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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing character sketch
awesome ud dear
loved it
eagerly waiting for next part
Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm for cs n part 1...awesum start! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
i loved it...
so geet has a step mother...
i so hate her already...
how can she keep a daughter away from her dad...

am so happy that meera called geet back...poor girl...she will be so broken on seeing her dad like this...especially on reading the precap i guess like mr handa is indeed in a bad shape...

and then maan...
he stays away from all...
seems he has been betrayed big time...
it seems we will know about all in the next update...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Tu Jaane Na"




The English translations of the update are in the brackets and this time I have changed the colour as many of u asked to do that...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if ur comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only''

Part 2

Meera went inside her room and was in a confused state of mind'..

Meera(self-thought): maine mom ko keh to dia ki maine geet di ko call kar dia hai or vo wapis aa rahi hai par sach to ye hai ki meri geet di se abhi tak baat bhi nahin hui''par ye bhi sach hai ki mujse bauji ki aisi haalat dekhi nahin ja rahi hai [I have told mom that I have called up Geet di and told her everything but the truth is I haven't spoken to her'.but I even cant see my fayther in such a condition'..]

Meera(self-thought) job hi ho muje geet di ko yaha bulana hi hoga haan abhi phone pe main unhe kuch bhi nahin bataungi [whatever it may be but I will call her up and ask her to come here but yes I will not tell her anything right now]

She finally decides to call up geet'..

In Bangalore:

She is quite helpful girl'..She loves to help poor people as she cant see anyone in pain'..She often visits old aged homes and spent a good time with them'.it was indeed a routine that she came there and now she was indeed a part of their lives''

(Well Silky is bit confused she is not a south Indian so Kannada nahin aati'..hindi se hi kaam chalana padega'.i hope u will understand my state of mind)😆😆

It's a conversation between one husband and wife in that old age home'

Old men: Vo dekho aa gayi hamari pyari bachhi [ here comes our sweet baby]

Old women: ek din isse na dekho to kuch bhi acha nahin lagta [if one day she doesnot turn nothing seems okay]

Old men: ye bacchi hai hi itni pyari'..budape mein hame isne apna bada hi sahaara dia hai [she is really a sweet girl'.she has supported each one of us so much in our old age]

Geet: Namaste uncle aunty kaise hai aap log [How are u all??]

Old women: ab tu aa gayi hai na him bilkul thik hai'.. [ u have come na we all are very fine now]

Geet: aap jaante hai jab se maine yaha aana start kia hai muje aise lagta hai jaise main apne ghar mein hu'.kitna pyar kitna apna pan hai yaha par aap sab ke beech [u know aunty the day I started coming here made me felt as if I was in my home'I feel so lively so homely here]

Old man: tune bhi to hame utna hi pyar dia hai na bache,,,,hamesha khush rehna tu bas hamari yahi dua hai [u too have given us the same love'we pray that u always remain happy]

Geet: chaliye ab baatein chodiye ye sochiye aaj hum kya naya karein' [ lets stop all this and decide what new will we do today]

Old women: ab vo bhi tum hi bata do [now that also u tell geet]

Geet takes them and the others in a room and started with yoga exercises'.they all enjoyed and had a joyful time wuth her'..Geet's cell was continuously ringing as meera was calling her'..but she kept in on silent mode so dint bothered to check it'.

On the other hand Meera was getting restless; when geet dint attended the call she finally messaged her to come to Delhi''. Meera went to her father's room to take care as Mohinder's health was deteriorating badly'..the problem was getting worse as he was suffering from Hepatitis B. Though he knew the problem with which he was suffering he was strictly asked not to tell geet as she would not tolerate this news.

Pammi: Aap ne ye kaisi zidd pakad rakhi hai?? [Why have u become so stubborn???]

Mohinder: tum ye ache se jaanti ho ki mere pass ab zyada time nahin hai'..mera mann bhi karta hai ki main geet ke saath apni zindagi ke akhari pal bitau [U know this very well that I am left with very few days of my life and I want to spend all those days with my Geet]

Pammi: aap baar baa raise baatein kyu karte hai?? aapko kya lagta hai ki geet ki chinta sirf aapko hai main bhi uski utni chinta karti hoon'.geet apki zara si tabiyat dekh ke ghabra jaati hai pichli baar bhi jab aap beemar hue the tab apne uski haalat dekhi thi na vo apni tabiyat kharab kar leti hai'. kyu baar baar aap use pareshan karte hai [Why do u keep repeating the same thing again and again'.and why do u think that I don't care for her??? I too care for her the same way as u do'u remember the last time u fell ill she got so tensed that she dint care for herself'..Y should we trouble her again??]

