticket booker was busy talking to the officials on the phone so dint listen to neither Maan nor Geet. Both of them said together'

Maan and geet: maam are u listening'..??

Geet and maan eyes met each other''Maan immediately took his eyes away from her and repeated his question

Maan: maam where are u lost?? I asked for a ticket for tomorrow's flight to delhi'

The ticket booker finally responded'.

T.B: Sir and u mam are u seeing all those people their'..??

There was a crowd of around 100 people at the airport who were waiting for the same'.Maan and geet too looked and were shocked

T.B: well all of them are here for their tickets as well but weather in Delhi has worsened and all the scheduled flights have been cancelled'. U too will have to wait till we don't get another confirmation

Maan: but I came back from delhi today itself the weather was not that bad


T.B: I know sir but all of the sudden strong winds and heavy rains have occurred in Delhi due to which all this has happened'..u need to wait Sir.

Geet: o god mera delhi jaana kitna zaruri hai..babaji aap mere bauji ka khayal rakhna jab tak main waha nahin pahunchti'. [its so urgent for me to go to delhi'god u please take care of my father by the time I reach there]

Maan too listened to geet self talk but he did not react at all

Geet: till what time we need to wait Maam??

The ticket booker too dint had any idea so maan and geet were left with no other option than to wait for their tickets to be booked and get confirmed'.

Precap:

1. Geet helping the old age people at the airport

2. Will the tickets be confirmed???

Well how was the update friends???.please press like button and do comment it means a lot to me

I will be waiting'.😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome

awesome
lovely
terrific update 😳😉😉😉
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


r
****edit****
luved hot MSK's entry n his way of handling d workers...
thank u manager for reminding MSK of old sweet n adorable maan...n maan ko yaad aana n guilty hona ki he didn't inform dadima n dev was nicely portrayed...
awww geet was so affected just by d news dat her father is ill what will happen wen she sees him in dat condition????
shukar h babaji ka geet ne pammi ki baat nai suni n she decided to go to delhi...
luved maan's n dadima's convo n luved d way maan promised dadima...
maan itne saalon se reh rahe ho ye bhi nai pata ki dilli k mausam ka koi thikana nai kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta h...
lol geet ki self talk bhi kahin bhi shuru ho jati hai...
so dey will be staying at d airport lets c tune kya socha h but i luved deir first meet...at ticket booking counter...
brilliant job sweetheart...muah for d amazing update...
luvya sooo much sweetheart...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago

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