Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 79

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Posted: 14 years ago
That was beautifully written šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Like others already said everything was present in the OS, love pain, helplessness😃😃 the end was really beautiful the way he realized that he could never hate her or wish for anything bad to happen to her😊😊 but still felt bad for himšŸ˜† and the song is one of my all time favs😊 especially the har zakhm bit😊 I've always loved those lines😊
write more soonšŸ¤— and sorry for being so late I have 130 unread pms šŸ˜†
Edited by MayUr-ArTi_fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice os dear...
sorry fr replyng late was busy wid exams.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i read all ur OS's
all of them were fabulous
u r an excellent writer
plz do write more OS and add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sis😃
read ur both os and they both r fab loved the u describe the feelings in second os and loved mayur cute nok johk 😳
plzz do write more os and plzzz also another ff😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an awesome os
n wish u a happy happy new year
hope all ur wishes will come true in 2012
n thanks 4 the pm
~AmritaVasireddy~
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Posted: 14 years ago
A happy new year to all of you!! .. šŸ¤—

Okay so here i am with a MN OS, this is not from the serial, but a sort of inspired from my characters in my FF, "YOU & ME - It's MAGIC", i hope u all remember that FF. This is a request form my darling doll, mehaku .. so here i go meri jaan .. looovvveee uuu!! .. šŸ¤—
Mayur OS

Total Magic.

"pata hai baby aj ap k papa ne promise tor diya", nupur pouted and snuggled to her child with teary eyes, "ap k samne keh kar gaye they na k hum dinner sath karen gey aur ab a nahi rahe hain", she placed her arms around her tiny two months old son, Arav.

Arav was happy seeing his mother cuddling to him and thus awarded her with smiles and giggles, and nupur who was pouting and huffing couldn't help smiling with him, "main ap ko itni serious problem bata rahi hon aur ap hans rahe ho", she pouted further and faking a glare she took him in her lap and hugged him close, "apni mama ki jaan"

"aur papa ki bhi"

Nupur immediately turned at the familiar masculine voice and saw mayank smiling at the door, holding a bouquet of roses. Although inwardly she breathed a sigh of relief that he was home, but remembering his promise, she pouted and cuddled to arav.

"baby ap k papa ap se kuch keh rahe hain", she started rocking arav and mayank was amazed at her pouting. She was undoubtedly the cutest girl ever on the face of this earth. Feeling immense love and affection contracting in his heart, he went to sit beside her, "g baby, dekho mama baat nahi kar rahi mujh se".

Mayank pouted and placed his arms around arav and took him from nupur's lap, receiving another glare from nupur, but a giggle form arav, who was suddenly ecstatic to see his dad.

"g nahi kar rahi hon, maine ap ko reason bataya tha na, ap k papa late aye hain so no talking", she huffed and was still sitting beside mayank , so he placed an arm around her and pulled her close, "baby ap ki mama bht zyada gandi ho gayi hain, un ko pata hi nahi k baby k dad itni traffic main phas gaye they aur ab un k sar main kitni dard ho rahi hai", he made a sad face and hugged arav close to him and nupur gasped, "ap ne bataya ku nahi, khana khaya ap ne?, dinner laon?, koi medicine", she desperately moved close to him and checked his forehead for fever but mayank moved away, "aur pata hai baby, mama roses bhi nahi le rahin hain, how rude na?", he made a serious face, expecting an answer from the baby, but obviously he chuckled which made his parents smile, "baby ap k dad roses den gey tu main lon gi na, bus la kar rakh diye hain table pe", this time she pouted and sensing the fight was over, mayank pouted further, "aise nahi, pehle apni mama ko kaho ap k dad ko ik kiss karen", he stubbornly pulled her close, still hugging arav and smiling and shaking her head, nupur placed a soft kiss on his cheek, "baby apne dad se poch lo ab thek hai"

"bilkul thek nahi hai, baby mama ko batao dad ko kabhi cheek pen kiss psnd ayi hai?", he strictly said and nupur bit her lip, an blushing he kissed arav on his forehead, "baby shaiyd ap k dad bhol gaye hain k un ka baby un k pass hai and he should behave"

"thek hai, ap ki mama baad main kiss karne ka promise tu kar sakhti haina"?

