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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy New Year...
yet to read...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good job plz add me in your PM list too 👏 for your Awsome job on the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx 4 this post.
missing GHSP n hope 2 see season 2 wid this start.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy dis is 2 gud plzzz pm me
i misd maaneet so much bt dis way we can relive geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superbb posst..👍🏼
lovedd the starting episodes..
haven't read all of them but m sure they wud b gr88 too..👏
it seems that m watching the epis on tv.. 😳
if u hav a PM list then pleasee add me.. i dun want to miss any of the epi.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~Episode 11~

Scene 1:

Hall, KM

Away from the mourners

Dev asks Nandini to keep an eye on Geet feigning concern😭, when indirectly he was making sure that the blackmailer doesn't reach her.

Nandini leaves assuring him that she'll always be with her and take care of her.

Scene 2:

The office staff is helping Adi with the various arrangements. Sasha was curious about the clients meeting Dev and wondered what was going on. Even though, she never liked Geet, her plight brought tears to even her eyes😭.

"Saasha Ma'am...I just can't believe our DD is no more😕😭😭...God can't be this cruel😭😭😭...and Ma'am are you...crying?😲" she circles Sasha and points towards her tearful eyes.

"Me...Nahi toh😕...Tasha...Mujhe woh Ms Hoshiarpur kabhi bhi pasand nahi thi, but jo kismet ne uske aur uske bacche ke saath kiya hai...woh bahut bura hua...I really feel sad for her😭...Ab woh aur uska baby...😭"

Adi interrupts...

"Sasha! Ek zaroori baat hai...Poore staaf ko lekar tum outhouse main milo...JALDI!!"

"What? Adi? Arre...suno...😲" Adi took off before she really got the sense of what he just told her.

Sasha and Tasha look at each other completely clueless😕.

"Chalo baaki namoonon ko dhoondthe hain...pata nahi kahan hai...Yeh Adi bhi naa...😡"

"Woh Petu Pinki toh hogi kisi chips ke dher main...🤢🤢🤢" snorted Tasha...

!!!!!!

Scene 3:

Outhouse, KM

The loony trio of Romeo, Pandey ji and Manish...shaaa scurry into the outhouse, looking completely gobsmacked and out of breath😲.

"What happened guys?😕" asks Adi completely shocked.

"Adi Sir..." Manishaaa... strutted to him in his usual girly air looking all worried🤔, "Dev Sir...?"

"Dev Sir...What Manishaa?"

Pandey ji cuts in...

"Shriman Adi...humne Dev ji ko phone par vartalap karte suna ki vah kisi ko mrityu ke ghat utarna chahte hain. Weh atyant chintith prateeth ho rahe the...Aur...aur..." he falters.

"Aur kya?"

"Aur...Maan ji ki mrityu se unka kuch sambandh prateeth hota hai...Hum kuch adhikh sun nahi paaye...Weh avashya hi kuch chupa rahein hain."

Sasha too comes in between their conversation...

"Adi...something is fishy?😕 I saw some of Maan's clients meeting him earlier. He's upto something and he's hiding it from everyone. You must have noticed...he's been acting really weird since Maan and Geet went for that holiday trip to Paris and he was given the Power of Attorney. Mujhe tab se hi kuch gadbad lag raha hai. He's tampered with the company's Accounts, Market Shares, Tax details, and even misled the Board of Directors...and if we had told Maan about this he would not have believed us...isliye main chup rahi..."

"Sasha...I am aware of it...And today," he takes a deep breath "I've called you all here to reveal a truth about Dev. And I need all your support...Now listen carefully..."

Staff huddle...

Scene fades while Adi reveals to them the undisclosed reality...😲

Scene 4:

Geet comes running into the garden and throws herself on the swing, grabbing her duppatta close to her heart, sobbing breathlessly, unable to bear the pain😭😭😭.

"Maan please aa jayiye...Apki Geet apke bina bilkul akeli ho gayi hai..." she tries to catch some breath, "Sab kahte hain...Aap apni Mishty ko chod kar jaa chuke hain...humare baby ko chod kar..." she gasped holding her tears...steadied herself, wiped her tears and affirmed her faith, "Mujhe kuch fark nahi padta...Main janti hoon...Aap ayenge...Mujhe humare pyaar par poora vishwaas hai."

...

Suddenly...

"GEET!"