Mohinder: sach kahu to main kabhi nahin chahta ki geet meri wajah se pareshan ho'.par jab sach muje pata hai ki'. [I even don't want that geet gets tensed because of me but']

Pammi: bas kijiye aap' [now it's more than enough]

Mohinder: muje ye samaj nahi aaya k tumne geet ko itni dur bhej kyu rakha hai''kya bigada hai uss phool si bacchi ne tumhara'.tum ye bhi jaanti ho ki geet tumhari baat kabhi mana nahin karti or issi baat ka tum fayda utha rahi ho [I dint understand why have u sent geet so far away'u know geet never say a NO to u and ur taking adavantage of that]

Pammi: aapke kehne ka matlab kya hai aap hamesha se muje galat samajte aaye hai'.maine kabhi geet or meera mei farq nahin samjha balki meera se zyada maine geet ko apna samja vo apni zindagi mein kuch acha karein isliye hi maine use bahar bhej rakha hai [what do u want to say?? U have always thought that I am wrong'I have never made any difference between Geet and Meera and Geet has always been my priority,,,that is why I sent geet outside so that she completes her studies well]

Mohinder: bas jaanta hu main [yes I know very well'don't tell me anything]

Meera: Bauji maine geet di ko delhi bula liya hai aap bilkul tesion mat lo'. [ Don't worry father I have called Geet di to delhi she will be here very soon]

Hearing this Pammi got really angry and left the room'..But the happiest person was Geet's dad

Pammi: ye meera bhi na jaisa baap waisi beti'..ab to Geet ko yaha aane se koi rok nahin sakta [this meera'.sahe is same as her father'.now no one can stop geet to come here]

Meanwhile doctors come to examine Mohinder's health'..He was being treated at his home only''After examining his health he came out and told Meera and pammi'.

Doctor: Aap aise kijiye geet ko jaldi hi yaha bula lijiye'.Mr. Handa ki tabiyat or kharab hoti ja rahi hai'.or vo sirf geet ko apne pass chahte hai?? [U please call geet as soon as possible his health is not fine at all'..He wants geet with him that's it]

Meera: ji doctor vo jaldi hi yaha aa jaengi [yes doctor she will be here very soon]

Khurana Mansion

Daadima: ye maan abhi tak kyu nahin aaye kab se hum unka wait kar rahe hai [why hasn't maan come till now'I have been waiting for him since long now]

Nakul: daadi aap khana to kha lijiye [Grandmom u please have sumthin to ea]

Daadima: nahin maan ko aane dijiye pehle [let maan come first]

Its already late now'dev comes in and sees Daadi waiting for them

Dev: daadima aap yaha par'aapne kuch khaya ya nahin? [grandmom u here till noe'did u have sumthin to eat or not??]

Daadima: nahin bte ye bataiye maan kaha par hai?? [no son'.first tell me where is maan??]

Dev: daadi ma vo to muje bhi nahin pata main to aaj site ke kaam main hi busy raha'.ek minute bhai ko call karte hai [even I have no idea I was busy with the sight work the whole day'..wai ill call up bro and ask him where he is]

Daadima: hum to kab se try kar rahein hai unka phone out of reach hai [I have been trying from so long'his cell is out of reach]

Dev: to adi ko puchta hu [I will call up adi and ask him]

He calls up Adi and enquires about maan'..Adi tells that maan has just left for Bangalore urgently for a meeting'..there were some problems at bangalore office so he had to go'..

Dev: daadima bro office ke kaam se Bangalore gaye hai'. [bro has gone to Bangalore for official work]

Daadima: ab maan ko hamein batana zaruri bhi nahin laga..kitna badal gayein hai maan [maan dint even bothered to tell that he is going he has changed so much]

Dev: daadima aap pareshan mat hoiye bro aapko pahunch ke call karenge'muje yakeen hai vo jitna bhi badal jaye aap ke liye vo wahi maan rahenge'dekhiye abhi thodi der mein call ayega [grandmom u please don't stress urself'um sure he will call u as soon as he reach Bangalore'I am sure if he changes also he still will remain ur same maan]

Daadima: sach kahein to kahin baar hamein maan ki badi chinta hoti hai'.hamare haste khelte bache ko kya ho gaya hai'..kitna khush raha karta tha'.sabse pyar,,,,dosti bay jaise yahi sab tha unki zindagi mein lekin vo ek dhokha jaise maan ko tod kar rakh dia hai''or ue sab uski wajah se hua hai'.usne hamare maan ko kya se kya bana dia hai'.[at times um really worried for maan'..he was so buubly nature'love friendship was what he lived for,,,,but that one incident has changed maan so much'.and that happened all because of that one person'what has maan made of himself??]