His tone told today that he was in no mood of bargain and the way his arm was possessively holding was already making her red, and this new promise fulfilled the remaining redness required for being a Doppelganger to a tomato

"baby mama se kaho zara jaldi karen nahi tu ... \

"okay promise", nupur said blushing and smirking mayank pulled her close, "jitni kisses main bolon ga utni.. okay?, manzoor hai?", he looked in her eyes and taking a deep breath, she nodded, "okay".

"okay!, so baby, mama ko bolo k ur dad loves her", he said and extended the hand to grab roses, "I am sorry nupur, I tried but couldn't make it on time", he said it with a kiss on her cheek and nupur kissed his cheek back again, " I understand", and with this she took the roses and arav from his lap, "ab ap change kar lo, hum dinner arrange karte hain, kyun baby?", arav smiled and giggled and mayank kissed his son, and then nupur went to kitchen and Mayank went to change.

**

"mayank pooja ka birthday hai, tu kal sham hamien wahan jana hai", she said eating and mayank nodded, "alright, gift le liya?", he asked seriously.

"ofcourse!!, ap ko kiya laga main apni gunjan k baby ka gift bhol jaon gi?, ofcourse le liya, meri pyari si angel k liye us ki favorite dolls li hain", she said affectingly and mayank smiled, "okay g .. I am sorry, bus aisey hi poch liya manine", he said, "by the way, kal tu white hi pehno gi na", he looked up and nupur smiled immediately, "haan g, gunjan k ghar jana hai, white k ilawa kuch phen sakti hon, pata nahi she is obsessed with seeing me in white", she shook her head and started eating, frequently passing smiles to arav in the walker.

Mayank looked at nupur for a while, 2 years back when he married this girl, a complex girl who was afraid of the dark complexion, who was afraid of her dark hands had transformed into a self-confident girl, who embraced every color and who looked mirror with the confident that she was beautiful, and a confused girl who was being an exemplary mother to his son.

"kia hua?", nupur looked up and got confused with his serious stare.

"umm, kuch nahi, bus was thinking how many kisses should I ask for", he winked and hitting him on his hand, nupur started eating, while making a note to give him lots of kisses tonight, while mayank frequently passed her silent love filled gazes, some of which she noticed and some of them she didn't, when she was busy attending to her son, and likewise when Mayank talked to his son, he was awarded with blushing gazes from nupur. A dream like life it was. Total magic.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG what a beautiful OS
it was simply magical OS dear
i loved it loved it loved it
now i can understand why all ur readers addressed u as a magical writer
uve a spark like a magician..
Weldone dear.
i m ur new reader
plz do pm me ur update...


Wishing u a very happy new year to u, ur family members and ur friends..


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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifull
u r a great writer
luved evey bit of it
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Posted: 14 years ago
happy new year kinza..god bless you dear
beautiful one
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
API...šŸ¤—
i sooo loved dis OS...
it was awesome...
it was sooo cute n adorable one...
i jst loved it to d coreee...
thank u to my MEHAK API too for making u write dis OS...
it was chhhooo chhhwwweeettt...
i was feeling like m reading my most desirable "EPILOGUE" of "YOU n ME...its magic"
n i must say one thing it was truly MAGICAL or i shud say d "TOTAL MAGIC"
loved it lodsss...
awww...
d baby part was sooo cute n adobale...
i loved it lot more dan a lottt...
Beautifully written...
loved it lodsss...
love u API...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

ps: HAPPY NEW YEAR...šŸ¤—
API...now plzzz come back wid ur new ff na plzzz!!!!!!
missing u lodsss...n plzzz meri Mehak API se bhi kahiye na ke woh bhi a jaye wapas...piiillliiissshhh
May ALLAH bless my BOTH APIs...😳
love u BOTH...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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