Her breath comes to a standstill😲, she stunned...the voice she was yearning, dying to hear finally reaches her ears...😭😳

She turns and there stood right in front of her eyes, her very life...her Maan. Her heart pounded like it got it's life back. She wanted to fly into his arms and hold him close to her, but her body was refusing to even move. Her legs stood rooted to the place she was standing, and were shaking. She wobbled a bit, a sudden rush of blood into her brain and her eyes went bleary. She felt dizzy and held her head...Maan caught her, as all the earlier times, before she hit the ground.😳 Her true Knight...😳

...


Precap: Plan EXPOSE DEVil on the way!!!😡

Edited by pj2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I've added an updated Index on the first page...but it's in my second post...the first one i can't edit so...Index in the second post of mine😃😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update. Well written. Geet should give more slap to that devil dev. Geet's confidence on their love is amazing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Awww Wowww Very Beautiful Magical Divine Emotional FF on Our Most Beloved Divine MAANEET Geet hui sabse parayi...
Awesome Interesting FF...Keep up the fab work dear!
Let's try n hope for GHSP season 2 soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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[Note:Updated Index is on the first page...My second post]😃

~⭐️EPISODE 12⭐️~

Scene 1:

Garden

Maan holding Geet's unconscious body😳

"Geet!😲" he shakes her. He lifts her and takes her to the outhouse (OH)

Scene 2:

OH

He carries her in. The office staff, except for Adi, is dumbstruck and completely shocked to see him alive😲. Adi had told them about Dev but not about Maan being alive. They all gasp together on seeing him😲.

"Adi, Geet behosh ho gayi hai😲. Main usse andar le jaa raha hoon. Tum jaldi se Doctor ko bulao."

"Okay...Sir😕" Adi quickly takes out his mobile to call the Doc, while the rest of the staff watch everything with their mouth and eyes wide open😲.


Pinki Enters😆

Lets out a squeak😲 on seeing Maan carrying Geet to the room upstairs.

Then comes the mother of all screams...

"B...B...BHOOTH...AAA!!!!😲"

"Sshhh...Pinki...chup ho jao. Maan Sir zinda hai...bhooth nahi hain😕."

Manish...shaaa...comes in too and pacifies Pinki, "Darling...Yes our Hottie Boss is alive...We also don't know how...but he definitely doesn't seem dead to me...😳" he sighs dramatically.

Adi comes to her and others after calling the Doc and tells them the truth... to which Pinki drops her chips packet and falls on the sofa😲.

They all look at her in wonder...then she speaks...

"Adi Sir...gadbad ho gayi😕."

"Gadbad! What gadbad?"

"Mujhe Dev ke baare main pehle hi pata chal gaya tha. Jab Maan Sir aur Geet Paris gaye the, and Dev Sir took charge of the office."

"Tumhe pehle hi pata tha, then tumne kisi ko bataya kyun nahi Pinki?"

"Kaise batati...Mujhe Dev Sir ke baare main Naintaara ne phone kar ke bataya tha, and mujhe laga woh Geet ko phir nuksaan pahunchana chahti hai...iss liye maine uss par vishwaas nahi kiya."

"Naintara ne...but why?😲 Mere samajh main kuch nahi aa raha...But Thank God, Maan Sir ko kuch nahi hua...Ab Dev humse bach nahi payega...😡"

"But Adi we'll have to be very careful😕. Woh bahut chalak hai. He is capable of doing anything. Maan and Geet ke life main saare problem ussi ne create kiye hain...😕" warns Sasha.

"Yes, Sasha, but if we all work together we can expose his sordid reality before the world😡."

Scene 3:

Maan gently places Geet on the bed😳. He's really worried for her😕.

"Geet, tumhari iss halat ka zimmedaar kuch had tak main bhi hoon...Tumhe pehle hi iss sab ke baare main bata dena chahiye tha😭...but kya karoon I myself was not sure ki mera bhai mujhe marne ki koshish karega. I have to expose him and uske liye kuch aur der I'll have to stay away from you and our baby."

He sits next to her😳, caresses her hair, and kisses her forehead😳.

Somewhere deep inside, in her semi conscious mind, and in her heart, she realises his presence and feels safe😳.

Maan leaves the room before anyone sees him and his attempt to expose Dev got foiled.

!!!!!

Edited by pj2012 - 13 years ago

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