Dev: acha hua daadi uski sachchai pehle hi saamne aa gayi agar baad mein pata lagta to pata nahin kya hota [its good that her reality came in front of us, else it wud have been so late afterwards]

Daadima: vo to hai bte par maan hamse dur chale gaye'unka to jaise har rishte se vishwas uth gaya ho [yes ur right but maan has gone very far away from us'.Maan has lost faith from all the relationships]

Dev: daadima aap dekhiye ga hume jaldi hi vo haste khelte maan wapis milenge agar bhagwan ne chaha to [grandma we will soon get the same maan back if god wants that to happen]

Daadima: hmm

At the same time Geet had spent another great evening at the old age home'..Now it was time to go back to her place as she was already late'she checked her mobile and saw thirteen missed calls from meera'and then was a message'

"Geet di tried calling u but guess u were busy'please come asap to delhi we all are missing u and the most is Bauji"

This message was enough for geet as she immediately went home and started with her packing''

On the other hand'.Maan singh Khurana reached his Bangalore office in his great MSK style''

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9wrvI7hLYI[/YOUTUBE]

Precap:

1. Dev: bro aap jaldi aa jaiye daadima ne kuch khaya nahin hai'.

2. Maan and Geet gets their seats booked in the same flight'.Will they Meet????😳😳


Wishing You All a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2012😃
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Well how was the update friends???.please press like button and do comment it means a lot to me

I will be waiting'.😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arey meko laga meera ne geet ko bula liya kya baat h meera us pammi ka reaction check kar rahi thi kya???
awww geet is such a pure soul...of course everyone around her will shower luv on her except some negative people lyk pammi :@...
pammi n mohinder's convo was interesting ye pammi to badi besharam types h yaar mohinder saaf keh raha h still shes pretending nautanki tujhe to MSK dekhega (par abi wait karna parega abhi silky us moment k liye bada tarsane wali h lol)...
m feeling really sry for dadima yaar jisne bhi MSK ko dhoka diya h na uski to...
ye maan bhi na hadd h kisi aur k gunah ki saza apne gharwalon ko kyun de raha h...
wow yaar bada achcha kiya tune video daal k even i was missin our hot(angry wala bhi n of course doosra wala bhi) n handsome MSK...muah for dis darling...
precap sounds really interesting...besabri se intezaar h humein agle saal ka...
fabulous update yaar...luved every bit of it...
luvya dear...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awww...what an amazing & interesting precap 😍 awesome
this pammi is really something
continue soon
****happy new year to you****
Hare Krishna
may Krishna bless you & ur family 😳
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Loved the update dear...
I hate this pammi😡...
precap sounds very interesting...
please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ye bhi toh ho sakta hai k saath saath vali seats hi milein. milna toh chahiye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all... Silky di... 👏 👏 👏
ur such a promising writer really... ur juz brilliant wid d way u write... its juz sooo AMAZING...!!!!
luv u loads... ❤️ 👍🏼 👏 😃

now cumin 2 d story... I really luv d concept of d FF... its really interesting n grippin... 😃

Geet is such a sweetheart... sweet, kind-hearted, pretty at heart... i really feel sad for her dat she got such an evil step mom who doesnt care for such a sweetheart.. n cz of dat vamp.. she hs to liv so faraway from her family... bt m really glad she hs a sister like Meera who loves her so much n cares for her...
I really feel sad for Geet's father... bechare... he's sooo ill n wants to meet his daughter n dat witch... shes tryin to deprive him from that as well... huh... kabhi unka khayal to rkha nhi.. bs life me probs hi create krne hain... 😡
but dats wer r dear Meera arrives ... 😃 she completely loves her father.. n she cannot see him in such distress n yippeee... she called up Geet n askd her to cum home... wohhooo...
kamse kam bechare Mr. Handa Geet se mil to lenge...
n dat ws sooo classic.. Meera ne Geet ko bulaya nhi tha fir bhi Pammi ko kaha ki usne Geet ko call kr dia hai.. n Pammi got frustrated... hahahahhahaha... well done Meera... 👏
now m waitin for Geet to cum... whts in store for her here... 😉

then... THE KHURANA'S... I love it hoe Dev n Dadima love Maan so much... bt I rlly feel bad for Dadima... she cares so much for Maan.. bt Maan ko apni hatred me kuch dikhta hi nhi hai.. bechari Dadima ki kya galti hai... kisi aur ne gunaah kia n uski saza bechari Dadima bhukat rhi hain... 😒
mujhe bada bura laga jab Dadima said ki she feels Maan unse bohot dur chala gaya hai... awww... i felt lyk shoutin.. "NAHI DADIMA.. AAPKA MAAN KABHI AAPSE DUR NHI JA SAKTA..BAS WO APNE GHAM ME DOOBA HAI..BAS UPARWALA USKI ZINDAGI ME ROSHNI BHAR DEN TO JAISE HI WO APNA SAR UTHAKE DEKHEGA..AAP TO HONGI HI WAHAN MAAN KE PAAS..."
Maan cumon yr... Dadima ko itna dukhi mat karo yr...

are ye kya.. Maan bhi Bangalore n Geet bhi Bangalore...
n are waah.. both get their tickets booked in d same flight...
wohhooo... m sooo excited about the precap... 😃
waitin to see wht happens next... 😍

update soon Silky di... 😃
love you so so so much... 🤗
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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